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Post by jennifer1983 on Dec 11, 2010 0:42:49 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope Sue Ellen makes back home. and I also hope someone kills Mandy Winger.
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Post by Sanda on Dec 11, 2010 18:08:09 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. I hope that Sue Ellen makes it home really soon.
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Post by jessie on Aug 18, 2011 20:24:52 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Sue Ellen was driving but she had to wipe tears from her eyes. She knew she had to slow down, but she had to get away from Mandy. She probably was following her. She looked through the mirror, but didn't see her. She knew it would be 15 minutes, than she would be home. She kept driving she drove into Southfork, and parked her car. She couldn't believe she got away from Mandy. She hated Brian but she hoped he would be OK, she knew Mandy would lose it when she finds her gone. She got out of the car it was late but she saw the lights on. She was walking to the door when JR came flying out grabbing her.
"Where have you been"?
Sue Ellen was shaking, "JR Dusty is dead, Mandy is sick she held me hostage, and killed Dusty"
"Oh God you were drinking again, were you out with some guy"?
"No I'm telling you the truth, her boyfriend Brian let me go". JR moved away from her she was hysterical.
"I'm telling you the truth , you got to believe me"
"Mandy killed Dusty that didn't happen"
Sue Ellen started to cry, than she held out her wrists they were all bleeding from the handcuffs. She whispered, "I was held like a animal for 2 days, and you don't believe me". JR saw the marks on the wrists, and he knew she was telling the truth. He was confused how could Mandy be so evil. He touched Sue Ellen's face, and walked her into the house, he wanted to call the Police. Bobby, Miss Ellie and Clayton saw Sue Ellen, they ran over asking her what happened? Sue Ellen kept looking at Clayton, she didn't know how to tell him about Dusty. She walked over, "Mandy Winger kidnapped me, but she had help Clayton"
"What are you saying Mandy Winger was holding you the last 2 days"?
"Yes but Dusty helped her, they both hate me, she wants JR"
"Dusty Sue Ellen are you drinking again"?
"No I'm not drinking, she killed Dusty because he wanted to help me. I saw him die, Brian killed him, and she was so cold. She starved , beat and tortured me for 2 days, I only got away because I told Brian I was pregnant"
JR walked over, "I called the Police, what you lied about being pregnant, that was a smart move"
"It is true JR, I'm pregnant I found out the day she grabbed me"
"Your pregnant for real"?
"Yes, I thought she was going to kill us both it was so awful".
"Shh Sue Ellen the Police will be here soon, I swear she is going to pay for this"? Clayton walked over, "Where is Dusty"?
"I don't know Brian took him somewhere, I'm so sorry Clayton". He had to sit down, Miss Ellie sat beside him, and held his hand.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 18, 2011 20:32:28 GMT -6
poor Sue Ellen thank goodness she got away..glad you updated!
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Post by Sanda on Aug 18, 2011 22:40:38 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am glad that Sue Ellen escaped. I feel bad for Clayton when he learns about Dusty's death.
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Post by jessie on Nov 29, 2011 16:03:55 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Everyone waited for the Officers to arrive, they came in taking down the statement, and they asked Sue Ellen to come with them to show them where she was held captive. She didn't want to go but JR said he would go with them. They left Clayton was so upset he went upstairs to his room. Miss Ellie didn't know how to comfort him. He loved Dusty, but she couldn't understand why Dusty would get involved in such a horrible thing with Mandy. She knew Sue Ellen dated Dusty but to harm her was something she couldn't fathom. She went upstairs to be with Clayton, she knew she had to help him come to terms with his loss, but she knew it was going to be hard for Clayton losing his only son, especially to murder.
Bobby and Pam were in the living room.
"Bobby I can't believe Mandy and Dusty would do this"
"Me either but JR keeps playing these games with ladies, it is bound to happen"
"Mandy didn't seem the type she held Sue Ellen captive, but she murdered Dusty"
"Lets hope she is caught, she is insane that is for sure"
"You don't think she would show up here do you"?
"I don't know but lets get Christopher , and John Ross, and take them to our room. I don't want to let them out of our sight. Lucy is away for the night so she is safe"
Bobby and Pam went upstairs to get the children.
Sue Ellen was telling the Officers where to go. She was afraid to go back, but she knew she had to do it. She told them the road to go down the house was at the end of this dirt road. They drove close they could see the house, but they parked under a tree. They didn't want to drive up to the house in case they opened fired on them. They told Sue Ellen and JR to stay in the locked car, and not come out. They left JR and Sue Ellen were quiet at first. JR whispered, "I can't believe she did this"
"She is insane you had to see her kill Dusty".
"He was insane to obviously"
"He tried to help me, he died for it"
"He brought you there so he died because of his own stupidity"
"This is our fault too we are married , and bring these people into our lives. I'm tired of it, I can't take it anymore"
"She will be caught, and it will be over"
"Really JR until the next lover goes insane"
"This is my fault now"?
"No both our faults, but Mandy obviously was insane in the first place"
"She wasn't that is why I don't get this"
"You don't get what she wants you JR, she was willing to kill for you"
"I need some air, I'm going for a walk"
"No your not leaving me here alone"
"Lets not talk than"
"Fine"
Sue Ellen turned away wishing the Police would get her away from here. She shut her eyes when JR whispered, "Sue Ellen"
"What"?
"Someone is watching from behind those trees, I saw them move"
"Sue Ellen turned, "Oh God is it the Police"?
"Don't think so they would come to the car, not hide behind a tree"
"Oh God JR"
"Shh I won't let her hurt you". Sue Ellen knew he meant what he said but he didn't stand a chance against a gun.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Nov 29, 2011 16:49:01 GMT -6
wow this is suspenseful I hope no one else gets hurt thanks for updating
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Post by Sanda on Nov 29, 2011 17:50:51 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope and pray that Mandy doesn't hurt anyone else. I also hope that the police catch Mandy before she hurts anyone esle.
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Post by jessie on Dec 2, 2011 17:44:22 GMT -6
Chapter 8
JR held Sue Ellen's hand she was shaking.
"Where are the Police JR"?
"Don't know I'm more worried who is out there watching us"?
"JR it is her I know it"
"Shh it will be OK we are in a locked car"
They were looking when someone came up to the side window with a crowbar, and smashed the window. Sue Ellen held on to JR he was shaking, he prayed the Police heard the noise. Sue Ellen started to scream when Ben reached in opening the door, yelling for them to come out. JR whispered, "Do as they say Sugar" Sue Ellen and JR got out Ben was pointing the gun. "You are a fool I gave you a chance, and you came back" He yelled at Sue Ellen pointing the gun at her.
"We had to the Police made us come back"
Ben yelled, "So your JR Ewing"?
"Yes, I'm so grateful you saved Sue Ellen's life"
"What a mistake that was look what she did in return".
They all turn as they heard someone walking up behind them. JR hoped it was the police but it was Mandy. She was smiling, "Oh JR so nice to see you again"
"Mandy please stop this, the Police will be coming back, you will be arrested"
"I'm sure they will but guess what they will only find her here" She smiled, "Ben kill her now" Ben walked over, JR pulled Sue Ellen close, "You kill her kill me too"
"JR you want to die for her I don't think so. Remember all the nasty names you called her, should I repeat them"?
"I was angry than I love her"
"What about me, you said you loved me"?
"I did but she wasn't to blame for everything it was me. I'm the one that ruined my marriage, I never should have hooked up with you"
"Well you did, and guess what I'm getting you back"
"Mandy the cops will be coming what should we do"?
"Get them both in the car, I will kill her later, I will make it painful, and I will enjoy it". She screamed, "Come with us hurry". They followed Ben as Mandy walked behind saying horrible things to Sue Ellen. JR whispered, "Sue Ellen I'm so sorry" Ben got to the car, "Get in now". They got in, and Ben jumped in the driver seat as Mandy got in the Passenger seat looking back at JR, and Sue Ellen.
"You both comfy"?
Sue Ellen leaned into JR as he held her staring at JR.
Mandy smiled, "JR tell me you don't remember all the stuff we did. You know you do, and you know I made you happy not her"
"Mandy stop"
"I will put a bullet in her head right this moment if you don't tell her how much you wanted, and needed me"
"I wanted you Mandy, you were a great lover, but I was wrong bringing you into my life"
"She didn't satisfy you did she"
"I was never satisfied, I needed to have women in my life, to satisfy my sexual drive"
Sue Ellen felt sick she looked at JR, he touched her face. "You were enough it was all me"
Mandy smiled, "Tell her how you called her worthless, and pathetic, and a ice burg princess. Tell her how you made love to her just to shut her up but she made you sick"
Sue Ellen pulled away from JR, "God you said that"
"Yeah to get what I wanted"
"You don't deserve me, or John Ross, I'm going to die for you that is the cruelest joke of all" Ben looked back Sue Ellen started to cry.
Mandy whispered, "I will let you see what me and JR have before you die"
"Kill me now you sick freak, I would rather die than watch him with you"
Mandy screamed, "Sure I can do that" JR yelled, "No I swear you hurt her, I will kill you myself". Mandy and JR stare at each other, as Sue Ellen stared at them both.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 2, 2011 18:10:31 GMT -6
great update, they are scary in here, I hope nothing bad happens to JR or Sue Ellen
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Post by Sanda on Dec 2, 2011 20:14:01 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope nothing bad happens to Sue Ellen or JR.
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Post by jessie on Feb 28, 2012 1:01:52 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Mandy pointed the gun at JR, and whispered, " I could shoot you JR, but I know after she is gone, you will want me, and I will make you happy. I can move in to Southfork, and take care of John Ross, and before long he will be calling me Ma Ma."
"Like Hell, he will never accept you"
"Well guess what Miss Texas, you will not be around to see it"
Sue Ellen wanted to cry but she would not give Mandy the satisfaction. JR went to wrap his arm around her but she pulled away.
"Sue Ellen you are not going to let her win, this is what she wants"
"You said all those horrible things about me to her"
"Yes but I didn't mean it, you know I love you"
"Really JR I don't think so"
Mandy giggled ," Ben looks like the love birds are a little angry"
Ben smiled but part of him felt sorry for Sue Ellen. He also knew once Sue Ellen was killed Mandy wouldn't need him anymore, she would want JR all to herself. He hated JR, he could kill him but he knew Mandy wouldn't go for that. Ben kept driving, and Mandy whispered, 'Well we are almost there, you will love the place it is so secluded, and beautiful, and we can have so much alone time one we get rid of the extra baggage"
Sue Ellen was losing it she was fed up with Mandy. She laughed but yelled out to Ben.
"Ben she will kill you too she wants JR, and guess what your extra baggage too. JR do you know Mandy had sex with Dusty she killed him, and she was getting it on with Ben here , you better watch out you might be next"
"How did you, and Dusty hook up Mandy"? JR asked
Mandy smiled, "God he hated you JR, but he hated your wife just as much. He said she was a user, and he went along with the plan but guess what he got cold feet because your Wife was begging for her life. I think the fool thought he could have her back, but she likes her men, but she has to have you. You never wanted her JR admit it, can you be honest once in your life"
"I loved Sue Ellen, I took what I had for granted. She wanted me to be a good husband, and I couldn't be because I was selfish, and I wanted to be what I was before I got married. I was so lucky to have you Sue Ellen but I felt pressured into getting married. I thought you would just be the good wife who stayed home gave my Parents the Grandchildren they wanted. I never thought you would turn the tables on me, and have affairs, but I know I'm to blame"
"I should have walked away, but I loved you"
JR touched Sue Ellen's face, and moved close whispering, " Forgive me"
" I'm scared JR"
JR pulled her close, and whispered " I will die before I let anything bad happen to you"
Mandy was watching them, she was livid she wanted to shoot them both on the spot, but she was going to give JR one more chance to prove his love. If he didn't she was going to kill JR, and Sue Ellen, they wanted to be together so badly she would make it possible but unfortunately for them they would die before they truly could make there marriage right.
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Post by jessie on Mar 5, 2012 2:24:02 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Mandy and Ben drove up to the cabin , this time no one would find them, and this was where everything would end once, and for all. Mandy was either leaving here with JR or alone, but she was going to make him make a choice, and if he chose Sue Ellen, Mandy was going to kill the one man she loved more than anything. She always thought JR loved her but Sue Ellen always got in the way. JR didn't love Sue Ellen how could he if he cheated on her all the time. He had some deep down pity for her, but Mandy was going to end that this weekend.
Ben parked the car, and turned to Mandy , and asked her what she wanted him to do?
" Get them in the house, what else do you think we should do"?
"Mandy what is it about this guy that you like so much. He cheated on her, and look at her she is beautiful. He will cheat on you too, I love you Mandy lets tie them up, and get out of here, and never look back"
"You saying he would rather have this witch than me"?
"He used you Mandy don't you get it"
Mandy smacked Ben shocking Sue Ellen, and JR. Ben was so angry he wanted to hurt her back. She has been treating him like crap. She made love to Dusty knowing it was killing him inside. He had to use every ounce of restrain not to shoot her for hitting him. She could see Ben was angry so she leaned over touching his cheek.
"I'm so sorry Ben, you know I will make it up to you. These two are handcuffed, lets get them inside, and than we can decide what to do"?
'You think you can get rid of me Mandy but I'm not Dusty, I will kill you first"
Mandy moved close kissing Ben, JR and Sue Ellen were staring . Ben finally got out of the car, and pulled Sue Ellen out of the car. Mandy got JR out on the other side. Ben whispered to Sue Ellen, "You fool why did you come back"?
"I had no choice"
"Now you will die, this is your fault"
"Please she is crazy"
Ben pulled her arm, and Mandy told JR to start walking toward the cabin. JR kept his eye on Sue Ellen making Mandy mad. She walked over pushing Sue Ellen, making her fall. Her hands were tied so she could not protect herself. She was bleeding, and JR screamed at Mandy that she would pay for that.
"Really JR should I put a bullet in her head right now" She grabbed Sue Ellen by the hair, making her cry out.
"Stop I'm sorry"
"What did you say"?
"I'm sorry please stop hurting her, she isn't the one that hurt you"
'Yes she was such a loser she stayed, if she only walked away we would be happy"
"Hurt me if you have to hurt someone"
"No I love you JR, enough talking right now lets go in the cabin"
Ben pulled Sue Ellen up she was crying as he pulled her to the cabin, as Mandy and JR followed. They went inside Ben put Sue Ellen on the couch, and told Mandy he had to get her a cloth to stop the bleeding from her chin.
"Let her bleed to death"
JR tried to focus on Mandy but he wanted to kill her. He could see Ben was giving him looks like he wanted to kill him. Mandy walked over to JR, and touched his chest as she moved real close.
'JR tell me you have not missed me, you knew we were great together. I gave you whatever you wanted, I was what you needed you said so more than once remember that"
JR whispered, "I love you Mandy you are what I want"
Sue Ellen couldn't believe her ears , she felt ill. JR whispered, 'Take these restrains off, and the two of us can go upstairs, and make love"
Ben stood in shock, Mandy touched JR's lips as she whispered, " Kiss me"
JR brought his lips to hers, and they kiss. Ben was about to say something but he didn't have a chance , Mandy raised her gun, and shot him in the chest. He fell backward, Sue Ellen screamed even JR was shocked. Ben started to gasp for air, he was dying, he felt himself slipping away. Mandy walked over kneeling down, and touched his face smiling at him.
'Ben you were great but I'm sorry you would never take JR's place. You and Dusty were amazing friends but you have die."
"You witch"
"Yeah whatever makes you feel better, just die already" They all watched as Ben slowly slipped away. JR even felt sick inside Mandy was not the woman he knew when he first met her. She was beautiful, and young, and full of life but now he felt ill just looking at her. She was sick, and he knew now he would have to do anything to protect Sue Ellen, because this was all his fault. He knew Mandy would kill them both in a instant so he had to gain her trust he had to get her to trust him enough to take the restrains off , than maybe he could do something, but he knew the chances of losing Sue Ellen was great. He knew if he lost her because of his actions he would die, and he knew he could never face John Ross again to tell him why his Mother was killed. He may die trying but right now the only thing that mattered to him was saving Sue Ellen he owed her that much.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Mar 7, 2012 7:20:17 GMT -6
very good chapter Jessie excellent writing as always!!
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Post by jessie on Mar 12, 2012 14:21:08 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Mandy was losing it, and JR knew he had to calm her down. She was pointing the gun at Sue Ellen, and anything could happen.
"Mandy please lets talk"
"About what JR us"?
"I never realized how much you loved me until now."
"What are you saying"?
"Seeing you doing all this for us it is kind of exciting". Sue Ellen was staring, and JR turned to her.
"Sue Ellen you were never like this . Mandy is willing to do anything for me"
"God you are sick JR"
"No I finally realized you are not worth it. Mandy you let her go be with my boy, and the two of us will be together"
"What are you planning, I let her go, and you play the hero"
"No I will divorce Sue Ellen we can move away, and be a family. You can give me more children Sue Ellen is to old to give me another one. It took years for her to get pregnant, and she made me look like a fool with the affair with Troll Barnes".
Sue Ellen felt tears come down her cheek. Part of her thought he was saying all these cruel things to her just so Mandy would trust him. It hurt none the less, and she had to try to stay calm because she wanted to scream.
Mandy walked over touching JR's chest, and whispered, "Kiss me like you did when we first met". JR knew it would hurt Sue Ellen but her feelings had to be spare he was doing this to get her out of here alive. He brought his lips over to hers, he was still restrained with handcuffs behind his back. He felt Mandy lift his shirt touching his bare chest. He hoped she didn't expect him to make love with Sue Ellen there. He didn't think he could do that to Sue Ellen, but he knew he was getting to Mandy.
Mandy moved away smiling at Sue Ellen. "Hey Sue Ellen would you like to see more"?
Sue Ellen turned her face, and Mandy ran over screaming at her. Sue Ellen yelled, "No I saw enough"
"Really your man is finally realizing you are useless"
"God shut up Mandy"
Mandy raised her hand but JR yelled, "Just let her go, we can leave here, and start our life over"
"You didn't want me to hit her why"?
"Why bother is she worth it"?
"Is this a game to you JR, you think I'm stupid"
"No you are amazing Mandy, you know I love you"
"Prove it"
"What am I suppose to do"
Mandy walked over , and took the handcuff key out of her pocket, and undid the handcuffs. JR was surprised he turned to Mandy but she pointed the gun at him.
"Smack her , and tell her she is nothing to you, and mean it"
"No"
"Smack her or I will kill her right this minute"
JR looked at Sue Ellen he could see she was terrified. He walked over to her, he hated himself more than anything at this moment. He hit her, and yelled, that is for all the crap you put me through over the years. You were no Mother or Wife, I hate you Sue Ellen. "
Sue Ellen was crying he hit her hard. She didn't say anything JR could see she was going into shock, and he wanted to say something hold her, and comfort her but he couldn't.
Mandy smiled, "Wow that hit was awesome, it will leave a bruise for sure, maybe you should do it again"
"Mandy what will that prove can you see she is hurting that is what you wanted"
"No I want her suffering, and I don't think she suffered enough"
"God I said I want you lets leave her here, and we will go, and never look back"
Mandy kept the gun pointed at JR but moved toward the kitchen. She grabbed a pair of scissors, and walked over to JR.
"She was Miss Texas, she was pretty, but she was a stuck up snob. I want her to feel ugly cut her hair off , I want to see her face than"
Sue Ellen turned, "No just kill me, stop this"
JR grabbed the scissors, and Sue Ellen pleaded. "No JR don't do this let her kill me" He held her down as he started cutting her hair as Mandy laughed, and Sue Ellen stared at JR with such hurt in her eyes he couldn't stand it.
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