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Post by jessie on Jan 2, 2012 12:50:43 GMT -6
Brokeback Mountain Christmas Chapter 6
Ennis and Jack were eating breakfast, it was cold, but the wind wasn't that bad. Jack smiled as Ennis asked him if he liked his breakfast.
"Yeah but porridge reminds me of baby food"
"Sorry I didn't want to bring up stuff that could spoil"
"No this is good "
"Well it gives you a lot of energy they say"
"Ennis what do I need energy for"?
"I thought we could go hiking, we never done it in the winter before"
"We didn't do it in the summer before either, I was at camp while you were out tending to the sheep"
"Well there is always a first time what do you say"?
"I'm game if you are"
They cleaned up putting the food away, they didn't want to attract animals, so they made sure all the food was up, and not out in the open. They dressed warm, and started off on their hike. They knew no one would come by, and take any of the gear this place was always quiet, no one came up here unless they worked up here, so they knew their supplies would be safe. They would be back before evening, but they brought some water, and food for lunch, and a snack. Jack and Ennis took turns holding the bag, they were walking for what felt like forever. They were not so cold, but exhausted as they got up higher, and higher on the mountain. Jack sat down, "I need a rest, I'm exhausted, God how far have we walked"?
"Not sure but far, but I feel great"
"Ennis how do you have so much energy, I feel like crap"
"Because I walk all the time, I walk for miles everyday, just to clear my mind"
"Really walking doesn't really do anything for me"
"Does me it clears my mind, and I also think of you Jack"
"Naughty thoughts"?
"Sometimes, but mostly I worried about you. I wondered what you were up to, and if you missed me half as much as I missed you"
"Oh I missed you Ennis, I missed you bad"
Ennis grabbed a snowball, and threw it hitting Jack with it.
"What did you do that for"?
"I don't know I never had a snow fight before, I just felt like starting one"
"What are you two"?
"No"
Jack grabbed a snowball, and threw it at Ennis, and before they knew it they were throwing snowballs at each other. They both were laughing so hard, as they both fall to the ground laughing. They stare at each other, and kiss, for the longest time.
"Ennis we better stop or I'm making love out in the open"
"Your complaining about getting cold, I think that would be a bad idea" Ennis got up , knocking the snow off his pants. He turned pointing but Jack whispered, "You have a nice Butt Ennis you fill out those jeans just fine"
"Stop looking at my butt, and get your pretty butt up before your all wet, and freeze to death" Jack got up walking over to Ennis, "Well you would have to warm me up than"
"Jack you are bad" They both laugh as they decided to walk back to the tent it was getting late, and they didn't want to lose their way in the dark.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 2, 2012 14:46:38 GMT -6
this was very good. I liked the idea of them hiking very romantic, you should def keep writing these they are becoming your specialty
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Post by Sanda on Jan 2, 2012 15:10:35 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I LOVE how romantic Jack and Ennis were with each other while they were hiking. I hope you update this awesome story again soon.
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Post by jessie on Mar 1, 2012 1:39:12 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Ennis and Jack were walking back it was really cold. Ennis was fine but Jack was really cold. Ennis wrapped his arms around him, and said they were almost back to the tent.
"I really need to invest in a better winter coat"
"Yes you should, you never were good at judging the weather"
" I'm a great judge at picking an amazing guy"
"You didn't pick me we just fell in love"
'You really love me Ennis, because I have loved you from the first moment we met. I remember when I saw you my heart skipped a beat, you were a sight for sore eyes"
"Oh stop talking this way Jack"
"When did you know you loved me Ennis"?
" I was married, and I really wanted to make my marriage work. I never slept with a man before, but I knew somewhere inside of me, I was not happy with my life. I loved my Wife, and I adored my girls, but I was missing something, and I know now it was you"
"Me"Jack smiled but his eyes filled up with tears.
"I'm crying I know that is probably turning you off at this moment"
" Not at all" Ennis touched Jack's shoulder, and said they better get going or they would freeze to death out here in the cold. Ennis and Jack walked back to the campsite, Jack went into the tent as Ennis started a fire so they could cook some soup for dinner. Ennis was getting dinner ready as Jack came out, and helped him. Ennis smiled as he noticed Jack was wearing one of his sweaters.
'You didn't bring sweaters either did you Jack"?
"I did but I wanted to wear yours"
"Grab the soup Jack" He grabbed the soup can, and the opener, and walked over to Ennis. They were sitting there smiling, and talking to each other. Ennis handed Jack some soup, and grabbed a bowl for himself. They were eating it, and it warmed them up good. Jack was looking at Ennis he loved his smile his eyes were looking at him. Jack was warm but it wasn't from the fire it was from just being close to Ennis, and wanting to make love to him. Ennis moved over close to Jack, and pulled him close. Jack laid his head on Ennis's shoulder as they got warm by the fire. They didn't talk much they just felt content holding each other. It was 1/2 hour later Ennis said they should go into the tent. Jack told him to keep the fire going it would keep the wild animals away. Jack thought it would be fine since the tent wasn't real close to the fire. Ennis and Jack walked over to the tent, and went inside. Jack sat down on the sleeping blanket as Ennis was pulling off his boots. He was laughing as he had a hard time, and Jack was trying to help him get them off. Jack feel backward as Ennis's boot came flying off. Ennis sat down beside Jack as they both laid back, and looked into each others eyes. Jack leaned on Ennis's chest , and whispered, " You tired Ennis"?
"A little you must be that walk was long"
'It was it sure did give me a appetite"
'You had soup are you still hungry"?
"Not for food"
"Oh Jack you are to much"
Jack touched Ennis's shirt, and started to unbutton it. Ennis just watched Jack, he loved being with him, but he was scared what would happen when they got back in the real world. This was like a fairytale, and they were alone, and they were happy. He remembered the day his Daddy showed him what happens to men that are not normal. He knew he was normal but his Father would roll over in his grave if he saw him now. A part of him hoped he could because what he did to Ennis all these years was horrible, and sick. Ennis knew he was different inside, and he knew his own Father would disown him so he lived a life of lies. He married liked he was suppose to, and look what happened now he hurt his wife, but he got two amazing girls out of it. He didn't know if they would accept Jack, but he knew if they didn't it would kill him. He knew Jack, and Ennis would live a life of heartache while they were out as a couple, but together they would be content because they were together no matter what. He knew if the girls couldn't accept it he may have to give up Jack, and the thought of that made him ill.
Jack could see Ennis was distracted, and he wondered what he did wrong?
"Ennis you are so tense what is wrong"?
'Nothing just thinking back when I was a boy, and my Father took me to see something so horrible, and sick"
"What"?
"It doesn't matter the only thing that matters is can we handle what people will say"?
"I can do anything as long as we are together"
"I love you for that Jack but there is people out there that may hurt us are you prepared for that"?
Jack jumped up, 'God are you trying to say this will never work. You told me you wanted to be with me, and we were going to tell your girls about us. You are having second thoughts now, how am I suppose to feel"?
Jack didn't wait for an answer he walked out of the tent, and sat by the fire. Ennis laid back, he hated himself he hurt Jack but he was scared , and he hated himself for it. He wished he was like Jack, but he knew if someone hurt Jack because of him it would kill him.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 3, 2012 19:53:46 GMT -6
very good update, glad you updated, you write this very well. it is a favorite of mine
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Post by jessie on Mar 4, 2012 15:35:23 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Ennis finally got up, and walked out to Jack. He knelt down, and touched Jack's shoulder.
"Go to bed Ennis, I'm fine"
" I don't think your fine Jack, I'm sorry if I upset you"
"You are a coward Ennis, one minute you want me, the next you don't. Make up your mind is it over after this trip or do we have a future together."?
"I'm no coward, God do you have any idea how the last couple of years has been for me"?
"You what about me , I have loved you, and I have wanted you Ennis. I don't care what the world thinks, and if someone hurts us because we love each other so be it. I could get killed tomorrow , but if I got to spend one day with you in the real world as your partner it would be worth it"
"Really I for one don't want to see you hurt because some freak out there decides to take justice out on us because we are different"
"We are not different we love each other, who cares if we are both men, I don't"
"Jack you are a romantic but I have seen with my own eyes what evil lurks out there. I'm scared to death , but I would do it for you, but are you really prepared for what is going to happen? It will be horrible we will be treated like outcasts. We will live our lives like we have some disease, we will be banned from bars, and restaurants. I only care about two things Jack my girls, and you. I can handle anything that they do to me, but if they hurt you or my girls I will die. I can't deal with that, I would die"
Jack walked over touching Ennis's face, and whispered, "We can do it together. I am not a fool, and I know it will be hard, but together we can do anything. I don't think anyone will hurt your girls, they are innocent"
"Yes they are , I'm so afraid they will never understand"
"That their Dad is happy truly happy, I'm what you need"
Ennis smiled, "You are a romantic but yes you are what I need. It is cold out here, can we go back into the tent"?
"Yes, I can warm you up or just hold you whatever you need Ennis"
"I need you Jack, I'm so sorry I hurt your feelings"
"I'm a bit sensitive , I understand why your afraid, but I don't want to live my life afraid , and alone anymore"
"I don't either Jack, lets get under the blankets" They walk in , Jack closed the tent as Ennis pulled off his pants, and jumped under the blankets. Jack removed his pants, and got under the blanket, and leaned over kissing Ennis.
"Ennis , I have never loved anyone like I love you"
"Your son "
"I don't even know my boy well, I was basically banned from his life."
"That is so wrong Jack you would make a wonderful Father"
"I tried he is adorable"
"One day Jack you will see him again, you have to".
Jack touched Ennis's cheek, and whispered, "We will meet him together someday, but right now, I so want to kiss you".
"What are you waiting for"? Ennis said as Jack brought his mouth over his, and they kissed for so long, they both had to stop to catch their breaths. Ennis pulled Jack closer, as they kiss again, and before long they were making love, and after they finished they were so warm, and content, and so happy they fell asleep in each others arms, only hoping their future would be this easy.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 4, 2012 23:49:32 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. Jack and Ennis are so cute and adorable together in your story. I hope that things work out for Jack and Ennis when they return to the real world. I really need to see the movie Brokeback Mountain again really soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 6, 2012 7:30:43 GMT -6
this is so good I love how you write these characters please keep going
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Post by jessie on Jun 24, 2013 1:12:52 GMT -6
Chapter 9
The next morning Jack woke up, and Ennis was outside just staring at the land. This was their last day here they had to go back to their regular life, and it scared Ennis. He just knew no one would accept them but for Jack he was willing to try. He jumped when Jack touched his shoulder.
"Ennis you OK"?
"Yes I was thinking today is our last day here, I really wish we could stay here forever but I know we can't. I'm a coward Jack because I'm scared to death Jack"
"I'm scared too Ennis but we have to do this or we will be living a lie. I would rather die than go on living the life I have been living. I count the days I can be with you, and die the minute you leave me again. I can't give you up Ennis please say you will do this for us"
Ennis touched Jack's cheek, and whispered, "I will for you Jack"
Jack smiled, "We have the day to finish up what we have to do. I know you are scared but look at me, and I promise you no matter what I will be by your side every step of the way"
Ennis smiled, "I wish we lived in a different time or different place where we don't have to be so afraid. I know what we have is the real deal, I just hope my kids accept us because if they don't it will hurt"
"Hush they love you Ennis but you know it will be hard at first but I'm sure they will accept us"
Ennis smiled, 'God you have so much faith I wish I did"
"We should start packing than we can go for a long walk, and say goodbye to this place. I'm sure we will not be asked to come back here together again"
"I'm sure your right"
Jack walked to the tent Ennis followed as they packed up their things, and belongings, and put them in the trucks. They put the camp fire out than they held hands, and went for their walk. They stopped by the Cliff, and looked over the most amazing, and peaceful land. They knew they would be back someday just the two of them to maybe have a weekend alone. This was their place the place where they fell in love. The place were they forgot about the outside world , and focused on what they needed, and wanted. They wasted so many years out of fear but they had to do this for each other. It could turn out to be the worst mistake of their lives but they at least tried, and that was all that counted. Ennis remembered that horrid day with his Dad when he saw two men beat, and tortured for no reason, and it turned his stomach thinking about it. He never understood why his Father took him there to witness that crime but maybe he knew there was something different about him. He always knew he was missing out on something in his life but he never knew exactly what it was until the day he met Jack. He prayed he would not suffer the same pain, and terror those men did that day many years ago. He hoped he could live a life with Jack but part of him knew it was going to be hard but he was going to face whatever happens with his head up, and he will die fighting for what he lived for, and that was his girls, and Jack.
'Ennis you keep zoning out what is wrong"
"Nothing I think I'm ready to go home, and face whatever happens"
Jack smiled, "Me too lets go"
They walk back to the Trucks, and get inside, and start off home to Ennis's home but it will be Jack's home now too. They both drove all the way there not knowing what was going to happen next but they both knew this was the right thing to do.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 24, 2013 19:28:21 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. Jack and Ennis are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I just hope and pray that things work out for Jack and Ennis when they get back home, face their families and tell them that they are a couple now. I also hope and pray the their families accept them as a couple and that they don't give them any grief now that they are a couple. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 24, 2013 20:51:37 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. Jack and Ennis are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I just hope and pray that things work out for Jack and Ennis when they get back home, face their families and tell them that they are a couple now. I also hope and pray the their families accept them as a couple and that they don't give them any grief now that they are a couple. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon. Thanks Sanda I need to finish this story, I love writing for this couple.
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Post by Sanda on Jun 24, 2013 22:18:11 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. Jack and Ennis are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I just hope and pray that things work out for Jack and Ennis when they get back home, face their families and tell them that they are a couple now. I also hope and pray the their families accept them as a couple and that they don't give them any grief now that they are a couple. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon. Thanks Sanda I need to finish this story, I love writing for this couple. I need to see the movie Brokeback Mountain again really soon. It has been awhile since I have seen this movie.
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Post by melinda on Jun 26, 2013 4:53:09 GMT -6
this is really good, i'm glad you updated this story, it is so well written and makes me want to see the movie again
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Post by jessie on Sept 15, 2013 19:01:17 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Ennis, and Jack got to Ennis's trailer, and parked their trucks, and they got out. Ennis walked over unlocking his Trailer, and he let Jack go in first. Jack was a little shocked it was small but that was Ennis for you he was not a person that cared about material things.
"What Jack is it not what you expected"?
"No it is fine it is a little small will that bed fit us both"?
"You are sleeping on the floor Buddy"
"Yeah like that is going to happen, they both laugh but Ennis said he really didn't have anything to offer him. He was going to have to go shopping but I need to know what you like"
"I like being here next to you , and I don't want to be a burden"
"You are going to live here with me right so how could you be a burden"?
Jack sat on Ennis's bed, and smiled as Ennis walked over to the drawers, and was moving some of his things into the top drawer.
"What are you doing"?
"Making room for you, I am sorry we have only one drawer each, and that closet we can share. I store a lot of my stuff under the bed are you ok with that"?
"I could live out of my suitcase as long as I'm with you"
Ennis walked over, "We have 2 days before my Ex Wife, and girls come home"
"I can see you are worried I know your girls will accept us, I just know it"
"I hope so they are so sweet Jack they are total opposites, but they love me"
"Who wouldn't love you"?
"A lot of people Jack how about you get yourself unpacked, and I will run to the store, and get some food for dinner"
"How about I come with you"?
"No I want to go out you stay here"
Ennis grabbed his wallet but Jack grabbed his arm, and Ennis was staring at him.
"You will not keep me locked up in this trailer Ennis we are going to be Partners in everyway, I am not ashamed of who we are"
"I am not ashamed either but can we keep a low profile until my girls find out about us. I am not ashamed of you, and I am not planning on keeping you locked up here. If you think I'm like that than get your butt in your truck, and go and have a nice life"
"How am I suppose to feel, I will wait here but bring some beer"
"I guess I can manage that would you like a steak for dinner"?
"Sounds great let me give you some money"
"No it is my treat you can help out the next time"
Jack smiled, 'Hurry , and get back here fast maybe we can turn in early what do you say"?
"Are you tired Jack"?
Jack smiled as he moved close , and he wrapped his arms around Ennis's waist as they both kiss passionately. Ennis smiled saying he better go because the store closes at 6. They will starve if he does not go now. Ennis left as Jack walked over laying on the bed as he smiled reaching over hugging Ennis's pillow, and drifted off asleep.
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Post by melinda on Sept 15, 2013 19:34:36 GMT -6
i'm so glad you updated this awesome story. I hope things work out for them!
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