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Post by Sanda on Jan 10, 2008 18:20:06 GMT -6
Part 4 One week laterEwing Oil Bobby has been coming into the office for everyday for the past week much to Pam's dismay since all of the secretaries quit becuase of JR and Cliff's outlandish behavior. Pam has been very understanding becuase she understands that Cliff and JR have a lot of personal issues that go way back. Bobby tells JR and Cliff that he is leaving the office for an hour to take Pam and the kids out for lunch. As Bobby is getting ready to walk out the door to the elevator Pam and the kids come with a picnic lunch for Bobby which consists of hot dogs, potato chips, cookies, and soda. Bobby, Pam and the kids eat the picnic lunch on the floor in Bobby's office. Bobby and Pam talk about the Oil Baron's Ball being the following night and about how excited they are about going to the Oil Baron's Ball. As Pam is getting ready to leave with the kids, Bobby tells her that he will take her and the kids out for dinner to the Oil Baron's Club after he gets off from work. Christopher and Ellie Rebecca tell their Daddy that they are excited about going to the Oil Baron's Club becuase they get to dress up for dinner. Galleria MallMiss Ellie and Mavis Anderson are have a late lunch at a Mexican restuarant. They have just finished picking up their dresses for the Oil Baron's Ball. They discuss about how much they are looking forward to the Oil Baron's Ball tomarrow night. Miss Ellie and Mavis also talk about all the secretaries quitting at Ewing Oil and about how stressed out Bobby is about having to play referee at Ewing Oil between JR and Cliff. Miss Ellie also tells Mavis that Bobby recently bought Ellie Rebecca a horse. Miss Ellie also tells Mavis that Bobby and Pam are going to have a baby and that Pam owns The Store. Oil Baron's ClubWhile Pam, Ellie Rebecca and Christopher are waiting for Bobby to show up for dinner they run into Clayton and Miss Ellie. Miss Ellie and Clayton tell Pam and the kids that they decided to eat out becuase JR has been a barricuda to live with since all of the secretaries quit. When Bobby shows up for dinner he is soo happy to see Clayton and Miss Ellie along with Pam and their children. During dinner Marilee Stone shows up asks if the rumor is true that all of the secretaries quit at Ewing Oil because they couldn't work with JR and Cliff . Bobby tells Marilee Stone, "Yes, It is true, but they are working on getting new secretaries." After dinner at the Oil Baron's Club, Clayton, Miss Ellie, Bobby, Pam. Ellie Rebecca, and Christopher go back to Bobby and Pam's house so they can spend some time talking and playing with the children before they go to sleep. Next Day- Day of the Oil Baron's Ball Bobby and Pam's houseBobby and Pam are finishing getting ready for the Oil Baron's Ball when Ellie Rebecca and Chritopher come running into the room to tell their parents "Good Night" and that they hope they have a wonderful time at the Oil Baron's Ball. While Bobby and Pam walk their children to their bedroom, Pam stops them in the hall to tell them that the baby is kicking and she wants them to feel the baby kicking. I have to end part 4 of the story here becuase I have to go and eat dinner. I'll be back after dinner to finish the rest of this part of the story. ;D
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Post by Sanda on Jan 10, 2008 19:50:04 GMT -6
This rest of part 4 as promised. ;D
Bobby is really excited about feeling the baby inside of Pam since he missed out on feeling Ellie Rebecca kicking inside of Pam. Ellie Rebecca and Christopher are also really excited to feel the baby kicking as well. After Bobby and the children feel the baby kicking Bobby and Pam walk the children to their bedrooms and tuck them in for the night. Bobby and Pam walk out of their children rooms, Pam grabs her purse and they go and tell Louise that they are leaving for the Oil Baron's Ball.
Southfork Ranch
Clayton, Miss Ellie, JR, Sue Ellen, Donna and Ray are in the Southfork living room relaxing before the ball when Mavis and Punk Anderson walk in and they leave for the ball.
Oil Barons Ball
Bobby, Pam, Clayton, Miss Ellie, JR, Sue Ellen, Punk, and Mavis have a wonderful time at the Oil Baron's Ball. Sly, Kendell, Jackie, and Phyliss decide not to come to the ball becuase they don't want to hear all of the fighting between JR and Cliff.
JR and Cliff get into a huge fight over the all of the secretaries quitting at Ewing Oil and they throw pies all over each other. While JR and Cliff are fighting Punk Anderson announces the reciepant of the Jock Ewing Memorial Scholorships at SMU. Bobby and Pam go up to the podium after Punk announces the recipients of the Jock Ewing Memorial Scholorsip to let everyone know that they are going to have a baby.
JR and Cliff continue to fight with pie all over their faces when Clayton Farlow annouces the award for Oil Man of Year which is being given joinly to JR Ewing and Cliff Barnes for making history in the Dallas Oil Community for Ewing Oil to be the first oil company where all the secretaries quit becuase their bosses act like school children. Jackie, Kendell, Sly and Phyliss walk in after the announcement of Oil Man of The Year and everyone at the ball stares at JR and Cliff fighting.
End of Part 4 ;D
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Post by tammie on Jan 11, 2008 5:39:43 GMT -6
Sanda, I just can't stop smiling. It is very well written. With all the small touchs that make you just keep falling in Love with this couple. Made me LOL and think thats so sweet. Oustanding job! Can't wait to see what else happens.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 11, 2008 17:43:10 GMT -6
Sanda, I just can't stop smiling. It is very well written. With all the small touchs that make you just keep falling in Love with this couple. Made me LOL and think thats so sweet. Oustanding job! Can't wait to see what else happens. Tammie, I am soo happy that you like all of small touches that I have added to my story. The one thing I didn't like on Dallas was that Pam whined or complained all the time that Bobby wouldn't look at her or Christopher or she would shove him off when he would try to deal with their problems or try to pay attention to her after she complained he was ignoring her. I am trying hard to write them the way should have been written. I still LOVE Bobby and Pam we had on the show.
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Post by ChrisEwing2003 on Jan 14, 2008 23:12:10 GMT -6
Keep up the great work Sanda This story is fantastic
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Post by Sanda on Jan 15, 2008 11:56:19 GMT -6
Keep up the great work Sanda This story is fantastic Thank you for wonderful comments about my story Jeff.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 22, 2008 20:42:19 GMT -6
Finally an update to my story! ;D Part 5 Part A Oil Baron's BallBobby has a flashback to the Oil Baron's Ball where JR announced his and Jenna engagement in front of Pam and everyone at the Oil Baron's Ball. Bobby gets up from the table and goes over to JR and says this punch is for humuliting me and Pam in front all of our friends at the Oil Baron's Ball. Miss Ellie then gets up from her chair and tells everyone at the ball that she ashamed to know JR, Cliff, and Bobby when they acting like neantherthals. Clayton, Miss Ellie, Jackie, Sly, Phyliss and Jackie all leave the Oil Baron's Ball becuase they are ashamed to be associated with Bobby,. JR and Cliff. Ten minutes later after the fighting is over the music starts up again. Bobby hands the musicians a tape of Vince Gill's song Look At Us. Bobby asks Pam for a dance and they dance to the song. While they are dancing, Bobby apolizes to Pam for the way that he, Cliff and JR acted at the Ball. He also tells Pam that he sorry that their date to the ball was a disaster and that he wanted it to be perfect since it was their first Oil Baron's Ball together since they got remarried. Pam tells Bobby that she was just happy that they went to the ball together. Southfork RanchJR, Sue Ellen, Miss Ellie, talk about the events of the Oil Baron's ball while JR is nursing a Black Eye from the punch that Bobby gave him at the Oil Baron's Ball. Miss Ellie tells JR that she hopes that Bobby throws him and Cliff out of Ewing Oil forever for their behavior at the Oil Baron's Ball. Miss Ellie and Clayton go up to bed. JR then gets on the phone and calls Harry McSween and asks him to have Cliff Barnes followed 24 hours a day. Donna and Ray's HouseDonna and Ray talk about how lucky they are that they aren't involved in Ewing Oil. They also talk about how bad they feel for Bobby having to deal with JR and Cliff all day at the office. Donna and Ray then go and check in on Margaret before they go to bed. Bobby and Pam's HouseBobby and Pam arrive home from the Oil Baron's Ball and they tell Louise "Good Night" and that she can go home. Bobby and Pam walk up stairs and check in on their children before retiring to their room for the night. A couple of hours later Bobby hears Ellie Rebecca crying from her room. Pam is asleep and Bobby quietly gets up and puts on his bathroom and goes into Ellie Rebecca's Room to check in on her. Bobby asks Ellie Rebecca "What is wrong and why are you crying?" Ellie Rebecca tells her Daddy that she scared that Aunt Katherine is going to come and take her Daddy away from her and her Mommy. Bobby tells Ellie Rebecca that no one is going to come and take her or her momma away from him and Christopher. Ellie Rebecca asks her Daddy to lay down with her and sleep with her becuase she doesn't want to let her Daddy out of her site. Bobby lays down beside Ellie Rebecca and she falls a sleep on Bobby's chest holding her doll. Pam walks in on Bobby and Ellie Rebecca asleep in Ellie's Rebecca's bed. Pam walks over to them and kisses them on the forehead and covers them up with blanket. End of Part 5 Part A
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Post by tammie on Jan 22, 2008 20:58:58 GMT -6
Sanda, Outstanding! Love the fight! Love the Ellie falling asleep on her daddys chest! So sweet! Loved Ray and Donna! It's outstanding, it gets better and better. Can't wait to see what else happens. Tammie
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Post by Sanda on Jan 22, 2008 23:11:00 GMT -6
Sanda, Outstanding! Love the fight! Love the Ellie falling asleep on her daddys chest! So sweet! Loved Ray and Donna! It's outstanding, it gets better and better. Can't wait to see what else happens. Tammie Tammie, I am soo happy that you loved the update to my story. I really enjoy reading all of your wonderful comments about my story.
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Post by ChrisEwing2003 on Jan 23, 2008 13:37:55 GMT -6
excellent job Sanda.
I love it that Bobby punches J.R., hopefully both Cliff and J.R. will grow up
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Post by Sanda on Jan 23, 2008 20:08:54 GMT -6
excellent job Sanda. I love it that Bobby punches J.R., hopefully both Cliff and J.R. will grow up Jeff, IMO JR deserved to be punched for announcing Bobby and Jenna's engagement at the Oil Baron's Ball in 1984. ;D Thank you for the wonderful comments about my fanfiction.
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Post by americanlife on Jan 26, 2008 15:26:47 GMT -6
Hi Sanda! Please do not stop continuing your story! This story keeps it original Dallas-style! I like that the childrens grow up and the have storylines with their parents! Excellent idea! I love that the basic elements are in your story: Cliff and JR s fight, flashbacks to the early years, and the basic characters. I would like more storylines for Ray, Donna and Sue Ellen. Lucy and Jenna were not mentioned. How about them? I would like to read at least a mention about them! I like that the basic couples alive: JR-Sue Ellen, Bobby-Pam, Ellie-Clayton, Donna-Ray. But who is the pair of Cliff? I am very inpatient what is going to happen. You mentioned Katherine...I am looking forward to reading the following parts. Please do not make me waiting for it:) AmericanLife
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Post by Sanda on Jan 31, 2008 13:01:33 GMT -6
Hi Sanda! Please do not stop continuing your story! This story keeps it original Dallas-style! I like that the childrens grow up and the have storylines with their parents! Excellent idea! I love that the basic elements are in your story: Cliff and JR s fight, flashbacks to the early years, and the basic characters. I would like more storylines for Ray, Donna and Sue Ellen. Lucy and Jenna were not mentioned. How about them? I would like to read at least a mention about them! I like that the basic couples alive: JR-Sue Ellen, Bobby-Pam, Ellie-Clayton, Donna-Ray. But who is the pair of Cliff? I am very inpatient what is going to happen. You mentioned Katherine...I am looking forward to reading the following parts. Please do not make me waiting for it:) AmericanLife Mark, thank you for all the wonderful comments about my story. I am sorry that I haven't had a chance to update my story but I had a family member that got seriously ill last weekend and I haven't been able to concentrate on my story. I'll have an update to my storyline later today, I promise.
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Post by Sanda on Jan 31, 2008 17:58:54 GMT -6
Part 2 of Part 5 as promised. ;D The morning after the Oil Baron's BallEwing OilCliff and JR are at the office bright and early arguing and battling it out over all of their issues. Both of them are also discussing the what is in the Dallas Morning Newspaper. JR and Cliff notice that they made the front page of the newspaper. The front page of the paper says JR and Cliff throw pies at each other at the Oil Baron's Ball with a picture of JR and Cliff with pie all over their faces. Bobby and Pam's HousePam and Christopher are in their PJ's sitting at the table waiting for Bobby and Ellie Rebecca to come down to breakfast. Pam is reading the newspaper and she can't believe that JR and Cliff and thier pie fight at the Oil Baron's Ball made the newspaper. Bobby and Ellie Rebecca finally come down in their PJ's to eat breakfast. Pam shows Bobby the front page of the newspaper. They talk about the Oil Baron's Ball the night before. Bobby tells Pam that he is going to get rid of JR and Cliff from Ewing Oil and put Donna in charge of the company, like he did after he was shot. Bobby also tells Pam that he going to recommend to JR and Cliff that they go to Dr. Elby or Dr. Conrad for psychiratric help. Pam tells Bobby that she hopes that putting Donna in charge of Ewing Oil will free up Bobby so he can concrete on her, the children and the baby on the way and on Bobby's dream of becoming a rancher. Bobby and Pam also talk to the kids about playing with them in pool after they go to work at Ewing Oil and The Store. Southfork RanchMiss Ellie and Clayton are enjoying a nice quiet breakfast at Southfork without JR. Sue Ellen and John Ross are also eating breakfast with them. Donna and Ray's HouseDonna, Ray and Margaret are just finishing up breakfast when Bobby comes by visit with them. Margaret runs up to her Uncle Bobby and gives him a big hug and a kiss. Donna send Margaret to play with her toys so that she and Ray can talk to Bobby. Bobby, Donna and Ray discusss way happened last night at the Oil Baron's Ball. They can't believe that JR and Cliff's fight at the Oil Baron's Ball made the newpaper. Bobby asks Donna to run Ewing Oil for him like she did after he was shot. Donna says that she will be more than happy to run Ewing Oil for him. Bobby also informs Donna that he is going to fire JR and Cliff from Ewing Oil. Donna says that she will try to get all the secretaries to come back to work at Ewing Oil. Bobby tells Donna and Ray good bye and that he will see Donna at the office bright and early the next morning. As Bobby is driving away from Donna and Ray's house a mysterious starts to follow Bobby to Ewing Oil. The StorePam is very busy at The Store checking over the layout for the fall catalogue. This is a very busy time of the year at The Store becuase they are getting ready for the Christmas holiday shopping season. Bobby calls Pam from his car phone and asks her go out to lunch with him at the Oil Baron's Club. Bobby also tells Pam that he is on his way to Ewing Oil to tell JR and Cliff that they are fired. On the way to Ewing Oil Bobby is being followed by a mysterious car all the way from Donna and Ray's house to Ewing Oil. Ewing Oil Bobby walks in to the Ewing Oil building and goes up the elevator to his office. He calls Harry McSween on the telephone and asks him to check out the number of the licensce plate that has been following from Donna and Ray's house to Ewing Oil. Bobby then gets on his intercom and calls JR and Cliff in to his office. Bobby tells JR and Cliff that he is very embarrassed about what JR and Cliff did at the Oil Baron's Ball last night and that it made the newspaper. Bobby also tells JR and Cliff that they are fired and that he wants them out of the building by the time that he gets back from lunch with Pam. He also tells that they can't come back into the building. Bobby also informs them that Donna will be running Ewing Oil. Bobby doesn't even give JR and Cliff a chance to open their mouths. ;D Bobby also tells JR and Cliff that he going to call either DR Conrad or Dr Elby to and set up an appointment for both them to see a shrink. JR and Cliff just stare at each other with their mouth's open as Bobby walks out the door. Oil Baron's ClubBobby and Pam meet for lunch at the Oil Baron's Club. Bobby tells Pam about the mystery car that has been following him every where. Bobby also tells Pam that he called Harry McSween to investigate the licscence plates of the car who has been following him. Bobby also tells Pam Ellie Rebecca is scared that Katherine is going to come back and take Bobby away from her and that was the reason why he slept with her last night. Bobby and Pam decide to hire a body guard to go with them and children everywhere they go until they out who is following Bobby. Bobby and Pam also talk about how things are going at their jobs and about the children. After lunch Bobby and Pam go back to work at The Store and TEwing Oil. 2 mysterious cars follow Bobby and Pam to The Store and Ewing OilEwing OilPam calls Bobby to tell her that she scared out of wits because she saw a mysterious car following her from the Oil Baron's Club to The Store. Bobby tells Pam that a mysterious car also followed him from The Oil Baron's Club to Ewing Oil. They both wonder if Katherine is following them or having someone follow them. After Bobby gets off the phone he calls the house to check on the kids and Louise says that they are fine. Louise also tells Bobby that a mysterious car was following her and children as well after she picked them from school. Bobby tells Louise that he he is going be hiring Body Guards to watch the house and go with her and Angela everywhere when they the take the children some where. Bobby gets off the phone and calls Pam to let her know that a mysterious car was following Louise and the kids. Bobby then call a local body guard agency and hires several body guards to follow him and his family. he gives the body guard the addresses of The Store, Ewing Oil and his house so that a body guard can be put in place to follow him and his family everywhere they go. Southfork RanchClayton and Miss Ellie are in the living room talking about the events last night at the Oil Baron's Ball and about JR and Cliff making the front page of the newspaper. JR comes walking in and tells them about stupid Bobby firing him and Cliff. Clayton and Miss Ellie stand up and both tell JR that they don't want hear about his problems. Suddenly Miss Ellie faints in Clayton's arms. End of Part 5.
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Post by tammie on Jan 31, 2008 21:07:56 GMT -6
OMG!!! OMG!!! The Drama, The Mystery, The Wonder. Oh this is a Great Cliff Hanger! Bobby, Pam and The Childern. Miss Ellie I'm worried. If that what you were aiming for you hit a bulleye! JR and Cliff getting fired priceless. Them seeing a Dr. That's funny. Donna running Ewing Oil . I know I said this before. But really this just gets better and better. Like a fine bottle of wine. 10/10 Outstanding!! Thanks for writing it!
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