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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 21, 2010 15:30:39 GMT -6
wonderful chapter I like this side of Jock, how will Ellie react?
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Post by Sanda on Aug 21, 2010 16:22:58 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Oct 24, 2010 18:36:26 GMT -6
Chapter 12
"Jock Ewing why did you say that to me"?
"Because that is how I feel, I never wanted anyone, the way I want you". Ellie wanted to cry, but she held it in. He smiled, "Ok I shocked you, but you had to know in your heart, how I feel"
"Jock you are amazing, I think I pushed you away because of my Daddy. I'm falling in love with you, I don't want to hurt you, or Digger".
"You have to Ellie, I won't wait much longer, I need to know soon, if it is me or Digger you want"? They both sat down, and had their dinner, and drinks. They dance some more, when Jock asked her if she wanted to go somewhere to be alone?. Miss Ellie shivered with desire, but her head was saying can you trust yourself alone with Jock Ewing? She smiled, "I would love to Jock". They got up, and paid for dinner, and left and went to the car. Jock was driving, and Ellie was looking out the side window. She saw him drive up a road, and she turned, "where are you going Jock"?
'Have you ever been to lover's Point"?
"OMG no Jock we can't".
'We don't have to make love girl, we can just talk". She was shaking she wanted to spend time with him, but this was scary. He stopped the car, reaching in the back, and grabbed a blanket. He got out of the car, and ran around opening her door. He put his hand out to her, and she got out, and he shut the door. He walked with her, and put the blanket down, and helped her sit down. He sat beside her, and they just sat looking over the cliff, at the river below. It was beautiful, there was some boats out their. She looked up at the sky, seeing the stars, she smiled, "It is nice here Jock".
"I come up her alone a lot, just to think. I love the peace and quiet, and I love seeing the stars". She smiled, "you come up here alone Jock"?
"Yes, I swear , I wouldn't lie, I enjoy it".
"It is peaceful here, I don't hear or see anyone"?
"People don't normally come up this far, that is why I like it". She smiled and he moved close putting his arm around her. She put her head on his shoulder. He turned her face to his, and brought his lips over hers. She kissed him back, as he laid her back. She couldn't catch her breath, she was feeling sensations she never felt before. He whispered, "Oh Ellie you are so beautiful, I need you in my life, please say you will marry me".
"Oh Jock, your confusing me, what are you doing"?. She felt his hand roam her body, she jumped in anticipation. She was breathing so heavy, she could swear she could hear her heart beating. He moved so close she could feel how much he wanted her. He slowly put his hand under her dress, and she whispered, "oh Jock".
"Trust me Ellie, I won't ever hurt you". She held shut her eyes, she loved what he was doing, but she knew she had to stop.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 24, 2010 19:29:14 GMT -6
Loved this chapter, I hope she agrees to marry him but I feel sorry for Digger, I hope it doesnt ruin his life
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Post by jessie on Nov 21, 2010 18:20:20 GMT -6
Guys this was a hard chapter for me to write, you will understand while reading it.. I have a way I want my story to go, so this chapter is going to bring the story in a different direction. Just hope you don't get upset. lol
Chapter 13
Jock was kissing Miss Ellie, and his hands were sending shock waves throughout her body. She never wanted anything like she wanted Jock at this moment. She touched his lips, "Jock it isn't proper , what would our families think of us"?
"Ellie I want to spend the rest of my life with you, I know that in my heart. I won't hurt you, I promise I will be yours for however long you want me". Ellie pulled him to her lips, and they lost all control. She watched as he undressed, part of her was thinking she had to stop now, or she wouldn't be able too. He held her hands, sitting her up , he started to pull her dress up. She was shaking all the while looking into his eyes. She never seen a more handsome man in her whole life. She knew she couldn't stop now, she wanted him just as much as he wanted her. He helped her undress, and laid her back, as he slowly removed her panties. She shut her eyes, and whispered, "Jock this is my first time, I'm scared".
"I know Ellie, I will be gentle, I promise. If you ever want to stop, I will". He laid beside her, he roamed his hands down her arms, she shivered, and he laughed as their lips connected , and she felt his body move over hers, as he parted her. She resisted but he whispered in her ear trust me Ellie. She did and he entered her slowly, trying to be as gentle as he could. She shut her eyes, she wanted to cry, it was like the books said it was painful, but she didn't want to stop, because she knew she was giving herself to the man she was going to marry.
"Ellie are you ok, should I stop"?
"No Jock, don't stop". He moved more , and she cried out, but she grabbed Jock holding him so tightly. He knew she was feeling pain, but he also saw on her face, she loved him, and she was giving herself completely to him. He could see she was coming to her release, and she was not sure what was happening. She shook underneath him, as she cried out. He came to his release, they both collapsed exhausted. She sat up grabbing her dress covering herself. "Ellie OMG it is ok, don't regret what happened".
"I don't but my Father would be ashamed of me, I wasn't raised this way".
"What we made love, we are in love, I am at least".
"You don't think I love you, I do I'm so confused".
"Ok I'm sorry, I swear I didn't bring you here for this. It just happened Ellie, but I don't regret making love to you".
"What if I got pregnant, you didn't use protection did you"?
"Your on the pill right"?
"No Jock why would I be, I'm a virgin". Jock stood up, "I thought every girl your age is on the pill"
"Don't you blame me Jock Ewing, this isn't my fault only".
"I'm not blaming you, but if you got pregnant ,your Daddy would hate me".
"OMG Jock", Ellie started to cry, Jock held her close. He helped her get dressed, she got up, "lets go home Jock, my Dad will be waiting up".
"Ellie please look at me, I love you".
Ellie ran into his arms, "I love you too Jock". They walked to the car, she got in, and he walked around to the driver side. He was driving home, they both were quiet, not talking at all. He got to her home, and help her out of the car. He touched her face, "Goodnight Ellie, promise me your ok".
"I'm fine, we will talk soon, goodnight". Ellie kissed his cheek, and ran into the house. Jock felt horrible, he knew Ellie was upset, and it was his fault. He was driving home, he was so angry at himself, he should have waited, she wasn't ready. He just hoped, they didn't make a baby tonight, that may ruin everything, he may lose her forever.
Ellie was walking upstairs, she was happy her Father didn't wait up. She got to her room, when she heard him call out her name.
"Ellie".
"Oh Daddy, I thought you were asleep".
"How was your date with Jock, you were out late"?
"It was wonderful Daddy, really nice".
"You look pale Ellie, is something wrong"?
"Oh I'm just tired we danced so much tonight. I want to go to bed, can we talk tomorrow"?
"Sure Ellie, goodnight".
"Goodnight Daddy". Ellie walked into the bedroom shutting the door. She felt the tears coming, she ran to the bathroom. She got undressed and showered, than got in bed after putting on a warm nightgown. She shut her eyes, she truly didn't want to regret what she did, because she loved Jock, but part of her was ashamed of herself, because she should have waited. How was she going to face Digger now, he would know what happened? She laid in bed her mind was racing, she was making herself sick. All she could think of, she can't get pregnant, how could she explain that to her Father? He always said for her to be a Proper Lady, and make the man wait, she let him down, and she would never forgive herself for doing so.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 21, 2010 21:18:29 GMT -6
wow I hope Ellie doesnt get pregnant, her daddy would kill Jock, you did a good job writing this chapter Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Nov 22, 2010 11:09:16 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Ellie isn't pregnant with Jock's child becuase if she is her daddy will be angry. You did an awesome job with this chapter Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Nov 22, 2010 22:58:07 GMT -6
Chapter 14
Miss Ellie woke up, she wanted to stay in bed, and never get out. She forced herself to get up, she walked into the bathroom, washing her face. She looked in the mirror, she didn't recognize the person looking back. She felt ashamed of herself, she couldn't believe how different she felt. She got dressed, and prayed she could get through breakfast without Daddy and her Brother grilling her about her date. She walked downstairs smiling seeing them sitting at the table. She sat down, "Sorry I was late, I slept in".
Garrison smiled, "I guess Jock wore you out Ellie".
"What don't be crude Garrison, that is rude"?
"Dancing Ellie, I was talking about Dancing".
"I know, I'm tired can we just eat breakfast".? "Sure tell us about Jock".
"Daddy please he is wonderful, I don't know what you want me to say"?
"I want you to admit he is a pure gentleman, not like Digger Barnes"
"Digger has done nothing wrong Daddy stop it".
"He isn't proper, what is wrong with you Ellie"? Ellie had enough she got up , and ran out of the dining room, and went outside for air. She couldn't breath, she had to be alone, to think. She walked and sat by a tree, just daydreaming about everything. She was replaying her night with Jock over and over in her head. She screamed , please stop".
'Ellie what is wrong"?
"Garrison leave me alone, please".
"What happened last night Ellie"?
"Nothing we went to dinner and dancing"
"Ellie you are acting strange, did something happen"? Ellie got up, walking away Garrison ran grabbing her arm. "Ellie talk to me, I won't tell Dad".
"Tell you what that I gave myself to Jock, and now I'm feeling ashamed. It was beautiful, it wasn't his fault, it just happened Garrison. I know Daddy will hate me and Jock, what am I going to do"?
" I should kill him, how dare he".
"Garrison please don't do anything, you have always been someone, I could turn to don't let me down now".
'He took advantage, he doesn't deserve you Ellie".
"I love him Garrison, I really do love him". Garrison held Ellie close feeling her tremble in his arms. He touched her face, "I won't tell Daddy, but I can't promise you I won't give Jock a piece of my mind".
" Garrison you don't think less of me do you"? Ellie was so pale Garrison touched her face, "You are still the same person, I wouldn't judge you that way. I'm not happy this happened, but that was your choice. I just pray you used protection, if you get pregnant, Jock Ewing is one dead man".
Ellie turned away, Garrison was stunned, "OMG Ellie no".
"He thought I was on the pill, we didn't use protection". Ellie saw Garrison face drain, he went as pale as a ghost . "Ellie you and Jock were careless and stupid, I'm surprised, by you both". Garrison turned to walk away, Ellie fell to her knee's. "Garrison please don't turn away from me , I need you". He turned, he loved Ellie he ran back, and they both hugged.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 22, 2010 23:27:41 GMT -6
very good chapter, Is this going to be the birth of JR? very interesting. I hope Garrison can be trusted to keep her secret and be supportive of Ellie. Nice job Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Nov 23, 2010 12:58:04 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Garrison can be trusted to keep her secret and help her out.
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Post by jessie on Dec 5, 2010 0:34:52 GMT -6
This story is really sad at the moment, . Thanks for reading my story, this one is another hard one for me to write. It is one of my favorites, because I love Miss Ellie, and Jock. Chapter 15 4 weeks later Ellie was feeling sick, she looked into the mirror. She couldn't be pregnant, it would kill her Father for sure. She started to cry, she walked into her bedroom, sitting on the bed. She jumped when she heard knocking at her door. "Who is it"? "Garrison, can I come in Ellie"? "Yes, come in". He walked in shutting the door. "Ellie Daddy is getting upset this is the third day this week you haven't had breakfast" "Garrison, I'm so sick, I just can't be pregnant". "We have to go to the Doctor, I will come with you". "I don't want to know, I will just die". "Ellie you have to deal with this issue, and you will have to tell Jock" "He will marry me because he will feel it is his duty". Garrison grabbed Ellie, "It will be his duty, he took advantage of you" "No he didn't we both made the mistake". "You were proper, what happened Ellie"? She was shocked, and hurt she ran into the bathroom slamming the door. She couldn't stop crying, her own brother thought she was cheap now. She could only imagine, what her Father would think. She ran to the toilet, and was sick several times. Garrison heard from the door, he felt horrible, he walked in, going over to her. "I'm sorry Ellie, I didn't mean what I said. You are still the same, I just hate to think how Dad will react". "He will hate Jock Garrison". "Hate Jock", They both jump when their Father was standing in the doorway. "Ellie why would I hate Jock"? " Ellie and Jock had a fight, he hasn't called her in a few days". Garrison says, because he could see how scared Ellie was. "Really why is he downstairs than"? Ellie felt sick, "He is downstairs Daddy".? "Yes, go see him, but what is wrong with you, why are you so pale"? "I have a stomach bug Daddy, I'm ok". Ellie walked out of the bathroom giving a Garrison a look. Garrison smiled, "Daddy maybe Jock came to say sorry". "What is going on Garrison, tell me this instant"? "Nothing, Ellie is confused she loves both Digger and Jock that is all". "She will never marry Digger, he will never get my blessing". He walked out of Ellie's room, Garrison stood wondering, what he would think of Jock , when he finds out what he did? Ellie walked outside , Jock was standing by his truck. Ellie walked over, "Jock why did you come today, I'm not feeling well"? "Ellie you have avoided me for almost two weeks, talk to me". "Please leave Jock, I will call you later". "I know you feel guilty, but we can't take it back. It was beautiful Ellie, I don't regret what happened"? "Really I could be pregnant, go tell my Father he will kill you " Jock almost fell to his knee's he walked over, touching her face. "You must be so scared, I want to help you". "You have done enough, go". "Ellie please". "Go Jock Ewing, please". Ellie turned, she wanted to run away with him, but she knew it would hurt her Father, she couldn't do that. Ellie walked into the house shutting the door, sliding to the floor crying. Jock opened his car door, getting in sitting just looking at the house. He started the car, and drove off, feeling horrible leaving Ellie alone to deal with his mistake.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 5, 2010 11:23:21 GMT -6
oh what is going to happen. are they going to get married? I hope to find out soon, awesome chapter Jessie please update soon
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Post by jessie on Dec 5, 2010 18:37:00 GMT -6
Chapter 16
Garrison ran downstairs, seeing Ellie he ran over. "What happened Ellie, I'm going to kill Jock myself"?
"It is me Garrison, I sent him away, I blamed him for everything".
"Ellie we have to go to the Doctor now, Dad can't see you like this".
"Garrison, I'm so afraid". He helped her up, they left getting in the car, and drove to the Doctors office. Ellie was called in, she told Garrison to wait for her. She explained everything to the Doctor, he said he would keep her confidence, but he wasn't happy with her choices. She cried as she changed into her gown, and waited for him to come in. She was told to lay back, as he did his exam, she felt so alone. He whispered, "Ellie it is over, I just need some blood, and a urine samples. I will call you, but you must eat, and no alcohol, and use protection if your going to make love again".
"Yes Sir". She was so ashamed, she couldn't look at him, he has known the family for years. He touched her chin, "I'm disappointed but it happens, but your Daddy deserves to know the truth. You have to make a decision , are you going to have this baby, or give it up for adoption. You have to decide once, I give you the results. You go home, I will call you as soon as I get the results." Ellie left she walked out to Garrison, they walked to the car. She was silent, she wouldn't talk all the way home. They got to the house, she got out of the car, and ran into the house, and upstairs to her room. She shut the door, and laid on the bed, holding her stomach. She just knew she was pregnant, she just didn't know what to do?. She couldn't abort the baby, and she would never give it away. She just knew her Father might disown her, and never speak to her again. She shamed the family, and she shut her eyes, trying to be positive, but she couldn't she knew her world was going to fall apart, because of her own stupid actions. She fell asleep it was 1 hour later she awoke when she heard the phone ringing. She picked it up, and she heard Jock's voice on the other end.
"Ellie are you ok, talk to me please"?
"I'm fine, I went to the Doctor, I will know soon if I'm pregnant".
"Can I see you, I need to talk to you please"?
'Jock I'm so ashamed of myself, this is all my fault".
"No, it is mine, I will make your Father understand".
"You won't he would send me away, and probably kill you".
"Ellie please meet me by your Stables at 7 tonight".
"Ok Jock, I will meet you".
"Thank you Ellie".
"Goodbye Jock see you later". Ellie hung up, and laid back, when her door opened up. 'Garrison you scared me, you should knock"
"I'm sorry, Daddy wants you down for dinner, please come down"
"I will , can I just change first, Garrison Jock just called"
"Really what does he want"?
"To talk to me, he feels really bad, we made a mistake Garrison".
"I know Sweetie, but this mistake, may change everything".
"I know stop making me feel worse than I already do".
"Ellie get dressed supper is in 1/2hour". Garrison walked out, and Ellie changed, she walked out of her room, and went downstairs.
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Post by Sanda on Dec 5, 2010 22:35:32 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I also LOVED Miss Ellie and Jock as well Jessie. I LOVED Miss Ellie with Jock, Digger and Clayton.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 6, 2010 10:31:54 GMT -6
I'm glad shes agreeing to meet with Jock, I hope she doesnt push him away now. I love Jock and Miss Ellie together they are one of my favorite couples on Dallas. Love this update Jessie
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