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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 27, 2010 0:34:26 GMT -6
great update, I hope that guy doesnt give them any trouble, love your writing
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Post by Sanda on Jun 27, 2010 14:00:06 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that man doesn't give Lucy and Sue Ellen any trouble. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jul 11, 2010 18:26:34 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Sue Ellen walked out , drying her hair, and laughed, "OMG Lucy what are you doing"?
" I know something bad is going to happen Sue Ellen"?
" Stop Lucy , we are going home". They both jump , when they heard a bang on the wall next door. Sue Ellen sat beside Lucy, and they both didn't say a word.
"Sue Ellen did you hear that, he is in there"?
" Someone else probably rented the room".
" It is him, he can see us, I just know it".
"Lucy stop , you are making me really nervous, stop".
Sue Ellen smiled, " lets get some sleep , we will leave early promise".
"You can sleep Sue Ellen"?
"If I don't we won't be driving anywhere".
Lucy pulled her sheets down, "gross these are horrible.".
"Ok lets get out of here Lucy, I can't take this anymore".
" I will sleep on top of the comforter, I'm sorry". Lucy laid down, and Sue Ellen did the same, they were looking at each other. Lucy couldn't sleep, she was surprised Sue Ellen went out pretty quick. Lucy got up, and walked over to the window, and opened the curtain. She screamed , shutting the curtain, and jumped on Sue Ellen's bed. She jumped up, "OMG Lucy what is wrong now"?
" He is outside this window, looking in"?
' Who"?
" The guy from the office, he is outside Sue Ellen"?
Sue Ellen jumped up, she walked over pulling the curtain, and didn't see anything. She turned, "there is no one there Lucy".
"Yes there was, don't you dare say I'm lying".
They heard someone outside their door, and a big bang, and yelling. Sue Ellen grabbed Lucy, and they heard, " Police open the door Mame, right now".
" No, it is a trap, you open the door, we will be raped,"
" Stop, what if it is the Police"?
"It isn't , I just know it"
Sue Ellen walked to the door, " Please go away you are scaring us, we don't want any problems".
" Open the door Mame, we are here for your protection".
Sue Ellen looked at Lucy, and she started to open the door. She opened it and 2 Police Officers walked in, shutting the door. Sue Ellen held Lucy, " what is wrong"?
" The Owner called us, saying you were in danger".
" Pardon, danger, we have been scared, because he freaked us out.".
" Mame did you have any problems today with anyone"?
" OMG the guy at the coffee shop, I'm sorry he was harassing me. I'm sorry for spilling coffee on him, but he deserved it".
" You two are alone right"?
" Yes, we are going on a school trip, why"?
"Why didn't you report, the crime at the diner"?
" It wasn't really a crime, he was being a jerk"?
"Mame you owe the owner, a Thank You, he probably saved you from something horrible".
" I don't understand what your getting at"?
"The men came here tonight, they must have seen your car. They were hiding out in the room next door. He saw them prowling around, and called the police. They had a gun, and rope Mame, we don't know what they were planning but it wasn't something nice. They admitted they came to see you , after a problem, at a restaurant. You will have to give us your information, and you may have to testify against them." Sue Ellen gave them her info, and phone number and address.
"OMG, this is crazy". Sue Ellen says
"You have to be careful, you never know how someone will react".
"Thank you where are the men now"?
" They were taken to the Police Station right now. We only have them on breaking and entering, and possession of weapons, without a license. We can hold them for maybe 12 hours, you better make sure you are away from here. Remember the next time call for help, don't be brave and take matters into your own hands." The officers left, and Sue Ellen locked the door, "Lucy lets go we will find somewhere else to stay".
" Sue Ellen we thought that man was evil, he saved us".
" I know Lucy, we were awful, but we will blame that stupid movie".
Lucy smiled, " You were pretty brave today Sue Ellen, you should dump a coffee, in JR's lap sometimes".
" Nice Lucy, he might deserve it sometimes, but it isn't right".
"Sue Ellen do you really love JR, or do you stay because of John Ross"?
" I love him Lucy , I always have, and of course, I stay for John Ross".
" What will he do , when he hears about this"?
" Don't tell Jock or JR, or our trip is over". They both giggle, and get dressed, and leave the room. They walk down, and go in to Thank the Owner, who smiled, "your leaving already"?
"Yes, we were scared. we just want to get going".
"Have fun, and came back again, and I will give you free breakfast".
Lucy laughed, " We will think about it, but I doubt we will be coming this way again".
Sue Ellen shook his hand, " Thanks for everything, you saved us, I will always appreciate that".
" Can I ask you both something , and you will be completely honest"?
" Sure", Sue Ellen was worried what he would ask.
" Were you scared of me, and did you think I was some kind of freak, like the guy in Psycho"?
" No," Lucy yells, "not once"
Sue Ellen smiled, " No, we didn't you have been a perfect gentleman, thanks for all your help". Sue Ellen and Lucy walk to the car, and he walked out, waving to them. They were driving away, and Lucy laughed, " he had camera in that room, and saw everything, and heard everything we did".
"Lucy stop, we took showers we were naked".
" Oh man we will be in some porno movie".
Sue Ellen stopped the car, she couldn't stop laughing, " stop Lucy, porno movie , OMG".
" Yeah you wait and see it will come out one day, JR will see it or something".
"Lucy stop , we are not going to be in any movie".
"Fine but I seen it happen in a show once.
Sue Ellen laughed, and started driving down the road . She started to laugh, picturing JR watching a movie, and seeing her in a shower, he would have a heart attack. She continued driving, listening to Lucy ramble on and on.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jul 11, 2010 19:45:59 GMT -6
that was weird I would leave too. I hope no one is following them. very good update. cant wait to see what happens next
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Post by Sanda on Jul 12, 2010 17:49:48 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I would also have left as well. I hope that no one follows them.
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Post by jessie on Aug 19, 2010 15:01:59 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Lucy and Sue Ellen were driving, but Sue Ellen was getting real tired. She needed sleep but every place she drove by gave her the creeps. She had to pick a place fast, or they would have a accident for sure. She also had to stop, and call JR, or he would be getting worried. She drove by a place, and drove in, Lucy smiled, " this place has a pool, can we go for a swim before we sleep"?
"Ok but lets see if they have a room first". Sue Ellen went in, and they did have a room, a 2 bed suite. She paid for the night, with her credit card, and grabbed the keys. They walked to the room, and was happy with it. It was extremely clean, and bright, she sat on the bed, and Lucy grabbed her Swim suit out of her bag. She smiled, "get yours on too Sue Ellen, I'm so hot". Sue Ellen took her suit out, and was laughing, Lucy was really something, she couldn't stay still for a moment. Sue Ellen changed and grabbed 2 towels, and they went to the pool. They were the only ones there she was happy about that. She didn't want any problems, she sat on the edge of the pool, while Lucy swam laps. She jumped when 2 young men came out, and sat on the lounge chairs. She didn't want to look at them, but of course Lucy yelled, " Hi, I'm Lucy, this is Sue Ellen, my Aunt".
"Hi, I'm Ron, and this is Jordan".
Sue Ellen smiled, " Nice to meet you", Jordan got up sitting beside Sue Ellen, "where are you from"?
"We are just passing through, we are justing cooling off, we have been driving all day".
" Has anyone ever told you Sue Ellen, you have the most amazing eyes"?
"Yes , my Husband, but thank you ".
' Where is you husband, he let you out on your own"?
"Yeah, I'm fine on my one, so go sit with your friend over there". Sue Ellen looked over, and Lucy was talking to him. She jumped up, "Lucy lets go to our room, I'm exhausted, say goodnight to the young men".
"Oh why don't you rest, I will stay with them"?
"Lucy Ewing, your coming with me, I'm not letting you stay out here alone, do you understand"?
"Yes, Sue Ellen, goodnight, I guess, I won't see you both again".
"We are in room 3D, if you ladies get lonely".
"We won't have a nice evening". Sue Ellen grabbed Lucy's arm, "what are you doing Lucy, trying to get us in trouble."?
"No, they are nice, what is the harm, with talking to them? Jordan liked you Sue Ellen, did you see the way he looked at you"?
" I saw they are trouble, and young, and your staying away from them. I would be kicked out of Dallas, if I allowed something to happen to you Lucy".
" I'm not a virgin Sue Ellen, were you a virgin when you married"?
Sue Ellen got to the room, opening the door. They went inside, and Sue Ellen changed into a nightgown. Lucy sat on the bed, " I asked you a question were you a virgin Sue Ellen when you married"?
" Is that your business Lucy, but yes I was, and I'm proud of it".
"Oh man is that why JR wanted you so bad".?
" That is rude, Lucy go to sleep, I have to call JR he probably is worried."
" Or he is with someone, he can't be without loving you know that".
"Yeah Lucy thank you for ruining this trip". Sue Ellen got up, walking into the bathroom, she was crying, and Lucy felt so bad. She walked to the bathroom door. "Sue Ellen, I'm so sorry, I have a big mouth, that was extremely rude. I'm having a great trip with you, please forgive me".
Sue Ellen opened the bathroom door, she wiped tears from her eyes. "Don't worry about it, lets have a rest"
"Call JR Sue Ellen you promised him". Sue Ellen walked to the phone, she dialed Southfork. She was shocked, and so happy she cried when JR picked up the phone, on the first ring.
"Sue Ellen is this you"?
"Yes, JR, I'm sorry, it is 10pm, I said I would call earlier"
"I have been waiting, I was scared to death. You both are ok nothing happened, you are having a good time"?
" Yes, we are fine, nothing happened, we just stopped to rest JR. I miss you so much, I thought you would be out when I called."
"Out, I said I would be here, you didn't think, I would be"?
"I didn't know, but hearing your voice, makes me feel so much better".
"Sugar, I miss you like crazy, I wish you were here with me"
"JR promise me , you will wait for me, don't go to anyone else".
"I won't, and you be good too".
"I will , I love you JR, I should let you go. Tell John Ross , I love him, and miss him like crazy".
"Oh he is missing you, I just got him to sleep. He hated not having you there, he said you tell him amazing stories. He was telling me some of them, they were pretty sweet."
"He loves hearing stories, about how we met and stuff".
"Yeah well I told him some stuff, that freaked him out".
" OMG what did you say"?
" I told him, that got you away from this Wicked Witch, and your evil Sister, and he just loved hearing all about it".
" My Mom is a witch, and Kristen was a Evil sister, nice JR".
" Love you Sugar, sweet dreams, but have them only of me".
" Oh JR, stop talking like that, I will be driving home tonight, I miss you so much".
Lucy threw a pillow at Sue Ellen, she looked over, and Lucy was making faces. Sue Ellen said goodnight, blowing him a kiss. She got up throwing the pillow back, she sat on the bed. "Lucy maybe he has changed, he was waiting for my call".
" I hope so Sue Ellen, you deserve someone deceit, I really mean that".
Sue Ellen laid down, and Lucy smiled, " sweet dreams Sue Ellen".
"You too Lucy, see you in the morning".
They both drifted off asleep fast, they were exhausted, Sue Ellen did dream, but she hugged her pillow, she dreamed she was in JR's arms, and he asked her to remarry him.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 19, 2010 17:23:56 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE it that Sue Ellen held her pillow and that she dreamed of JR asking her to remarry him.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Aug 20, 2010 2:34:15 GMT -6
Jessie I like this story and I hope you update again soon and I also hope JR meant what he said when he said he was going to change I hope he doesn't.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 20, 2010 10:16:44 GMT -6
great update I hope they dont run into any trouble., Lucy needs to be more careful
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Post by jessie on Sept 29, 2010 14:37:35 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Lucy woke up first waking up Sue Ellen.
"One more minute JR"
"Sue Ellen it is me wake up, in a few hours we will be in Florida"
"Oh God Lucy, what time is it"?
"6am get up". Sue Ellen sat up, she was still tired, but she should hit the road early they could be in Florida by lunch time. They got up getting ready, they dressed, and were out the door. They decided to skip breakfast, and just get a coffee, well Lucy wanted a danish but Sue Ellen decided against it. Lucy laughed, "Your so worried about your weight aren't you Sue Ellen"?
"No, I'm not, I just don't feel like eating a danish. I will have a nice lunch when we get to the Hotel".
"Sue Ellen"?
'Yeah Lucy, what is wrong"?
"Nothing you dreamed most of the night about JR, you really love him don't you"?
"Yes Lucy he is my husband"
"Sue Ellen, I know he hurt you with other women, how can you forgive that?. I know I wouldn't, and I'm sure Pam and Donna would have kicked Ray and Bobby to the curb if they cheated. I want to know why you never left"?.
"I don't want to talk about it, and you don't know what you will do until it happens. I guess I'm weak Lucy, can we stop talking about it"
"I'm sorry, I hurt your feeling, I didn't mean to. I just don't understand JR why would he want other women? Lucy was shocked when Sue Ellen stopped the car, parked it, and got out of the car slamming the door. She walked to the front of the car, and stood for a moment. Lucy opened the door, "Sue Ellen are you ok"?
"No, I was just trying to forget the past, and you brought it all back. I love him, and I'm a fool for forgiving him, but if I didn't I would lose the only man I truly loved". Sue Ellen was crying, making Lucy feel horrible. Lucy walked over, "I'm sorry, I won't say anything like that again. He might have changed, he did stay home waiting for your call right"?
"Yeah and right after he left the house, I bet".
"No, you don't really think that Sue Ellen".
"You made me now, lets go I want to get to Florida. I promised to get you there, and I will do it. Don't bring up this again, my head is killing me now". Sue Ellen got in the car, and Lucy got in looking at Sue Ellen. They were driving, Sue Ellen was looking straight ahead, she wasn't saying a word. Lucy was quiet, but she hated herself for ruining Sue Ellen's fun. Lucy smiled, "Sue Ellen call JR, tell him to meet you in florida on Friday, and you can have 2 days together. I can stay in a room by myself, and it would be like a vacation for him. He can watch me perform on Sunday, and we all can drive back together. I could use some bonding time with my Uncle JR Sue Ellen".
Sue Ellen couldn't stop laughing, "Bonding time you and JR Lucy, one of you will be dead, before we get back to Southfork".
"No, we can bring him to the spooky hotel , but I have to bunk with you both that night. So no fooling around, while I'm in the room, it would traumatize me for life".
Sue Ellen yelled, "I'm going to do it, do you think he will"?
" He might, the three of us can have fun, than at night, you have JR to yourself"
"You can spend 2 days with your Uncle Lucy"?
"For you , I would be good, I won't bug him too much. Just a little ok, I have to keep my reputation up, as a bad girl".
"You and JR are alike, you both love to bug"
"Oh Sue Ellen, I'm nothing like JR"
"In looks no, but you both have great ability to get under people's skins". Lucy laughed, "Do I get under yours Sue Ellen"?
"Sometimes, but this trip, you have been fun. You have got me in trouble, but I really do love you".
"Really you do Sue Ellen"?
"Yes, I always have, but you never let me get close Lucy"
"I know, I'm sorry, but it was JR that bothered me not you".
"JR is not bad Lucy, if you give him a chance".
" I will try this weekend if he comes. I hope he does for you Sue Ellen".
Sue Ellen smiled, "He better, because I have plans for him already". They both giggle, and continued driving to Florida.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 29, 2010 17:04:30 GMT -6
love this chapter, I agree Lucy is like JR but neither of them will admit it. Lucy was wrong to start trouble but she wouldn't be Lucy if she didn't. I really hope they dont run into any more trouble from now on. thanks for updating
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 30, 2010 2:03:57 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 5, 2010 14:42:02 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Feb 7, 2011 0:15:03 GMT -6
CHAPTER 10
Sue Ellen and Lucy arrived in Florida right on time. They got to the hotel, and parked their car. Lucy got out, 'Sue Ellen this place is amazing, I love it". Sue Ellen grabbed the bags, and Lucy took one, and they walked inside. Sue Ellen went to the desk to book them in. She asked if they needed a room side by side for Friday Saturday and Sunday could it be arranged? The Manager smiled, "Sure but you have to book it now".
"Ok, I will take the adjoining room, thank you". Lucy smiled, "Can I have my own room until Uncle JR gets here"?
"No, but Friday you can, but you better be good Lucy".
"Me Sue Ellen really". Lucy laughed, they took them up to the room, and the man put the luggage in one room, and showed them the adjoining room. Sue Ellen smiled, "Thank you", she tipped the man, and shut the door. Lucy smiled, "Wow this room is amazing, it is fun being rich".
Sue Ellen hugged her, "You have been spoiled girl, but so have I". Lucy laughed, "We don't have to do anything until tomorrow, can we get out suits on , and walk to the beach".
"Sure but can I phone JR first"?
"Yes Sue Ellen , I will change". Sue Ellen sat on the bed, she was nervous she knew if JR said no, it would hurt her. She called Ewing Oil, and got Sly, and asked for JR. Sly said just a minute, while I see if he is free. Sue Ellen waited, when he finally came on the line.
"Sugar, your calling early"
'Oh I'm sorry, I didn't mean to disturb you"
"You didn't what is up, your ok nothing is wrong"?
"No, but I have a special request , I have to ask you". Lucy walked out of the bathroom, and listened, praying JR didn't hurt Sue Ellen.
'I know you are busy, but can you meet me in Florida Friday, so we can spend the weekend".
"What me there with Lucy, and all her silly friends"?
"And me JR, why are you busy"?
"What about John Ross"?
"You know your Mother will watch him for us"
"Well I don't know Sugar". Sue Ellen got quiet, she put the phone on her lap, she started to cry. Lucy wanted to grab the phone, and yell at JR, but she didn't move. Sue Ellen wiped the tears from her eyes, and whispered, "I will not bother you again, I better go, Lucy wants to go to the beach". Sue Ellen hung up, and she tried to compose herself, but she walked over lifting her bag, to get her swimsuit. She couldn't stop the tears, she sat on the bed crying. Lucy ran over, "Sue Ellen it isn't you, it probably is me, he doesn't want to spend time with".
"No it is me, I get it he will never change, how did I believe he would, I'm a idiot". Sue Ellen pulled her suit out, and said she would change in the washroom. Lucy heard Sue Ellen crying, and she felt sick. The phone rang, and Lucy grabbed it.
"Hello"
"Lucy where is Sue Ellen she hung up on me"?
"You are a fool JR, she loves you, she deserves so much better than you".
"Lucy Ewing enough".
"You had her in tears, she was so happy, couldn't you just be a husband just once"?
"Lucy I want to come, she didn't give me a chance to say anything. I have been dying without her, so I would love to have a weekend with her. I was just having trouble with John Ross, he has been asking for his Ma Ma, ever since she left, so that is why I was hesitate leaving him"
"Bring him, I will room with him, we have a room right next door. I can corrupt him, and make him into me".
"Lucy that is terrifying, and not funny"
"Kidding, we can watch Sesame Street, come JR"
"Can I speak with Sue Ellen Lucy please".
"Just a minute JR". Lucy walked over knocking on the Bathroom. "Sue Ellen JR is on the phone". Sue Ellen opened the door, "God I can't take his excuses right now".
"Talk to him Sue Ellen". She walked over, "Hello"
"Why did you hang up on me"?
"I had to get ready to take Lucy out, and I was bothering you right"?
"Sue Ellen John Ross has been asking for you, he misses his Ma Ma. I'm coming Friday , and bringing him, we can have a family weekend. Lucy said she will keep him safe in her room, while we have some alone time".
"Oh JR, I'm sorry, I thought you were making excuse".
"I love you Sue Ellen, I have thought about you ever since you left".
"I have too JR".
"Call me tonight at 9pm, I want to hear your voice before I go to sleep Sugar".
"JR stop but that is Sweet".
"You are sweet, and I can't wait until Friday, so rest up Sugar".
"I will love you". JR hung up, and Sue Ellen smiled, "He is coming Lucy, he was worried about John Ross".
"Lets go to the Beach girl, I need some sun". Sue Ellen grabbed her purse, and two towels, and they left, walking to the elevator.
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Post by Sanda on Feb 7, 2011 0:29:31 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am soo happy that JR is coming to Florida with John Ross.
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