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Post by jessie on Jun 27, 2012 0:42:33 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Carly sent the kids home with Gwen, and she stayed with Jack all night. He was waking up every hour, and having nightmares, the Nurses said it was normal after what he went through. Carly was thinking about Tom, and she hurt for him, but she was grateful to Margo for saving her husband, and losing her life because of it, was horrible. Carly heard Jack call out her name.
"Carly"
"Jack I'm right here G man, I am not leaving you"
"Margo is gone, how is Tom he must hate me"?
"Tom is devastated but he is with his family, and no he does not hate you"
"I keep hearing her voice, I bet she is angry with me"
"No she isn't she loved you Jack, and she should have wore her vest, she didn't. I'm not saying it is her fault, but you would have done the same thing for her, and the roles could have been reversed"
"Maybe that would be for the best"
"How dare you say that she gave her life for you, and your giving up"
The Nurse turned, but Carly looked at her, and the Nurse turned checking his vitals.
"I'm sorry for yelling at you but Margo is gone, and she died saving you, and she would want you to get better, and be with your family, and be there for Tom. He is going to need help, and support, and you should be one of the ones that give it to him"
"You think he would want to see me, would you want to see Margo if I was the one that died"
"Yes I would, and I can honestly say I would never blame her if it did happen. She was a wonderful Detective, and she loved her job, and her family, and her Partner, and she died doing a job she loved. You all know everyday you walk out on that street could be your last, and you all know you would take a bullet for your Partner. I hate that she is gone, and Tom, and her family, and kids are suffering. I'm grateful for her saving you, and I'm blessed you are still here, and our kids have their Dad, and I have my G man. I would hate to see you feel pity for yourself, because I know Margo would hate that Jack"
Jack reached out his hand, and took Carly's in his, and whispered, "You are right, but it hurts"
"Of course it hurts you lost your Partner, and one of your best friends, and you will never forget her, or understand why this happened. It is the criminals, and the murders, and all the people you try to take off the streets who ruin families, and take loved ones from us, and I am so scared one day I will be Tom, and I will lose you, but I know you love this job, and I'm real proud of you, and I think you should make Margo Proud"
Jack started to cry, Carly moved close, and hugged him, and whispered, "It will get better Jack, I promise you , it will get better."
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Post by Sanda on Jun 27, 2012 1:15:33 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Jack, Carly, and Tom having to deal with the lost of Margo.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 27, 2012 16:10:31 GMT -6
this is so sad, but I'm happy to see an update!good job
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Post by jessie on Dec 16, 2012 18:20:10 GMT -6
Chapter 7
It was 3 days later Jack missed the Memorial Service for Margo, the Doctors did not want to release him. Carly went, and she found it so hard, and she thought Tom was so brave. He lost the love of his life, but he talked about how proud of her he was. Carly knew she could never be that brave. She needed to be strong for Jack, but she hated seeing him feeling so guilty, and down, but she understood he lost his best Friend, and his Partner. If you think of it he was with Margo more than he was with her. Carly drove to the hospital it was the day they were bringing Jack home. She was happy, but nervous because he has not been motivated Carly arrived at the hospital, and went to his room, and smiled seeing Jack sitting up waiting for her.
"Oh your all dressed that is good"
"The Nurses want to get rid of me"
"Oh right they love you G Man, and your kids are so excited to see you come home"
"I miss them too". Carly helped Jack into the wheelchair, they signed some papers, and they finally left the hospital. Carly was driving home Jack was very quiet, and she knew everything was overwhelming to him. She let him have his space, she finally drove up to the house, and helped Jack out of the car. She was walking to the house when the door flew open, and Sage came running out.
"Daddy you are finally home"
"Sage you look so cute your Mom let you skip school for me"
"Yes this is a special event right Mom"
"You bet but let your Dad get inside, and than you can sit beside him, and give him a hug, but not to hard"
"You can hug me as tight as you want Sage, I need it"
Carly smiled but Sage ran inside, and yelled.
"Daddy is home" Jack went inside, and smiled as Parker, and JJ came running over.
"Dad you need my help"
"I'm fine but I need to sit down". Carly helped him to the couch, he sat down, and Parker, and JJ were fighting over who was going to put the pillow behind his back. Jack smiled he missed these kind of moments, and for a moment it felt like old times hearing the boys fighting, and Sage talking his ear off. Carol finally walked over grabbing the pillow.
'JJ go get your Dad a soda, and Parker go upstairs, and get me a blanket to put over his legs"
The boys ran to get what their Mom said, Sage sat beside her Dad.
"Dad I made you tons of pictures, but this one is the best"
Jack took the photo, and tears welled up in his eyes, as he whispered.
"This is amazing Sage, but I'm no hero"
"You are so everyone says so"
"No Sage"
Sage got up, and ran over to the desk, and grabbed the paper, and ran back, and handed it to her Dad.
"Look Dad the Papers say your a Hero"
Jack looked at the headlines of the Oakdale Post, and couldn't believe what he was reading. They were calling both him, and Margo a Hero. Jack was speechless but he threw the paper, and yelled.
"Margo is the Hero how can they write this crap"
Sage started to cry, she ran over grabbing the paper, and tried to fix the paper Jack crumbled it up. Carly walked over to Sage, and whispered.
"Sweetie go in the kitchen for a minute, and tell JJ to give me, and your Dad a few minutes alone"
"OK"
Sage walked away but gave Jack the saddest look, Jack felt horrible but he looked at Carly , and he knew he was about to get a lecture, but he also knew he deserved it.
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Post by Sanda on Dec 16, 2012 20:37:54 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Jack, Carly, Parker, JJ and Sage. :'(I feel bad for Sage in this chapter. Jack was awful to Sage in this chapter. Jack deserves the lecture that he is about to get from Carly for how he treated Sage.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 17, 2012 7:59:15 GMT -6
I'm glad you updated this one, glad that Jack is home. cant wait to read what carly has to say to him
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Post by jessie on Jun 23, 2014 0:54:28 GMT -6
Chapter 8
"How could you do that to her. Do you have any idea what the kids have been going through"?
"I know Carly, I am sorry"
"I know you are hurting, and you are blaming yourself for Margo's death. You did not kill her that criminal that was going to kill you took her life. She saved you she loved you, and you were her Partner and her Best Friend. She is a Hero but so are you. I don't want your Pity in this house anymore. I have come to visit you at the hospital, and you don't even talk to me. The kids helped clean the house they basically got me through the last few days. Margo is gone, but Tom is so Proud of her how he talked about her at the Memorial service was amazing. He does not blame you he is glad you are alive. Margo gave you a gift she saved you for a reason so you can be the best Father you can be to our children. I love you Jack Snyder but I need you to go on, and stop hating yourself, and loving us because we need you. I go to sleep every night thinking it could have been me, and I thank God everyday that it wasn't. I know that sounds bad and I will do whatever I can to help Tom and his Family out but I will not feel bad saying I am glad you survived, and you are here with us."
Jack felt so overwhelmed his eyes welled up with tears as Carly walked over going into his arms as she hugged him like she was never going to let him go again.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 23, 2014 8:50:28 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Carly and Jack are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I love the lecture that Carly gave to Jack in this chapter about his bad attitude about not wanting to live because Margo died. Carly's lecture to Jack was awesome in this chapter. Jack deserved the lecture that Carly gave him in this chapter. I hope things get better for Jack, Carly, Parker, Sage, JJ and Tom in this story soon. I love that you updated this Carly and Jack story that you are writing for Melinda. :)I hope Melinda reads your update soon to this story you are writing for her. I loved Carly and Jack on As the World Turns. They were my second favorite couple on the show next to Reid and Luke of course.
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Post by jessie on Jun 23, 2014 19:52:17 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Carly touched his face, and whispered, "G man, I hate saying all this stuff to you. I just need you to know this is not your fault. I am going to get Sage, and the boys, and you can talk to them"
"I hurt Sage how could I"?
"You were hurting and if I know Sage she already understands but you are her Hero, and you are my Hero too"
"I love you Carly what would I do without you"?
"We have made mistakes but we are never going to be apart again. I know your job is dangerous but I know you love your job, and I know you will not leave it. I know every husband and Wife fear what Tom is going through right now. Margo was amazing, and she will always be here in our hearts she saved you Jack"
Jack smiled, "I know she would tell me to get on with my life, but she was amazing, and going back knowing she is not there will be hard"
"It will be but I know you will return, and you will miss Margo but you will make her proud"
"Thanks for the lecture but go get our kids so I can say sorry to them"
Carly got up, and walked to the kitchen as Jack waited for them in the living room.
Carly smiled seeing Sage, JJ and Parker sitting at the kitchen table. Carly told them they could go back in the living room to see their Dad. JJ and Parker got up but Sage stayed at the table. Parker walked over to his Mom and said, "She is really sad she said Dad is mad at her"
"I will talk to her you go see your Father" Parker and JJ walked out of the kitchen while Carly walked over touching Sage's hand as she sat beside.
"Sweetie how about you and me going out to see your Father."
"He doesn't want to see me he is mad at me. He ruined the paper I was going to show my class. They said he was a Hero the paper wouldn't lie would it"?
"No your Father is a Hero and so was Margo. Your Father is not mad at you Sweetie he is upset that Margo was taken from her family. He blames himself because she saved him, but I think he knows he has to stop feeling that way"
"Mommy I don't want Daddy to die like Aunt Margo"
"I know it is scary but we have to Pray that will never happen. Your Father would never want to leave us so don't you worry about that"
"Aunt Margo wouldn't want to leave her family either Mommy"
Carly touched her face and whispered, "No she wouldn't you are right but Daddy needs to see his little girl right now".
Sage hugged her Mother than ran into the living room to see her Dad. Carly felt tears come to her eyes she owed so much to Margo, and knowing she died to save Jack was overwhelming. She knew life has to go on but she knew she would never forget what Margo did for her family, and she would forever be grateful to her.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 23, 2014 21:50:13 GMT -6
Great but sad update Jessie. I loved the talk between Carly and Jack in this chapter. Carly and Jack are so cute and adorable together with their kids Sage, Parker, Madison, and JJ. :)I hope things get better for Carly, JJ, Parker, Sage, Madison, and Tom in this story that you are writing. I love this Carly and Jack story that you are writing. :)I hope you update this story again really soon.
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Post by jessie on Oct 4, 2014 23:36:32 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Jack put his arms out, and Sage ran over going into his arms.
"Can you forgive your Dad for hurting you"?
"I forgive you Daddy but you are a Hero to me"
Jack felt tears come to his eyes as he whispered, "I hope I always will be your Hero Angel"
Carly smiled as she hugged Parker and JJ who were also very emotional seeing Sage and their Dad together.
Jack smiled, "How about we order pizza and garlic bread and chicken wings, and maybe Parker and JJ can go out and get us a really good movie to watch tonight."
Parker and JJ smiled, "We can handle that can we get something scary"
Carly said, "You can get a scary movie for you boys to watch after Sage is in bed. I want you to get a movie we all can watch and enjoy"
"Oh Mom Sage isn't scared of scary movies you are"
"Well than why would you want to get one. I will order the food while you boys run down to the movie place and get a couple of movies."
Carly gave them some money as they left, Sage was still sitting beside her Father.
Carly went to the kitchen to order dinner as Jack touched Sage's chin asking her why she was so quiet?
"Daddy do you have to go back to work there"?
"You mean not go back to be a Detective"?
"Yes I don't want you to get hurt" Sage started to cry, and Jack held her close because he knew he couldn't promise her it wouldn't happen but he also knew he had to go back because it was a job he loved and he had to go back for Margo she would want him too.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 4, 2014 23:58:58 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I love that Jack and Sage made up in this chapter. I love that Parker and JJ were going to get them movies to watch as a family while Carly ordered them Pizza, Garlic Bread Sticks and chicken wings. I don't blame Sage one bit for nit wanting her daddy to go back to work after daddy got nuts and Aunt Margo was killed in the line of duty. I love this Jack and Carly story you are writing for Melinda. They were my second favorite couple on the show next to Reid and luke or course. I hope you this story again soon. I miss As The World Turns so much.
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