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Post by jessie on Mar 13, 2011 16:32:10 GMT -6
CHAPTER 8
Melinda walked into the kitchen, she was in cloud nine. She was falling for Gary, and she couldn't believe they just met. She stopped seeing Ray, and Jessie talking at the kitchen table. She walked over, "Oh you got another break , I see"?
"No Melinda, Jennifer is getting the tray ready"
"Oh so you are going to let her do all the work, while you play with Ray"?
"Sorry " Jessie walked over taking the tray from Jennifer, and walked out of the kitchen. Jennifer smiled, "Melinda did you have a crappy break with Gary"?
"No it was sweet why would you say that"?
"You jumped down Jessie throat, she just came in, and Ray is the one that is hanging around"
"That is true, you were a little rough on her"Ray says
"Darn, what is wrong with me, I will talk to her". Ray walked out of the kitchen, and Jennifer smiled, "Did Gary ask you to party with him after the party"?
"no he is taking me on a date tomorrow to the zoo"?
"Oh you got to be kidding, the zoo Melinda, go for the guy that likes Chinese food"
"I like the zoo Jennifer he is different he even said he was. He isn't JR, and I don't mind that "
"I'm sorry, do you think I should invite JR back to my place"?
"You know what will happen right"?
"Yeah, I kind of want it to Melinda"
Melinda laughed, "Oh you are going to take the next step Jennifer. I'm just going to say it, if Gary would have asked, I would have too". Melinda jumped when Gary walked in, "Really that is good to know, maybe I will"
"Oh God you were not suppose to hear that"
"I know but I love that I did, you are blushing girl". JR walked in, "Wow Gary you can be in here, but Ray, me and Bobby can't what is up with that Melinda"?
"What do you mean"?
"Jessie is upset with you, she said your upset that Ray was in the kitchen, here is Gary, that isn't fair"
JR walked over to Jennifer, "Hey beautiful, miss me yet"?
"Yes JR, you are being good out there, not partying to hard are you"?
"No, just waiting for this evening to end, but Marilee is after me"
Jennifer dropped a bowl, and Melinda and everyone jumped. "Who is Marilee JR"?
Gary laughed, "Oh a rich girl, that has made a play for everyone out there tonight. She wants JR the most, but he isn't giving her the time of day today"
"Is she a girlfriend JR, because I'm not getting involved with someone that has someone already"
"I'm not dating Marilee, she is just someone to hang with sometimes"
"Oh hang better not mean what I think it means". Sanda walked in, "My tray is empty, oh right Melinda you yell at Jessie, and your guy is in here"
"I didn't yell at Jessie"
"Sure that is why she looks like crap you know she is sensitive, and takes everything to heart"
"Sanda take this tray out, and ask Jessie to come in here"
"Oh right I'm going to work the floor by myself, I deserve another break"
"You will as soon as the party is over, I'm sure you are playing out there with Bobby girl"
Sanda smiled, "Yeah he is helping me out big time, he is adorable"
JR laughed, "Yeah he is Ma Ma's boy that is for sure"
Sanda pouted, "You are rude JR". She stormed out, and JR laughed, "oh two sensitive ones , Jessie and Sanda better get some tough skin around us. Jessie is hooking up with Ray, she does know he plays with horse droppings all day"?
Jessie walked in, "Nice Ray is the most amazing man in this house, so don't put him down, he works real hard, he told me what he does"
Melinda walked over, "Jessie I'm sorry that I hurt you earlier, I'm just freaked out, we have to finish this job, and not get fired because we are playing with the Ewing boys'
"I'm not playing Melinda, I have been working real hard. I have talked to Ray, but I'm not being unprofessional"
"Good, finish up, we have the desserts, and than I think we are finished"
"Melinda"
"Yes Jessie"
"Ray asked me to stay with him tonight, he has a guestroom at his place. I don't know what to do, I'm nervous, but I don't want to say no either".
JR laughed, "Ray isn't going to let you stay in the guestroom Sweetie grow up". Jessie grabbed the tray of desserts and ran out of the kitchen. Everyone looked at JR, and he laughed, "Oh come on, he wants her lets get real".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 13, 2011 18:37:31 GMT -6
JR is very IC here you are doing a great job, I understand why Melinda is acting the way she is but I hope her friends dont get mad at her either, funny scene with Melinda and Gary.. loved the chapter
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 13, 2011 23:49:15 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 14, 2011 22:27:48 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Mar 16, 2011 20:32:20 GMT -6
Chapter 9
The Party was winding down, everyone was leaving, Sanda, Jessie, Jennifer and Melinda were cleaning up the kitchen. They were taking stuff out to the car, Bobby and Ray were helping. Jock and Miss Ellie handed them a cheque, and Melinda was shocked they gave way more than they asked for. Miss Ellie smiled, "I would have you girls again, you all were lovely. I know you will get a lot of calls from many of the guests"
"Thank You , it was a pleasure working for you , and Mr. Ewing". They said goodbye, and they told JR, and Gary to lock up, they were going to bed. Miss Ellie and Jock were going upstairs, and Bobby and Ray walked over.
JR took Jennifer's hand, and whispered, "Have you thought about what I asked early"?
"Yes all night JR"
"What is your answer, I understand if you say no, but I hope you don"t"?
"My answer is yes, but you better not hurt me JR "
"I won't don't you worry Jennifer", he whispered, "Why don't I take you home, say goodnight to your friends" Jennifer walked to Jessie, Sanda and Melinda, and hugged them, and said she was going home with JR. Melinda smiled, "Call me in the morning, and be good". Jessie smiled, "Yes with JR right". Melinda laughed, "Girl he is right over there"
"I know he knows he is naughty, but cute" Jennifer smiled, "Oh he is more than cute, he is hot, eat your heart out girl"
Jessie smiled, "Oh Ray is sexy, you can have JR". Jennifer walked over, and hugged JR, they waved, and left.
Bobby smiled, "Sanda I can drive you home we can stop for a sundae at the Dairy Queen"
"Sure, I would love that". She hugged Jessie and Melinda, and said she would call them in the morning. Bobby smiled, "Don't worry about her, I will get her home safe". They walked out, and Jessie turned to Melinda, "Oh God are you going home with Gary"?
"I don't know what about you with Ray"?
"He wants me too, but I'm not sure if I'm ready to you know". Melinda laughed, "You wait until you are, I can drive you home" Ray walked over, "Oh your not going to spend the night with me Jessie"?
"I would like to, but we just met".
"I have a guest room, I promise I will keep my hands off of you".
Jessie smiled, "What will I wear tomorrow for our date, if I go to your house now"?
"Oh we will buy you something, come on we can watch a spooky movie".
"Can we"?
Ray smiled, "Oh God the spooky movie excites you more than being with me"
"No, I'm sorry, but I love spooky films". Ray touched her face, "come on, lets go find a good one on TV". Jessie hugged Melinda, and waved to Gary. She smiled, "Be good to my Friend Gary"
"I will bye Jessie".
Melinda turned to Gary, "Wow I never expected that". Gary walked over putting his hand around her waist, and pulled her close, and kissed Melinda so tenderly, she looked into his eyes, and she knew she wasn't going to be alone tonight, she hoped Gary asked her if he could come to her place. She wouldn't ask, but if he didn't she knew it would be a night, she would cry herself to sleep.
TO BE CONTINUED.
Ok it is up to you Sanda, Melinda and Jennifer, do you think your character should wait or just go for it, and have a night they will never forget, the rest of their lives? I know what Jessie is going to do. lol ;D
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 16, 2011 22:44:17 GMT -6
oh u know me, she should go for it lol I can't wait to see what you come up with next lol Loved this chapter
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Post by Sanda on Mar 16, 2011 22:59:10 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I say that I should just go for it with Bobby since this is a story and NOT real life. LOL
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 17, 2011 3:40:04 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Mar 18, 2011 14:30:23 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Jennifer and JR arrived at Jennifer's place, and he parked the car. He got out opening the door, for her. She walked up to the front door, her legs were shaking so badly. She fumbled with the keys, JR had to take them, and open the door. They walked in, and Jennifer took his coat, and hung it up. She pointed to the couch, and told him to make himself comfortable. He walked over, and she offered him a drink. He said a beer would be fine, since she didn't have bourbon in the house. She brought them both a beer, and sat down.
'You have a lovely place here Jennifer"
"Thanks it isn't Southfork, but I love it"
"You have no boyfriend Jennifer, how can that be, you are so beautiful"
"Oh I have had boyfriends, but none were right for me. They were so demanding, and I couldn't handle that type of guy"
"Great for me than, I have you all to myself"
"JR"
"Yes Jennifer".
"Tell me the truth, do you really like me, or is it you just want to add another notch on your belt"?
"What you didn't just ask me that"?
"Yeah I did, I'm not in the mood for games, I want someone that is sincere, and someone that wants to be committed, not someone that just likes to play around, and walk away". JR touched her chin, "Oh Jennifer, don't worry, I wouldn't walk away from you, and I love your attitude"
"Good answer JR", She smiled as they both took a sip of their beers, both knowing what was about to happen.
Back at the ranch, Melinda was walking to her truck, and Gary followed. Melinda was heartbroken, he didn't even ask if he could go home with her. She should be flattered, but she wasn't she was hurt, and angry. He smiled as he got to the truck, and took her hand.
"Melinda I hope you don't smack me in the face, but I don't want this evening to end. I don't want you to leave in this truck, and me go in that house, and spend, another lonely evening. Can I come with you to your place, and tomorrow, you can drive me back, after the zoo"?
Melinda wanted this but was speechless, she was shocked, and happy.
"Yes you can come to my place, I thought maybe you didn't like me all that much"
"What do you mean"?
"Well the others, all were asked right away, but you seemed like you were going to let me drive off, and not go for it" Gary smiled, "I was scared, you would slap me". They both laugh, and she whispered, "Get in, I can't wait to get you home, to my place". He ran around the other side, she got in, and they both smile, as she drove off.
Sanda and Bobby stopped at the Dairy Queen , and went inside. They both ordered banana splits, with the works. They walked over to the table, and were eating, both staring at each other. Bobby reached over taking her hand, and whispered, "tonight was fun, I hope we have many more nights like tonight"
"Me too Bobby, it was fun, and you sure made working easy on me. I couldn't keep my eyes off of you all night. I wasn't impressed with that pretty girl, in the pink dress that didn't cover most of her body, was all over you."
"You mean Jenna, we dated it is over, she still wants me back"
"Why is it over Bobby, you sure it is? She gave me the evil eye, whenever she saw us talking. I wasn't going to say this, but she told me to stay away from you, she said you are trouble"
"She cheated on me, it was a one time only affair, but I can't forgive that".
"Is she a idiot, why would she cheat"?
"She was at a party, she got drunk, and she slept with one of my best friends. We are no longer friends, but I never forgave her"
"I'm sorry Bobby, I would never cheat, on anyone, that is horrible"
"I know it happens, but to me, if you cheat, you will do it again, and I can't deal with that". Sanda smiled, "You need some cheering up Bobby Ewing".
Bobby smiled, "What are you saying girl"?
"Well lets eat this sundae, and than go to my place. We can do whatever we want, we don't have to get up early, and we don't have anyone waiting for us to return home do we"? Bobby smiled, "Hurry up and eat that sundae, I want to get out of here". They both ate, and left Dairy Queen to go to Sanda's place.
Over at Ray's place
They got out of the car, and were walking to his place. Jessie smiled, "This is so beautiful, you made this with your own hands"
"Yes, I'm great with my hands Jessie". She blushed, and he laughed, "Oh God I meant fixing things".
"Oh". Jessie giggled, and they walked inside. She loved his place, it needed a woman touch, but she liked it fine. She ran over, "Love the pictures of you on horses, you look so cute Ray". He walked over, "Yes I love riding, maybe someday , you will ride with me"
"I would love that Mr. Krebbs"
"Would you like to get into something more comfortable, that uniform looks uncomfortable"
"Oh I don't have anything else, what was I thinking"? He took her hand and walked to his room, and she was a little nervous, but he pulled out a shirt, from his closet. "Here put this on, it will be like a dress on you, I will make some popcorn, and what would you like to drink"?
"A diet soda if you have one"
"I have one, come out when you are ready". Ray shut the door, and Jessie took her uniform off. She put his plaid shirt on, and she looked in the mirror. She smiled, "Jessie what are you going to do, he is driving you crazy". She walked out in the kitchen Ray turned around, "Oh it is a little big, but it will be more comfortable than wearing your uniform all night"
Jessie walked over, "can I help you Ray"?
"No sit down, I will put this popcorn, in a bowl". Ray turned, but jessie touched his back, and he turned around. "Are you ok Jessie"?
She smiled, as she moved real close, and he grabbed her lifting her to the counter, as they kiss passionately.
To Be continued.
OMG Jessie is bad. ;D
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 18, 2011 14:50:24 GMT -6
great update, I'm glad that Gary asked Melinda to go with her
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Post by Sanda on Mar 18, 2011 19:00:37 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. OMG Jenna Wade better keep her hands off of my man Bobby. LOL
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Post by jennifer1983 on Mar 19, 2011 4:00:11 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Mar 19, 2011 16:09:10 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Melinda's night with Gary
Melinda and Gary got to her house, and he got out walking around opening her door. She smiled as he took her hand, and helped her out. She walked up to the house, with Gary right beside her. She opened the door, turning on the light, and locked the door. Gary smiled, "Nice place Melinda very cozy"
'Yes it is fine for me, I love it. It isn't Southfork, but it is all mine"
Melinda took his coat, and told him to make himself comfortable. She offered him a drink, he said a soda would be great. She grabbed two sodas , and walked into the living room, bringing 2 glasses too.
"Thank you Melinda". She poured their sodas into a glass, and sat back, and they took a sip. Gary touched her hair, and she looked at him. "God Melinda you are so beautiful, I noticed you the minute you stepped out of the truck, at Southfork"
"I noticed you too Gary".
Gary laughed, "You know Cliff Barnes likes you, but if he calls you won't go out with him would you"?
"No Gary, I don't go out with 2 guys at once"
"Good because I'm worried about Cliff he is a player sometimes"
"A player he seemed sweet but not my type really. He is more of a friend type, he would be fun to talk to though"
"Don't scare me girl, he would make some moves on you"
"Gary don't worry about Cliff, worry about what you want"
"I want you Melinda, oh that sounded bad didn't it"?
"No, that sounded pretty nice but you are a Player yourself. You all move fast, I don't invite just anyone in my place. I feel comfortable with you Gary, and that is a nice feeling". Gary brought his lips over hers, and she put her hand to his face, and they kissed, he laid her back, and she put her hands on his chest. "Gary if you don't stop now, you know what will happen"?
Gary smiled, "Oh I want that to happen, don't you"?
"I do, but can we go upstairs first, I don't feel comfortable here". Gary stood up putting his hands out to her, and she stood up. They walked upstairs, and Gary held her close the whole way there. Melinda's heart was racing, she couldn't believe this was happening. She wanted it to, but she was scared too. She walked into the bedroom, and turned on the light. Gary walked over to her kicking the door shut. He lifted her into his arms, and brought his lips over hers. She wrapped her arms, and legs around him, and they both were kissing, and pulling each other closer. Gary put her down, and touched her face, then he slowly started to unbutton her uniform. He pulled it off her shoulder, and brought his lips over neck, she let out a small cry, and he continued down her body, he turned her around, and undid her bra, throwing it aside. He leaned close, she turned around, and started to unbutton his shirt, and pulled it off of his shoulders. She brought her lips to his chest, while she was unbuckling his belt, and he brought his lips over her mouth. He couldn't take much more, he wanted Melinda in the worst way. He moved her over to the bed, and he pulled off his boxers, and she couldn't keep her eyes off of him. She knew he wanted her, and she could feel her whole body shake from the excitement. He lifted her legs, as he pulled off her panties. He brought his hands over her body, and she cried out, he was doing stuff to her, that drove her over the edge. He parted her with his body, and she accepted him , as he entered her slow at first, than he lost all sense of control, and they both moved in a perfect, but steady rhythm.
Gary yelled out, "Oh Melinda".
Melinda's breathing deepened , she grabbed Gary pulling him closer. They both moved, and were pleasuring each other in every way. Gary brought his lips to hers, and he knew she was coming to her release. Gary came to a shattering release shortly after. He dropped his forehead to her shoulder. It was several moments before he could find the strength to lift his head. He looked into her eyes, and whispered, " I'm falling in love with you Melinda, that was amazing". She touched his face ever so lightly, and whispered, "I'm never going to let you go Gary Ewing". They laid together both completely fulfilled, and exhausted, but neither could stop smiling, they were waiting for that special person to come into their lives, and they know they didn't have to look anymore, they were in each others arms, and they didn't want to be anywhere else.
TO BE CONTINUED.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 19, 2011 16:24:57 GMT -6
great update, that was better than I had hoped for Nice job Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Mar 19, 2011 20:26:12 GMT -6
OMG Jessie, Melinda and Gary night together was soo sweet and soo romantic. You are so awesome at writing romantic scenes in all of your awesome stories.
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