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Post by melinda on Jan 28, 2014 2:48:14 GMT -6
I like this interesting take, can't wait to see where you take it. This is really a wonderful story, thanks for writing it!
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Post by jessie on Feb 1, 2014 23:31:39 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Carol walked over, and called out to Merle, and waited until he came out of the tent.
"Merle I wanted to thank you for what you did for me"
"Don't think I am a good guy, I was just having a moment, and I hate men like your husband so I enjoyed it"
"Why do you like people to think you are bad when I know different"?
"You know nothing I am bad but if you go back with that idiot don't you think you will have sympathy from me"
"Daryl said I can have his tent for now, I think he is going to bunk with you"
"Hell he is why don't you two bunk together"?
"I doubt that would be right" Daryl walked over with his bags, and Merle yelled.
"You give up your tent , and expect to bunk with me you will cramp my style. What if a lady should come by, and my nasty little brother is in my tent what do I do than"?
"I am sure no lady will come by so don't worry about it"
"I think Andrea is starting to warm to me"
Carol smiled, 'You and Andrea she is sweet you better not hurt her Dale will have your butt"
"Dale I am scared" Merle said laughing
"You should be he treats Amy and Andrea likes his children, and he is amazing so don't talk bad about him Merle" Carol said
"Carol if we didn't bond last night I would tell you to mind your own business girl" Merle said making Daryl stare at him, and than Carol.
"Bond you two how"?
"Little Brother it was nothing don't worry about it"
Carol smiled, "Daryl nothing went on but Merle helped me last night, I needed a friend, and he was there for me"
"You and Merle were together last night doing what"?
"Well if you need to know little brother we talked, and than slept together nothing really"
"Slept together God Merle you are to much you beat the crap out of Ed after what you did with his wife"
"I beat the crap out of Ed because he is a jerk, and it was about time someone stood up for Carol"
"You both are disgusting why don't you two shack up, I am taking my tent back". Daryl walked away while Carol ran up to him, and grabbed his arm.
"Stop Merle made it sound bad but nothing happened"
Daryl pulled away, and walked to his tent as Carol turned to Merle, and walked over saying.
"You know nothing happened but you made it look like we slept together"
"We did"
"He thinks we had sex together Merle do you get that"
Merle smiled, "Yeah it was fun did you see how he got jealous he was not happy his girl was with his extremely horny Brother"
"You are mean, I am going to talk to Daryl, and he better understand nothing happened"
"Yeah go to Baby Brother , and tell him" Carol walked away, and Merle smiled as he walked into his tent, and walked over grabbing his bottle of whisky as he said.
"Little Brother you are lucky what I would do to have someone like her." He sat down, and laid back knowing he shouldn't have thoughts about Carol that way because he knew Daryl liked her, and he could see she liked Daryl too.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 2, 2014 0:18:37 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I loved the talk between Carol and Merle in this chapter. I also loved the talk between Carol, Daryl, and Merle as well. I hope that Carol and Daryl will be able work things out and that Carol will be able to convince Daryl that nothing happened between her and Merle and that slept together without having sex. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon. I love reading and commenting on all of your awesome stories and one shots that you write and post on my awesome message board.
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Post by melinda on Feb 5, 2014 17:24:04 GMT -6
I hope they can talk and work things out, typical Merle, trying to interfere. this is a wonderful story, I love your wd stories so much, thanks for writing this!!
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Post by jessie on Feb 8, 2014 2:29:02 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Carol walked over, and called out to Daryl, and he yelled from inside the tent.
"What do you want"?
"Can I come in we need to talk" ? Carol said making Daryl open the tent, and just stare at her.
"I can see you think something happened between me, and your Brother but nothing happened he helped me so for the life of me , I don't get why he wanted to make it look like we did something else"
"Come in before the bugs get in my tent". Carol went in, and Daryl flopped down on his sleeping blanket, and Carol didn't know if she should stand or sit so she sat beside him, making him move over.
'Daryl please believe me nothing happened, Merle was a perfect gentleman"
"Now I know you are a liar Merle is no gentleman he would kill you for saying that"
"He acts tough but there is a soft side to him actually just like there is with you"
"You don't know us woman so don't pretend to"
"Ok I was just saying do you have to be so mean"?
"What do you want from me Carol"?
"I need a friend I was stupid thinking you could be that person. I guess I should go back to Ed, and let him beat the crap out of me because it would hurt less than you talking to me like I am some horrible person"
"You go back to that man your daughter should be taken away from you"
"How dare you Daryl"?
"He beats you in front of her what woman would allow that"?
"I'm not listening to this from you that is for sure. Everyone thinks Merle is the cruel one you are way worse Daryl Dixon"
Carol went to get up but Daryl grabbed her arm startling Carol, and she pulled away.
"Don't you ever grab me again, I am tired of men hurting me. I didn't do nothing wrong, I fell asleep in Merle's tent, and we talked nothing else"
"Wait don't go"
"Why would I stay"?
"You can have my tent, I don't want you going back to Ed"
"No I don't want your pity, I will figure something out"
"I am trying to make this right Carol"
"You mean you are tying to say sorry Daryl"?
"I guess I was wrong but seeing the way Merle looked at you drove me nuts. He knows how I feel, and he knew I would get angry"
"How do you feel Daryl"?
"What do you mean"?
"You said he knows how you feel, I don't understand what are you trying to say"?
Daryl felt cornered, and he didn't want to answer her questions so he grabbed his bag, and said he would let her have the tent. She ran over touching his arm making him stop, and she whispered.
"Don't go Daryl"
"I have to , I need to get food for everyone, I can't stand in here talking to you". He walked out, and Carol never felt more alone. She walked over sitting on the sleeping bag, and started to cry. She had to be quiet she didn't want the others to hear, but she was lost she knew Ed was not going to let her go so easily, but she knew if she continued allowing him to abuse her she would eventually be dead, and than who would Sophia have. She needed to be the Mother she deserved, and she had to be brave, and if that meant taking care of herself, and her little girl she knew she could do it. She knew thinking there could be anything between her , and Daryl was out of the question. He probably felt sorry for her seeing how Ed treated her, and she was not his type she was sure of it. She knew she had to move on, and think of herself, and Sophia, and be part of this group. Thinking she would ever have a chance at a normal relationship with a man wasn't going to happen. She was going to be alone, and she just had to deal with it, and realize whatever time she had left on this earth was a blessing, and the only person that truly would ever love her is Sophia, and for that she was grateful.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 8, 2014 10:32:14 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope and pray that Carol and Daryl both get their acts together and they work things out and get together your story. Carol and her daughter Sophia need to leave Carol's adusive husband Ed and go with Daryl ASAP. Jesssie, please don't kill Sophia I your story like writers did on The Walking Dead. I hope we find out what happened to Carol soon on the Walking Dead when it returns on Sunday. Please update this story again really soon. It is one of my favorite stories of yours.
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Post by jessie on Feb 9, 2014 16:18:52 GMT -6
Chapter 9
The next few days everyone saw a change in Carol. She did her chores she cooked, and cleaned, and took care of her Daughter, and the only time she smiled was when she was with Carl or Sophia. It was getting late, and Carol was going to turn in when Sophia asked Carol if she could sleep in Rick, and Lori's tent with Carl. Carol was hurt because it was becoming more, and more that she asked to sleep with either Amy and Andrea, or in Lori's and Rick's tent. It hurt her but she realized maybe all the abuse she witnessed she lost respect for her Mother, and who could blame her. Carol said she could, and Sophia ran to her tent to get her sleeping blanket, and her favourite doll. Lori could see Carol was hurt but Sophia loved her Mom with all her heart but she was spoiled like crazy being with Andrea, and Amy they let her stay up late, and her , and Carl would play tick tack toe when Lori and Rick fell asleep. She had not idea she was hurting her Mom she was a child she just wanted to be a kid. Carol would realize that but at the moment she was feeling lost, and down on herself. Carol walked to her tent when Ed ran over touching her shoulder.
"Carol can we talk"?
"I am tired Ed can it wait until tomorrow"?
"Carol I am trying to be calm, and not lose my temper but how much longer will this go on"?
"What me wanting a life without being beaten, called names, and having our daughter witness the abuse for years"
"She didn't see all that much, and we are a family, and we all need to stay together you must realize that"
"Ed I can't do this anymore, I need my space, I am not trying to punish you. We should have done this a long time ago, but I was to scared, but now I am not afraid anymore"
"God you are a stupid fool do you think anyone else will ever want you"?
"No I don't, and I don't need a man to validate me. I would rather be alone than allow you back into my life. You will be in Sophia's life but it is over between us"
Carol turned to go in Daryl's tent when Ed said. "I never should have married you, I could have found someone better on the streets. You are a horrible Mother, and I never would have hit you if you were a woman, and treated your man the way you are suppose to. The best thing to happen to Sophia would be for you to get yourself killed, I would hate for her to grow up to be as pathetic as you"
Carol eyes filled up with tears she hated giving him the satisfaction but his words still hurt, and she hated thinking he was right she never wanted her baby girl to be like her. She walked into the tent, and Ed turned walking to his tent when he noticed Daryl just staring at him.
'What you have something to say"?
"Shut up fool unless you want to lose your teeth"
"Whatever" Ed walked to his tent, and went inside. Daryl looked at Carol's tent, and he wanted to go to her but he was afraid he would hurt her even more than he did before. Merle walked over almost pushing Daryl to the ground.
'What is up with you why did you do that"?"
"You go to her or I will"
"What"?
"Little Brother you go to her or I will"
Daryl got up, "You stay away from her"
Merle stared as Daryl turned, and walked toward her tent while Merle watched.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 9, 2014 16:51:05 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I feel horrible for both Carol and Sophia in this story. Ed needs to go far away from Carol and Sophia. Carol and Sophia need to get away from Ed before it is too late. I don't blame Sophia for wanting to hang out with the other kids and get away from her mom and all the abuse that Ed put them both through everyday. I especially don't Merle for telling Daryl to go to Carol and comfort her before he does. I hope you update this awesome Walking Dead story you are writing again really soon. I hope see Carol today on the Walking Dead.
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Post by jessie on Feb 10, 2014 1:14:06 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Daryl walked over to Carol's tent, and basically walked in, and found Carol sitting on her sleeping blanket she was just staring straight ahead, and it was just like he didn't walk in. He walked over, and knelt down, and Carol turned to look at him, and she looked so sad, it made him feel physically ill.
"Carol I heard what Ed said he is a fool"
"He is right my own little girl would rather be with Lori, Andrea, or anyone for that matter than with me"
"She is a kid she wants attention, and she loves playing with Carl she is awake playing games with him when Lori, and Rick fall asleep."
"How would you know that"?
"I am on night duty remember, I get stuck with it most nights, but not tonight it is Glenn's, and Dale's job so if you want to talk"
"You want to talk to me Daryl since when"?
"Since now I asked didn't I"
"Yes you did, and I appreciate it, and I appreciate you trying to make me feel better. I hate letting Ed get to me like that but he always makes me feel like I am worthless, and sometimes I feel like he is right"
"Ed is a idiot, he is worthless, and he is a fool for hurting you"
Carol smiled as she wiped tears from her cheek, "Daryl I would like you to stay, I don't want to be alone tonight"
"Oh Carol"
"You are afraid to spend the night, I promise I will not bite you. I just don't want to be alone, and I need a friend"
Daryl was a little nervous he knew being in the same tent as Carol was going to be hard he knew he wanted to make love to her, but she was going through so much right now she didn't need anymore trouble.
"Carol maybe I should spend the night because I don't know if I can manage to be in this tent, and not want to be with you"
Carol was shocked, and a little surprised, and she even felt a little excited. She never really thought it could happen but she has thought about Daryl on many nights, and she even dreamed about him, but she knew nothing would come of it. He was sitting right in front of her, and for the first time he was basically telling her he felt the same way, and she didn't know what to do. She moved close, and whispered in his ear.
"I don't want you to go Daryl, I want to be with you too"
"You mean that" Daryl said as Carol smiled, and said, "More than anything". They move close, and kiss ever so lightly, and Daryl roamed his hands down her arms, and Carol shut her eyes, because for the first time in a long time she felt like she was beautiful, and that someone truly cared for her. She knew if it was only for one night that would be ok, because she needed to feel loved because for years with Ed she felt like a prisoner, and for once she just wanted to feel what it would be like to be treated like a lady.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 10, 2014 12:31:32 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Carol and Daryl are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I am glad that Daryl went to see Carol in her tent and that he going to be staying the night with her and taking care of her and making her feel better. The both of them and Sophia need to get rid of Ed pronto before he hurts Carol and Sophia anymore. I hope you update this awesome Carol and Daryl story again really soon. I hope we see Carol again soon on The Walking Dead. Please update this story again really soon for us. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Post by melinda on Feb 15, 2014 18:14:29 GMT -6
oh I love3 this so much, it so made my day, I really really need to see Daryl and Carol get together, I love here how he stood up and claimed her from Merle...very good!
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Post by jessie on Feb 17, 2014 0:48:41 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Daryl and Carol sat down on her sleeping blanket as Carol touched Daryl's chest, and he whispered.
"You sure you are ready for this Carol"?
Carol smiled as she pulled off her tee shirt making Daryl stare at her not saying anything. Carol pulled her tee shirt to her chest, and Daryl raised his hand, and touched her cheek, and said.
"d**n woman you don't wear a bra" Carol smiled, and Daryl pulled off his shirt making Carol smile even more.
"Daryl I hope I don't disappoint you"
"Why you go say something stupid like that Carol"?
"I guess I heard it enough from Ed, I start to believe it"
"Ed is a fool"
Carol smiled, "Some would say I was a fool for staying, but I stayed for Sophia, but I probably damaged her for life with everything she saw with us"
"She has other things to worry about Carol, I think she will be fine"
Carol moved closer to Daryl, and they wrapped their arms around each other just holding each other for a few moments. Carol would be content with just his arms around her but she wanted more, and she should be ashamed of herself but she knew what she wanted, and she wanted Daryl.
Daryl laid her back, and he brought his lips over her lips, and than moved down her neck. Carol shut her eyes, and she felt like she was on fire her teeth grazed his shoulder, and her hands roamed down his back making Daryl look into her eyes. He sat up, and started to pull her pants off, and than he moved to her panties. He slowly removed them making Carol want to help him, but she let him take his time. He finally removed them he grabbed her leg, and brought his lips over her feet, and than down her leg making her cry out his name. She brought her hands to his waist, and was helping him remove his pants, and she knew he never wore anything under his pants, and that made her giggle because she remembered having a conversation about it with Andrea.
"What are you laughing at"?
"I knew you went commando, I was just not sure, but that is so sexy"
"Why wear underwear they just get in the way" Daryl said making Carol laugh as he brought his body over hers, and they laid there just taking in the moment before they came together as one. The weight of him, the scent of him, the feel of her surrounded her, and made her go wild she was never the aggressive one in bed, but with Daryl she knew what she wanted, and she was not afraid to go for it. He set a rhythm , and she matched it, and she felt like she was going to lose it, and Daryl knew she couldn't take much more. They both came to their release, and they laid there holding each other not wanting to let go. They both have been hurting for a very long time, and for a moment in time life felt right it felt beautiful, and they never felt more alive in their whole life. Carol laid her head on Daryl's chest, and whispered.
"Daryl that was amazing"
Daryl smiled, "You are surprised" They both laugh as they laid in each others arms, and it wasn't long before they fell asleep.
Merle was outside his tent smoking when he saw Ed come out of his tent, and stare at the tent Carol was in. He was about to walk over when Merle called out his name.
"Ed"
"What do you want"?
"Carol is sleeping leave her alone"
"She is my wife, I can do what I please"
Merle walked over to Ed, and stared him straight in the eyes, and said.
"You lost her fool stay away from her or you just might have a accident, and have to be put out of your misery"
"You threatening me redneck"?
"No threat a promise, and I might be a redneck, but you are a Wife beater, and a sorry excuse for a Father"
"Like you never hurt a woman Merle"
"I will hurt a man do you want to see"
Ed knew he better back off so he walked to his tent, and went inside. He knew he would get Carol back, and she would pay for making a fool of him in front of all these people who he hated. She better come to her senses soon or he will take their little girl, and she will never see her again. Ed laid down, and went to sleep because he knew tomorrow would be another day, and Carol would be back with him, and she will learn how a woman is suppose to treat her man.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 17, 2014 2:10:19 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am so happy that Carol and Daryl took their relationship to the next level even though I don't like that she still married to her creepy husband Ed. Carol and Sophia need get faraway from Ed before he hurts them both even more. I hope that goes away and leaves the both of them alone so they can be together forever and live happily ever after. I am so happy that we finally saw Carol tonight.
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Post by jessie on Feb 17, 2014 16:16:50 GMT -6
Chapter 12
It was a few hours later when Daryl got up, and grabbed his pants, and was pulling them on. Carol was asleep but she woke up, and whispered.
"Daryl don't go"
"Carol the others will talk, and we do not need Ed to use this against you. I am here, and I will be with you again soon, but right now lets do this right"
"I don't care what Ed thinks"
"I don't care what that idiot thinks either but what about Sophia"?
"Sophia what do you mean"?
"She doesn't need to be confused so we will end this for now, but I am near, and I will protect you"
"Oh God I can't believe this"
"What"?
"Go Daryl thanks for the memories"
"Ok now you are upset about what"?
"I don't know that I just had a one night stand, and I am not that kind of lady"
"You think this was a one night stand are you serious"?
Carol laid back, and pulled her sleeping blanket over her, and turned away from Daryl. He dropped his shirt, and walked over knelling down, and tried to be calm. He was use to ladies freaking out at him after he slept with them after a night at a bar with Merle, but this was not a one night stand.
'Carol look at me"
"Daryl go I can't talk about this right now"
"You want me to stay, I will stay, I am thinking about you, and your Little Girl. I don't want Ed to hurt you anymore, I am worried about you"
Carol turned she sat up wiping tears from her cheek, and Daryl touched her chin, and said.
"I would never hurt you or use you, I want to protect you, and your little girl"
"I am sorry I was just hurt you were leaving, I just felt like another man was going to hurt me"
"Look at me I am not leaving you I will do whatever you need"
"Hold me just a little longer, I know you are right we have to be careful because of Sophia, and Ed will use it against me."
"I will not let that man hurt you, I will talk to Rick, and Shane. I don't think we can just ban him from the group, but I am going to make it clear we are together , and Ed will be part of Sophia's life but not yours"
"I don't trust him Daryl he will want revenge"
"You don't worry about him anymore, I will be watching him , and if he starts anything it will be his biggest regret".
Carol smiled, "Where have you been all my life Daryl Dixon'?
"Oh getting into trouble, but I am here right now, and I will stay a little longer at least until you fall asleep". Carol laid back Daryl laid beside her holding her tight, and Carol finally shut her eyes, and was drifting off asleep as Daryl laid awake looking at her. He could see she was scared, and he hated to admit it but he was scared too. He knew if Ed tried anything, and hurt her again he would kill him, and he knew that would only make things worse.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 17, 2014 18:44:21 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. Carol and Daryl are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. :)I don't blame the both of them at all for being scared of Ed. I hope and pray that Ed leaves Carol, Sophia, and Daryl alone and let's them live together as a family. Carol, Darryl, and Sophia belong together forever. Carol and Daryl both deserve to have a happy ending together after everything they have been through together. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon.
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