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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 8, 2012 13:54:31 GMT -6
this was fun and cute and sweet hope you update again soon
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Post by Sanda on Oct 8, 2012 18:08:24 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Reid and Luke are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. They should have made love in the rest room and have Henry walk in on them. LOL
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Post by jessie on Oct 28, 2012 13:59:00 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Reid, and Luke came back to the table Chris smiled as Henry sat down too.
"Took you all long enough what was going on in there"?
"Nothing Chris just eat, and mind your own business". Luke said, Reid smiled Luke was blushing, it was kind of cute, and it actually turned Reid on, but he had to behave, but it was going to be hard.
Henry smiled, "They were talking Chris but they were using their lips, if I didn't walk in, I bet we would still be waiting for them out here"
"Oh gross a bathroom"
"Shut up Chris , and Hank be quiet, I swear you have to have the biggest mouth in Oakdale"
"You have to have the biggest ego Reid, you know what I saw"
"Yeah OK I wanted to make love to Luke, and forget about you two jerks out here. I would love to make love to Luke right here, right now but I would be arrested. He has the sweetest lips, and I want to kiss him right here, and right now"
Chris slammed his beer down, and whispered.
"We get the picture enough that is gross"
"Really Chris you jealous"
"Oh my God are you insane"
Reid smiled he loved making Chris feel uncomfortable he deserved it for being such a jerk.
The waitress came over, and asked them if they wanted a another drink.
Reid, Henry, and Chris said a beer, Luke said another Pepsi, she walked away as Reid was eating, but Chris, and Henry were staring at Luke making him feel a little angry.
"What are you staring at , we are in love we were making out in the bathroom nothing happened so get over it"
"Like I would ever do something like that in public". Chris said, and Reid smiled.
"Oh I'm sure you have done plenty of things in public that would be immoral"
"Like what"?
"Enough both of you lets finish dinner, than we have to hang out somewhere for at least 2 hours so Katie will give up this crap about us four being friends. It is obvious it is not going to happen since you all are 3, and I'm the only mature one here"
"Really Luke you acted like a teenage boy in heat in the bathroom, well that is what Henry said anyway". Henry glared at Chris, and Henry whispered.
"Like I will tell you anything again Chris Hughes you make things worse with your fowl mouth"
"I'm just saying Luke is acting all high, and mighty but I bet his Mom, and Grandma would be shocked that he lowered himself to this" . Chris looked at Reid with a smirk
Reid got up, and walked toward the bathroom's, and Luke put his hands to his face.
"What the truth hurts Luke your Parents hate the guy, I heard your Mom badmouthing him to my Mom, she thinks he is ruining her babies life"
"You had to say that to him, Chris you are so cruel"
"He is acting so smug, I can't help it"
Henry jumped up, "I will go get Reid we are going to finish this evening if it kills us. Katie loves you Chris, and she loves that guy in the bathroom not sure why but she does. I know she cares about me, and she wants the four of us to get along. I think for Katie we can try. I will go in, and try to get Reid to come back here but when he does you will shut up Chris , and don't say anything else to Reid unless it is nice, so I guess we won't be hearing from you the rest of the night"
"Who do you think you are Henry Colman"?
"I'm Katie's friend, I will do anything for her will you "?
"Go get the baby, I will be nice, but he better not say anymore rude things to me". Henry walked away, Luke was staring at Chris.
"What"?
"I don't like you right now Chris , and I will not tolerate you bad mouthing Reid anymore. I know Reid can be a jerk sometimes, but he is a good man, and Katie loves him, and if you can not let this thing with Reid go she may end it with you Chris"
"Doubt it Luke she knows a good thing when she sees it"
"Oh my God you are so conceited, it is no wonder Reid can't get along with you"
Chris smiled, and Luke looked to see if Henry, and Reid were coming, he was worried Reid left already, he hoped not because he didn't want Katie to blame Reid for the night being a big waste of time, but it was turning out that way.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 28, 2012 14:14:58 GMT -6
The dialogue was great veru well written
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Post by Sanda on Oct 28, 2012 17:21:10 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I feel horrible for Reid and Luke in this chapter. Henry and Chris were awful to Reid and Luke in this chapter. I hope that Henry will be able to persuade Reid to finish out the evening with Reid, Luke, and Chris.
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Post by jessie on Aug 25, 2013 0:20:38 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Luke was getting nervous Henry and Reid were not coming back.
"Luke I'm sorry Reid brings out the worst in me"
"Chris I love Reid, and it hurts that my Mom will not accept him but for you to say it that was worse"
"I know I kind of feel bad I hope he didn't leave Katie will hate me"
"I will give Henry 5 more minutes than I will go look for them"
"You two in the bathroom again is that a good idea"?
"Will you stop Chris you are relentless"
"I was kidding I'm trying to break the tension between us"
"Stop going out of your way to hurt Reid that would make me happy"
"I will try"
In the Bathrroom
Reid was by the sink washing his hands Henry was talking but Reid had enough.
"Henry go back to the table, I will be out in a few minutes"
"Reid I'm sorry, and I agree Chris was out of line too. I know Katie loves you, and she wants the four of us to get along. I want to give it a try but you have to admit you don't make it easy for any of us"
"You are putting the blame all on me"?
"No see you are putting words in my mouth, I want to make Katie happy. She wants us to have this evening together so please come back to the table if not for Luke than for Katie. She will be heartbroken if we say we can't even have one night together without attacking each other."
"You know I love Katie, and Jacob, and I know Luke wants this night to go well. I thought maybe we could do it but I don't know if we are capable of being friends Henry"
"Can we try you don't have to be my friend but we can tolerate each other for Katie's sake"
"Tolerate now that is a word I can understand I can try to tolerate you, and Chris"
Henry smiled, "Lets go out and eat our food is getting cold"
Reid threw the paper towel in the garbage, and walked out of the bathroom with Henry. Luke saw them coming he pretended to act like he was not worried. Chris kept his mouth shut Reid sat down, and Luke reached over holding his hand.
"I am glad you came back"
"I have not finished my meal " Luke smiled as Reid started to eat while Henry and Chris looked at each other. The four of them were really going to try to get through this night without any more fighting.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 25, 2013 0:49:07 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I loved the talk between Luke and Chris and I also loved the talk between Reid and Henry as well in the washroom. I love that Reid and Hnry are going to tolerate each other and try and be friends for Luke and Katie's sakes. I just hope and pray that Reid, Luke, Henry, and Chris can get through dinner without killing one another. LOL Thank you so much for updating this awesome story for me and keeping Reid and Luke and all of the awesome citizens of Oakdale alive in all of your awesome stories and one shots that you post on my message board.
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Post by melinda on Aug 25, 2013 19:28:09 GMT -6
I am glad they made peace., at least for the moment. well done as always
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Post by jessie on Aug 22, 2014 23:21:47 GMT -6
Chapter 8
They were eating none of them were really talking. It was Chris who spoke up first.
"Reid about earlier I wanted to say I'm sorry I had no right to say those things to you"
"Lets forget about it for tonight I know Luke loves me, and that is all that matters right now"
"So you are not going to tell Katie what I said to you are you"?
Reid smiled, "You scared Chris"?
Luke touched Reid's hand and whispered, "Play nice boys what happened tonight stays between us. I don't want to hurt Katie she wants us to get along. We can be grownups and play nice for one night"
Henry smiled, "We will play nice Luke"
"We need to find something we all can talk about" Luke said making Henry, Chris and Reid look at each other. What could they all talk about that they had in common?
"How about sports"? Chris said making Reid smile he could handle talking about sports and work. Henry and Luke moaned they were not into sports so that was a topic they would like to skip .
"How about movies I could handle talking about celebrities" Luke said making Reid whispered, "Not one of my favourite topics I don't watch to many films."
"Well that will change because I love watching movies" Luke said and Henry said he could talk about Celebrities.
Chris laughed, "Fine lets talk about Celebrities what does everyone think of Sandra Bullock"?
Henry smiled, " She is hot I loved her in Lake House Katie loves that film".
Reid laughed, "Katie made me watch that film, and I fell asleep it is not my type of film."
Chris smiled, "One thing we have in common Lake House was boring" Reid and Chris laugh but Henry smiled, "Fine what film did you like with her in it"?
"Blind Side now that was great and I stayed awake for the whole film" Reid said
"I loved her in The Proposal" Luke said and Henry said that was a great film.
Chris smiled, "Reid what is your favourite film"?
"I don't really have a favourite but I love sports films. The Field of Dreams, Raging Bull, and I love the Rocky films."
"I have not watched any of those films" Luke said making Reid smile, "Well we can watch them together someday, I know you will love the films"
"As long as I can cuddle with you watching them I am sure I will"
"Cuddle are you serious" Chris said making Luke smile
"What you and Katie don't cuddle"?
"Yeah but" He realized he was heading for another fight so he stopped. Reid smiled as he said, "You think two guys cuddling is weird I see."
"No whatever you two are into"
"Man in this day in age people really surprise me" Luke said he was disappointed that Chris was obviously saying two men should not be together.
Henry could see everyone was getting tense he spoke up. "Who wants some dessert it is on me"
Reid smiled, "Your treat well I am having something really sinful, and sweet".
Luke moved close and gave Reid a kiss as Henry looked at Chris giving him a look not to do anything to cause anymore trouble.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 23, 2014 0:18:12 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I love that Reid, Luke, Henry, and Chris were talking about their favorite movies. I could just picture Reid liking films that have to do sports. I love sports films as well. I love that Reid stayed awake during the movie Blindside with Sandra Bullock. Sandra Bullock was outstanding in that film. I am so glad she won the Oscar for that film. I feel bad for Reid and Luke in this chapter because Chris is kind of uncomfortable with Reid and Luke being a couple. I hope things work out between the four of them and that are able to be friends for Katie and Jacob's sake. I love this Reid and Luke story you are writing for me. I hope you update this story for me again really soon.
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