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Post by Sanda on Mar 17, 2013 0:01:56 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I am so sorry I didn't comment on the last update before now but I didn't notice that you had updated this story while I was away on vacation until tonight. I feel horrible for John Ross, Josh, and JR in your awesome story.. Poor Suie Ellen, JR, John Ross, and Josh have a long way too go in your awesome story to become a blended family before the new baby arrives.
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Post by melinda on Mar 17, 2013 6:06:35 GMT -6
poor John Ross i don't blame him for being upset, hope you update soon
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Post by jessie on Mar 17, 2013 14:58:49 GMT -6
Chapter 31
John Ross ran outside he didn't even hear his Uncle Bobby yell out to him as he ran just wanting to get as far away from his Dad as possible. He ran until his legs wouldn't run anymore, and he sat down. He finally sat by a tree, and put his hands over his face, and cried like he never cried before. He kept hearing his Dad's voice saying Josh was his half Brother, and it made him so angry he finally screamed out.
"He is not my Brother, I hate him". He was crying so hard he didn't hear someone walk up beside him. Ray knelt down, and touched his shoulder making John Ross jump.
"You scared me Uncle Ray"
"I was riding, and I saw you running, and I could see something is wrong"
"I hate my life , I hate you, and I hate everyone"
"Wow that is a powerful statement young man"
"Go away"
"I don't think I can leave you now that you had a outburst like that"
"I'm not going to talk to you "
"Fine but maybe I can sit beside you , and when you feel up to it we can talk"
John Ross kept staring ahead it was 10 minutes when Ray had to break the silence he could see John Ross was really angry.
"John Ross talk to me about what happened did you fight with Christopher"?
"No I would never cry over Christopher, and if you tell my Daddy I cried I will never speak to you again"
"I have cried John Ross nothing to be ashamed of"
"Yes it means you are weak, and I don't cry"
"You just did"
John Ross glared at Ray making Ray smile.
"Sorry that was me trying to be funny"
"Your not funny, and your not family"
"Ouch you are on a role today, I thought you liked me young man"
"I guess I do sometimes but not today"
"What did I do "?
"You are bugging me"
"John Ross what happened "?
"My Dad made a mistake, and guess what me, and my Mom have to pay for it"
"JR Ewing made a mistake no way"
"Your making fun of me yes he did"
"I was kidding he is human but what did he do that hurt you so much"?
"He is that stupid kids Daddy you know Josh"
"Josh is his Son"?
"Yes but I'm his son Ray, and he spoiled it"
"Look at Grandpa Jock he has more than one son John Ross. There is nothing wrong with it"
"He isn't my Mom's son"
"I know that is weird for you, and I don't know the situation but maybe you should let your Dad explain"
"He hurt my Mom Josh is my age so he hurt my Mom even more"
"OK Grown up do things sometimes that a child would never understand"
"He is gross, and I won't ever welcome that kid into my family"
"It isn't Josh's fault John Ross"
"Maybe not but I hate him"
"It is really hot out here how about we go to my place, and have some sodas, and than we can talk some more"
"I'm not going home"
"No my place we can ask your Parents if you can spend the night"
"Ask my Mom who cares what my Dad says"
"Fine your Mom than"
John Ross stood up, and Ray said they could ride back to his place. He helped John Ross on his horse, and the rode the horse to the Stables, than they got in Ray's truck, and drove to Ray's place.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 17, 2013 16:53:37 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I feel bad for John Ross in this story having to share Josh with his daddy JR. I really hope that things get better for John Ross in your awesome story. I loved the talk between Ray and John Ross in this chapter as well.
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Post by jessie on Mar 18, 2013 20:30:38 GMT -6
Chapter 32
Josh ran into the guestroom, and jumped on the bed, and grabbed a pillow hugging it, but tears fell down his cheeks. His Daddy was right he was a sissy. Josh wiped the tears off his cheek with his shirt when Sue Ellen walked into the room, and shut the door.
"Josh are you OK"?
"No I want my Mom"
Sue Ellen walked over sitting down, and touched his chin, and said.
"Sweetie I'm so sorry John Ross hurt you but he is angry but that is no excuse for being cruel to you"
"He hates me he wants me to leave but where am I going to go. I want my Mom it isn't fair"
Sue Ellen pulled him close , and wrapped her arms around him, and whispered.
"I know your Mom must miss you so much Josh"
"My Mom is in jail because of me"
"No what happened between your Mom, and Dad is not your fault"
"It was he hated me, I don't know why"
"He was a angry man Josh"
"John Ross doesn't want me here, I tried to make him like me"
"He will in time Sweetie"
"No he is mean"
"Josh he isn't mean really his Dad is talking to him"
"He will be more angry now that his Dad is trying to make him like me"
"Don't worry about that would you like to go down, and get something cold to drink"?
"I guess" Sue Ellen smiled but JR walked into the room, and Sue Ellen turned to look at him.
"JR how did it go with John Ross"?
"He ran out on me that child is spoiled, and I believe that is your doing"
"Mine"?
"Yes you give in to him all the time, I have never seen him so disrespectful of me, and I won't tolerate it"
"I will go see if I can find him why don't you take Josh out for dinner, and I will stay home with John Ross"
"No go change the 3 of us will go out to dinner John Ross can be alone, and realize we are not catering to his tantrums"
"JR I think it is best you take Josh out alone"
"Sue Ellen I said the three of us are going out". Sue Ellen was livid she hated how JR was treating her but Josh was staring, and she knew he has seen enough violence in his short life. Sue Ellen walked past JR, and stared at him but said.
"I will change and tell Miss Ellie the three of us are going out"
"Sugar I didn't mean to yell at you but I'm upset"
"So am I but lets not fight with Josh here". Sue Ellen walked out, JR walked over to Josh, and sat down.
'You wash your face, and put on a clean shirt we will go out , and have a lovely dinner would you like that"
"What about John Ross"?
"He made his decision to run off he can cool off, I will talk to him later"
"Don't be hard on him he thinks I'm taking you away from him"
"What"?
"He thinks I'm trying to take you away from him, I'm not you know"
"I know Josh go get ready". Josh got up, and walked to the bathroom but JR could see he was hurt, and scared, and feeling the tension , and most of all missing his Mom. JR's heart went out to Josh, but he was worried about John Ross, but he knew he was not going to let John Ross dictate what was going to happen in this family. He would have his talk with him later right now he had to go out, and explain to Josh he was his Father, and hoped Josh took it well, but he knew he would be confused, but he wanted Josh to know he was safe, and he had a family, and that he would always have his Mom but he had the Ewing's too.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 18, 2013 23:48:40 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVED the talk between Sue Ellen and Josh in this chapter. I feel horrible for both John Ross and Josh in this story. They both have a tough road ahead of them in this story along with JR and Sue Ellen. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon.
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Post by melinda on Mar 20, 2013 17:21:34 GMT -6
these were great updates, I love your John Ross stories and you write JR and SE so well good job
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Post by jessie on Mar 29, 2013 14:02:01 GMT -6
Chapter 33
Sue Ellen changed, and went downstairs, and walked into the living room.
"Have you guys seen John Ross"?
"No is something wrong"?
"Yes he is upset that Josh is staying here Miss Ellie, I don't know what to do"
"He will be OK in time don't worry"
"JR wants to take Josh out for dinner John Ross was suppose to come but he ran off"
Jock stood up, "We will find him you go have dinner we will have a talk with him"
"Thanks"
The phone rang but Teresa got it, and she walked over to Sue Ellen, and said Ray Krebbs was on the phone. Sue Ellen was a little surprised but she walked over picking up the phone.
"Hello Ray"
"Sue Ellen I have John Ross here he is upset, and I was thinking maybe spending the night with his Uncle Ray would be a good thing"
"Oh God JR is going to be angry but maybe you are right but can I speak to him"
"Sure" Ray called John Ross but she could hear John Ross saying he didn't want to talk.
"Sue Ellen I will talk to him, and later I will have him call you"
"Ray tell him I love him, and so does his Dad"
"I will Sue Ellen"
"Bye Ray"
"Bye" Sue Ellen hung up she knew she wanted to go to her boy, but JR wanted her to be with him when they told Josh the truth. She was so confused her head hurt but JR walked downstairs with Josh. Sue Ellen turned Josh looked so cute dressed in his new clothes.
"Don't you look handsome"
"Thank you" Josh said smiling.
"Are you ready Sue Ellen"
"Yes that was Ray on the phone John Ross is over there. Ray is going to keep him overnight"
"What"?
"John Ross is over with Ray maybe he can help him"
"Just great Sue Ellen tomorrow that boy is going to learn who is boss in this house. You treat him like a baby whatever he wants he gets."
"Don't be hard on her John Ross". Miss Ellie said but Jock laughed.
"You both spoil the boy we all do so get over yourself JR"
"I'm not talking about material things I'm talking about manners, I would never disrespect you in your own home" JR said to his Father but Jock smiled.
"No you would have had your teeth knocked out"
"That is what I'm trying to explain to Sue Ellen"
Josh grabbed JR's hand, and pulled it.
'Josh what is the matter"?
"Don't hurt John Ross please I don't like fighting".
JR knelt down, "I'm not going to hurt him we are just talking Josh"
"I'm so sorry I caused all this trouble"
"You didn't cause any trouble young man how about you go outside, and get in the car, here is the keys"
"Can I drive"?
'I think not maybe in a few years I will teach you in the back seat for now"
"OK". Josh ran out, JR told Sue Ellen they should get going they will talk to John Ross tomorrow together"
Miss Ellie and Jock said their goodbyes, and watch as Sue Ellen and JR left.
"Do you think we should go over to Ray's, and bring John Ross home"?
"No we should mind our own business we have the house to ourselves should we go upstairs, and have some fun"
"Oh you need a nap Jock".
"No nap for me" Jock said laughing as he grabbed Miss Ellie's hand, and they went upstairs together.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 29, 2013 14:36:07 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. :)JR and Sue Ellen are so cute and adorable with Josh in this chapter. I feel horrible for both Josh and John Ross in this story. They are both going to have a long and tough road ahead of them in this story getting use to the fact that they are related. I hope that Ray will be able to talk some sense into John Ross. I hope you update this awesome story again really soon.
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Post by melinda on Mar 29, 2013 19:01:29 GMT -6
this is so good, I really enjoyed it, please keep going
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Post by jessie on Apr 10, 2013 19:28:52 GMT -6
Chapter 34
JR, and Sue Ellen drove Josh to one of their favourite family restaurants. They always took John Ross to so Sue Ellen was sad that he was not here with them. JR parked his car, and the three of them went into the restaurant. They got a booth, they sat down Josh sat beside Sue Ellen. The waitress came over to take their drink orders. She walked away, and said she would give them some time to look at the menu.
Josh was looking at the menu JR smiled as Sue Ellen said.
"What would you like Sweetie"?
"I want a hamburger is that OK"?
"Sure John Ross loves the burgers here"
"My Mom use to take me to McDonald's sometimes but only when my Dad was away for a day or two"
"The burgers here are better than McDonald's " JR said
Josh smiled JR, and Sue Ellen looked at the menu. The waitress brought the drinks they gave her the order, and she left the table when JR looked at Josh.
"Josh we have something really important to discuss with you"
"OK" Josh looked at Sue Ellen who touched his chin.
"I'm sorry all this stuff with John Ross has upset you. He is a good boy but he is confused, and angry but he will come around"
"He better" JR said but Sue Ellen gave JR a look.
"OK lets focus on what we have to say to Josh Sue Ellen"
"You are not sending me away are you"?
"No not at all Josh" Sue Ellen touched his shoulder as she gave him a hug.
"Josh your Mother made some mistakes in life, and so have I". Josh was looking at JR not sure what he was hearing but he remembered his Father telling his Mom she was a bad wife, and Mother. He didn't want to hear what JR was about to say.
"I met your Mom years ago, and something happened between us. I didn't know she got pregnant with you Josh, and I know she had her reasons for not telling me"
"I don't understand" Josh said but Sue Ellen touched his chin.
"What JR is trying to tell you is you are JR's son. He didn't know, and we are not blaming your Mom but if we knew what was going on we would have been there for you"
"My Dad"
"The man that raised you was not your Dad. I know he was a angry man I saw it first hand, and I can only imagine how scary he seemed to you, and your Mom when he was angry." Sue Ellen said
"It was my fault he was angry"
"No it wasn't your fault he had no right to take it out on you Sweetie"
"He was right my Mom was bad"
JR wasn't saying anything Sue Ellen tried to explain to Josh that adults sometimes do stuff they regret, and there is no way to make it right. He was not to blame he was the one , and only innocent thing to come out of this whole situation. She has made bad decisions in her life so she felt she had no right to judge his Mom but she can't say she didn't hate the woman when she found out about the affair. She remembered Luther, and he was so bitter, and angry but he was a cruel man to take it out on others. She could see him going off on his wife, and JR but he wanted to hurt her like it was her mistake that JR had to cheat. She was getting one of her headaches because it was bringing the past up, and she didn't want to upset Josh more so she was trying to stay calm. She was losing it seeing JR letting her explain his mistake but she focused on Josh, and she had to make him understand he was safe with them, and she would never replace his Mom but he could always count on her.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 10, 2013 20:44:03 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. :)I feel horrible for JR, Sue Ellen, Josh, and John Ross in this story. I hope that JR and Sue Ellen will be able to help Josh to understand that he wanted by them and that didn't do anything wrong. for his biological father to hrut him and his mother like he did in the past. I hope that things get better for JRj, Sue Ellen, John Ross, and Josh in this story really soon before the new baby arrives.
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Post by melinda on Apr 21, 2013 6:22:43 GMT -6
this is endlessly interesting. Your take on a AU situation is plausible and realistic. You've hit everyones reactions so well without leaving anything missing. good job Jessie
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Post by jessie on May 20, 2013 15:56:00 GMT -6
Thanks for reading my Story.
Not sure why my chapters got put on twice so I had to delete this one.
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Post by jessie on May 20, 2013 15:56:20 GMT -6
Chapter 35
Josh kept his head down when Sue Ellen was talking to him. He hated thinking it was his own Mother's fault that his Daddy hated him. He wasn't his son he was JR's son, Josh was so confused, and angry he wanted to cry but big boys don't cry Luther told him that each time he would smack him across the face, and say if he continued crying he wouldn't stop. He hated Luther but it was his Mom he should have hated did she deserve getting beat? He remembered hearing his Father, and Peyton talking in the backyard when he was suppose to be sleeping. They were saying horrible things about his Mama, and he hated them for it but now everything they said about her was true. He trusted his Mom, and she is to blame for everything. Josh was trying so hard but tears came down his cheeks making Sue Ellen pull him close but the tears only made JR more uncomfortable. He wasn't prepared for Josh's reaction but Sue Ellen was shocked that JR was no help what so ever.
"JR are you going to say anything for God Sake"
"We are in a restaurant what do you want me to say? I wanted to tell the boy that I'm his Father, and we would deal with whatever else happened as it came along. I would think the boy would be happy that Luther was not his Dad".
"The boy is your son, and he found out that the Dad he thought was his Dad his whole life is not his Father. He is confused he is a child, and you sitting there acting all confused why he is in shock is beyond me JR."
"OK lets eat we will discuss this at home this was a huge mistake"
"Yes it was a mistake maybe we should pay, and forget eating here. We can take him home, and get him something to eat, and we can talk about this there"
"No we are here to eat, and that is what we are going to do. I know this is hard Josh, and I'm sorry you are hurt, and confused but you are a big boy, and I need you to understand what happened in the past was not your fault. I can't change what happened, and either can your Mom but we have to deal with what we have, and that is you coming to live with me. I don't know what will happen to your Mom she could spend the rest of her life in jail or she could get out tomorrow or she could get the death penalty for murdering the guy"
"Death penalty" Josh said , Sue Ellen whispered, "JR why would you bring that up now, I'm sure she will not get life or death for defending her son, and her own life from that animal"
"But it is my Mom's fault"
"She was defending you Josh remember that your Mom loves you with all her heart"
"She made him hurt us"
Sue Ellen was quiet she didn't know what else to say she was glad when the waitress brought the food over. She didn't want to eat but the distraction was just what she needed. She tried to smile , and say thank you to the waitress who could see they were not happy.
JR smiled, "Lets eat, and try to enjoy this meal"
Sue Ellen smiled at Josh, "The burger looks great Josh"
"Yeah but I'm not hungry"
"Try to eat Sweetie"
"OK" Josh lifted his burger, and was eating JR was eating his food, but he could feel Sue Ellen glaring at him, but he didn't look at her because he knew she was upset, and that he went about everything the wrong way, but this situation was going from bad to worse. He had one son that ran to Ray for support, and one that looked at him with confusion, and maybe a little hatred he was not sure. He sure hoped this night would be over soon because it might be right up there with the worst nights of his life, and he just wanted to be alone, and deal with work, and forget about all these family problems that he basically created but hated to admit to himself. He really screwed up, and he truly didn't know how he was going to make everything right, or if it was even possible.
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