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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 14, 2012 23:25:52 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope you update again soon.
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Post by jessie on Mar 18, 2012 21:28:39 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Mac took the dishes out to the kitchen, and Jennifer followed him. He asked her if she wanted a glass of wine, or another coffee?
" Wine would be great"
Mac walked over getting them both a glass of wine. Jennifer stood watching Mac as he brought them over to her. She took hers, as she took a sip. Mac took her hand, they both walked back to the living room, and sat on the couch. Jennifer was silent, Mac moved close taking her hand , as he smiled.
"Mac tonight was so beautiful, and I'm so afraid it will all end. I know we just met, but being here right now never felt so right. I don't normally go back to someone else place after 1 date, but I trust you. I know you would not hurt me, but I really need to know what you hope the future will hold for us"
"Well like you just said this is our first date, but I have never felt so attached to someone, well except for Claire. My Wife was special she my Sole Mate, and you know she passed away on 911. I never felt comfortable dating, I have had relationships, but they never felt right. I was so at ease tonight with you, and this might be strange, I know Claire would love you. You are so much like her, and I'm not talking about looks so much, I mean your caring, sweet, and I loved spending tonight with you. I rarely invite anyone back to my place, and I'm sorry if I made you feel uncomfortable. I hate being alone, I just thought this night should not end, but I know it will, but why not end it together, and I don't mean making love. I would love to make love to you, but I feel you are not ready, and I understand that"
Jennifer touched his face, and whispered, "I'm ready if you are"
Mac smiled as he brought his lips over hers, and they kissed ever so tenderly. He took the glass from her hand putting in on the table, and he reached his hands out to her, and she got up. He moved close to her, touching her cheek with his thumb making her move toward his touch.
'You sure Jennifer, I do not want to pressure you"?
"I have never been more sure in my life"
Mac lifted Jennifer up, and walked to the bedroom with Jennifer. He kicked the door shut as he walked over putting her down near the bed. She looked into his eyes as he touched her shoulder, and brought his lips over her neck.
Jennifer moaned as he started to unbutton her blouse. He pulled it off her shoulder , as she put her hands to his chest, and started to unbutton his shirt. They were going slow, but they both were nervous, they wanted to make love, but they were shaking.
Mac sat Jennifer on the bed, as she removed her bra. She watched as Mac removed the rest of his clothes. She shivered Mac was so handsome, and she was shaking in anticipation of what was about to happen. Mac got on the bed beside her, she laid back looking in his eyes, as he smiled.
More romance in the next chapter.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 18, 2012 23:23:20 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Mac and Jennifer are so cute and adorable together in this story. I feel bad for Mac losing his wife Claire on 9/11. I am glad that Mac and Jennifer are taking their relationship to the next the level even though I think making love after just one date is too soon. LOL
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 18, 2012 23:28:16 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Mar 19, 2012 17:36:05 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Jennifer looked into Mac's eyes, she didn't want to regret giving herself to someone so soon, but she also knew she would hate herself if she didn't because he made her feel so special. She normally took months before letting anyone so close, but Mac was different, and she knew this night would be the most special night of her life.
"Jennifer are you having 2nd thoughts"?
"No Mac, I"m just thinking how fast everything is going, but everything is just perfect"
"I know you are not the type of woman that gives herself to a man so easily, before really getting to know them. I am the same way, I really have not gotten this close to anyone in a long time. It is like we have a special connection, it is like we were meant to be together. I can wait if you like, but I promise you, I will not hurt you. I will stop whenever you feel you need to. I will treasure this night forever, and I'm sure we will have many more nights like this. I really want to get to know you Jennifer, I think you are what I have been waiting for. "
She touched his chest, as she kissed her way to his lips, he shut his eyes. She touched his face, " I want to do this, as she touched Mac's face , and she moved closer. He stared at awe at her beauty, he held her hips, as he entered her, and they moved in a perfect rhythm . He couldn't take his eyes off her, she arched to totally and completely give herself to Mac. She brought her lips to Mac's, and they held on until they both released, and collapsed side by side.
They laid side by side holding hands, and looking into each others eyes. They both were speechless, when Mac whispered, "That was more amazing than I imagined"
"Yes it was you are so gentle, and so kind Mac Taylor. You are a girls dream come true, where were you all my life"
"Right here in New York"
They both laugh as Mac moved close, and pulled her over him. He captured her mouth over his in a searing kiss. She wrapped her arms around him, as she looked into his eyes.
"Jennifer you are so beautiful, and that smile"
"You put this smile on my face Big Boy". Mac blushed, "Wow I have a nickname, but I like it". She brought her lips over his, and whispered, " Are you to tired, because I'm not"? He rolled her over, and looked into her eyes, and whispered, "Me tired never". She smiled as he moved over her, and they connected again, and if it was possible it was more tender, and amazing than the first time. She was falling head over heels in love with Mac, and it scared her, but she knew she would never regret tonight, it couldn't be more perfect if she wanted it to be.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 19, 2012 19:50:39 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. This chapter was so sweet and so romantic. You write romantic chapters so well. Jennifer and Mac are so cute and adorable together in your story.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 19, 2012 23:27:49 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Apr 6, 2012 22:36:59 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Jennifer woke up, she looked over seeing Mac laying beside her. She was dreaming about him, and she thought maybe this whole night was a dream. It wasn't she was with the most amazing man, and he made her feel so special. She touched his cheek, making him open his eyes.
"Oh Jennifer you couldn't sleep"?
"Yeah I was dreaming, and I woke up seeing you beside me, I was so happy it wasn't a dream"
Mac moved close pulling her closer, and touched her cheek, "Jennifer it is nice waking up beside you, I hate being lonely, and you truly make me smile, and I know this is crazy, and I would understand if you say no"
"What Mac"?
"Will you move in with me, I really want to get to know you better, but why should we live apart"
"You want me to move in here"?
"Will you Jennifer, I want to come home every night knowing you will be here waiting for me"
Jennifer smiled but she leaned on his chest, and whispered, "I would love to move in here, but that would mean we are going steady"
Mac took his ring off his finger, it was the one he got when he was in the Academy, and he never took it off. He put it in her hand, and whispered, " Wear this ring around your neck, and yes this means we are going steady, until we marry in the very near future"
"OK you are jumping so far ahead Mac, you really are a romantic"
"I can be" Jennifer sat up taking her chain off her neck, and put the ring on it. She put it back on, and she smiled as Mac moved close, and they kissed. It wasn't long before they were making love again. They collapsed beside each other after both totally exhausted when the phone rang. Mac couldn't believe his luck, he reached over grabbing it.
"Hello"
"Mac it is Jo, can you come into the Office, we have got another case, I called Don, and Sheldon in too"
"Jo I will be there soon, this was suppose to be my night off"
" I know Mac but you are not busy are you"?
"Well maybe I was"
Jo laughed, "Mac Taylor are you with someone right now"?
"Jo I will be there soon, I have to go"
Mac hung up, and Jennifer whispered, "I know you have to go in"?
"Yes I'm so sorry, but you can stay here, and rest. I will come back as soon as possible. Please don't leave, I will be back for breakfast"
" I will wait Mac, but you must be tired"
"Yeah but tonight was perfect until this stupid call. I have to tell you, this will happen a lot. I hope you can deal with that, but this is my job"
"Go Mac, I'm fine, but call if you will not be home for breakfast"
"I will bring it, I will go to the deli, and get us some bagels, and fruit. You stay in here, I will come back, and wake you up".
Mac got up, and dressed , and than walked over kissing her. He left, and Jennifer laid back, she was a little disappointed he had to go, but she knew she would have to deal with it, but she knew she would because Mac was definitely worth it.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Apr 6, 2012 23:26:10 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 7, 2012 0:08:49 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Mac and Jennifer are so cute and adorable together. I LOVE that they are going steady and that they are going to be moving into together.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 7, 2012 18:44:41 GMT -6
this is so good, I think Jennifer and Mac are so cute together, keep up the excellent work
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Post by jessie on Apr 15, 2012 17:51:09 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Mac got to the Office, and walked into Jo's office.
"Hey lover boy sorry I had to call, but who is she"?
"She is a sweet lady, and I'm not discussing my love life with my co-workers"
'I'm happy for you Mac, I was just asking"
"Jo tonight was the most amazing night, she is so sweet, and we talked, and went for a ride in Central Park, I just hope I don't ruin my chances with her"
"Why would you ruin anything she is one lucky young lady"
Don walked in, "So what brought us here so late"?
Jo got up grabbing the file, "Sheldon, and Danny are at the scene now. There was a murder at a Club but this is the strange part"
"Details Jo"?
"Well the guy has been there for a long time. There was a fire in the club, one of the floor panels gave way, and they found a body down there. They think it might be that DJ that went missing 4 years ago, the guy was in the Club he opened, how strange is that"
"Well it is obvious someone he knew killed him who owns the club now"?
"His Wife, and his partner at the time, and guess what they are married now. The guy was cute, I mean real cute look at his picture"
Mac took the picture, and looked at it, than handed it to Don.
"Jo maybe we should go over there, and see what is going on with Danny, and Sheldon"
"Well I thought we could interview the Wife, and Partner"
"Yeah sounds great" Mac's phone went off , and Max took it out of his pocket, and said hello.
"Mac it is me Jennifer"
"Jennifer is something wrong"?
"Well I was worried about you, but there might be a problem"
"Oh Jennifer you are leaving me already"
Jo looked at Don, and they both left the room to give him privacy.
"Jennifer what is wrong"?
"Well when you left, I fell asleep, but the phone rang. I picked it up, and a lady was on the other line. She was kind of nasty her name was Suzanne, and she had this attitude asking why I was answering your phone. I got mad, I told her I was your girlfriend, but she said she will see about that, and hung up. I think I might have caused you some trouble, I'm so sorry"
'No you did me a favor, I went on one date with her, and she will not leave me alone. I did not sleep with her, but she was really not my type, she is a little scary. If she shows up please don't open the door, and call me"
'I will is everything OK with you"
"Yes I will be there in the morning, get some sleep Jennifer"
"Bye Mac"
"Goodnight sleep tight"
"It would be better if you were here Mac"
"Well see you soon dream about me"
"I was than that girl woke me up". Mac smiled as they talked a little longer, than he hung up. He walked out of the office, and smiled seeing Don, and Jo staring at him.
"Come on lets get to work"
"Everything OK"?
"It is perfect". Mac walked away, and Don smiled , and Jo laughed, and she followed Don, and Mac to his office.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 15, 2012 19:14:01 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Suzanne doesn't get Mac and Jennifer problems.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 15, 2012 19:46:04 GMT -6
great update Jessie, wonderful story
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Post by jennifer1983 on Apr 15, 2012 23:24:12 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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