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Post by jessie on Apr 5, 2011 16:12:24 GMT -6
Sanda the revised version is sweet , I loved it.. It is sad you can't have romantic scenes , but you did a great job with it.. Hope to see more one shots from you in the future..
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Post by Sanda on Apr 5, 2011 16:33:03 GMT -6
Sanda the revised version is sweet , I loved it.. It is sad you can't have romantic scenes , but you did a great job with it.. Hope to see more one shots from you in the future.. Thank you Jessie for your awesome comments about my revised one shot. I agree that it is awful that we can't have romantic scenes in our stories. I perferr my orginal oneshot.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 6, 2011 19:18:47 GMT -6
Sanda I love what you have done with your story, even though the first version was perfect too. very good job
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Post by jessie on Apr 6, 2011 23:28:29 GMT -6
Wind Beneath My Wings This one shot is for the Memory of all the People who lost their lives on 911.. www.youtube.com/watch?v=lGKOtLPMjtIReid Oliver was having the worst day of his life. He was in Dallas, watching the events that took place in New York City like the rest of the world. He was shocked, he couldn't believe what he was seeing unfold in front of his eyes. He knew he had to help, he jumped up, and called someone on the phone, saying he was going to New York, to help out with the devastation that was happening over there. He knew he couldn't get a flight out, so he hopped in his car, and was off without a thought. It took him 5 hours driving right through, but he arrived. He had to park miles away from the Trade Centers. He wanted to get closer, he wanted to help out. He was told by Police to leave, but he explained who he was. They said to put a mask on, and go up but he was going at his own risk. He started running, he was seeing people along the way, that were injured, and disoriented, but he checked them out. He helped them put a mask on, he told them to keep walking or to stay still help would be with them soon. He keep running, the closer he got, the more he saw the horror, and devastation, of what happened. He couldn't see 2 feet ahead of him, but he kept going. He heard someone crying, and he ran over to where he heard the voice. He saw the Lady she was hurt, she wasn't breathing properly. He put a mask on her, he lifted her up, carrying her as far away from the scene as he could get. He hated walking by so many people who needed his help. He put her in a safe place, when he saw a ambulance, who came over, giving her oxygen. She whispered "thank you", as Reid ran back to help others. He saw people collapsed, some were gone, some were serious injured. He helped more people, it was hours later, he was exhausted, but he fought it, he needed to help out. The Country was attacked it was his duty to help out as much as he could. He went over to one of the trucks who was giving out water. He was drinking, when he saw a Fire Fighter over by the wall , sitting down looking at the devastation. Reid ran over, "Let me help you, this isn't a safe place for you" "My Crew are in there" Reid looked at the space, that once was the Trade Center. Reid was sick, he knew this Firefighter would never get over losing his friends , and colleagues. Reid helped him up, and walked him away from the building. He could feel the man was about to collapse, Reid practically carried him to safety. He laid him on the ground, as Paramedics got him ready, and took him to one of the hospital. Reid sat on the curb, and for the first time that day, he cried, like he never cried before. He knew he didn't do much, but he knew what he did was the right thing to do. He stayed in New York for 1 week, helping out, he finally went back to Dallas. His life will never be the same, but he knew life as it was 1 week ago, will never be the same either. The End God Bless all the Firefighters, Police Officers, Other service workers, everyday People , that lost their lives. They will never be forgotten, 911 will live in everyones heart forever. I know it will for me, they should be remembered, and I hope we never see anything like that again.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 7, 2011 0:10:10 GMT -6
OMG Jessie, I LOVE your new Reid one shot. Poor Reid and what he went through helping the victims at the World Trade Center after 9/11. God Bless all of the Doctors, Police Men, and Fighterfighters in America.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 7, 2011 14:22:47 GMT -6
great and touching one shot, very inspirational and moving. I loved this one a lot
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Post by jessie on Apr 8, 2011 23:41:45 GMT -6
Hi Sanda here is the one shot you requested me to do. I hope you like it. lol ;D
Lonely Nights
Reid was sitting downstairs, he couldn't sleep, after what happened. It has been weeks since him, and Luke made love. He has tried, but Luke always seems to put him off. He didn't know what was going on, but it was getting him seriously frustrated. He was reading one of his files, when Luke walked downstairs.
"Reid it is 1am what are you doing"?
"Reading Luke, why are you up, you were sleeping like a baby"?
"I woke up, you were not beside me, I couldn't get back to sleep"
"Luke go up, I will be up soon, I'm kind of busy right now"
"Reid what is the matter, you have been moody all week"?
"Well I wonder why Luke"?
"Tell me Reid, your mad at me"
"No, I'm wondering, why the last few weeks you have done everything to get out of getting romantic"
"I'm tired, I have been having a rough time at work, that is all"
"Whatever Luke"
"Reid I was thinking maybe we should see someone, about this"
"About what"?
"This what your mad at "
"Why would I see someone, you can solve the problem, right this moment"?
"Reid stop it, I don't feel like you show me the respect I deserve sometimes. You are busy, you come home, read those papers, watch some of your sport shows, than eat, and want to make love, but I want more"
"Oh this is all my fault"
"Yes, sometimes, I want you to just hold my hand, and watch a movie. I would love to go to the beach, or a movie, but no you have to have your way every time"
"Oh Great Luke go to bed, I don't need this right now"
"I made a appointment for Thursday , will you join me"?
"You made an appointment, you didn't"?
"Yes I did, I will be there, will you be"?
"No, I'm going to the guest room, I need to be alone". Reid grabbed his papers, and ran upstairs. Luke yelled, "See if you loved me, you would do this for me". Reid yelled, "If you loved me, you wouldn't be doing this Luke"
Luke went to their room, and Reid was in the guest room. They both were to stubborn to go to the other one. The next morning, they had breakfast, but they didn't really talk to each other. They left for work, just saying bye but no kiss.
The next two days, neither would really call, or talk to each other. They did sleep in the same bed, but they were so apart it was scary. It was Thursday, when Luke left but he said he was going to the appointment, it was at Oakdale Memorial 3rd floor at 2pm, to see Dr. Adams. Reid didn't answer him, and Luke left for work.
Reid got to work, he couldn't concentrate, he was angry at Luke. It was 2pm Reid went to the 3rd floor, and went to Dr. Adams office. The Secretary said Luke was in with the Doctor already. Reid knocked on the door, and went in. Dr. Adams smiled, "Hello Reid we thought you were not going to show up."
Reid sat down, "I wasn't this feels so wrong"
"Why Reid"?
"Because I don't have a problem"
"Really why is Luke here than"?
"I don't know, you have to ask him"
"Reid I told you, I'm not appreciated, I need that"
"Luke I appreciate you, I'm busy, I thought we were happy"
"I love you Reid, more than anything. I need to feel that you love me that way too"
"I do Luke, you are my life, don't you know that by now". Luke has tears in his eyes, "You really mean that"?
"You know I do Luke, I love you too".
Luke hugged Reid, and whispered, "why didn't you just say this days ago"?
"I'm not a romantic Luke, you know that"
Dr Adams smiled, "I really think you both worked this problem out. I think Reid you need to tell Luke more often how important he is. Luke you have to understand, Reid is different, he doesn't show his emotions really well. You have to talk to him, don't hold it inside. You both obviously love each other, go home, and talk this out, and I'm sure this problem will end."
Luke smiled, "I guess we only needed one appointment Doc"
"Yeah but your paying for it"
They all laugh, Luke and Reid got up shaking her hand. They left Reid walked Luke to the elevator. They went downstairs, Luke was about to leave, Reid kissed his cheek. "See you at home Luke, I will be home at 7"
"Reid I will have dinner waiting for you"
"Sounds perfect, after we can watch one of your movies"
"Really Reid"?
"Yeah, but please no chick flicks"
"Ok I will pick one you will love".
"Bye Luke see you later". Luke walked over, "I love you Reid, tonight, I will show you just how much"
Reid smiled, "Oh man, now I won't get my work done". Luke smiled, he walked to the door, walked outside, and he never had a bigger smile on his face, as he did this moment.
Reid went back to work, but all he could think about was Luke, and how much he loved him.
The end.
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Post by Sanda on Apr 9, 2011 10:42:04 GMT -6
Jessie, I LOVE this Reid and Luke one shot that you wrote for me so much. ;D I LOVE how fast Reid and Luke patched up their differences with one appointment at the sex therapist office. ;D This Reid and Luke one shot made me smile bigtime.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 9, 2011 18:33:02 GMT -6
great one shot, I'm glad those two made up so quickly
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Post by jessie on Apr 17, 2011 20:06:54 GMT -6
OK Sanda a one shot to cheer you up after all my sad stories right now. Well that is what happens when the romance is taken away from me. ;D ;D ;D Ok this will be fun, but it will be hard to be fun without romance. ;D ;D ;D Ok I'm being bad, but here goes Sanda. ;D
Hey Cowboy
Luke and Reid were at the bar, they were bickering, but they sure were having a fun time. Luke jumped up on the mechanical bull, and Reid couldn't keep his eyes off of him. Luke was so cute, but annoying, but Reid's heart was beating so fast just watching him. Reid smiled Luke was looking at him the whole time. Reid took a sip of his beer, he has been alone for so long, but Luke was making him want a relationship with someone. He wanted someone to come home to. He wanted someone to kiss goodnight, and make love to when he need comfort after a bad day. He wanted someone to watch football with, and share a bowl of potato chips with while watching TV. Luke got on his nerves big time, but he was sexy, and he was driving Reid crazy.
Luke was on the mechanical bull, he was laughing, but his heart was racing. He thought Reid was so handsome, and he wanted his full attention. Luke laughed to himself, it wouldn't be so cool if he fell off, and made a fool of himself. Oh maybe Doc Reid would tend to his wounds, that would be fun. Luke motioned to the man, that he wanted off the bull. He jumped down, and walked over to Reid, who smiled, "wow that was something Luke"
"Let me see you get up their Reid"?
"Me no"
"Scared Dr. Oliver"?
"Me scared I don't think so".
"Do it than" Reid walked over jumping up on the Bull, motioning to the man to start it. It started slow, he was laughing, he almost fell off a few times. Luke was smiling, "Oh God Reid was sexy, and that smile was to die for". Reid smiled as he moved, and after a few moments, he got off walking over to Luke.
"Did I look scared Luke"?
"No, but you sure did look sexy".
"Oh Richie Rich, you are something"
"Admit it, you love me don't you Reid"
"Love, I don't use that word"
"You do I can see it in your eyes, but your so cool"
"That is me, want to grab a burger"?
"Do you have a bottomless pit of a stomach"?
"Yeah how did you know, I think it is because I'm so active, I need fuel"
"Oh really Reid, that is a good one". They both laugh, they went over getting 2 burgers, and a couple of beers. They talked to the wee morning hours, it was time to go home. Reid walked out to his car, and Luke smiled as they stopped just looking at each other. Reid touched his face, and gave Luke a kiss, to end all kisses. Reid walked to his car, and smiled," tonight was fun Luke"
"Reid it doesn't have to end"
"What do you mean Luke"?
Luke smiled, "follow me". Reid did follow Luke, and he was surprised, that Luke took him to the pond. They got out of their cars, and Luke walked over holding out his hand to Reid. He took it, while Luke grabbed a blanket out of his car. They walked over to the pond, they put the blanket down, and sat talking. It was hours later, they were laying on the blanket staring at the sky. Luke whispered, "That was amazing Reid, it was better than I ever expected". Reid smiled, "It was Luke, but it was everything, I imagined". They both smile as they held hands, both not wanting this evening to end, because it was the most amazing, night in both their lives. They knew they would be together forever, because tonight, they gave each other their hearts, and their promise, that they would love each other, and they knew this was a start of a new life together.
The end
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Post by Sanda on Apr 17, 2011 20:39:14 GMT -6
OMG Jessie, I LOVE this Reid and Luke oneshot. I am smiling and laughing bigtime right now girl. Reid and Luke are soo cute and adorable together in this one shot. You did an awesome job writing "romance" for Reid and Luke in this oneshot girl.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Apr 17, 2011 20:53:54 GMT -6
this was so sweet, I loved this one!! very nice
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Post by jessie on Apr 18, 2011 18:21:26 GMT -6
Sanda this is a one shot that I wrote after watching the Black jean video.. The one you said you wouldn't be able to sleep after watching it.. lol ;D Short one shot , after watching that video again. lol
Black Jeans
Luke was at the Snyder Pond, they were having a BBQ with Family, and friends. Luke invited Reid, but he didn't think he would show up. Luke was greeting all the guests, and he was really disappointed that Reid didn't come. He saw Katie's car, and he smiled as Katie, Chris and Jacob got out of the car. Jacob ran over to Luke, "Hi I'm here for the BBQ"
"Great it is great to see you Buddy, have you seen your Uncle Reid around"?
"Uncle Reid yeah he was over this morning why"?
"Oh nothing, why don't you go over, and see Ethan and Natalie, they would love to see you". Jacob ran over, Chris walked over, "Hi Luke thanks for inviting me, and Katie"
"Your welcome, why don't you go over, and grab something to eat, there is tons of food".
Chris walked over, Katie smiled, "How are you Luke"?
"Great Katie"
"You seem down, is it because of a certain Doctor"?
"No Katie, I'm fine, I just thought he might show up"
"Well I have a feeling he might, he came over asking my opinion"
"You told him to come"?
"Well yes, he is a little nervous around your Parents, and some of the other people."
"Why"?
"Oh he is just being Reid, lets hope he comes, but lets go get a burger, I'm starving". They were walking away, when Luke turned seeing a car stop.
"Oh it's Reid Luke, go to him, I will go tend to Jacob". Katie walked away, Luke walked over to Reid. He smiled as Reid got out of the car wearing black jeans, and a white T-shirt. He took Luke's breath away, he was so sexy, and those jeans fit him perfectly.
"Luke I came, I wouldn't turn away a chance to have some of Emma's food"
"Oh that is the only reason you came Reid"?
"No Jacob wanted me to come, I didn't want to disappoint him"
"Oh Reid you are something, what about me"?
'Oh Richie Rich I came to see you too". Luke moved close, and Reid smiled, "What if your family sees Luke, you were worried before"?
"I don't care Reid, all I care about is being with you. Oh man you look hot in those jeans".
"Luke Snyder that is bad, but you look pretty hot too"
"Oh the sun is getting to us Reid"
"No it isn't the sun, it is us, we were meant to be together".
Luke brought his lips over Reid's, and they kiss. Reid touched his face, and smiled, "Oh that was sweet, but kiss me like you mean it". Luke pulled Reid close, and they kissed so passionately, than he smiled, "how was that"?
"Oh that was a kiss". Reid smiled, as Luke reached out his hand, and they walked over to the BBQ. Everyone smiled, Reid ran over lifting up Jacob.
"Hey buddy, how are you"?
"Good I just ate a hot dog with mustard".
"Yum Buddy, lets go get another one". Reid walked over to Holden who was at the BBQ. Luke watched, oh the view from behind was something, Luke laughed to himself. Chris walked over, "What do you see in him Luke"?
"What Chris are you talking about Reid"?
"Yeah it is obvious, you like the guy, why"?
"Chris Reid is amazing, look at him, who wouldn't find that appealing"?
"Me". Luke smiled, "What does Katie see in you"?
"Nice Luke I didn't put you down"
"I know, I love Reid, you love Katie, leave it at that". Reid walked over, "Hey Doogie Hughes"
"Hey Reid, I see you are as pleasant as always"
"Yeah don't you love me"?
"No"
"Good I feel the same way, but I love Katie, and Jacob be good to them"
"I am don't worry"
"Oh I will always worry about them".
"Yeah I know Katie said you would". Reid smiled, "That is my girl"
"She is my girl Reid"
"Yeah Doogie, whatever". Chris laughed, as everyone walked over to the pond for a swim. Everyone brought their swimsuits, but Reid didn't. He was standing watching everyone swimming when Luke walked over wrapping his arms around him.
"You should have brought your swim trunks, you can borrow one of mine if you like"?
"They wouldn't fit, but thanks anyway"
"Maybe later me and you can swim when everyone is gone home"
"I forgot my swim trunks remember"
"Yeah I remember, that would make it more fun".
"You are bad Luke, you really have to watch out for the innocent ones"
"I'm not innocent Reid, what do you say"?
"Well we will see later, I'm going up there to get a soda". Reid was walking up the hill.
"Nice view from here Reid". Luke was laughing
Reid turned around, and smiled, as Luke watched him walk up the hill, in his amazing black jeans.
The end ;D ;D
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Post by Sanda on Apr 18, 2011 20:18:54 GMT -6
OMG Jessie, I LOVE this Reid and Luke oneshot with Reid in his black jeans. You should write a Reid and Luke one shot when they swim later alone.
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Post by jessie on Apr 18, 2011 22:54:22 GMT -6
Lets Get Physical
Reid has had a horrible day, he had a fight with Doogie Hughes. He had to deal with Henry, when he went over to Katie's for lunch. He almost lost a patient, thank God he didn't . Luke was on Reid's mind big time, but they had a fight, and he wasn't going to be the one to make up. He is stubborn, but he didn't care, Luke was wrong this time. He went to the Doctor's lounge, he changed out of his Hospital clothes, and put on his jeans, and sweatshirt, and left the hospital. He had 2 days off, he was going to go to the club to blow off some steam, than go home, and watch some of the playoffs, , than go to bed. He wanted to sleep for a full day, he hasn't slept much this week. He got to his car, and drove over to Gold's Gym, and grabbed his bag, and went inside. He went to the dressing room, and changed, and came out going over to the exercise bikes. He got on, and put his IPod on, and was listening to Lady Gaga, a guilty pleasure he enjoyed, but wouldn't admit to anyone. He was riding, when he almost fell off, because someone put their hands on his butt.
"God Luke what are you doing, you just freaked me out"
"Who do you think it was "?
"I don't know, but someone who has no right to touch me"
"Oh chill out, I was playing with you, are you listening to Lady Gaga"?
"No"
"You are, wow you like her"?
"Yeah so what"?
"I like her too, what is wrong with you Reid"?
"I'm tired I wanted some peace, go over there and exercise you need it".
"Really I need it, I'm in better shape than you"
"Yeah right Luke don't think so".
Luke smiled, he walked over to the weights Reid was getting on his bike, but just stared at Luke. He was in shape, and he looked amazing in his shorts, and cut off shirt. He was riding, but all he could do was stare at Luke lifting weights. He was in shape, but so was he. Luke smiled, making Reid turn away, he was riding, but his heart was racing. He needed a water, but he didn't want to get off the bike, he wanted to prove to Luke he was in shape too. They both were showing off to each other. They both were overdoing it, and they would pay the next day big time. Reid finally got off the bike, and went over to get a water. He was standing by the counter, when Luke walked over to the counter, and took a water too. He smiled, "you are sweating Reid, are you giving up already"
"No, I'm having a break Luke"
"Want to try the new aerobics class over there"?
"No, I don't do aerobics"
"Really it is not your thing, or is it you can't handle it"?
"I can handle anything you can"
"Ok lets do the class". Reid walked over, Luke followed behind him. They went into the class, Reid was happy there was a few other men in the class with them. Reid stood in the second row, Luke stood behind him in the third row. The class started out slow, but 5 minutes in, they were dying, they couldn't keep up. Reid turned looking at Luke, they both laugh, they were so out of shape. Reid stopped, and ran out of the class, and Luke ran out after him.
"Reid wait, that was fun"
"Yeah fun, that was awful"
"It was wasn't it".
"Yeah I'm going home, I'm exhausted, nice seeing you Luke". Reid turned, Luke yelled, "Wait please"
"Yes, what is the matter"?
"About the other day, I'm sorry, I was wrong, I know I was"
"Oh you were wrong, and admit it"
"Yeah can't you forgive me Reid, I miss you"
"Really Luke, it took you long enough to admit you were wrong"
"I'm stubborn too Reid, but I'm sorry". Reid smiled, "I'm going home to watch the playoffs, you can come over, and bring a pizza".
"Nice Reid, I have to bring a pizza"?
"Well yes, a peace offering". They both laugh, they changed, and both of them when to their cars. Reid drove home, Luke went to pick a pizza, and drove over to Reid's. Reid smiled, "Come in Luke".
Luke walked in, Reid grabbed a couple of beers, and plates. They sat watching TV, and eating, and talking. Luke fell asleep in Reid's arms, watching sports wasn't one of his favourite things to do. Reid was content he hated to admit it, but he was lost without Luke around, having him back in his arms felt so perfect, he never wanted to let him go again.
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