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Post by jessie on Mar 11, 2011 23:31:45 GMT -6
Sweet but sad one shot, poor Reid, he is feeling guilty. Chris should have told Katie the truth, sad he wanted to keep the truth from her, and made Reid help. Lovely writing Sanda, loved your one shot. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 11, 2011 23:35:43 GMT -6
Sweet but sad one shot, poor Reid, he is feeling guilty. Chris should have told Katie the truth, sad he wanted to keep the truth from her, and made Reid help. Lovely writing Sanda, loved your one shot. Thanks for sharing. Thank you Jessie for your awesome comment about my Reid, Luke, and Jacob oneshot. I would LOVE to have seen a scene where Reid had confessed to Jacob about Chris making him keep his secret from Katie and Jacob. I agree that Chris should have told Katie the truth and not made Reid help him.
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Post by Tina Ewing on Mar 12, 2011 4:50:49 GMT -6
Jessie, what a great idea of creating a thread for oneshots. I love your stories althought they're sometimes sad but you write them all very well. Sanda, I love your oneshot of Reid and Luke. Without you, I would never knew anything about Reid and Luke but thanks to your stories and great passion for them, they both belong to my favorite ones Jessie and Sanda, you both are soo much talented writers!
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Post by jessie on Mar 12, 2011 11:56:30 GMT -6
Jessie, what a great idea of creating a thread for oneshots. I love your stories althought they're sometimes sad but you write them all very well. Sanda, I love your oneshot of Reid and Luke. Without you, I would never knew anything about Reid and Luke but thanks to your stories and great passion for them, they both belong to my favorite ones Jessie and Sanda, you both are soo much talented writers! Awe thank you Tina Yes , I write some really sad one- shots and stories. I love writing them, it is so nice of you, Melinda, and Sanda to read all my stories. It is the reason, I write them. Sanda is a real Luke and Reid fan, and she is giving me some of the ideas for my one shots. Thanks again for your lovely comment it means a lot to me. Thanks Melinda for reading my stories, you truly are a wonderful friend. Sanda this site is one of my favourite, I love writing stories here, thanks for all your great work on the site. I just want more people to write one shots and stories, they are fun to read.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 12, 2011 12:44:22 GMT -6
Jessie, what a great idea of creating a thread for oneshots. I love your stories althought they're sometimes sad but you write them all very well. Sanda, I love your oneshot of Reid and Luke. Without you, I would never knew anything about Reid and Luke but thanks to your stories and great passion for them, they both belong to my favorite ones Jessie and Sanda, you both are soo much talented writers! Thank you Tina, for your awesome comments about my Reid and Luke oneshot. Jessie, I will try very hard to write another Reid and Luke one shot in the future. I just need to come up with some ideas for another Reid and Luke one shot.. ;D
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Post by Sanda on Mar 12, 2011 12:48:13 GMT -6
Jessie, what a great idea of creating a thread for oneshots. I love your stories althought they're sometimes sad but you write them all very well. Sanda, I love your oneshot of Reid and Luke. Without you, I would never knew anything about Reid and Luke but thanks to your stories and great passion for them, they both belong to my favorite ones Jessie and Sanda, you both are soo much talented writers! Awe thank you Tina Yes , I write some really sad one- shots and stories. I love writing them, it is so nice of you, Melinda, and Sanda to read all my stories. It is the reason, I write them. Sanda is a real Luke and Reid fan, and she is giving me some of the ideas for my one shots. Thanks again for your lovely comment it means a lot to me. Thanks Melinda for reading my stories, you truly are a wonderful friend. Sanda this site is one of my favourite, I love writing stories here, thanks for all your great work on the site. I just want more people to write one shots and stories, they are fun to read. Thank you Jessie for all of your awesome comments about my website. I LOVE my message board as well. This is also one my favorite websites to visit as well. ;D I LOVE reading all of your awesome stories and one shots on my message board.
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Post by jessie on Mar 12, 2011 14:52:21 GMT -6
One shot Sanda requested , I do hope you like it. I will make it fun, sweet, romantic just for you. A night to Remember forever Luke was at home he couldn't believe tonight was the night he was going to go out on a real date with Reid Oliver. Luke's heart was racing, he was so nervous, his hands were shaking. He tried on several outfits, but he didn't know what to wear. Reid said it was going to be a fun night, and to be casual. Luke smiled putting on his jeans, and his favourite shirt. He looked in the mirror, and laughed he wondered if his hair was too wild. He was sitting on the bed when Faith walked in. "Luke you better come down quick, Mom is staring down Reid, he might run away". "Oh Crap what is wrong with Mom, she better not scare him away" "Luke Reid is a fox, where are you going"? "A fox Faith if Dad heard you, I'm sure you would be grounded until your 25". "I know a fox when I see one, but he isn't as cute as Joshua Morrow, Nicholas Newman on Young and the Restless" "Yes he is better Faith". "Nicholas Newman is so cute, come on Luke". Luke got up chasing Faith downstairs. Lily yelled, "What have I told you both, no running downstairs, you can fall". Reid laughed, "Boy are you grounded now Luke"? Lily turned, 'You as a Doctor should know what I mean, people act stupid, and hurt themselves". Reid walked over, "Lets go Luke, your Mother is in a mood" "I'm right here Reid, but yes go have fun". Reid and Luke walked out the door, Faith ran over, "Luke" "Yes Faith" "From behind he is as cute as Joshua". "I swear Faith, you and me are having a talk later". Luke grabbed Reid's arm, and Faith giggled. Reid whispered, "Who is Joshua, are you seeing someone named Joshua"? "No he is a guy she loves on a soap opera Reid". "I look like someone on a soap Opera"? "Well no but you could be on one". "Lets go, I thought we could eat first, than I have two surprises for you. I'm glad you are wearing jeans, you will be more comfortable in them. They are a little tight though Luke, but they fit your butt just right". "Shut up Reid, lets go" they get in, and Reid took Luke to a little diner, and he was kind of shocked he thought they would go somewhere special. They went inside, and everyone knew Reid, he ordered two hot chocolates for them. The waitress came over, "Reid are you having the usual, "Cheeseburger with bacon, spicy friends, and a Caesar on the side, with dill pickles" "Yes Sue, make that two please". Luke was about to resist, but he decided for one day he could eat like Reid. "You come here a lot Reid"? "Yes, it is great, and Sue loves me, she puts extras on my plate all the time" "Oh great we are in trouble" "What you didn't have to agree with my food choice, if you didn't want to"? "I'm fine, but this won't happen on our second date". Reid smiled, and Sue brought over the food. She touched Reid's chin, "Sweetie enjoy, if you want anything else just call". She walked away, and Luke smiled, "Sue really loves you doesn't she"? "I saved her boy, so yes she loves me. I feel like she is family, and Joey is adorable, he is 10 years old" "Awe that is cute Reid, you must feel so proud, you save so many people" "I'm not proud, it is my job, but when you lose one, it hurts bad". "I know, lets not talk about that". They finished dinner, and Luke was surprised, he really enjoyed it. They went outside, after paying, and talking to Sue for awhile about Joey. They both agreed to come to Sue's place for dinner one night soon. They left, and got in the the car, and Luke had no idea where they were going. They got to the outdoor ice rink, and Reid smiled, "You skate right"? "Well a little out at the pond, but not a lot". Reid got out, and pulled out two pairs of skates. "You are a size 9 right"? "Yes you guessed"? "Yeah , I'm a 10". They walked over putting on the skates, and Reid got up, and put his hands out to Luke. "You go for a spin first, I'm not ready Reid.". Reid went out, and was skating and Luke watched he was amazing. He could see Reid loved it, and Luke watched for 5 minutes when Reid skated over. "Come on, I will be right beside you Luke". Luke got on the ice, and was slipping already making Reid laugh. "Oh you have to try Luke, hold my hand". Luke did, and Reid slowly got him moving. Luke was holding on for dear life, and Reid was so good with him. Luke smiled as he took both of Luke's hands, and pulled him along. Luke fell many times, but Reid was their helping him up. Reid fell a few times too because of Luke, holding him too tight. They skated for about 1 hour, than Luke couldn't do it anymore. They took their skates off got a hot chocolate, and walked to the car. They talked, and Luke smiled, "tonight wasn't what I expected Reid, you were really fun, and so patient" "Luke I'm not a bad guy, but it was fun wasn't it"? Reid started the car, and drove home. Luke was about to get out of the car, but Reid touched his shoulder. "Wait Luke" "Yes Reid" "We will do this again, it was fun, I admit I was a little worried" " Goodnight Reid, thanks for everything". Reid leaned over kissing Luke ever so gently, and whispered, "call me tomorrow" "I will Reid, bye". Luke got out of the car, he ran up to the door, and waved. Reid drove off, Luke went inside, and was glad his Mom, and Dad went to bed already. He got to his room, and opened the door, and Faith was sitting on his bed, in her nightgown and housecoat. "Well how was it Luke"? "Amazing Faith, he is amazing" "I saw the kiss from the window, it was sweet, not like a Soap Opera kiss" "It was better Faith, so much better". Luke smiled, Faith got up kissing Luke on the cheek, and whispered, "you finally found the one Luke don't let him go". Luke smiled, "I won't Faith don't you worry". Faith left, and Luke walked to the bed, and laid down, he shut his eyes, and dreamed about the man, he knew he would spend the rest of his life with. THE END Hope you liked their first date Sanda.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 12, 2011 17:57:50 GMT -6
Jessie, I LOVE the first date you wrote for Reid and Luke. It was soo sweet, fun, and very romantic. I LOVE that Faith was comparing Reid to Joshua Marrow aka Nicholas Newman on The Young And The Restless. ;D I can just picture Lily staring down Reid before Luke came downstairs to go his date with Reid. LOL I LOVED the talk between Faith and Luke after Luke's date with Reid. I would also being holding on to Reid for dear life if I went skating becuase I can't skate without falling down. You should have been writing for Reid and Luke on As The World Turns. ;D
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Post by tammie on Mar 12, 2011 18:23:29 GMT -6
Hi Sanda Glad to see..Reid has Luke there..for support. Cute how you..had the three of them..going to sleep together. You know..its bad..when Reid..dont want to eat...no to mention...Pizza! Cute one shot.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 12, 2011 19:38:17 GMT -6
brilliant one shot..... I like your way of handling this situation Very nice one shot, thanks for sharing Sanda
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 12, 2011 19:42:21 GMT -6
Jessie this was very sweet, that opens up a lot of possiblities, very romantic. great idea Sanda and great job Jessie
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Post by jessie on Mar 15, 2011 20:26:44 GMT -6
One shot for one of my As the world turns favourite characters Lucinda.
Alone with Only Memories
Lucinda came home, she hadn't been feeling well, but she knew it was just a cold, nothing really serious. She went into the house, and remembered it was Friday, she gave the help the day off. She hung up her coat, and put her purse, and keys on the table, and walked into the living room, pouring herself a glass of wine. She walked over to the couch, and sat down, she grabbed a magazine , and was reading it, but couldn't concentrate. She was tired of the busy days, and the lonely nights. She didn't even see Lily, and Holden and the kids much anymore. They were busy with their lives, and she didn't want to intrude. She put the magazine down, and decided to go up, and get herself , a shower. She was walking upstairs, and she heard a knock at the door. She walked downstairs, wondering who it was? She asked who it was , and she heard a voice she loved once, and often thought about. She opened the door, and John Dixon smiled, "Hey Lucinda, I was in the neighborhood, and thought I would stop by"
"John Dixon, what are you doing?
"Can I come in, it is freezing out here"?
"Oh sorry , come in John". She let him in, he took off his coat, and she hung it up. He smiled, "Are you alone"?
"Yes, why"?
"I remember you give the staff the day off, every Friday. I was lonely Lucinda, and I thought about you all day. I remembered the good times, and the bad, and the good made me smile"
Lucinda smiled, "Why John you don't have a lady friend anymore"?
"I have been alone for a few months, it hurts especially at my age. I need someone to talk to me, and just listen to how my day went. I remember our talks years ago, I have never been more happy, than when I was with you"
"We fought all the time John". He walked over to Lucinda, moving real close. Lucinda thought her heart was going to stop. She loved that John was here, and he missed her, because she felt the exact same way about him. He touched her chin, and brought his lips over hers. She pulled John to her , and they kissed so passionately, she felt his arms go around her, and she wrapped her arms around him. She couldn't believe what she was about to do, but she whispered, "lets go up, and take one of our famous baths"
"You sure Lucinda, I don't want you to regret it tomorrow"?
"I won't don't worry". They walked upstairs, holding hands, and went to her bathroom. She grabbed a couple of towels, while he started the bath, he put her favorite bubble bath in. She smiled, as he moved over to her. He started to unbutton her blouse, and pulled it off her shoulder. She wasn't young anymore, she was a bit shy, but John whispered, "you are so beautiful Lucinda." They both undressed, and got in the bath. The moved close, and at first they just caressed, and hugged each other. He pulled her closer, and whispered, "I want to make love to you Lucinda" She smiled, and whispered, "What are you waiting for"?
She was burning up, she never felt so excited in her whole, life. He moved over her, as he entered her, bringing his mouth to hers. She arched her back, wanting to give herself completely to John. They both stare into each others eyes, they both moved and wanted to savor this moment. He looked into her eyes, they both moved, and she remembered how it felt being with John.
He wanted to hang onto this moment, to let it build and ease, and build again, to show her just what she does to him. She pulled John closer, and she moved and arched her back, driving him crazy. They both moved together, until they both released falling into each others arms. He smiled," Lucinda you are amazing, I will never lose you again. Tonight you drove me crazy, you are so beautiful". She touched his face, she couldn't believe this was happening to her.
At that moment, the phone rang, and Lucinda woke up, she was dreaming. She was sweating, she actually started to cry, it felt so real. The phone stopped ringing, and she sat back on the couch, and pulled the pillow close to her body. She was so depressed, she hated that she had this dream now, it was cruel. She saw the light of the phone flashing, the person left a message. She walked over, she put her finger on the message button, and she stood listening , she stood in shock, when she heard, "Lucinda it is John, I was thinking about you tonight, I just called to say hi. I will try calling you back later, bye Sweetie". Lucinda smiled, "Oh God this can't be happening to me"
The End
Would you guys, like a part two of this story, or we can just leave it as is"?
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Post by Sanda on Mar 15, 2011 22:16:38 GMT -6
Jessie I LOVE your Lucinda one shot. You should definitely write a part 2 to this Lucinda oneshot. I LOVED Lucinda and John as a pairing. I think it would have soo fun if Dr. Reid Oliver would have turned out to be Dr. John Dixon's son.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 16, 2011 12:10:10 GMT -6
please do a second part to this. I would love to see Lucinda and John reunite. They were always one of my favorite couples and you did them justice. great one shot, one of my favorties
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Post by jessie on Mar 17, 2011 22:53:46 GMT -6
Thanks for your kind comment about my Lucinda and John story. Here is part 2, I'm a big fan of theirs too.
Alone with Only Memories Part 2
Lucinda touched the phone, she couldn't believe she would dream of John , and than he would call her. She lifted the receiver, and pushed redial. She almost hung up, she didn't want to sound desperate, but she actually was. She has missed John, but she was to stubborn to admit it. She thought he wasn't going to answer, but she heard his voice after 3 rings. She was silent at first, but she smiled, "hi John , I got your message"
"Oh your home, yes I was thinking about you all day. I thought I'm going to call you, and if you hang up on me, at least I tried"
"I wouldn't hang up, I have been thinking about you too"
"Really how funny, I was going to come over, but I guess it is to late"?
"Oh it is 9pm , I don't have anything special to do tomorrow, if you want to come over, you can"
John laughed, "You sure Lucinda"?
"Yes John if I wasn't you know, I would say no".
"Ok I will be over in 15 minutes".
"Bye John, I will be waiting". Lucinda smiled, and she ran upstairs, changing into something more sexy. She looked in the mirror brushing her hair. She whispered, "Be good Lucinda, don't get yourself hurt again" She walked to the bathroom, she whispered, "Oh Lucinda, just go for it". She walked over to the tub, and put the hot water on with bubbles. She filled it up, and touched the water, and whispered, "It will be just perfect if he joins me in here". She got up walking downstairs, and smiled when she heard someone knock at the door. She walked over opening it, and John was there with a bottle of wine, and some chocolates.
"Come in John it is cold out there". He walked in, and looked at her. "Wow you got all dressed up for me"
"Yeah John are the flowers for me, or Susan"?
"Oh is Susan here"?
"No, she has the day off, she loved you John, she still talks about you"
"Oh she was sweet, I missed her too, and I missed her amazing breakfasts"
"Well she will be here in the morning, maybe you should spend the night"?
"The night, wow that is fast Lucinda you have missed me" She smiled, "I'm to old to play silly games, life is short, yes I have missed you. I actually had a sexy dream about you, and we were amazing, than I woke up. You said you were coming over, I went upstairs, and changed into this outfit, and filled the tub up with bubbles. I'm so lonely, and I regret all the years we wasted, neither of us have been happy. I'm going upstairs to my room, you remember where it is. I will be soaking in my tub, you can walk out the door, it will lock when you shut the door. If you want me, I will be upstairs, waiting, I will let you make your choice". Lucinda walked upstairs, and John stood speechless. He put the flowers on the foyer table, and put the chocolates down. He wanted Lucinda, but would this be the right thing to do? Was it to fast, or was she right life is to short. He was about to walk to the door, but he stopped, and realized leaving would be his biggest regret in life. He loved Lucinda, and he hated that they were apart all these years. He took his coat off laying it over the chair. He walked to the stairs, and walked up slowing, and went into the room. He walked in, and saw the bathroom door, half closed. He walked to the bathroom, pushing the door open. Lucinda was in the tub, she smiled, he never seen a more beautiful person in his whole life. He started to undress, Lucinda watched, and she couldn't wait until he was in her arms. He stepped into the tub, and sat beside her. She turned, and brought her lips over his.
They just sat staring into each others eyes. He pulled the hair from her forehead, and they kissed again. He pulled her on his lap, and his hands moved slowly over her. She brought her lips over his, as she moved even closer, he grasped her hips and slid inside. She moaned in satisfaction they kissed as they both were brought over the edge. She couldn't believe this was really happening, this time it wasn't a dream. He was amazing, just like how she remembered. They both released, and stayed holding each other for the longest time.
They got out, dried off, and walked to the bed. They got in, and just laid in each others arms. He whispered, "I have wanted this day for so long, I was a fool Lucinda"
"Shh John this moment, was perfect, lets forget the past, and only focus on the future". She shut her eyes, laying her head on his chest, he held her close, as they both drifted off asleep.
Lucinda and John reunited that night, and were together finally , and they couldn't be happier. They had many years together, and they were so in love, and they knew this time they did it right. They remarried, and they finally were not lonely anymore, and Lucinda was happy, she was back in the arms, of the man, she truly considered her Sole mate, and she knew, until the day she died, she would be by his side forever.
The end
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