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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 12, 2010 11:08:36 GMT -6
great update. I hope Sanda will be okay, I dont like what Luke did. I hope Sanda and Reid will be okay after this
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Post by jessie on Oct 12, 2010 19:52:45 GMT -6
Chapter 11
Reid arrived at Sanda's place, and ran inside. He got there in 5 minutes, he see's Luke leaning against the couch. He ran over to Sanda touching her face. "Sanda OMG I'm so sorry". Reid yelled at Luke, "What happened Luke, what did you do"?
"I grabbed her she fell, she hit her head on the coffee table". Reid ran to the kitchen grabbing some towels, running over trying to stop the bleeding. Luke walked over, "Reid I'm sorry, I swear I didn't come here to hurt her".
"Really Luke why did you come than"?
" I had to ask her why she was doing this to us"?
"She doesn't know about us Luke" Reid was taking her vitals, he saw Cujo by the stairs. He knew he was feeling the stress, he looked so wild. "Luke go outside see if the ambulance is coming, they should be here". Luke was crying but ran outside, and a minute later came in, "They are here Reid".
"Thank GOD", The Paramedics ran in, and ran over to Sanda. Cujo started to hiss, but the paramedics yelled, "Get the cat away from us". Reid grabbed Cujo, and ran upstairs with him. He laid him in his bed, and whispered, "I will be back Cujo, promise". He ran to the door, shutting it, and running back downstairs. They were putting Sanda , on the stretcher. He walked over, "she has lost a lot of blood, I'm going to follow you in my car". They took Sanda, and Reid was running out. He heard Luke yell, "Reid please talk to me".
"I can't I have to see if she is ok Luke" Reid jumped into the car, and took off. Luke sat on the porch steps, and started to cry. "What have I done, OMG don't let her die". He shut her door, and got in his car, and drove to his Mom house. He got there, and ran inside screaming for his Mom. Lily ran downstairs," Luke what is wrong, why are you yelling like that"?
"Mom, I'm in trouble, I hurt someone, I'm so sorry". Lily was shocked she walked over, "who did you hurt Luke"?
"A young nurse at the hospital, someone Reid has been seeing"
"Reid, I don't understand"?
" He is falling for a girl, where does that leave me"? Lily walked over trying to comfort Luke but he ran upstairs, to his old room. Lily didn't know what to do, but she needed help, Luke was in trouble. She called Holden, and he said he would be home in 10 minutes. Lily walked upstairs, and went to Luke's room, and knocked.
At the Hospital
Sanda was rushed into the Emergency room, and the Doctor's were examining her. Reid waited outside, but he couldn't stand waiting, he couldn't lose her now. Chris Hughes walked out, "Reid she is in a coma, we got the bleeding under control. She is being taken to intensive care, she will be monitored round the clock".
"Chris, I'm going to see her, she has to be alright".
"Reid what is going on, why were you at Sanda's house"?
"We are friends Chris good friends"
"What happened at Sanda's house, how did she fall"?
"I don't know ask Luke, I wasn't there"? Reid ran down the hall, and walked into the intensive Care unit, and walked over seeing Sanda. He held her hand, "Sanda you have to fight, don't you leave me". He touched her face, and started to cry, "what have I done to you and Luke, this is all my fault". He stayed holding her hand, he wasn't going to leave her side, until she came out of this coma.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 12, 2010 19:59:45 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Sanda comes out of her coma. Please don't let Sanda die. I am glad that Reid is sitting beside Sanda in the ICU until she wakes up. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 13, 2010 19:29:31 GMT -6
wonderful chapter, its sad that it came to this and Reid is so confused, I hope he figures things out soon and that no one else gets hurt
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Post by jessie on Oct 13, 2010 21:16:14 GMT -6
Chapter 12
Reid sat with Sanda staring at her, remembering her smile, and her laugh. He has tears down his cheek, he felt so guilty. He can't lose Sanda, he just can't. He jumped when he felt someone touch his shoulder.
"Bob what are you doing here"?
"I came to check on Sanda, no change"?
"No, they stopped the bleeding, but she hit her head really hard".
Bob touched his shoulder, "What is going on Reid, do you want to talk"?
"Talk no not really, I want Sanda to wake up".
Bob was about to leave, when Reid whispered, "I love her Bob". Bob was shocked he walked back, "you love her, like a friend"?
"More than a friend Bob, I don't know what is going on? I have these feelings that I can't explain. I love being around her, she makes me laugh. This is my fault Bob, I don't know what happened today? I think Luke hurt her, because I hurt him. I hate myself for hurting him, but I didn't know this would happen"
"Are you saying you want to be with Sanda not Luke"?
" I'm confused ok, I know this is wrong. She is paying for my mistake, but it was real Bob, I love her". Bob touched his shoulder, "Calm down Reid, this is confusing, but it happens. You have to make a choice, don't you get involved with Sanda , if your going to hurt her after. You make the choice that is right for you, don't worry about hurting them, one of them will be hurt. Reid I really like you, I know you will make the right choice". He walked out shutting the door, and Reid wiped tears from his eyes. He knew Bob was right he has to make a choice. He touched Sanda's face, and brought her hand up kissing it. He whispered please come back to me Sanda". He sat in the chair, it was 5 hours later, he heard, someone call his name. He opened his eyes, and jumped up seeing Sanda staring at him. She was pale but so beautiful, but she looked upset, and confused too.
"Sanda your back, I was so worried".
"Reid".
"Don't talk you need rest Sanda".
"No, what was Luke talking about"?
" Can we talk about it later, you shouldn't be stressed right now".
"Reid please, why is Luke so upset"?
" We were together, he felt like I cheated on him with you"
"You and Luke , I don't understand"?
"We were a couple Sanda, I know your confused"
Sanda has tears falling down her cheek, " I thought you liked me, was it a game"?
"No, I really like you Sanda, I don't know what I'm feeling?. I do know you are the one, I think about 24/7, I can't explain this".
"Where is Luke"?
"At home, I think I have been here with you all night".
"He was so angry, I was so afraid Reid".
"Tell me the truth, did Luke hurt you on purpose or was it a accident"?
"He was out of it, he grabbed me I lost my balance, and that is all I remember"
"Luke is a good person, he is angry, and he has every right to be"
"I'm tired Reid, but I'm worried about Cujo, he must be so scared"
"Yes, he was frantic, I locked him in your room".
"Reid go to him , he hasn't been alone this long. I need to know he is ok, please Reid"
"Ok, I will go see him, and feed him, but I'm coming back".
"Ok, I'm so tired, give Cujo a hug for me". Reid smiled, "I will be back soon, goodbye". Reid left, and was walking down the hall. He heard someone call out his name. He turned it was Holden, and he was shocked, as he was knocked to the ground, after Holden punched him.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 13, 2010 23:07:46 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am soo happy that Sanda is Ok. Poor Reid I wonder who he is going to choose. I know that Reid loves Sanda but I don't want Reid to hurt Sanda. I love that Reid is going to go and check on Sanda's cat Cujo. I LOVED the talk between Bob and Reid in this chapter. I don't like that Luke's father Holden punched out Reid at the hospital. I hope that Holden doesn't go and confront Sanda while she is in the hospital.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 14, 2010 10:48:12 GMT -6
great update, Holden was out of line, I hope no one else gets hurt. very good writing as always
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Post by jessie on Oct 14, 2010 12:51:14 GMT -6
Chapter 13
Holden went after Reid again, but Bob grabbed his arm. "This is a hospital, what are you doing Holden"?
"This punk has destroyed Luke, I knew you were no good". The nurses were looking and Bob yelled, "Come to my office, I won't have any of this in my hospital". Reid got up walking to Bob's office, and Holden followed. Bob shut his door, and told them both to sit down. Reid sat down, but Holden was yelling at him, calling his names. Reid jumped up, "I'm sorry Luke got hurt, but this is between us, not you Holden".
"Really what kind of game are you playing Reid"?
"I'm not playing any game, and I'm not going to discuss my private life with you".
"You went after Luke, and got him, than you destroy him".
"I know this sounds crazy, but I don't know what happened. I was fine, and I met Sanda, she was so different. We hit it off, just friends at first, but we both have gotten closer".
"Does she know about Luke"?
"Yes, because Luke went there, and he hurt her Holden".
"That is your fault, not Luke's, you will pay for this".
"I'm paying now, Sanda is in here hurt, she doesn't deserve that. Luke is in pain, and so am I, but don't you dare threaten me".
"What did you say Reid, I will knock you out, if you yell at me again"? Bob jumped up, "Both of you stop, Holden your angry, but this is between Luke and Reid. Luke needs help to Holden he hurt Sanda, it wasn't her fault. He should have confronted Reid not her. The Police want to talk to Sanda, if she says he hurt her on purpose, I'm sure they will arrest your son. I don't want anymore fighting in this hospital , do I make myself clear". Holden got up, walking out of the room. Bob looked at Reid, "you have to make a choice soon Reid, you can string both of them along. You are to blame for this, but I truly believe, you didn't do it to hurt anyone". Reid walked to the door, "I will never forgive myself", he left, and Bob sat down.
Reid walked out to his car, and drove to Sanda's place. He let himself in, with her key. He ran upstairs, and opened the bedroom door. He was surprised Cujo was still laying in his bed, where he left him. He walked over, "Hey Cujo, I know you miss Sanda, but she will be home soon. She loves you, and she asked me to give you a big hug. I'm not sure if your up for that, so give me a sign before I touch you"
Cujo lifted his head, and meowed, almost making Reid cry. He knew Cujo missed her, and it was all his fault. He lifted Cujo up, carrying him to the bed, and he sat holding him to his chest. He whispered, " I miss her too Cujo, she should be here with us. I don't know what to do, I have made so many people unhappy including you. I'm so sorry, I really love Sanda Cujo, but am I good for her? I don't know, I'm so afraid I will hurt her, she doesn't deserve that". Reid started to cry, and he was shocked, Cujo touched his face with his paw. He looked into Cujo's eyes, and it was like he was telling him everything would be alright. Reid laid back on the bed, and Cujo snuggled beside him. Reid petted him, and he whispered, the three of us make a great team don't you think"? Cujo meowed, and Reid started to laugh, " Cujo, your the only animal, that I have bonded with buddy". Cujo was purring, and Reid laid beside him, he couldn't leave him, he knew he needed comfort, and he smiled, he was falling in love with Cujo too, what was happening to him?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 14, 2010 14:14:24 GMT -6
I'm glad Bob broke up the fight. Very good scene with Reid and Cujo. Awesome writing as always
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Post by Sanda on Oct 14, 2010 17:16:35 GMT -6
Great update update Jessie. I am soo happy that Bob broken up the fight between Reid and Holden. Holden is awful for not even asking about how Sanda is doing since she is the one hurt in the hospital. I LOVED the scene between Reid and Coju. That scene also made me tear up as well Jessie. Reid has it bad for Sanda and Cujo. LOL
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Post by jessie on Oct 16, 2010 13:25:30 GMT -6
Chapter 14
Reid got up feeding Cujo, and made a coffee for himself. He turned everything off, and picked up Cujo. "I will be back, and I will tell your Ma Ma, you love her, and miss her like crazy. Don't be scared everything will be fine, I promise". Reid put Cujo down, and turned off some of the lights. He smiled, "Bye Cujo". He left locking the door, and running to his car. He put the bag in the passenger seat, with stuff Sanda might need. He got to the hospital, and went to the gift shop. The ladies in there loved him, he went there all the time for chocolate bars. He smiled, "I would like a nice gift for someone really important to me, she was hurt, I want to cheer her up. Lori ran over grabbing a teddy bear, "this will cheer her up, it is adorable". Reid smiled, holding the teddy bear, "this is cute, but OMG this is the one, I want". He picked up a stuffed kitten that look identical to Cujo. Reid actually whispered, "OMG you look like Cujo". Lori smiled, "she loves cats Reid"?
"Yeah she has one, Cujo he is pretty special too. I will take this and one of those flower arrangements, the one with the pink roses". Lori grabbed it, and brought the items to the counter. He was going to pay, when he saw something that caught his eye. He smiled, "Oh that is so pretty, can I see it". Lori took it out of the glass case, and Reid said he would take it. She wrapped it up, and handed him the stuff, after he paid. She waved as he left the store going up to the floor on the elevator. He was walking to her room, and went inside. She was awake, sitting up, she looked much better, still sore. He walked over, "your sitting up, how is your head Sanda"?
"Sore but better, Bob was here, he is so nice. He said if I'm feeling better by tomorrow, he might let me go. He said someone has to be home with me for a few days. I said I didn't know if I could arrange that or not"?
"I will speak with Bob, I'm up for a holiday Sanda'.
"You sure, I don't want to cause trouble for you at the hospital".
Reid smiled, "this flower arrangement is for you".
"Oh it is so pretty, I love pink roses, better than the red ones actually".
"That is strange me too". He handed her the kitten, and Sanda started to cry. "OMG my Cujo, this is the cutest gift anyone ever gave me".
"He does look like Cujo, he is not as loud as him though."
"How is my baby Reid, I miss him so much. He doesn't like being alone".
"He is fine, he was really sad when I got there. He does miss you Sanda, but we had a little chat, he is feeling better".
Sanda smiled, "I'm glad Reid".
He pulled out a small box out of his pocket, handing it to Sanda. She opened it, and the tears were flowing down her cheeks. She smiled, "Oh Reid this so so sweet". She lifted the necklace out of the box, It was a sterling silver chain with a Angel charm. "Can you put it on me please"?. Reid put it around her neck, and she laid back. He touched her cheek, "I'm so sorry Sanda, I have to explain everything to you , this is my fault".
She took his hand, "It is ok Reid, I need to know what is going on".
Reid sat back, and prayed she understood.
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Post by Sanda on Oct 16, 2010 14:20:49 GMT -6
Cute update Jessie. I LOVE the gifts that Reid got for Sanda while she is in the hospital especially the little stuffed kitten and the Angel necklace. I LOVE cats and Angels. I hope and pray that Sanda will understand and forgive Reid when he explains everything to her.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 16, 2010 16:35:15 GMT -6
very good chapter, Reid was very thoughtful. I hope she will forgive him
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Post by tammie on Oct 17, 2010 15:13:05 GMT -6
Hi Jessie Oh the drama....nice writing. Hope that all ...will be happy. To let live..and love... .
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Post by jessie on Oct 19, 2010 15:32:24 GMT -6
Chapter 15
Reid was shaking he was so nervous, he knew he might push Sanda away forever. He had to tell her the truth, and take his chances she deserved that. Sanda smiled, "Reid you look so scared, just tell me whatever is on your mind. It has something to do with Luke doesn't it"?
"Yes, I'm so sorry he hurt you, Sanda".
"He scared me Reid, he wasn't making sense, what is wrong with him"?
"He is angry, he is a good person, he didn't mean to hurt you on purpose".
"He grabbed me and I fell, I don't think he wanted to hurt me on purpose"
"Sanda there is something you need to know about me. I know this will make you upset, but please hear me out."
" I will Reid your scaring me".
" Luke was my partner Sanda, we were together before I met you. "
"Your Partner, Reid"?
"Yes, Sanda I was in love with Luke, but now I'm feeling stuff I haven't ever felt before. I never was attracted to a woman, but being with you, I have these feelings that feel wonderful, and Scary at the same time". Sanda turned away, tear streaming down her face. Reid was devastated, "Sanda please don't turn away from me, I'm so sorry".
" You are having a same sex relationship with Luke"?
"I was yes Sanda"?
"Oh God, why did you lead me on, what is wrong with you Reid".?
"I didn't lead you on, I loved your company, and when we kissed, it was beautiful. It was like no other kiss I ever had, I can't explain this really because I don't understand myself".
"What about Luke, it is no wonder he came after me Reid"?
"I'm so sorry , I hurt you both, but I really didn't mean too".
"I know but you did, is that fair Reid, I don't think so"?
"Sanda please say you forgive me, I feel so horrible".
"I forgive you, I can see you really didn't mean to hurt me. I really liked you Reid, this hurts so much". Sanda started to cry, Reid got a kleenex wiping the tears away.
"Go to Luke Reid, I will be fine, I'm ok".
"Sanda that is the problem, I don't want Luke, I want you"?
"What are you saying"?
"I'm saying, I can't let you go, it is you I want. I'm so sorry for all of this, but will you give us a chance"?
"Reid I'm so confused this is to much for me, I'm so tired".
"Sanda please, don't push me away, just think about it please".
"I will can you leave me alone for awhile, I need to think". Reid got up touching her face, and he leaned over kissing her. He smiled, "I will come back later, I do love you Sanda, I really do". He walked to the door, and Sanda wanted to scream, for him to come back. The door shut, and Sanda shut her eyes, and started to cry. She couldn't believe this was happening, what was she going to do"?
Reid walked out sitting on a chair, with his hands over his face. He felt someone touch his shoulder, and he opened his eyes. He was shocked Luke was standing in front of him, he looked so lost, and pale. Reid stood up, "Luke what are you doing here"?
"I needed to see you Reid, we have to talk". Reid touched his arm, "yes, lets go to my office", they both walked toward his office. Reid knew he had to explain everything to Luke, but he knew this might be the hardest thing he ever did in his life.
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