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Post by jessie on Aug 25, 2010 0:27:27 GMT -6
New story this is a story, I have been thinking about writing but wasn't sure about . I'm going to go for it, and hope you like it.
Chapter 1
Miss Ellie woke up in Clayton's arms, she loved him so much. He kissed her, and got up showering, he was going to a cattle show with Ray this morning. Miss Ellie got up dressing for breakfast, and went downstairs, and she went into the kitchen and chatted with Teresa. She was getting breakfast ready, and she helped her. Miss Ellie sat at the table, and was happy as everyone joined her including Clayton. She was staring at Clayton, he was so handsome, and he really has been a joy to be with. She missed Jock she would until the day she died, but she never discussed it with Clayton. She did occasionally with Bobby, but never JR. He talked about his Daddy, but he would hurt Clayton on purpose if he knew she missed Jock. Everyone had breakfast, and they were running out for their daily events, school, work, and she was home alone, like everyday this past month. Clayton walked over kissing her saying he would see her tomorrow, him and Ray were going to spend the night in Austin. She walked him outside, and saw Ray drive, she walked over to the car. Ray got out disappointed, saying he couldn't go to the auction, one of the cattle were about to give birth. He didn't want to leave the animal, so Clayton smiled, and said he would go , and see her tomorrow... She sat for awhile by the pool, just daydreaming, when Sue Ellen came out, saying she was going into town. Miss Ellie said she was tired, she didn't want to join her, she waved watching her leave. Sue Ellen left Miss Ellie wanted to go for a short walk she loved her walks alone. It gave her time to think, and remember things she never wanted to forget. She walked over petting some of the horses, and she decided to walk back to the house. She was extremely hot, it was one of the hottest summers in history. She got to the gate, and she noticed someone talking to Teresa, she wondered who it was? Teresa hugged the person, she walked closer, her eyes were deceiving her, she stopped dead, she started to cry. She yelled, "OMG it can't be", she started to run, and stopped about 10 feet from the man. She yelled, "Jock it can't be you"?
Jock turned around, he smiled, "Ellie it is me, I'm home".
Miss Ellie fainted, and the next thing she remembered was waking up , to Teresa putting a cool cloth on her head. Miss Ellie looked around, and knew she was dreaming, Jock wasn't anywhere in sight. She started to shut her eyes, and she heard, " Has she woke up yet"? She opened her eyes there was Jock standing beside her, he looked so handsome she started to cry. He sat beside her, touching her face, "I'm so sorry I startled you Ellie".
' Where have you been Jock"?
" I was hurt real bad, I was in a coma for the longest time. I was taken to this hospital, after they found me . They didn't know who I was , so this family kind of became my second family? I just started to get better, and I came home, I couldn't forget my family , and you especially. I'm so sorry , I hurt you Ellie, but I'm home now"
Ellie was staring at Jock, but she didn't know how to tell him, she married Clayton.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 25, 2010 14:38:12 GMT -6
OMG I cried reading this. I wish this could have happened. I love this already Please update soon. Jim Davis passing was so sad and it wasnt the same after he was gone. I was only three years old when he passed away but even growing up I knew the impact he had on the show. This is wonderful Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Aug 25, 2010 15:23:55 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie. I really LOVED the pairing of Clayton and Miss Ellie. I can't wait to see what happens between Clayton and Miss Ellie now that Jock has comeback into Miss Ellie's life.
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Post by jessie on Aug 25, 2010 19:20:26 GMT -6
Thank you Melinda and Sanda for your very sweet comments, to my new story. Hope you continue to enjoy it.
Chapter 2
Miss Ellie sat up, she was so light headed, but she touched Jock's face. She wanted to make sure he was real. It was him, she wanted this day for so long, she finally came to terms with his death, and now he was sitting right in front of her. She wanted to wrap her arms around him, and she did, he held her so tight. She remembered how his arms felt around her , and feeling him against her, brought all her memories flooding back. She looked at Teresa, she had tears in her eyes. She put her head down, Miss Ellie knew what Teresa was feeling, she felt the same thing. Clayton was her husband now, but how can she tell Jock, she went on with her life, thinking he was dead? She pulled away, and Jock smiled, " It is ok Ellie, I understand this is hard for you. I was afraid to come back, I didn't know what to expect? When I was getting better, I started to remember bits and pieces of my life. You were the first person, that came to me, and I remember everything I loved about you. I couldn't wait to come back, and seeing you is even more amazing than I thought. How are our boys, and Grandchildren"?
"They missed you like crazy Jock, it killed all of us. We didn't want to think you were dead, but after years of hoping, we finally came to terms with it. Having you here is so amazing, but I'm so confused, I don't know how to feel".?
"We will go slow, we love each other, nothing will ever change that Ellie".
"Jock, I'm so sorry, things changed, you have to understand why"?
" What are you talking about"?
Miss Ellie was about to speak, when they heard Sue Ellen say, " OMG ". Jock stood up, and smiled, and Sue Ellen dropped her bags, running into Jock's arms. " You are alive, OMG, where have you been all this time"?
" It is a long story, it is so great seeing you Sue Ellen. How is my Grandson"?
"John Ross is big, you will love him, he will be so happy to see you. OMG does JR know you are here , he would be home in a minute"?
"Let him come home, don't startle him over the phone. I'm home Sue Ellen, I know this is strange, but I miss you all so much". Sue Ellen hugged Jock staring at Miss Ellie. She closed her eyes, she was going to destroy Jock, when she says she remarried , she hated the thought of hurting him. Jock smiled, " How about we all go down, and have a coffee, John Ross, and Christopher, should be home soon. How is Lucy doing , she finished her schooling didn't she"?
"Yes, she is still in University, she is doing well". Sue Ellen smiled, She is still spoiled Jock, but she has grown up , to be quite a young lady".
"She is my Granddaughter, she is amazing". He walked to the door, " meet you in the dining room, I'm dying for a coffee". He walked out , and Sue Ellen sat beside Miss Ellie. " What are you going to do, he doesn't know about Clayton does he"?
"No, how can I tell him"?
Sue Ellen held Miss Ellie, as they both cried.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 25, 2010 20:28:10 GMT -6
Oh this is so sad but so good my favorite kind of story. How will Jock react when he finds out Miss Ellie has remarried? Will he turn around and leave again? I really can't wait till he reunites with JR. Please update again soon
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Post by Sanda on Aug 26, 2010 0:17:17 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I wonder how JR and especially Clayton is going to react to Jock's return. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Oct 3, 2010 16:08:14 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Jock, Miss Ellie and Sue Ellen were outside, waiting for the kids to come off the school bus. They saw it coming down the driveway, and John Ross and Christopher got off the bus. Sue Ellen went to greet them, and knelt down. "Someone is here to see you both, someone you both never thought you would see again. You both only remember him from pictures, but he wants to see you both so badly". John Ross ran over to see who it was? Sue Ellen took Christoper's hand and walked over. John Ross walked over slowly, he knew his Grandpa from pictures, but he died. His Daddy talks about him all the time, he remembers a little bit about his Grandpa, but not much. He walked over standing in front of Jock, and whispered, "Grandpa, you came back"? Jock lifted John Ross into his arms, hugging him so tightly. Miss Ellie whispered, "Jock not so tight, he can't breath". Jock put John Ross down, and knelt down, "Oh you look so much like your Daddy, when he was young. You have grown so much young man, how is school"?
"Good, I'm great in Math, and Science and gym". I don't like French class much". Jock smiled, " Oh you must do your Daddy proud". He smiled, "well young man are you coming over to give your Grandpa a hug"?
Christopher hugged Sue Ellen, who knelt down, "what is the matter sweetie"?
"Is he a ghost Aunt Sue Ellen"?
"No, he isn't a ghost, he is alive just like you and me. We thought he died sweetie, but it was a mistake, he came back to see us all". Christopher turned, and walked over , "hello Grandpa". Jock had tears in his eyes, he hugged Christopher and whispered, "hello Christopher, so good to see you". Christopher smiled, "Have you seen John Ross's trains set Grandpa"?
'Why yes, I bought that for him Christopher, when he was just 2years old".
"Really want to come up, and see us play with it?. You can help if you like"
"Sure why not, lets go up". Jock took both their hands, and went into the house. Sue Ellen turned looking at Miss Ellie, who sat down, she was so overwhelmed. Sue Ellen walked over sitting down, holding Miss Ellie's hands, "what are you going to do Miss Ellie"?
"What do you mean Sue Ellen"?
"Jock and Clayton, someone is going to get hurt"
' I know can I have this night with Jock, before I make this decision".
"Miss Ellie you know what the boys will say, but this is your choice".
"How can I choose between two wonder men, what am I going to do"?
"I don't know, but have this night with Jock, and tomorrow Clayton will be home. You will have to choose Miss Ellie, and I hate that one of them will be devastated".
Lucy drove up, and Sue Ellen and Miss Ellie smile as she walked up to them. "Hi what is up, I had the worst day at school. There was this guy, trying to pick me up all day. He is cute, but annoying, and the guy, I really liked wouldn't give me the time a day".
Sue Ellen smiled, "Maybe you should invite them both over to Southfork, and me and your Grandma, will pick the right one for you". Miss Ellie smiled, as Lucy whispered, "Like that is happening Sue Ellen". Lucy jumped when Jock walked out yelling ,"Miss Ellie come and see the boys".
Lucy had tears in her eyes, as Jock walked over to her. He touched her face, Lucy was shaking. Sue Ellen whispered, "your not dreaming sweetie, he is home". Lucy smiled jumping into his arms, and he held Lucy so tight, not wanting to let go.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 3, 2010 16:23:37 GMT -6
this was so sweet, I loved the ending with Lucy and Jock, he tried to keep her in line lol. this is going to be an emotional story I can tell. please update soon
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Post by jessie on Oct 24, 2010 12:46:13 GMT -6
This is a sad one guys, it made me cry. Chapter 3 "Oh Granddaddy, your home, where were you all this time"? "Oh Sweet girl, I was sick, but I'm home now". "Oh I dreamed of this day, I missed you so much" Sue Ellen and Miss Ellie were crying, and Jock even had tears in his eyes. Lucy looked at Miss Ellie, "he is home for good right"? "Lucy, why don't you go in and change, I will come up to see you" "Grandma he has to stay" "Of course go inside, I will be right there". Lucy hugged Jock, and ran inside. "Why would she think, I will leave again"? "Jock she is just confused, why don't you go to the boys? I will tend to Lucy, maybe you would like to freshen up before the boys get home". "Miss Ellie would you mind if I take Sue Ellen, and we walk over to see Ray first"? "No, that would be perfect run along". Sue Ellen walked with Jock, as Miss Ellie watched. She started to cry, the love of her life was right here in front of her. How was she going to make this choice, she love Jock with all her heart? She adored Clayton, he was there for her when she needed someone, and she has grown, to love him equally. She wished she didn't have to make this dreaded choice but she did. She walked into the house, and went upstairs to see Lucy. Miss Ellie knocked, and walked into the room. Lucy ran over, "this is so wonderful Grandma, I wanted this day for so long. I use to dream he came home, he did". "Lucy sit down, I have not told your Grandpa about Clayton yet". "Clayton OMG". "Yes, see there is a problem, you can't tell him yet ok". "You won't send Grandpa away, please don't". "Lucy please, I'm so confused, I don't want to hurt Clayton or Jock". "You love Grandpa you told me he was the love of your life". 'He is he always will be, but I adore Clayton too". "Grandpa was here first, it wasn't his fault, he was hurt. I will never forgive you if you choose Clayton over him. I will leave with my Grandpa, I swear". Miss Ellie was devastated, and left Lucy, and ran to her room, slamming the door. Lucy was crying, she hated hurting her Grandma, but she meant every word she said. She knew JR would help her, this is the first time, she is hoping JR would cause trouble, and make Grandma make the right choice. Jock and Sue Ellen got to the stables, she stopped him. "Maybe I will go in first, and prepare him for a shook" "Your right, I will sit by this rock, bring my boy to me". "I will Jock, I'm so glad your home, I know Bobby and JR and Ray are going to be so happy". Sue Ellen has tears streaming down her cheeks. "Thank you Sue Ellen, that means the world to me". Sue Ellen walked to the stables, and went inside. She saw Ray working alone, she walked over touching his back. Ray turned, "OMG Sue Ellen is something wrong"? "No, something wonderful happened Ray", She started to cry. He walked over touching her arm, "Sue Ellen what is it"? "Someone came home Ray, your Daddy". Ray knees almost gave out, he grabbed Sue Ellen. "What are you talking about Sue Ellen"? "Jock is home, he is right outside the stables, he came home". Ray went running out of the stables, and stopped when Jock stood up smiling. Ray never cried much, but he felt tears coming to his eyes. He ran over hugging Jock, he couldn't believe he was right here on Southfork. He thought he lost him, but he was back, he didn't want to let him go.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 24, 2010 13:24:38 GMT -6
aw this was so good, I love this story.. Im glad you updated. I agree with Lucy she should choose Jock
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Post by jessie on Jan 2, 2011 16:09:09 GMT -6
Chapter 4
"Hey boy have you missed me"?
"Daddy OMG where were you, we looked everywhere we found your necklace"?
"We will talk about that later, how have you been"?
"Great but I have missed you so much, OMG I can't believe this. I can't wait for you to see Donna"
"Bring her for dinner tonight, I would love to see her". Ray looked at Sue Ellen she smiled but shook her head. He knew Jock didn't know about Clayton yet. He loved Clayton too, but he hated to admit it, if he had to choose it would be Jock. Sue Ellen smiled, "How about we go up to the house, and get something cold to drink"?
"Sure" Ray ran in and told Al to call him, if the baby calf was about to be born".
Jock , Sue Ellen and Ray walked back to Southfork. Ray was asking a million questions, which overwhelmed Jock. Sue Ellen couldn't wait for JR to see his Daddy, but she was scared he would say something about Clayton. It was up to Miss Ellie to say it, but she had to do it soon, Clayton would be home in the morning. Sue Ellen loved Jock , but she loved Clayton too, she didn't want either hurt, but one would be. She knew what the right choice was but she didn't want to admit it to herself. Miss Ellie walked out, "Ray I bet you were surprised"
"Yes, Mame". Teresa walked out with the ice tea. Sue Ellen smiled, "I'm going inside for a minute, be right back. She ran upstairs, and went to knock on Lucy"s door but heard her on the phone.
'JR come home right away, someone you won't believe is here"
"Who Lucy"?
"Come home now, I need you". Lucy hung up , as Sue Ellen walked into the room. "Lucy Ewing why did you do that"?
"What that is his Daddy, are you not happy he is home"?
"Of course you know I'm happy for everyone, and I love Jock too. I'm also hurting for Clayton and Miss Ellie. She has to make a decision, that would be so hard Sweetie".
"Really Grandpa isn't a choice, this is his home, not Clayton's". Sue Ellen walked over touching her face, "Lucy Clayton is going to be hurt don't you care"?
Lucy started to cry, "Yes, I love Clayton, but I want my Grandpa". She went into Sue Ellen's arms, and they hugged each other. Christopher and John Ross were in the doorway, and they both stood staring. Sue Ellen wiped the tears from her eyes, "Oh how long have you been there"?
"Ma Ma Grandpa Clayton will have to move away right"?
"Oh Baby I don't know, but probably". John Ross ran into her arms, "Oh I love them both, I want them both to stay".Christopher started to cry too, Sue Ellen held them both close. " They both can't live here, but I promise you, I will take you to visit Grandpa Clayton whenever you want"
'Promise"?
"Yes, he is part of our lives". Sue Ellen couldn't stop crying Lucy sat up and the four of them hugged.
Miss Ellie was outside looking at Jock, he was so handsome, she wished for this day to happen forever, but thought it would never happen. She turned seeing JR's car drive up, he got out, walking over, "Lucy called saying someone was here". He stopped looking at Jock, he couldn't believe his eyes, he whispered, "Daddy".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 2, 2011 16:28:11 GMT -6
oh JR saw his daddy, that is sweet, I cant wait to read about his reaction, I hope you update soon. this is a wonderful story.
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Post by jessie on May 17, 2011 13:30:45 GMT -6
Chapter 5
"OMG Daddy" JR ran over hugging Jock so tight, afraid to let go thinking he would disappear.
"We looked everywhere for you , OMG you have been alive, and we stopped looking, I'm so sorry".
"Shh JR it is a long story, but you are hugging me so tight, I can't breathe".
"I'm sorry, this is the best thing that could happen for this family. You are home where you belong, OMG did John Ross see you"?
"Yes it was a shock for them, and Ray and your Ma Ma"
"I bet but what about"
"JR please let your Daddy sit down, this has been a stressful day for all of us". Miss Ellie walked over giving JR a look. JR knew his Father didn't know about Clayton, and he knew she had to tell him. He was not fond of Clayton, but no way was that man staying here, and his Daddy leaving. It wasn't happening, no matter what his Ma Ma said.
Ray walked out seeing the tension between JR and Miss Ellie. He walked over to Jock, "I would love to drive you over to my place, and show you what I have done."
"I would like that Ray". They said goodbye to JR, and Miss Ellie, and walked to Ray's truck.
"Ma Ma why haven't you told him about Clayton yet"?
"He just got here JR, and I'm confused don't you understand that"?
"Confused he was your husband, Clayton wouldn't be in your life if you knew he was alive would he"?
"Of course not but he is a big part of my life. I love both of them JR, this is going to be hard on all three of us"
"You can't be saying you might choose Clayton over Daddy"?
"I didn't say that, but telling Clayton it is over, will kill me"
"It is over, I will end it for you, I will call the hotel he is staying at"
"You will not do such a thing, are you that cruel JR, he is my husband too for God sake"
"Daddy is alive he is what is important not Clayton's feelings"
"I swear if you so help me God call Clayton, I will never ever forgive you. This is my job, and I will make my choice, and I will make the choice that is right for me, not you JR"
"Oh I never thought I would say this Ma Ma, but I'm ashamed of you". JR stormed into the house, leaving Miss Ellie shaking. She whispered, "You don't understand JR, I love them both". She sat down, she couldn't stop the tears.
JR walked upstairs, he walked to his room, he was so angry. Sue Ellen heard the door slam, she walked down the hall, and went in the room.
"JR are you ok"?
"No my Father is home, and my Mother is acting like she has such a big decision to make. I understand she loves Clayton, but Daddy is home, and he isn't leaving here"
"She is upset JR this is hard on her"
"I know that but Clayton has to go, there isn't any other way"
"Let her do this JR, she will make the right decision. I feel bad for both Clayton, and Jock it will hurt both of them. Clayton loves your Mother JR, he has treated her so well. Jock will be devastated that she remarried, so it is a no win situation."
"You love Clayton more Sue Ellen , if that is the fact, go with him, and console him"
"JR Ewing you are a selfish man, I will never forgive you for that comment". Sue Ellen ran out of the room, leaving JR alone, knowing that was a cruel comment, and he knew he never should have said it.
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 17, 2011 13:52:50 GMT -6
typical JR lashing out in his own hurt, you have him very well IC here.. glad you updated this this is one of my favorites its so sad but so good. lovely writing Jessie
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 13, 2011 14:05:40 GMT -6
oh man you left off at a turning point, that was the chapter I had been waiting for...this was one of my favorite chapters of all your stories...you had JR perfect here. Hope you update soon, no pressure
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