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Post by jessie on Apr 25, 2010 22:36:58 GMT -6
Hi, another new Ray and Donna story, hope you like it.
Chapter 1
It was Saturday Donna and Ray just got out of the shower, they were laughing, and went and got dressed. They made breakfast, and brought it outside on the deck. They were talking, and Ray asked Donna if she wanted to go riding. They see a car driving up, but neither of them recognized it. Ray smiled " finish eating it probably is someone selling something. He walked over to the car. He stopped dead when he saw who it was. He looked back at Donna who was watching. He yelled " what are you doing here, your not welcome on my property"?
"I know you hate me Ray, but there is something I have to tell you".
"I don't care to hear anything you have to say, Ok. Drive your car right off this land."
Ray hears a small child yell, "Mommy I have to go to the bathroom"
"Ok Justin be quiet Mommy is talking"
"Mommy please I'm going to pee my pants"
"Can he use your bathroom quick, I'm sorry"?
Fine, Ray opened the door, the young boy got out. He was so adorable, he smiled " hi, my name is Justin, Sir I have to go badly".
Ray smiled, he grabbed his hand, running him into the house. Donna yelled " Ray what is going on"?
"Be right back this one has to go to the bathroom."
Donna stared but she walked out to see the woman. "Hi I'm Donna Ray's wife, who are you "?
"My name is Garnet McKee, I came here to tell Ray something"
"Your boy is adorable, what is his name"?
"Justin Raymond McKee"
Donna felt uneasy, she waited for Ray to return. Garnet smiled " you go Justin"?
"Yes Mommy, Ray was really nice"
"Ray can I talk to you alone, maybe Justin can talk to Donna for a moment"
"Garnet what is going on, why are you here"?
"Please not in front of him ok"
Ray smiled, " will you talk to him for a moment, it won't be long"?
"Sure Justin you want some juice"?
"orange juice", he smiled
Sure orange juice coming up. Donna walked Justin into the house. Ray turned," what are you doing Garnet, we haven't talked in years".
"Yeah 5 years to be exact".
"I'm really tired Ray, I have tried to be a great Mother. I regretted that day, I slept with JR. I could have had a great life with you. JR promised me to help me with my career."
"That is over Garnet, why did you come here"?
"I can't do it anymore, he is to much for me. I want my career, and having him, is stopping me from furthering my career"
"What are you saying, you want to give your boy away"?
"To his Father, Ray"
Ray was shocked, " Justin is my child, how do you know"?
"You and JR were the only one's, I slept with at that time. It is either yours or JR's".
"He is your child Garnet you can just walk away , what kind of Mother are you"?
"Selfish, and tired, I'm leaving here today, and he is staying with you. She walked to the trunk, and pulled out 2 bags. If you don't want him, give him to JR."
"Stop this Garnet, you are not doing this "
She pulled out a letter, this is his birth certificate, naming you as his Father. His medical papers, and a signed legal document, signed by a lawyer giving you all rights to him. I'm leaving and not looking back, I'm sorry, he deserves better than me. She jumped in the car and took off. Ray screamed banging the car, telling her to stop. She drove off, and Ray yelled her name.
Justin ran off the deck screaming " Mommy , Mommy don't leave me. He ran but Ray grabbed him holding him into his arms. He cried, " where is my Mommy going".?
Ray didn't know what to say , he just stared at Donna. She stood in shock, not realizing what just happened.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 25, 2010 23:03:27 GMT -6
Great start to your new Donna and Ray story Jessie. I can't wait to see how Ray and Donna are going to handle Ray's son with Garnet McGee.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 25, 2010 23:26:07 GMT -6
Oh this will be good! I can't wait to see how Ray does, he will be a wonderful father...hope Donna can adjust! Thanks for telling me about this!
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Post by jessie on Apr 26, 2010 18:30:35 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Ray carried Justin up on the porch, Donna asked him, "what is going on"?
"Not in front of him, he is upset", Ray sat Justin in a chair. The tears were falling down his cheeks. Donna knelt down, " it's ok don't cry"
"I want my Mommy", he pouted
"Where did she go Ray, she is coming back"? Donna asks
"Justin you sit here, I'm going to talk to Donna alone". Ray pulled Donna aside, "she left and said he is my child"
"Your child Ray , she just dropped him off and took off"?
"Yeah she handed me his papers and everything, she wants to further her career, and can't because of him"
"OMG what kind of Mother is she ? How do you know your the Daddy Ray"?
"She said it is either mine or JR's"?
"I don't want to ask, but you both were fooling around with her at the same time"?
"She was my girlfriend, JR the rat came in and slept with her"
"The poor child, we can't just assume he is yours Ray. If it is JR's he will be raising this boy, not us."
"I will get a DNA test done tomorrow , and if he is not mine, he is JR's."
They both turn, Justin touched Donna's skirt.
"What is wrong Justin, you need something"?
"Is my Mommy coming back"?
Donna picked him up, " I hope so Sweetie, let get you something to eat." She walked into the house, " Ray stood watching , he couldn't believe what Garnet did? He also was Little overjoyed thinking Justin was his son. He walked in joining Justin and Donna in the kitchen.
Justin wanted cereal, Donna poured him a bowl, and added some milk. Donna sat at the table, watching him eat. Donna couldn't keep her eyes off of Justin. She couldn't understand why any Mother would walk away from her boy.
Justin smiled " Ray laughed , " how about the three of us go riding, this afternoon"?
Justin yelled can I "Yeah you rode before Justin"?
"No Mommy didn't like me riding, but can I please"?
Donna got up getting a clean cloth, wiping Justin's face. "We sure can", she smiled, " Justin jumped up hugging Donna". Ray smiled, so did Donna.
They got ready, and Ray drove over to the Stables. They saddled up, " Donna asked if Justin could ride with her"? Ray smiled, " Sure Donna that would be fine". He lifted Justin up, and Donna hugged him, and walked the horse as Ray got on his horse. He knew Donna was bonding with Justin, and he thought that was amazing. They rode slowly , Justin was so excited he was pointing at everything . They stopped by a pond, " Justin walked in without his shoes, Donna took hers off, and followed him. Ray stood back watching , he loved seeing Donna and Justin really getting along.
Later they rode back, and they got the horses settled. They got in the truck, and were driving home. Justin fell asleep in Donna's arms, she whispered " he is out like a light".
"Today was good for him, he really enjoyed himself."
"I can't believe she just left him Ray"
"I'm not surprised, she normally thought of herself. I'm surprised she didn't bring him here sooner."
"Ray do you think he is your son"?
"I do, but if it is JR's I will let him know Donna"
"He is adorable Ray, she gave him to you"
"Are you saying if it is JR's , I shouldn't tell him"?
"You would make a better Father than JR"
Ray smiled, " we will find out tomorrow Donna, and than we will decide, what to do"?
Donna looked at Justin" she couldn't believe she was falling in love with him already.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 26, 2010 19:58:07 GMT -6
great chapter, I wonder what they would do he is JR's. I think he is Ray's but still. It's good Donna bonded with him. Nice update
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Post by Sanda on Apr 27, 2010 21:55:09 GMT -6
Great chapter Jessie. I LOVE it that Donna is bonding with Justin already and that she isn't whining about Justin possibly being Ray's or JR's child like Pam whined when it was revealed that Bobby and Jenna were going to have a child together.
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Post by jessie on Apr 29, 2010 20:44:02 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Ray got Justin ready for bed, he asked Ray where his Mommy was?
Ray sat beside him, " touching his head, your Mommy isn't coming back Justin. She went away, you might stay here with me and Donna"
Justin had tears in his eyes, "Donna heard what Ray said, you don't be so blunt with a 5 year old Ray".
"I don't know he should know the truth"
Justin put his arms out to Donna, Ray was shocked, he was alittle jealous how close Donna and Justin became so fast. Ray smiled " you get him down, I'm going to get a beer. Donna sat beside him, and smiled " Mommy had to go work, she left you with us Sweetie".
Justin smiled " can you stay with me until I fall asleep"?
Sure she laid beside him, he look at her she was falling for the little guy already. She prayed, this was Ray's son, if it was JR's she would be sick. She laid beside him, and she got up when he finally fell asleep. She walked out to Ray, who was drinking a beer, and watching football. Donna sat beside Ray touching his shoulder, he didn't look at her." Ray is something wrong, are you mad at me"?
"No, why would I be mad"
"Because he asked me to stay, with him for awhile"?
"Donna I'm not sure what to say to a child? Garnet isn't coming home, she is gone. She cares about herself and her career. We can't lie to him, he will expect her to walk in that door"
"I'm sorry , I got upset in there, I just felt for him"
"You think I didn't Donna, he is my son maybe"
Fine I'm going to bed, Donna walked to her room. Ray turned the football game up loader, and grabbed another beer. He fell asleep with the TV on, and was awoken to Justin asking for a drink. He got up turning the TV off, he took Justin into the kitchen. He sat him at the table, he got him a glass of milk and cookies.
Justin smiled " your not having some Ray"?
"No, they are all for you, why can't you sleep Justin"?
"Are you my Daddy Ray"?
"Where did you hear that Justin"?
"I heard Mommy telling Billy she was taking me to my Daddy"
"Tomorrow we are going to the doctor, to make sure you are"
Justin smiled, " If you are my Daddy, can Donna be my 2nd Mommy"?
Ray touched his face, " you like Donna don't you"?
"She is really nice", Justin smiled
"Yes she is Justin, how about we both go wake her up. We can watch a movie, and than you maybe can sleep"?
"Can we wake her up Ray"?
"Come on lets do it" , Ray laughed
They walk to the bedroom, Ray smiled, "go get her kiddo"
Justin ran over," Donna, Donna wake up"
Donna jumped up," Justin what is wrong "?
"I can't sleep, and Ray said to wake you up. Can we watch a movie, and than I will try to sleep again"?
Donna got out of bed, putting on her housecoat and smiled " lets go pick a movie "
Justin ran out to the living room, Donna walked over to Ray.
"Sorry about that he adores you beside, I might pick the wrong movie for him".
Donna smiled, " we will put on a Disney movie, and I will make some popcorn"
Popcorn yum, Donna kissed Ray, and they both hugged. They both laugh, "Justin comes running, come on you two I want to watch a movie"
Donna smiles, " he is bossy like you Ray, he has to be yours"
Ray held Donna tight, "I know , it will really hurt if he's not".
Ray put on "Jungle book and Donna brought out some popcorn and soda's. They all sat and watched the movie, and Justin leaned into Ray, and he wrapped his arm around him. Ray and Donna look into each others eyes, and kiss.
Justin was watching he shut his eyes, "Yuck Ray, you kissed a girl"
Ray smiled " Yes I did , a very pretty one", they both laugh.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 29, 2010 21:04:28 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Ray, Donna and Justin are soo cute together in your story. I hope that Justin turns out to be Ray's son.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 30, 2010 2:41:38 GMT -6
this had some really cute lines, loved this chapter
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Post by jessie on May 17, 2010 22:47:37 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Justin fell asleep in Ray's arms watching the movie. Ray carried him to his bed, he laid him down. He kissed his forehead, when Donna touched his shoulder. "You are good with him, so don't be worried, let's get out of here, before we wake him up".
They walk out and Ray grabbed Donna," sorry about earlier"
" I know this is scary, tomorrow, we will find out if he is yours or JR's."
Ray lifted Donna up, "lets go to bed, and we can play". She smiled, " sounds like a plan", as they moved into their room. Donna smiled, " lock the door, just in case he runs in. " Ray turned locking the door, he moved her to the bed, lowering her down. He smiled, as he brought his lips to hers. She smiled, " there is the cowboy , I love ". He undid her housecoat, and opened it up, she sat up, while he pulled her nightgown over her head, and threw it. She smiled, as she undid his belt of his pants, while he took his shirt off. He slipped his pants off, while he got on the bed, he pulled Donna on top of him. She smiled, as she moved her hand through his hair, she brought her lips to his, as he smiled, " you are so beautiful Donna".
She smiled, as she took Ray, as he held her hips, and they both moved in a slow but steady movement. He was at awe with her beautiful, she was driving him, crazy. She leaned down, bringing her lips to his, as they both were pleasing each other, and both came to a shattering release. She leaned down and laid in his arms, as he whispered, " Donna what if he is our son"? She smiled, " Ray you said our son"?
" If he is mine he is yours too, I won't give him back to her".
" They laid holding each other when they head Justin crying. Donna jumped up dressing as Ray put his pants on. They both run over to Justin's room, and run over to the bed.
" What is wrong Justin"?
" I had a bad dream, " Mommy is not coming back is she"?
Donna touched his face, " We don't know sweetie, but you have us".
" She doesn't love me anymore"?
" I'm sure she does, but she needed to go away for work".
" Can I sleep with you guys, I'm scared, I want my room back".
Ray smiles, "you don't like this room"?
" Yes, but it doesn't have cars pictures"
" Oh you like cars, what about horses"?
" I like horses", Justin smiled,
Donna touched Justin face, 'After the doctor appointment tomorrow, we will go shopping, and buy stuff for your new room"
"Really, can I have a TV in my room"?
" No, you can watch TV with us in the living room, but we will see tomorrow, what else you can have".
Ray put his hands out, "Come on Buddy, you can sleep with us tonight, but you have to stay in here starting tomorrow."
" Ok, he smiled, and Ray carried, him into their room. Donna smiled, " Oh man he has us already", she followed them into the bedroom. He laid in between them, and giggled, making them both laugh.
Ray looked at Justin, " you sleep , you have a big day tomorrow".
" Ok Mommy never let me sleep with her and Billy"
Donna looks at Ray and laughs, " you should be in your own room, shut your eyes, ok"
" I want a drink Ray, I'm thirsty"
Donna couldn't stop laughing as Ray jumped out of bed. " OMG he is going to kill me, with his demands." Ray went into the bathroom, to get water, and brought it to Justin.
"Can I have pop"?
Donna and Ray both sat up, " No, not at this time".
" Mommy gave me pop all the time, milk is expensive".
"Mommy gave you pop at this time of night"?
" Yeah and a chocolate bar, so I wouldn't bug her and Billy".
Ray was livid, he yelled " That
Donna sat up, Ray calm down, he doesn't understand.
" Justin drink the water, and it is sleepy time, ok"? Justin drank, and handed Ray the cup, they all got settled, and Justin laughs, " I have to go pee".
Ray turns, " you had to wait, until I was back in bed"
" I have to go pee".
Ray turned on the light, helping Justin up, " go it is in there."Justin ran in, Donna looks at Ray, and couldn't stop laughing.
" It is not funny", but Ray starts laughing to. Justin runs in laughing, jumping on the bed , jumping up and down. Donna, yelled," stop your going to fall".
" No", he kept jumping Ray got up, but Justin moved quickly and fell off the bed. He hit his head, screaming, Ray and Donna panicked, running to him. He was bleeding, Donna ran into the bathroom, and grabbed towels, while Ray wrapped him in a blanket. Donna dressed in jeans and a blouse, and they rushed Justin to the hospital.
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 17, 2010 23:39:42 GMT -6
aw what a way to start out... they will be just fine as parents. wonderful chapter glad to see a new update
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Post by Sanda on May 18, 2010 0:13:15 GMT -6
Great chapter Jessie. I hope that Justin is going to be ok.
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Post by jessie on May 19, 2010 1:41:16 GMT -6
Chapter 5
Ray drove while Donna sat in the back seat with Justin. She held him but made sure he had his seat belt on. She was crying " Ray there is so much blood"
" OK we are almost there, they got to the hospital. Ray stopped the car at the Emergency entrance. He jumped out of the car, carrying Justin who was still screaming. The guards didn't stop him, and Donna ran up to the front desk. They took one look at Justin and rushed him back. They laid him on a table, Ray was getting frantic, when the Doctor arrived. They assessed Justin, and asked what happened?They told him and he said, Justin would be fine, he would probably need 8 to 10 stitches. Donna started to cry, the doctor smiled " he will be fine ". The doctor froze the area, and Ray held on to Justin while the doctor stitched him up. Justin cried , himself to sleep, and Ray and Donna were totally devastated. They told the doctor their situation, and he offered to do a DNA test on Ray and Justin. He said the results, could be pushed through but it would be more money, since they had to pay for this type of test. Ray didn't care , he wanted fast results, and said he was willing to pay. The doctor smiled, " you love this little guy, he is adorable".
Donna smiled, " yes he is, when can we expect the results"?
"Tomorrow morning fast enough"?
"That fast , OMG that would be amazing"
" If your not the Father , Ray the other man will have to be tested"
" I understand"
They lifted Justin, and the doctor told them what to do. They have to wake him up every 1 to 2 hours. If he is dizzy or sick bring him back. They gave them a prescription, and said to bring him to their family doctor in 2 or 3 days, just to check him out.
They thanked the Doctor and left, and Donna and Ray were quiet all the way home. They decided to stay awake all night to make sure they woke him up. Donna made coffee, as Ray laid Justin on the couch, so he would be close to them. They both sat drinking their coffee, not wanting to say anything. They both were so worried, the test would show Ray wasn't the Daddy. They held hands, and every hour they woke him up for 10 minutes, and let him go back down. They both sat on the couch, totally exhausted, but they stared at him, watching his every move. Donna started to fall asleep, and Ray laid her down. He sat up, reading a book, and every time Justin, moved or moaned, Ray jumped up. Ray woke him up again after 1 hour, and Justin smiled, " your bugging me".
Ray laughed, " I know I'm so sorry , Buddy".
Justin sat in his lap, and laid his head on Ray's chest. Ray held him close, and every fiber of his being felt he was his son. He looked into his face, smiling, " you are my son, I can feel it."
Donna woke up, and sat up, "Ray you rest, I will stay up until morning"
" I can't let go of him Donna, " what if the test proves he is JR's."?
" We will deal with that then, lets just make sure he is ok first".
"He loves us already Donna"
" I think we fell in love with him , the moment we met him Ray"..
Donna moved beside Ray and she leaned into his chest. She smiled, " he is adorable, he can't be JR's"
"Donna , John Ross is adorable, and he is JR's"
" I know that was horrible to say, I just hate the man"
Ray smiles, " I hate him sometimes too, but if this is his boy"
" Ray I will die if it is JR's, I can't lose him now"
Smiling, "One night we feel this way, he is special".
" Like you Ray".
They laid holding him, and Justin woke up himself. He smiled, " why did we sleep out on the couch"?
" Oh you hurt yourself, we had to keep waking you up."
" I'm hungry, can I have cereal"?
" Donna sat up, we only have bran flakes and Corn flakes"
Justin pouts, " I want Captain Crunch"
" I don't have that Sweetie, how about toast and peanut butter? Later today, while Ray is working, we can go shopping and get stuff you like"
" OK " Justin smiles.
Ray hugs him, " good stuff not bad stuff"
" Ok Ray"
Donna took his hand,"lets go get you some toast"
"And peanut butter"
" Yeah Justin and Peanut butter". She went into the kitchen, and was making the toast for Justin the phone rang. Ray look at the caller ID, he looked at Donna, " It is the lab at the hospital"
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Post by melindajo2000 on May 19, 2010 6:46:52 GMT -6
great chapter, glad he is okay. hope he is Ray's son... Love this story you do write Ray and Donna so well!
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Post by Sanda on May 19, 2010 22:54:12 GMT -6
Great chapter Jessie. I hope that Justin is Ray's son. I LOVE this story soo much and I LOVE how you write Donna and Ray.
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