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Post by jessie on Aug 16, 2011 0:08:08 GMT -6
New Story for you Sanda, and guess what Jessie and Melinda are in the story too. I love writing kids in the story, this time Melinda is the Mother, and she has twin daughters Sanda and Jessie. Hope you like the story. This came to my mind, and I have to start it. The twins are 5 years old, I hope you don't mind the storyline Melinda, this is just my imagination. Beware it is going to be a little sad, but it has a happy ending promise.
Chapter 1
Reid was at work at the hospital, he had a really bad day. He was walking to his office when a little girl ran in front of him, almost tripping him.
"Sanda please come back here Sweetie". Reid turned, "You can let a child run around a hospital Mame". Melinda was so scared she walked over, "I'm sorry she is 5 years old her sister hurt herself. We have been waiting 5 hours for someone to see her. I don't have insurance so I guess I have to deal with the wait"
"You don't have insurance"?
"No are you a Doctor"?
"Yes"
"Can you look at her she hurt herself 4 days ago. I think the leg is infected, I bought some ointment but it didn't help". Reid walked over , and knelt down smiling at the little girl.
"What is your name Sweetie"?
"Jessie"
"Do you have a sore leg"?
"Yes it hurts real bad". Reid lifted up her dress, and lifted the bandage. It was really infected, he turned "OMG Mame this is bad"
"Please don't call anyone on me I tried we don't have much money"
"Ma Ma what is wrong"? Melinda lifted Sanda, "I'm sorry for bothering you, we will wait for another Doctor". Reid lifted Jessie up, and told Melinda to follow him. He carried Jessie into the exam room while Melinda carried Sanda. Reid shut the curtain, and laid Jessie down.
"How old is she"?
"They are twins they are 5"
"How did this happen"?
"She fell it was a accident I swear"
"I believe you but you have to take her to a clinic the next time"
"They ask so many questions, but it was closed she seemed to have a fever so I rushed here. "
"I'm going to clean this out, and clean it up, but she needs to rest. She needs to keep this clean, can you manage that"?
Sanda smiled, "We live in a car"
Reid looked at Melinda, "You live in a car"
"Please it is a long story, can you help us"?
"Yes but you can't have 2 small children living on the streets. It isn't safe don't you see that"?
"I can't go home, I left my husband he was abusive"
"Well there is places that can help"
"No there isn't he will hurt them, I'm a good Mother, I'm going to protect them"
"What about Jessie she could die with an infection like this". Sanda ran over, "Mommy I'm scared"
Melinda started to cry, she lifted Sanda. "I don't know why I came here, I knew this would happen. I will take her somewhere else just let me leave please, I beg of you"
"No let me fix her up, than we can talk"
Melinda was shaking Reid was taking care of Jessie. She was so still Melinda was watching as Sanda wrapped her arms around her. Melinda started to back away but she whispered, "Take care of my baby". She turned and ran with Sanda, Reid yelled for her to stop. He touched Jessie's face but she was asleep so he ran out trying to stop Melinda.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 16, 2011 0:13:11 GMT -6
Great start to your new story Jessie. I hope that Reid will be able to help Melinda with her young children Sanda and Jessie. I feel bad for the 3 of them living in a car. Are Reid and Luke an item in this story?
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Post by jessie on Aug 16, 2011 0:35:55 GMT -6
Chapter 2
Reid ran out, and saw Melinda by the elevator. He ran over stopping her from getting on. She was in tears, and he could see she was in shock too.
"Melinda where are you going"?
"I can't let you take my babies"
"Jessie is in there you are leaving her"?
"I can't lose them both your going to call Social services, I'm a good Mother"
"I never said you weren't I'm saying you have to take care of yourself and your babies"
"I'm trying don't you judge me, she got hurt at a shelter. I had my money and clothes stolen there. I am doing my best, I love my kids but I don't know what to do".
Reid touched her face, "Please lets go to Jessie, we will work something out"
"Your going to call Social services right"?
"No please come she might wake up, she would be scared alone"
Melinda went pale as a ghost, "Oh God I left my baby". She ran back to the room Jessie was asleep still. She walked over, "I'm so sorry Jessie Ma Ma is here". Reid walked in shutting the curtain, he told Melinda to sit down with Sanda. He knelt down , "Sweetie how are you doing"?
"I'm hungry, I don't like this place it is yucky"
"Yeah it is lets help Jessie than we will get you something to eat"
"Ok I would like that". Melinda smiled, "I feed them but she needs a snack"
"Do you eat Melinda you are so pale"?
"I'm fine thank you". He got up walking to Jessie, and started to clean the wound. Jessie woke up , and cried for her Mom. Melinda walked over touching her forehead, which made Jessie calm down a bit. Melinda hated seeing her children suffer but staying with her husband would have been worse. Reid cleaned the wound than gave Jessie a shot of antibiotics. He smiled, "She should spend the night but we would have to book her in. They will ask a lot of questions can you handle that"?
"No give me the medication, tell me what to do let me take her home"
"You mean your car"
"Yes for now, I have no where else to go"
"You have no place to stay"?
"No, my family lives in Ohio, I came here after I married my husband. He is not a nice man but he has connections, and money. He will fight to get them from me, and I would rather die than hand him my children"
"Stay with me and my Partner for a couple of days until she is better"
"No I can't impose"
"I'm a Doctor here I'm safe, it is better than living in a car"
"Your Wife would she mind"?
"Well I'm not married, I'm gay Melinda is that ok"?
"Oh of course would he be ok with you bringing 3 strangers home"
"We have a basement apartment we never use. We were going to rent it out, but we haven't yet"
"I can't afford rent Reid"
"I know that please let me help you"
Sanda smiled, "I like him Mommy"
"Me Too Sweetie, thanks Dr. Oliver"
"Reid Melinda"
"Reid".
Reid smiled at Jessie, "Lets get you home, and into some pajamas, and off to sleepy land for Jessie"
No sleepy land". Jessie smiled so cute
Reid smiled, "Ok maybe you can stay up for a little while. I have tomorrow off so we can get you some toys to play with"
"I have a few things Reid". Melinda said shyly
"I know Melinda"
Sanda smiled, "We can use another toy Mommy we only have a few"
Melinda smiled, "Yeah Sweetie". Reid lifted Jessie up, and he told Melinda they could leave after he got his things from his office. She followed him she knew it was strange trusting someone so quick but she trusted Dr. Reid Oliver, and for the first time in a while she thought she had someone that she could trust, and confide in.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 16, 2011 0:46:53 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG I hope that Luke isn't going to be upset with Reid for bringing Melinda, Me, and Jessie to their home. OMG, I feel for Luke when Reid walks in the door with the 3 of us unannouced.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 16, 2011 5:50:02 GMT -6
great start to your story:) I hope Melinda can get back on her feet quickly and hopefully Jessie feels better soon
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Post by jessie on Aug 16, 2011 12:53:12 GMT -6
Chapter 3
Reid phoned Luke before he left the hospital. He said he would explain more when he got home. He just told him to get the bed ready downstairs for Melinda and the kids.
Reid hung up, "He is fine a little confused but ok"
"You sure I don't want to cause problems"
"Melinda it is fine beside your staying with us until this little one is better"
Sanda walked over, "Am I staying with you forever"?
"Well for a while do you like that idea"?
"Yes a lot"
Melinda smiled, "I'm sorry they say whatever comes to their minds"
"I love that lets get going". Jessie put her hands out to Melinda , she lifted her , and Jessie laid her head on her shoulder, and shut her eyes. Reid smiled, "She will be in sleepy land when we get home". Sanda put her hands out to Reid he lifted her, and they walked to the elevator. Reid asked where Melinda's car was? She told him, so they went to the parking lot. He pointed to his car, and she pointed to hers. He walked to hers, and helped the kids in the car. He turned to Melinda, "Promise me you will follow me home, don't run away Melinda"
"I won't they would be devastated"
"Ok let me get my car, I will go slow it isn't that far from here"
"Ok " Reid ran to his car, and Melinda got in hers. Sanda whispered, "Mommy he is nice isn't he"
"Yes Sweetie I hope we are doing the right thing"
Jessie whispered, "Mommy I want a juice"
"Baby I don't have a juice maybe Dr. Oliver will give you one when we get to his place."
"Ok I'm thirsty real bad". Melinda grabbed the water bottle from her purse , and got out opening the back door giving Jessie a drink.
"I don't like water Ma Ma, I want juice"
"This is all I have Angel". Jessie started to cry making Melinda feel horrible. "Mommy will get a job but I need to take care of you, I can't afford a babysitter. Please drink the water it is good for you". Jessie turned away from her, and shut her eyes. Melinda knew she was dehydrated she pulled Jessie close, and gave her a little. She took it but just stared at Melinda.
"Both of you Mommy is doing her best". She started to cry, she got out closing the door, and getting in the drivers seat. Jessie was crying, Melinda looked at Sanda , "Sweetie try to calm her down she is sick she is being"
Sanda laughed, "She is being bad"
"No Mommy " Jessie screamed, Melinda turned, "OMG I can't drive please Jessie stop"
"Mommy I'm not bad". Reid ran over, "Melinda what is the matter, I was waiting"
"She won't stop crying, I don't have a juice what kind of Mother doesn't have a juice box"
Reid opened the back door, "Jessie shh you will make yourself sick, I have juice at my place"
"Apple juice"?
"Yes and orange juice"
"No apple Juice"
Reid touched her forehead she had a slight fever, and this crying wasn't helping. He knelt down , "Guess what if you stop crying, I will take you home, than go out while you are getting your Jammie's on, and get McDonald's."
Sanda smiled , "McDonald's Kid meal"?
"Sure"
Jessie stopped crying, "Can I have a cheeseburger, and fries with Ketchup"
"Sure can"
Jessie smiled, and Sanda clapped her hand, "Come on Ma Ma lets go she stopped crying". Reid shut the back door, "Lets go she is just feeling sick but maybe she needs something yummy to eat".
"Thank you Reid , I was about to lose it, I'm sorry"
"You are exhausted it was a long night, follow me". She pulled her car out of the spot, and followed Reid to his place.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 16, 2011 16:43:37 GMT -6
Sweet update Jessie. Reid is so cute and adorable with Melinda, young Sanda and young Jessie. I just hope and pray that Luke will be OK with Melinda, young Sanda, and young Jessie coming to live with them. Luke has not right saying anything nasty to Reid about inviting Melinda and her two young daughters to come live with them. Reid did the right thing I back him all the way. ;D Young Sanda is so cute in this story being a Pro-Reid fan. ;D I LOVE that Reid promised to get a Happy Meal for young Sanda and young Jessie after they get to his place.
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Post by jessie on Aug 16, 2011 23:22:44 GMT -6
Sweet update Jessie. Reid is so cute and adorable with Melinda, young Sanda and young Jessie. I just hope and pray that Luke will be OK with Melinda, young Sanda, and young Jessie coming to live with them. Luke has no right saying anything nasty to Reid about inviting Melinda and her two young daughters to come live with them. Reid did the right thing I back him all the way. ;D Young Sanda is so cute in this story being a Pro-Reid fan. ;D I LOVE that Reid promised to get a Happy Meal for young Sanda and young Jessie after they get to his place. Glad you like the story so far Sanda, it is sad but it will be fun too.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 17, 2011 0:03:29 GMT -6
Sweet update Jessie. Reid is so cute and adorable with Melinda, young Sanda and young Jessie. I just hope and pray that Luke will be OK with Melinda, young Sanda, and young Jessie coming to live with them. Luke has no right saying anything nasty to Reid about inviting Melinda and her two young daughters to come live with them. Reid did the right thing I back him all the way. ;D Young Sanda is so cute in this story being a Pro-Reid fan. ;D I LOVE that Reid promised to get a Happy Meal for young Sanda and young Jessie after they get to his place. Glad you like the story so far Sanda, it is sad but it will be fun too. Jessie, I LOVE this story so far. I think it would be soo cute if young Sanda and young Jessie eventually call Reid daddy.
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Post by jessie on Aug 17, 2011 0:29:46 GMT -6
You haven't read Chapter 3 Melinda, this is one of my favourite stories to write. I guess you can tell, Luke and Reid are wonderful helping out Melinda and her two kids. Chapter 4
They got to Reid's and Luke's place, they parked their cars. Reid got out running over to Melinda. She got out helping Reid get the children, and her bag out of the car. Reid smiled, "This is it"?
"Yes when I left the house I could only bring 3 bags, 2 were stolen at the shelter"
"Oh God"
"We are fine I wash the clothes , they have a couple of outfits each"
"I wasn't questioning if you were clean Melinda please I'm not judging you"
"I'm sorry"
"Lets get them inside". The girls held their hands, and walked up the stairs. Luke opened the door, "Reid I was worried"
"Hi Luke this is Melinda, and these two little Angels are Sanda, and Jessie"
Sanda smiled, "Hi I'm Sanda"
Luke knelt down , "Hello Sanda, and you must be Jessie"
"Yes "
"Come in" They walked in Luke shook Melinda's hand. She was shy she felt out of place but Sanda and Jessie were fine. Luke looked at Reid, "I will explain later can you get Jessie, and Sanda a juice".
Jessie whispered, "Apple juice please"
"Apple juice Luke". Luke walked into the kitchen Sanda followed Jessie held on to Melinda.
"Melinda you seem so stressed why don't you go downstairs, I will show you where you will be staying. You can get the girls into their pajamas, than why don't you take a shower, and relax while I run out to get McDonald's for them"
"You don't have to do that, maybe some toast would be fine"
"I promised them I have to get them McDonald's"
"I feel so bad you are so kind to do this"
"Hey we all need help sometimes Melinda"
"Ma Ma I'm thirsty "
Melinda smiled, "Ok lets go get that juice". They walked into the kitchen Sanda was at the table drinking her juice. Luke smiled at Jessie, "Here let me help you on your chair". He pulled it out , Jessie sat down , and smiled, "Thank you for my Apple Juice"
"Your welcome"
"Oh these cookies are for us"? Jessie smiled as Luke whispered, "Eat them before Reid sees them"
Reid laughed , "Yes I'm a cookie lover watch out"
Sanda laughed, "So are we, but Mommy only buys them once in a while"
Melinda laughed, "Oh that sounds awful but I try to give them healthy foods, I'm running short on money"
"Yum these are the best cookies"
Jessie giggled, "No marshmallow with jelly are the best cookies"
"No these are Jessie" Sanda pouted.
Melinda walked over, "Hey I'm sure these are amazing Jessie , and homemade Sweetie"
"Mommy I like these but I like Marshmallow cookies too"
Luke walked over, "I know what your talking about, and guess what they are my favorites too"
"Really"?
"Yes, but I pretty much love all cookies"
"You have cute hair ". Jessie giggled as Reid walked over messing Luke's hair up. Jessie gave Reid a look making Melinda laugh.
"Jessie what was that look for"?
"He messed up his hair, that wasn't nice my Mommy gets made at us if we do that to each other"
"Oh your right that wasn't nice but Luke doesn't mind"
"No I'm use to Reid doing that so don't worry"
They finished Reid smiled, "Lets take you downstairs, and you can get them ready for bed"
Sanda jumped off her chair, and ran over to Reid. "You said McDonald's, I'm hungry for McDonald's you promised"
"Yes but how about you put your pajamas on, than we can watch a movie until you fall asleep"
"Yes Cinderella Ok Reid" Jessie clapped her hand
"Cinderella I don't have Cinderella"
"Ok Snow White or Bambi would be ok" Sanda said
"We don't have Disney films Oh we don't have kids movies, I was thinking Rocky or something"
Melinda smiled, "Rocky that might be to much for them"
Jessie whispered, "Who is Rocky"?
"A boxer a fighter he jumps around like this". He was jumping Jessie eyes lite up, "I want to see Rocky he sounds fun"
Melinda touched her face, "Maybe we can skip the movie , maybe I can read you a bedtime story"
"Ok Mommy"
They took Melinda downstairs, and showed her around. She couldn't believe how nice it was. There was a small kitchen, bathroom, shower, and a tub. A living room, and 1 bedroom, but she wanted the girls with her anyway. She wanted to cry she was so overwhelmed. Reid said he was going to go to McDonald's, they told him what they wanted. He went upstairs, Luke said he would give her some time to change the kids into their pajamas. She smiled as Luke walked upstairs, she sat the girls on the bed. She pulled out their pajamas, and was changing them. She would love to take a shower but she would wait until the girls were asleep. They both were so excited she knew she would have a hard time getting them down. Melinda sat them down, and told them to be good girls because this wasn't their home.
"Ok Mommy".
Melinda told them to lay on the bed until she came out of the washroom. She washed her face, and came out seeing the girls sitting right where she left them. They got off the bed, and ran over hugging her.
"You guys like it here don't you"?
Sanda whispered , "Yes can we stay please , I like it here, and I like Dr Reid and Luke"
Jessie pulled her Mom's shirt, and Melinda knelt down. "What is wrong Jessie"?
"Mommy can you buy me a new Bunny"
"Jessie I know Sweetie someone stole it at the shelter , they took Sanda's kitty too. I promise it will be the first thing I buy when I get a pay cheque"
"Maggie my Bunny must miss me Mommy, I miss her so much". Luke was walking down the stairs, Reid returned he wanted to tell them. He heard Melinda talking , and he knew she was upset that she couldn't buy her children a toy. Luke's heart broke for Melinda, he ran upstairs, and knocked on the door. Melinda wiped tears from her eyes, "Coming "
Luke came down, "Oh McDonald's is here". Sanda and Jessie yelled Melinda whispered, "Walk upstairs you two". They went up seeing Reid at the table they ran over. He had set the meals up on plates, the girls sat down. They both look around seeing the food but no toy. Their faces dropped, Reid couldn't understand what the problem was. Luke walked over, "Is this what your looking for"?
"Oh yes I thought Dr. Reid forgot it". Sanda smiled as Jessie took the toy, and they both said Thank you. Jessie yelled, "Oh it is a Smurf Mommy, A Smurf "
"Yeah there is a movie out with these blue things"
Sanda giggled, "They are Smurfs Silly, we can't see the movie but we saw a magazine with the pictures"
"Well maybe you can see it this Friday if your Mom wants to come with us, and Luke of course"
Jessie almost feel off her chair she was so excited. Melinda had to grab her she begged her Mom to let them go.
"You both are so kind of course they would love it, but I know how expensive taking kids to a movie is. I don't have money , I can't impose you have done so much already"
"We want to beside we have Jacob he would love to meet the girls, it will be so fun"
"Jacob you have a son"?
"No our Best friend Katie Son he is adorable, the girls will love him"
Melinda agreed the girls were so excited, but they were starving, they were eating their cheeseburgers, and fries. They ate everything, and were drinking their milks from the kid's meals. Luke got up, "Just a minute, I have to go upstairs be right back". He ran upstairs Melinda looked at Reid, "he is OK with us staying here right"?
"Yes, Luke is a great guy he understands"
"Good I don't want to cause problems"
Luke walked down he was a collector he had stuffed toys saved from when he was a child. He had bears, cats, and thank God a bunny. He put them in the spare room Reid laughed all the time about it. Luke walked over, "I have something that might help you sleep tonight, they are not brand new but they are in great shape". He walked over handing Sanda a kitten it was black and white, and he handed Jessie a little white Bunny. Reid was shocked, but none of them were prepared for what happened next, both Sanda and Jessie started to cry. Melinda was shocked, "Oh your suppose to say thank you not cry Jessie, Sanda"
Jessie got off the chair, and ran over hugging Luke, so did Sanda.
Jessie hugged the Bunny so tight, Maggie you found Maggie thank you Luke"
Luke had tears in his eyes it wasn't Maggie but if she thought it was that meant the world to him. Reid and Sanda had tears in their eyes, the girls were so happy, and Melinda owed Luke and Reid so much, she just didn't know how she would ever repay them.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 17, 2011 10:26:44 GMT -6
Reid and Luke are being so good to Melinda and her family I hope things turn around for her. Love this story!
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Post by Sanda on Aug 17, 2011 11:45:11 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG Reid and Luke are so amazing with Melinda and her two young daughters. I LOVE this story so much. Luke was so amazing giving young Sanda and young Jessie a stuff animal each from his collection.
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Post by jessie on Aug 17, 2011 12:55:30 GMT -6
I'm so glad you love the story, I love writing. Thanks for reading it Melinda and Sanda.
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Post by jessie on Aug 17, 2011 13:14:16 GMT -6
Chapter5
It was getting late everyone was real tired. Melinda said she should get the children to bed. Sanda and Jessie hugged both Reid and Luke, and went downstairs with their new stuffed toys with their Mom. Luke smiled at Reid as he shut the door.
"Where did you meet them"?
"The hospital Jessie hurt herself they need help real bad. I really think Melinda is amazing, and the kids are so sweet don't you think"?
"Yes they all are wonderful but Reid I can see me doing this but you"
"What I'm not generous"?
"Yeah but you don't normally get attached to people , your amazing with all three of them"
"Luke your not upset I need to help them. I look into the kids eyes they are so innocent living on the streets sleeping in a car something bad will happen. I can't stand the thought of letting them go back out there alone. Melinda is amazing she loves her children she just needs some help"
"Well they have it with us, she is very proud. She won't want to stay long I'm sure. She feels like she is imposting, I can't blame her but she can stay as long as she needs to"
Reid hugged Luke, "Thank you I wasn't sure how you would react"
"Well if there wasn't children I would worry"
Reid smiled, "Oh stop it lets get some sleep. We have to go shopping tomorrow to get them a few things. OMG the pool out back they are children what should we do"?
"We have a fence they can't get in don't worry. We will talk to them tomorrow. I just think we need to get some kids movies, and snacks. We better get those marshmallow cookies for Jessie, she really likes me Reid"
"She likes your wild hair"
"Yeah probably did you see their faces when I gave them the stuffed animals"
"Yeah I know you love your animals, that was so sweet Luke"
"I am sweet Doc, lets go up I will show you just how sweet I am"
"You bad boy but we have to be quiet we have guests". Luke smacked Reid's butt, "They can't hear anything from the basement". They both ran upstairs.
Melinda got the girls in bed, and was about to read to them. She turned they both fell asleep as soon as their head hit the pillow. Sanda and Jessie were snuggled so close holding their bunny, and kitten. She leaned down kissing their foreheads, and whispered, "Sleep tight you two". She walked over grabbing her nightgown, and went into the bathroom. She turned the shower on, she was going to have a quick shower. She got in but all the emotions from today came flooding back. She couldn't stop crying, she was drained, but she had to be brave for her children. She washed her hair but she still was crying. She heard the bathroom door open, she opened the curtain she saw Sanda and Jessie there.
"Mommy why are you crying"?
"I'm not Angels go get in bed, I got soap in my eye"
Jessie whispered, "You can sleep with Maggie Ma Ma, she makes me smile" Melinda grabbed the towel, and got out of the shower wrapping it around her. She walked over to Jessie and Sanda, and pulled them close. She knew if she lost either of them she would die, they were so precious to her. Sanda touched her Mom's face, "I love you Ma Ma". Jessie whispered, "Me too".
Melinda whispered, "I love you to babies, I promise you it will get better".
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 17, 2011 13:58:59 GMT -6
oh the girls were really sweet, and Luke and Reid are being awesome here. Keep up the good work!
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