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Post by Sanda on Feb 19, 2013 20:41:35 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. JR and Sue Ellen are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I am so glad that JR and Sue Ellen are about to kiss at the end of this chapter. New Dallas won't be the same now that we have seen Larry Hagman's last scenes as JR Ewing now that Larry Hagman has passed away in real life.
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Post by jessie on Jun 23, 2014 18:07:59 GMT -6
Chapter 6
JR could smell that amazing perfume she always wore, and Sue Ellen touched his chest saying, "JR what are we doing, I don't understand why you are here wanting to take me out on this dinner date"
"You really don't understand why"?
"No I really don't"
JR smiled, "I have so many regrets, I was a fool, and it took me long enough to realize it. You were the love of my life, and I screwed up everything the day you walked out of that Theatre and left Dallas. I wanted to run after you but my stubborn pride wouldn't let me do that"
Sue Ellen smiled as she gave JR a sweet kiss on the cheek, and said, "I will take that as Number 7, I have been waiting so long for you to admit you were a stubborn fool, and you did make a mistake letting me go. I loved you JR, and I would be lying if I didn't say I wish you stopped me but I realized our love was over because you didn't"
"It never stopped I have thought of you everyday since we ended it. I am alone, and I know it is all my fault. I could have had you beside me, and we could have grown old together. I know I am not the man you married, I am old but Sue Ellen know you are as beautiful as the first day we met"
Sue Ellen smiled as she said, "You lie but that is sweet JR, and you are still the man I married all those years ago. I would hope we both have grown up, and realize all the mistakes we made. I know I am not innocent, I made so many mistakes too. I never stopped loving you JR, but I knew if we were meant to be we would have fought to make our marriage work"
"No I blame myself, and don't tell me you don't think we can put the past in the past and move on and make whatever years we have left on this earth the best years of our life"
Sue Ellen touched his cheek, and whispered, "I don't know what to say JR"
JR smiled, "Well I still have to come up with 6 more reasons so don't say anything until I am finished."
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Post by Sanda on Jun 23, 2014 22:18:00 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. JR and Sue Ellen are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I love that JR admitted that he made a huge mistake when he let Sue Ellen walk out of the movie theatre and out of his life. I can't wait to find out what JR's six other reasons are going to be. I hope you update this story again really soon.
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Post by melinda on Jul 5, 2014 18:12:13 GMT -6
so beautiful, this is definitely a favorite, sigh, I miss Larry. Keep writing, these are wonderful
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Post by jessie on Aug 11, 2014 1:08:58 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Sue Ellen sat down and JR sat in his chair. Sue Ellen could see JR was a little tired. He couldn't move around like he use to but he still was making her heart race just by him being near her. She always told herself she had to put JR out of her mind but that never happened. She was fooling herself if she didn't admit that everyday of her life she has thought of JR Ewing one way or another. The hurt and anger was there but there was always a deep love that no matter what happened she could never let that love go. She sure didn't want to admit that to JR but in her heart she knew he knew. She was having fun with him but she really would love to know the other 6 reasons he would come up with. She smiled at JR who she could see was trying to think of something clever to say to her and it made her love him even more.
"JR I am waiting what is number 6"
JR sat for a minute his mind was going through the good times they had but the times he knew broke her heart were winning over. He loved Sue Ellen but really does he deserve spending time with her. He was just about to say maybe this was a bad idea when he remembered something and he just started to talk.
"You remember that time you brought John Ross over to visit me after we were divorced. I wanted John Ross to stay after I lost my Father and you really were not sure it was a great idea. I could see you were conflicted but I needed my son more than ever, and you knew it. You let him stay and you stayed too. I remember after John Ross ran off to go to bed, and you leaned down to kiss me. This might sound kind of corny coming from old JR but it was the kiss I remembered everyday while I was in that home Bobby put me in. I never had the right to ask you for anything but what you did for me that day I will never forget. I know it isn't a reason really but I just remember that moment, and I wanted to thank you for it"
Sue Ellen's eyes fill up with tears she wasn't able to speak. She remembered that moment too. It was the moment that she saw JR vulnerable. The way he needed John Ross by his side and how he was hurting over the loss of Jock. She kissed him because at that moment he was the husband she had dreamed of him being. She would do anything for JR but sometimes it was like he just couldn't love one person. She knew in her heart he loved her but she never understood why he cheated so many times. She blamed herself over and over and than she went to drinking to block out all the hurt. She knew what she did to herself was her own fault. She stayed she tried to make her marriage work, and she turned out almost the same as him. She cheated and wanted him to hurt and she knew he hurt but she couldn't go up against JR Ewing he would always win in the end. She knew so much time has been wasted but she also knew the past would always be there for her but she loved him. She was confused the JR sitting in front of her was someone she hoped would wake up one day and realize she was the only woman for him. She also knew they both were getting older and getting close to him, and losing him might throw her over the edge. She was so conflicted she knew this was only a date that he wanted but deep in her heart she knew he wanted more, and if she was honest with herself she did to.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 11, 2014 1:29:40 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. JR and Sue Ellen are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. This chapter made me tear up. I love reason #6 that you posted for why Sue Ellen should take JR back. I love that scene between jR, John Ross, and Sue Ellen on the show from the episode The Search. I will post that scene on my Dailymotion page tomorrow. I love this JR and Sue Ellen story you are writing and posting board. I love al of yours and Melinda's stories you are both writing and posting on my message board.
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Post by jessie on Aug 12, 2014 0:00:41 GMT -6
Chapter 8
JR smiled as he said, "Sue Ellen where did you go"?
"Pardon" Sue Ellen said as JR said, "Did you hear a word I said a moment ago"?
"Yes of course I was just thinking about your Father and how hard it was on all of us when he passed away. Your Father was a wonderful man and I know when he passed away it was the worst time of your life"
"Yes it was and when my Mother passed away it hurt knowing I let them down so often"
"Jock was proud of you JR and your Mother loved you too. I am sure they were disappointed in both of us at times. I am glad John Ross had them both when we were fighting and making a mockery of our marriage"
"Lets not talk about this now it will ruin this moment"
"Moment" Sue Ellen said wanting to laugh
JR took his hat off and said, "I have 5 more reasons to get through for this date. I have a really great reason 5 for you"
"I can't wait to hear what it is JR"
"Well my heart is not as good as it was before. I can't take much rejection and it would break my heart if you turned me down after I tried so hard to get this date. I swear I have no other motive just to have a nice dinner with you Sugar"
Sue Ellen couldn't help but laugh but she said, "That was a good one JR you basically are telling me you can't take rejection because your heart is not as strong as it use to be. I think Bobby told me it was a problem with your mind you were not acting yourself. You were saying things but one good thing about you your heart was still healthy there was no problem there"
JR smiled, "Bobby has a big mouth but it would break my heart. I am getting old Sue Ellen, and I really would like to have a nice evening with you so we can talk and just have a wonderful time"
Sue Ellen was about to say she would go out with him but she was not going to let him off so easy. She smiled as she said, "Well four more reasons and you will find out if I will accept or not"
JR smiled as his mind was trying to think of four more things to say to her.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 12, 2014 0:31:41 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. JR and Sue Ellen are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I love reason number 6 that JR came up with for Sue Ellrn. I can't wait to find out what JR's 4 other reasons are going to be as to why they should go out on a date together. I love this JR and Sue Ellen story you are writing and posting on my mesage board. I love all of yours and Melinda's stories you both write and post on my message board, I hope you this story again really soon.
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Post by melinda on Aug 28, 2014 17:12:50 GMT -6
you write the best JR/SE stories!@ this is your best one ever, and you write a lot of great ones. honest, real and heartfelt moments which we never got to see. good job Jessie
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