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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 28, 2010 20:16:19 GMT -6
great chapter but I still dont feel sorry for Abby she knew what she was doing was wrong yet she did it anyway
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Post by jessie on Oct 19, 2010 16:35:35 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Abby went upstairs, and knocked on Olivia's door. "Can I come in Olivia".?
"You will anyways, so do what you want"? Abby walked in, and sat beside her, "I know what you saw upset you Olivia, I'm sorry".
"Your sorry, you took Mr Ewing away from Valene. She is so kind, she didn't deserve that, I'm ashamed of you, and Mr Ewing".
"Please don't call your Daddy, I can't lose you Olivia. You and Brian mean everything to me. I would do anything for you, I can't lose you".
"You would do anything for me, really Mom, would you give up Gary".
"I sent him home Olivia, what else do you want from me"?
"I want you to be a Mother, I can respect, everyone talks about you. I even heard Aunt Karen and Uncle Mack talk about you. They are ashamed too, I don't want a Mother that everyone talks about. I don't understand you are beautiful Mom, why do you go after married men"?
"Olivia we will talk in the morning, I don't like this conversation".
"Mom you make a choice me or Gary what is more important to you"? Abby walked out shutting the door, going to her room. She laid on the bed, and her daughters words kept playing over and over in her head. 'You make a choice me or Gary"? Abby was awake most of the night, she didn't know what she was going to do?. She got up, dressing and going downstairs, to get their lunches ready, and make breakfast. She went upstairs waking up Brian first who ran downstairs, saying he was hungry. Abby walked into Olivia's room, and walked over to the bed. "Sweetie time to get up, come down for breakfast, I have all your favourites". Olivia got up, "I will be right down Mom". Abby went downstairs, and got Brian his breakfast, they were talking when Olivia walked into the kitchen. She sat down, and grabbed some toast, putting peanut butter on it. Abby got her cereal, and they all were eating, talking, and having a pretty good time. Abby loved seeing Olivia smiling, that was a rare event around the house. They finished, and Abby put the dishes in the dishwasher, as the kids got ready, for school. It was time to leave, Brian yelled the bus is here. Abby kissed them both, as they left getting on the bus. She waved, and went inside going upstairs to change. She heard the doorbell ring, she ran downstairs, to get it. She opened the door, and Gary was standing there , and he walked into the house. He slammed the door, pulling Abby into a kiss.
"Gary stop, what are you doing, go home"?
"I made up my mind, tonight I'm telling Valene it is over. I want you , not her, I'm so happy with you. I love Valene, but she is a nag, all she does is want to talk, and I'm so bored of that. I want excitement, passion, and that is what you give me Abby".
"I'm a good time basically right Gary"?
"I'm here with you Abby, what else do you want"?
"Do you love me Gary, I mean love me, or do you love the sex, and the good times".
Gary walked over, " I love how we make each other feel, Valene doesn't give me that you make me go wild".
"OMG it is no wonder Olivia is ashamed of me, I'm ashamed of myself at the moment. I like you Gary, I actually love you, but not once could you say you loved me back. It is all the sex and satisfying your sexual appetite. I'm sure Valene will never be like me, but she adores you, why I don't know?. You have no respect for me, or for Valene or yourself for that matter. I want better for myself, I want someone who wants me because they love me. I'm not playing the other woman anymore, go home, and make Valene happy. She deserves that , but you don't deserve her".
Olivia had stopped the bus, she forgot her homework paper. The driver was kind enough to drive back. Olivia got off the bus, while he waited. She was running up to the door.
"Abby stop playing games, you want me for the same reasons I want you" Gary grabbed her, kissing her, Abby tried to push him away, but he brought his lips over hers. She kissed him back, but knew she couldn't go any further than an kiss. Olivia opened the door, she sees her Mother on the couch with Gary laying over her. Abby got up, "OMG Olivia , it is not what you think"
"I hate you Mom, I really do". Olivia ran out of the house, but didn't get on the bus, she ran down the street, trying to get away, but didn't know where to run to?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 19, 2010 19:17:41 GMT -6
Gary is awful in this chapter, he gets what he deserves with Abby. great update
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Post by Sanda on Oct 19, 2010 19:25:54 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I agree that Gary is awful in this chapter. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Nov 15, 2010 0:24:14 GMT -6
Chapter 8
"Gary get out , I have to find my Daughter".
"I'm sorry she saw that".
"Get out, don't ever come back, I hate you" .
'You hate me"?
"Yes, I probably lost my daughter because of you".
"Me, you wanted me just as much as I wanted you".
"I used you Gary, I don't have any feeling for you".
Abby grabbed her purse , and car keys and ran out of the house. Gary was shocked, he ran out grabbing her arm.
"You used me Abby, how dare you"?
"You are a pathetic excuse for a man, and a drunk". Abby looked over seeing Valene and Karen come out of their house. Abby was totally out of it, she ran across the street. "Can you keep your man at home Valene, he ruined everything . He showed up today, and now my Daughter is God knows where."
Karen ran over, "Abby where is Olivia"?
"I don't know she ran out of the house, I hope she went to school".
"What did she see Abby"?
"Enough for her to hate me , I can't lose her because of him". Gary walked over, "What are you doing putting the blame all on me"?
"This is your fault, grow up Gary, you can't have me and Valene. Who do you want, say it now, me or Valene"? Gary looked at Valene, he didn't answer, Valene was shocked.
"You can't answer Gary, do you want Abby , you can have her .
"Valene stop, I don't know what I want"?
Valene walked over, slapping Gary so hard, everyone was shocked. "I have had enough, I won't tolerate this anymore, I want a divorce". Valene ran into the house, Karen ran after her. Abby was shocked she was shaking, but she turned to go to her car, she had to find Olivia.
"Abby".
"What Gary"?
"Let me help you find Olivia, we will explain, we are going to be a couple"
"A couple you think I will let you back in my life now"?
"I made my choice Abby, Valene is devastated, are you happy"?
"You didn't make the choice Gary, Valene did. It is over, don't ever come to me again." Abby ran across the street getting into her car. She drove off seeing Gary just staring, in shock. She saw he was lost, he lost everything, but at the moment, she only cared about her kids. She drove to the school, she ran inside, she was shocked, Olivia didn't show up there. She walked out to the car, she didn't know where to go next? She drove down the streets, she was starting to get frantic. She was going to go home, and call the police, when she remembered, one place, Olivia loved. She drove to the park, she parked her car, and got out. She was walking looking everywhere. She was about to give up, when she saw her sitting on a swing, all alone. She walked over, Olivia saw her, and was about to run.
'Olivia please, I know your angry, but we have to talk"
"I want to move in with Dad, I can't live with you".
"Please, I can't lose you Olivia, I ended it with Gary".
"Really kissing him, is ending it"?
"That was wrong, it happened , I'm so sorry".
"Be sorry for yourself, he is using you"
"I know, me and Gary both were wrong, but it ended today".
"Really, your not just saying that"?
"No, it is over, please come home, we will spend the day together". Olivia took Abby's hand, and they both walked to the car.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 15, 2010 15:54:37 GMT -6
poor Gary, i dont feel sorry for him but he needs to get it together. very good update
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Post by jessie on Mar 6, 2011 19:17:34 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Abby and Olivia drove home, she prayed Gary wasn't around, because she knew Olivia would lose it. She parked the car, and Olivia and Abby walked into the house, and Abby told Olivia to go upstairs, and change into something more comfortable. Olivia walked upstairs, and Abby walked into the kitchen grabbing a glass, and poured herself, a glass of wine. She laughed, "Great Abby it is so early, and you are drinking".
Olivia walked into the kitchen, and Abby poured her a glass of milk. They both sat at the table, and Olivia looked at her Mom.
"Mom why do you want to be with Gary, he isn't yours, he is Valene's"?
"Olivia I'm so sorry you saw that today, I know I hurt you".
"You are hurting yourself, don't you have any respect for yourself"?
"I do respect myself, but you are a child you don't understand"?
"Really Mom I'm a teenager, but I know taking someones boyfriend or Husband is wrong. Gary is using you, and he is hurting Valene, she is so nice Mom. I know you don't care about her, but if the tables were turned how would you feel"?
"It is over between me and Gary Olivia, I'm not going to see him again".
"Who will be your next boyfriend Mom, some other married man"?
"Olivia I'm not going to allow you to talk to me like this "
"Fine I will go to my room than"
"Wait Olivia can't we just have a Mother, and Daughter talk"?
"Why bother Mom, you never listen to me, I'm just a kid right"?
"I listen to you, and I love you, and I want to make this up to you, and Brian".
"I believe you really want that Mom, but if Gary knocked on that door right now, what would happen than"?
"He won't I hurt him today, I saw his face, he will move on"
"You think he will leave Valene Mom"?
"I think Valene has had it with Gary, she gave him enough chances"
"Oh Mom how can we live her, she will hate us"?
"Not you Sweetie, Valene wouldn't take it out on you , and Brian"
"Mom would you mind if I go over to talk to her"?
"Why Olivia"?
"I want to Mom, you hurt a really nice lady, when I visit Aunt Karen, she is normally there. She is amazing with me and Brian, can you imagine that, even though she knew you were doing nasty things with her husband". Abby jumped up, "OMG Olivia stop talking like that, you make me feel so horrible"
"Mom you deserve to feel that way". Olivia laughed, but Abby smiled, "God I feel like I'm the teenager, and your the Mother". Olivia grabbed the glass of wine out of Abby's hand, and put it on the counter. "Mom drinking isn't good for you, look what time it is. You were with Gary Mom, didn't he tell you how dangerous it is to drink because your upset? I know you are dying inside, you want to go to Gary, but you staying clear of him for me right"?
"Ok I admit that, but I'm trying Olivia"
"Mom I love you for admitting that, but if you can't stay away from Gary, let me and Brian go to Dad's. I don't want to be embarrassed, and I don't want to hear people talk about you. I have heard it before, and it makes me so angry. I know you are wrong, but you are my Mom, and I don't want anyone saying bad things even though you deserve it sometimes."
Abby smiled, "Olivia how did you get so smart"?
"Oh living across the road from Aunt Karen, I think". Abby laughed, she chased Olivia, and they both sat on the couch laughing. Abby hugged Olivia, and they both just sat talking , and she realized her kids had to come first, she just hated that it took Olivia to make her realize that.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 6, 2011 20:28:40 GMT -6
lovely talk between her and her daughter, I wonder if she really will stay away from Gary? Great update Jessie glad you updated
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Post by Sanda on Mar 6, 2011 23:57:50 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I really wonder if Abby will be able to stay away from Gary or Not.
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Post by jessie on Apr 3, 2011 21:21:19 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Abby was reading some papers from work, when the phone rang. She picked it up, "Hello"
"Abby it is Karen, how is Olivia doing"?
"Great she is upstairs, so is Brian"
"Good me and Mack are having a BBQ dinner tonight, we would love for Olivia and Brian to come over". Abby smiled, "They would love that, I will send them over"
"Abby I can't invite you, Valene will be here too"
"I understand, I have work to do over here anyway"
"Abby Valene hasn't heard from Gary since this morning have you"?
"No, he won't call me"
"Abby are you giving up on him, or is it a game of yours"
"I have tried Karen, it is over, I'm doing this for my kids"
"Good Abby, you can send them over anytime".
"Bye Karen". Abby hung up, and walked upstairs. She walked into Brian's room, he jumped when she walked into the room.
"Young man I thought you were doing your homework"
"I was Mom, but I was taking a break playing this game".
"Next time homework first, Aunt Karen wants you over for dinner, so get changed , I will get your sister"
"Mom are you coming over"?
"Not tonight, get ready" , Abby left Brian , and walked to Olivia's room. She knocked on the door, and Olivia yelled, "come in".
"Hey Aunt Karen invited you, and Brian over for a BBQ"
"Really are you invited"?
"No Valene is going to be there, I think you , and your brother should go, and enjoy yourself"
"Mom I hate this, I don't want to leave you alone"
"I have some paper work to do, I will be fine, I'm not hungry anyway". Olivia smiled, "OK when I come home, can we watch some TV together"?
"Sure, I would love that". Olivia said she was going to get ready. Abby went downstairs, they came down, and they hugged their Mom, and they left to go to Karen's place. They walked out, Abby waved to them, as they were walking across the street. Brian turned around, and yelled something to his Mom. She walked down the stairs, to hear what he said, when she saw a car, coming down the street way to fast. She screamed, Brian and Olivia both screamed, as the car hit them both, as they flew about 10 feet in the air, and landed on the ground. Abby was screaming so loud, Karen, Mack, and Valene came running out of Karen's house. Abby was in shock, she ran over to her children, falling to her knee's. She couldn't breath, as she screamed for help. Mack already called 911, but he stood in shock, as he saw Gary get out of his car. He was obviously drunk , he walked around his car, falling to his knees. He was sick seeing what he did. Abby turned seeing it was Gary, she was shocked, she screamed, "What have you done"?
"I'm sorry, they were in the street"
Valene walked over to Gary, "OMG Gary your drunk, what have you done"?
Gary put out his hand to Valene, "Oh God Valene, I'm so sorry". She knelt down, he was crying, but she grabbed his face. "Why would you get in a car drunk, are you crazy"? The Police, Ambulances arrive, Gary is taken into custody, as Abby and Karen got in the ambulances with the kids.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 4, 2011 13:32:09 GMT -6
gary is in a lot of trouble, I hope the kids are all right. he shouldnt have been drinking but he created this whole mess. lovely writing Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Apr 4, 2011 18:30:38 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Gary shouldn't have been drunk. I hope that the kids are going to be OK.
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Post by jessie on Apr 28, 2011 23:10:03 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Gary was drunk but he knew what he did, and hated himself for it. He looked out the window, while he was driven to the Police Station. He shut his eyes, he prayed Brian and Olivia would be ok. He really liked them, and the thought of hurting them made him ill. He got to the Police Station, he was taken into the Station. He was fingerprinted, and photographed. He was taken into a room, and asked to give a statement. A Doctor came to the station, and took a blood sample, and a urine sample. He was taken to a holding cell, and told he would remain their until someone tried to get bail for him. Gary sat there his hands were shaking he was scared, but he was coming off his alcoholic binge. He couldn't remember how many drinks he had? Why did he get in the car, he knew better this was the first time he drove drunk, that he could remember? He got up and yelled, "Please tell me how the children are please".
A Officer walked over, "If we hear anything , we will let you know. You sit down, and be quiet, we don't want to hear your whining. You should have thought of the children, before you got in that car drunk. People like you make me sick, you got in a car drunk, you should be charged with attempted murder". Gary sat down, he was going into shock, he knew he was in serious trouble, and he knew he had no one to blame but himself".
Abby and Karen were waiting in the waiting room, for news on Olivia and Brian. Abby's hands were shaking, she couldn't get the imagine of seeing her children suffer that way out of her head. She blamed herself, she should have walked them over to Karen's house. They walked over a million times, but this one time, they both were hurt.
"Abby can I get you a coffee"?
"No Karen what is taking so long"?
"They are working on them, I'm sure they will be fine"
"Fine did you see them he was driving like a maniac"?
"Abby he was drunk, I don't know what he was thinking about"?
"Did he want to hurt me through my children Karen"? Abby said crying as Karen hugged her. "No way Gary didn't do this on purpose, but he will pay for being drunk, it is unforgivable".
"What did I see in that man, I was a fool"?
"Gary was a alcoholic, having you and Valene reject him threw him over the edge".
"So it is my fault Karen is that what you are saying"?
"No it is Gary's fault, I'm just saying".
"You can go home, I will wait for news myself".
"I'm not going anywhere, I'm staying here for you, and those kids. I love them, you know that Abby"
"I know, I can't lose them". Abby went into Karen's arms.
Mac and Valene walked in, Abby saw them, and turned away. Mac walked over, "Have you heard any news Karen"?
"No we have been waiting, they were in bad shape. I didn't tell Abby , Brian couldn't breath in the ambulance".
"Oh God". Mac hugged Karen
Valene walked over to Abby, "Abby I'm so sorry, I can't believe what Gary did"
"Please don't mention Gary ever again, I hate him , and I hope he rots in prison for what he did". Valene had tears in her eyes, she didn't know what to say, she knew Gary would end up in prison, and the thought of that killed her.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 30, 2011 19:10:41 GMT -6
poor Abby I hope her kids are okay, I wonder whats going to happen to Gary......great chapter, i hope you update soon
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Post by Sanda on May 1, 2011 0:19:56 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Brian and Olivia are going to be Ok. I wonder if Gary is going to rot in prison for hurting Olivia and Brian.
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