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Post by tammie on Jul 12, 2010 20:35:15 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, Youre BACK!.. . Loving reading your story. It is filled with funny, cute, tender, sweet, and scary moments. I cant wait to read...what else is going to happen. Glad youre writing again.. Its beautiful!
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Post by Sanda on Jul 12, 2010 23:38:06 GMT -6
Thank you Tammie for the wonderful comments about my story. I really enjoying writing this story and reading everyone's comments.
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Post by Tina Ewing on Jul 13, 2010 3:31:51 GMT -6
Nice chapter Sanda! Bobby is perfect for the role of bodyguard
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Post by Sanda on Jul 13, 2010 10:36:15 GMT -6
Thank you Tina for the wonderful comment about chapter 5 of my story. Tina, I agree with you 100% that Bobby is perfect in the role of bodyground.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 13, 2010 10:38:14 GMT -6
The song I Knew I Loved You by Savage Garden is my inspiration for my fanfiction. www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjnmICxvoVYBobby and Sanda are going to be dancing to this song on their first date. ;D
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Post by jessie on Jul 13, 2010 16:02:09 GMT -6
Love your song choice, it is one of my favourtie songs too. Love your story, can't wait to see what will happened next.?
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Post by Sanda on Jul 13, 2010 17:34:39 GMT -6
Jessie, I am soo happy that you loved my song choice for Sanda and Bobby. I have been listening to this song all day long today. I am still working on Chapter 6 of my story. Thank you for all of your support on my story.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 14, 2010 18:18:03 GMT -6
Chapter 6
It has been 30 minutes since the Carnival Coquest left Galveston, Tx. Bobby, Sanda, and Christopher are still shaken up from their encounter earlier with the creepy men. The three of them are sitting on the couch. Bobby has his arms around Sanda.
"Sanda, we need to shower and get changed for our date this evening"
" I know Bobby but I don't want to leave you and Christopher to go back to my stateroom."
"Christopher and I will walk you to your stateroom. I hope that your dad is still in your stateroom. I don't want you to be alone while you are getting ready for tonight."
Bobby and Christopher both hold Sanda's hands as they walk her to her and Frank's stateroom. Bobby was hoping that Frank would be in their stateroom. Sanda knocked on the door becuase she forgot her key card. Her dad opened the door. Bobby was soo relieved to see Frank.
"Hi Frank, please don't leave Sanda alone until I come back and get her for our date."
"I won't leave her alone Bobby I promise."
"Thank you Frank I feel better already. Sanda see you at 6:45."
"Goodbye Bobby and Christopher. See you at 6:45 Bobby." Sanda kisses them both goodbye and walks into her stateroom and shuts the door.
After Sanda closes the door, Christopher taps his Daddy on the arm.
"Daddy, can we get Sanda some flowers to make her feel better?"
"That sounds like a wonderful idea son."
Bobby and Christopher walk to the flower shop on board the ship to get Sanda some flowers.
An hour later Bobby is soo nervous about his date with Sanda that he is pacing back and forth in his and Christopher's state room driving Christopher crazy. Bobby can't decide what shirt to wear so he has changed his shirt six times.
"Daddy, Why did you change your shirt six times?"
"Pal, I am so nervous about my going out on my date with Sanda that I couldn't decide on a shirt that I liked the best so I tried on several of them. I wonder if Sanda is as nervous as I am about our date."
"Daddy, I like the shirt you have on now."
Bobby is putting on his necktie and is tucking in his shirt.
"Thank you son. Tina should be here in a few minutes to babysit. You better be good for her since she is Sanda's best friend. Tina and Sanda are very special to us since the incident earlier today. We need to take good care of them."
"Daddy, I promise to be good for Tina and to watch out for her."
Over in Sanda and Frank's stateroom, Sanda is pacing back and forth because she is nervous about her date with Bobby. Tina, her best friend came over to help her fix her hair and to pick out an outfit to wear for her date with Bobby.
"Tina, I wonder if Bobby is as nervous as I am about our date."
"I bet that Bobby is just as nervous as you and that he is pacing back and forth driving Christopher crazy."
Sanda laughs, "Thank you Tina that makes me feel a whole lot better."
"Sanda, I love the dress you are wearing. You are going knock Bobby off of his feet when he sees you in that dress."
"Tina, I am glad you love this dress that I am wearing. I am soo happy we finally found something for me to wear after I tried on 6 different outfits."
"I better go to Bobby and Christopher's stateroom. I am sure that Bobby is anxiously waiting for me to show up so that he can take you to dinner."
"Bye Tina see you after dinner. Thank you for all of your help."
After Tina leaves Frank comes in from the balcony.
"Sanda, you look beautiful."
"Thank you Daddy."
" I hope that you have a wonderful time with Bobby this evening. Who is watching Christopher?
"Tina, is watching Christopher for Bobby. She just left for Bobby's stateroom a few minutes ago."
Bobby and Christopher are sitting on the bed talking when they hear a knock at the door. Bobby gets up to answer the door.
"Hi Bobby, you look soo handsome tonight."
"Thank you Tina."
"My Daddy changed his shirt six times becuase he is soo nervous about his date with Sanda."
"Christopher Ewing, it isn't nice to tell on me son."
"Sorry Daddy."
"Thats ok Christopher Sanda changed her clothes six times as well. She was soo nervous about going to dinner with you as well."
"Tina, thank you for letting me know. That makes me feel soo much better."
"Tina, Sanda and I will be gone for about 3 hours. Here is Chrstopher's room key. Please feel free to take Christopher to eat dinner since he hasn't eaten since lunch. Also please keep an extra eye on him after what happened earlier today."
"Bobby, please don't worry about me and Christopher, we will be fine." Tina sees the roses on the table for Sanda and smiles at Christopher.
"Don't forget the roses you got for Sanda."
Christopher goes to the table to get the roses and brings them to Bobby.
"Thank you son and please behave for Tina."
"Daddy, I will behave for Tina. I love you Daddy and please have a wondertul time with Sanda.'
"I love you too son. See you guys later."
Bobby leaves out of the door to go to Frank and Sanda's stateroom to get Sanda for their date.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 14, 2010 18:40:58 GMT -6
awesome chapter, I cant wait for their date. I loved it when Bobby said it wasnt nice to tell on him! very good job this is a great story
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Post by jessie on Jul 14, 2010 19:08:19 GMT -6
Awesome update lovely story, can't wait for the date. It should be sweet, update soon. Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Jul 14, 2010 19:53:25 GMT -6
Thank you Tina and Melinda Jo for the wonderful comments about chapter six of my story. I haven't started to write their date yet becuase I don't know where to go next with my story. LOL
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Post by tammie on Jul 14, 2010 22:32:38 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, This is why I LOVE your writing. The small touches you bring to your story. The cute one liners. I cant wait to read the Date. Update soon. Thank you.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 15, 2010 0:57:33 GMT -6
Thank you Tammie for the wonderful comments about chapter six of my story.
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Post by Tina Ewing on Jul 15, 2010 5:52:01 GMT -6
Sooo funny chapter Don't worry guys, I'll take care of Christopher and you two have a great time together
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Post by Sanda on Jul 15, 2010 9:29:28 GMT -6
Thank you Tina for the wonderful comment about Chapter 6 of my story. I haven't written the date chapter yet.
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