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Post by Sanda on Jul 2, 2010 13:19:01 GMT -6
A new story for me and my friend Tina. ;D
Chapter 1
Sanda and her best friend Tina are soo excited because they are going on a cruise with Sanda's dad Frank and Tina's parents Jim and Annie for 7 days of the Western Carribbean. Sanda and Tina have been gabbing on the phone non stop about what clothes and stuff they are going to bring on the cruise. They have also been talking about what types of people they might meet on the cruise.
Finally the day of the crusie has arrived. Sanda and her dad Frank and Tina and her parents Jim and Annie have arrived at Hobby Airport in Houston. The five of them are taking a limo together from the airport to the cruise terminal. About 1 hour later after the five of us leave the airport we arrive at the cruise terminal in Galveston.
Sanda and her dad Frank and Tina and her parents Jim and Annie are standing in line to check in when suddenly Sanda gets tapped on the leg. A man behind her says, "Christopher please leave the pretty lady alone." Sanda turns around and she is staring at the most handsome man she has ever seen in her life.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 2, 2010 14:01:27 GMT -6
off to a great start, great to see you writing again Sanda
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Post by jessie on Jul 2, 2010 16:30:40 GMT -6
Great start, nice to see you writing again, should be fun to what will happen with Tina and Sanda next?
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Post by Sanda on Jul 2, 2010 19:49:41 GMT -6
Thank you Jessie and Melinda for the wonderful comments about my new story. I am not nearly as talented as Jessie and Melinda at writing stories.
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Tina Ewing
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Post by Tina Ewing on Jul 4, 2010 7:14:33 GMT -6
I can't wait what's happening next with us, Sanda
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Post by Sanda on Jul 4, 2010 10:29:53 GMT -6
Thank you Tina Ewing for the wonderful comment about my new story. I will try to update this story today or tomarrow.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 5, 2010 23:39:53 GMT -6
Chapter 2
The handsome man says " I am soo sorry if my son was bothering you."
"No, it is ok. I love children."My name is Sanda. " What is your name?"
"My name is Bobby and this is my son Christopher."
"Hi Bobby and Christopher, nice to meet you both."
Bobby and Sanda are just staring at each other when they are interrupted by a voice behind them.
"Sanda, who are you talking with?"
"Dad, this is Bobby and his son Christopher."
"Hi Bobby and Christopher nice to meet you both. My name is Frank and I am Sanda's father."
"Nice to meet you Frank."
"Sanda, I would like to meet you for later for lunch."
"That sounds wonderful Bobby. I look forward to having lunch with you and Christopher."
Sanda and her dad Frank are up next to check into their stateroom. After Sanda and Frank have checked in they wait on Bobby and Christopher.
After they finish taking Bobby and Christopher's pictures and they put a wrist band on Christopher's arm just in case he gets lost from Bobby during an emergency on board the ship.
"Sanda, can you please hold Chrisopher for me while I finish checking me and Christopher into our room."
"Sure, Bobby no problem." Bobby hands Christopher over to me and he falls asleep in my arms.
My dad takes out his camera and takes a couple of pictures of me and Christopher so we can send them to Bobby after the cruise. While I am getting my picture made with Christopher my friend Tina walks over to me.
"Who is is cute little boy asleep in your arms?"
"Tina, this Christopher. His daddy Bobby is over their checking them in."
Tina stares over at the check in counter and then she looks at me.
"Oh my God Sanda, Christopher's daddy is sooo hot."
"Oh my God Tina tell me about it girl."
Bobby walks over to me and my friend.
"Sanda, Who is this lovely lady you are talking to?"
"Bobby, this is my best friend Tina."
"Hi Tina, nice to meet you."
"Nice, to meet you too Bobby."
"Bobby, do you mind if I walk with you and Christopher to your room. I don't want to wake up Christopher when I try to hand him back to you ."
"Sanda, I would love it if you walked with to my room."
Frank and Tina are walking behind the three of us.
"Bobby, what is your room number. Our room number is 8060."
"Frank, my room number is 8042."
"Tina, what is your room number?"
"Bobby, my room number is 8041."
"Bobby, that is soo awesome that we are all on the same floor."
Bobby smiles at Sanda and says" Yes, it is Sanda."
Bobby and I drop off Frank and Tina off at their rooms and then we walk to Bobby's room. Bobby opens up the door and I walk in with Christopher. I lay Christopher down on the bed while Bobby opens up the balcony door and goes out on the balcony. I walk out and join Bobby on the balcony.
"Christopher, looked soo cute asleep in your arms."
"My dad took a couple of pictures of me holding Christopher. We will send them to you after the cruise."
" I would like that very much Sanda because I forgot to pack my camera."
"My dad and I love to take lots of pictures when we travel."
"Sanda, I am falling for you already even though we just met."
Bobby cups my face and gives me a very passionate kiss.
"Bobby, we need to continue this later. I need to get back to my dad."
Bobby walks me to the door.
"Sanda, see you in 30 minutes for lunch. Christopher and I will come to your room pick you up for lunch. "
"See you and Christopher later."
Bobby gives me a good bye kiss and I leave to go to my room.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 6, 2010 9:36:58 GMT -6
this is an awesome story. i love it that you and Bobby got to kiss I probably would too You are a fantastic writer, please keep going
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Post by Sanda on Jul 6, 2010 13:04:13 GMT -6
MelindaJo, thank you for the wonderful comments about chapter 2 of my story. I'll try to have another chapter up later this week. I am glad that you think I am fantastic writer. ;D I know that I am not nearly as talented as you and Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Jul 6, 2010 14:21:26 GMT -6
Lovely chapter Sanda, it was sweet, that Bobby and Sanda hit it off wonderfully. Tina likes Bobby , too you better watch out. Just kidding, I'm sure Tina will find someone, on the cruise to enjoy her time with. You are a wonderful writer, I look forward to more of your lovely story.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 6, 2010 18:32:16 GMT -6
Jessie, I am soo glad that you think I am a wonderful writer. I don't think I am near as good of a writer as you are though.
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Tina Ewing
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Post by Tina Ewing on Jul 7, 2010 4:27:30 GMT -6
Great update Sanda! I love this chapter. It's funny when I'm telling you that Bobby is so hot. Bobby doesn't lose his time as he's falling for you so quickly Go on girl!
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Post by Sanda on Jul 7, 2010 11:56:16 GMT -6
Tina, thank you for the wonderful comments about chapter 2 of my story. I'll try to have chapter 3 of my story up really soon. ;D
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Post by Sanda on Jul 8, 2010 16:49:12 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Christopher wakes up and walks out to the balcony where Bobby is sitting in a chair.
"Hi Buddy. Did you have a good nap?"
" Daddy I had a good nap. Where is Sanda? I want Sanda."
"Buddy, Sanda went to her cabin to get settled in with her Dad. We are going to pick her up in a few minutes for lunch."
"That sounds great daddy." Bobby and Christopher leave their cabin for Sanda and Frank's. cabin.
Sanda and Frank are sitting out on their balcony talking when they hear a knock at their door.
Sanda gets up and walks to answer the door.
"Hi Bobby and Christopher, please come in and visit a while."
"Daddy, please put me down. I want Sanda."
"Christopher, was asking for you when he woke up."
Bobby puts Christopher down and he runs into my arms. I walk to the couch and sit down with Christopher while Bobby joins us on the couch. Frank is sitting on the edge of the bed.
"Bobby, I don't know if want to talk about it but I was wondering about Christopher's mother."
"Sanda and Frank, Christopher's mom Pam was in a horrible accident. She was very badly burned. She decided to leave me and Chrirstopher becuase she thought it would be better for us to remember her the way she was before the accident instead of us seeing her the way she looks now.
Sanda and Frank are staring at Bobby in shock.
"Bobby, I am soo sorry that Pam left you and your son. I just don't understand how a mother could leave her child."
"Bobby, if their is anything you or your son need please don't hesistate to ask me or my daughter."
"Thank you Sanda and Frank for your understanding and kindness."
"Sanda, are you ready for lunch."
"Yes, Bobby I am ready for lunch."
Sanda, Bobby, and Christopher get up from the couch. Sanda picks up her I Phone from the table and puts it her pocket.
"Sanda, please don't tell me that you are going to play with your I Phone all during lunch."
Sanda playfully hits Bobby on the arm. "Don't be silly Bobby. I am not going to be playing with my iphone during lunch. Do you own an I Phone Bobby."
"Yes, Sanda I own one of those contraptions. I better not see your I Phone again on this trip."
"Bobby, you won't see my I Phone again I promise."
Bobby grabs my hand and walks me and Christopher to the door.
"Frank, would you like to have lunch with the three of us."
"Bobby, are you sure you want me to join you guys for lunch."
"Yes, Frank we would love for you to join us for lunch."
" I will walk with you to lunch but I willl sit at a different table. Maybe I will join you guys another time for lunch."
The four of us leave Sanda and Frank's cabin and walk to lunch.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 8, 2010 17:04:07 GMT -6
I love how Christopher wanted Sanda, that was very cute. And the iphone was a nice touch too. Please update soon!
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