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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 29, 2010 1:56:09 GMT -6
This story is starting to freak me out Jessie.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 30, 2010 17:41:43 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie. This story is getting creepy. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Oct 2, 2010 14:32:53 GMT -6
Chapter 6
They all went into the living room, and Nina asked them what they wanted to drink? They all were ordering alcoholic drinks except Sue Ellen. She kept looking around the place, she felt cold inside. She felt like someone was watching them, she held on to JR. Marilee walked over, "you afraid he will disappear"?
"Marilee please, I don't feel well leave me and JR alone".
"Awe go up, and lay down me and JR will find something to do". Sue Ellen pushed Marilee making her fall , spilling her drink all over herself. She jumped up grabbing Sue Ellen, and they were arguing, when Nina yelled. "Enough you all are here for a reason, I have been told to tell you this. You will know what this weekend is all about in good time. If I were you, I would enjoy this evening tomorrow, might be a bit tough on you all . I am going to get dinner started, I will come back and get you when it is time".
"Excuse me Nina, who do you think you are"? Marilee yells.
"Me, I'm being paid pretty good to take care of all you rich snobs"..
Sue Ellen looked at JR, "What is going on, I demand to get off this crazy island".
Sue Ellen ran over to Nina, "Tell whoever your working for, this joke is over. I want the ferry to come back now. I have a son who needs me, please, I don't like it here".
"I'm sorry Mrs. Ewing, you never should have came. It is the men and those 2 woman", pointing to Marilee and Cindy that caused all of this. Nina turned and walked out , leaving everyone staring. Sue Ellen started to cry, "JR what is going on, is someone going to hurt us"?. They all jumped when music started playing, but they couldn't see where it was coming from?. JR, Bobby and Ray knew that music, they grabbed Sue Ellen, Pam and Donna, they knew this weekend was some sort of revenge, over something that happened 19years earlier. JR whispered, "Bobby who could it be, I don't get this"?
Bobby didn't speak, JR saw pure terror on his face. Marilee ran over screaming, "turn that crap off you sick freak. Come out and show your face, stop scaring everyone".
JR yelled," Shut up Marilee your making it worse".
"You shut up JR, how dare you talk to me that way?. You can treat your wife like crap, but not me". Sue Ellen grabbed JR, "I can't take this JR, I'm so scared".
They heard a voice come over the speaker. It was disguised, with a voice machine, so they couldn't tell if it was a man or a lady. "Are you all scared yet, you should be, I was that night?. Do you remember what you did, you sick pieces of crap"? Pam and Donna were looking not knowing what to think. Marilee yells, " What night are you talking about"?
"You know what night, you are still the Witch you were back than. You and JR were all over each other, like raging animals. You both didn't care who saw you."
"Sue Ellen it was so long ago, before we were married". JR says
"Stop JR, will I ever have a day where your sick past isn't going to haunt me".
"Sue Ellen you are not the only one, that should be mad. Marilee made out with someone else 20 minutes, after playing with JR". JR turned looking at Marilee who looked at Cliff. Afton screamed, "you Cliff, were you and JR taking turns"?.
" She came to me, he was treating her like crap. I was soothing her, she was upset". Sue Ellen ran out of the room, and Afton followed her. JR yelled, "OK now you have caused trouble come out, so we can see who you are".
"No, I'm not ready, the fun is just starting".
JR looked around, and everyone was quiet, even Marilee.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 2, 2010 14:43:41 GMT -6
great update, I hope everyone makes up, I dont think they need to be fighting right now
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Post by Sanda on Oct 2, 2010 16:09:40 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope everyone makes up as well.
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Post by jessie on Oct 4, 2010 22:36:34 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Sue Ellen ran upstairs, and walked into her room slamming the door. She stood looking around the room, but was afraid to be alone. She started to cry, when she heard her door open. Afton walked in, and shut the door. "Sue Ellen we can't let Marilee keep us from our men. She will go after them, we have to show her she isn't going to win this time".
"I hate it here Afton, I'm so afraid, that person wants to hurt us".
"I think it is revenge, but they are scaring us, no one is going to get hurt".
They heard a bang against the wall, Sue Ellen grabbed Afton. They both were scared they couldn't move. Sue Ellen whispered, "lets go find JR, and Cliff". Sue Ellen opened the door, and her and Afton scream. JR and the others heard the scream, they ran upstairs, running to their room. They stood seeing Sue Ellen and Afton shaking holding each other . JR walked over, touching Sue Ellen, "Are you ok Sue Ellen"? She hugged JR, "OMG JR please get us off this island".
"What happened Sue Ellen"?
"There was someone all in black, they ran down the hall".
"Did they hurt you Sue Ellen"?
"No", Cliff walked over hugging Afton. Marilee laughed,"OMG are you two pathetic or what, you have to do this to get your man"?
Sue Ellen ran at Marilee, and JR and Bobby pulled her back. "I hate you Marilee, how dare you"?
JR touched Sue Ellen's face, "Lets go outside, and go for a walk. I think this place is creeping everyone out".
" Someone was outside my door, me and Afton both saw him JR".
' I know, but your freaking out, lets go get some air". Sue Ellen hugged JR, and he walked her downstairs. Cliff and Afton walked to their room, and Bobby and Pam went to theirs. Everyone else went downstairs, leaving Marilee all alone, upset and angry with everyone.
JR walked outside, he was taking Sue Ellen down by the water. They were talking and went over to the rock, and sat down. JR touched her face, "I'm so sorry, Sue Ellen, I didn't know this was going to happen"?
"What happened that weekend JR, did you guys hurt someone"?
" I didn't I swear, I don't know who is doing this"?
"How come she knows everything about you"?
" I don't know, please believe me Sue Ellen, I'm not lying". Sue Ellen leaned into JR , they were just relaxing enjoying the quiet. They jump when they heard a scream, and banging, it sounded like someone was chopping wood or something up. Sue Ellen was frantic, JR wanted to go back up to the house. He was afraid, maybe someone was planning on hurting them. They heard the banging get closer, and JR started to pull Sue Ellen running up to to the mansion. Sue Ellen fell crying she hurt her knees, she couldn't breath. He got her up, and they went inside, and he took her upstairs, knocking on Bobby and Pam's door. Bobby answered, and JR walked in, "What is going on, I don't remember anything bad happening that night we were here? I know I slept with Marilee, but that can't be why I'm here, what do you remember Bobby"?
Bobby stared at JR, he wanted to forget that night, He shook his head, "I don't remember anything bad JR". Sue Ellen hugged Pam, "Oh I'm scared, someone was outside scaring us". Pam looked at Bobby, and they vowed they would stay together tonight, nothing could happen, if they didn't separate.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 4, 2010 23:07:48 GMT -6
great update, I really hope nothing bad happens to any of them, well except maybe Marilee lol
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Post by Sanda on Oct 5, 2010 0:04:41 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that nothing bad happens to anyone. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Oct 11, 2010 22:32:57 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Sue Ellen and Pam were laying on the bed, they fell asleep. JR and Bobby were sitting in the chairs, both wondering, what would happen next, in this house? Bobby finally spoke, "JR I told you this was a mistake, what are we going to do now?
" I don't understand why this is happening. I know that night was wild, but nothing happened"? JR looked at Bobby, he was pale, and JR suddenly got scared. "What happened Bobby, did something happen that night"?
" Nothing JR, just shut up please". They both jump, when they hear Afton yelling in the hall. They were surprised Sue Ellen and Pam didn't wake up. They walked to the door, and went out in the hall, and shut the door. They walked to Cliff and Afton's room, and knocked on the door. They waited a few moments finally Afton opened the door, she was crying.
Bobby walked over, "Afton what is wrong"?
" Cliff he won't talk to me, and he walked out, and said he was tired of listening to me".
"He left you alone"?
"Yes, JR he probably is with Marilee, I'm surprised your not with her too. What does she have that all you men find so fascinating"?
"Afton, I'm not answering your question, come stay in the room with us, Bobby can go look for Cliff".
"Me, JR alone"?
"Oh Bobby don't be a baby, go find him". Afton smiled, "Bobby isn't a baby, you are JR, why should he go alone? We all should go together, I'm sure he will be in Marilee's room, and than I will kill him".
JR glares at Afton, "Fine lets get you to my room, and than me and Bobby will go find Cliff. Maybe the weirdo that is scaring us, has him and he will be the first victim".
"Shut up JR that is awful", Afton smacked him, and Bobby laughed, "Enough, Afton you just said you were going to kill him. He says something the same, and you slap him. Enough, lets go to the room, and stop this fighting, this isn't helping anyone".
"Can I slap her back", JR laughs, and Bobby turns, "JR don't be stupid". They got to the room, and open the door, JR and Bobby both stood staring. Afton walked into the room, "where is Pam and Sue Ellen"?
" OMG Bobby why did we leave them, where are they"?
"I don't know but they have to be close". Bobby looked in the bathroom, and the balcony, he was starting to panic. "JR this is crazy, where are they, I have had enough". Afton whispers, "Guys do you hear that, music is playing somewhere"? Bobby , JR , and Afton walked out of the room, and listened to hear where the music was coming from? They shut the bedroom door, and were walking toward the music. They were about to go around the corner, when they scream, they bumped into Pam and Sue Ellen. Afton laughed, "OMG you screamed louder than Pam and Sue Ellen, you both are terrified, where is Mommy JR"?
"Shut up Afton, Sue Ellen where were you"?
"You left us JR, how dare you leave us alone in this place".
"We heard mouth here screaming we went to check on her, Cliff is missing"?
"Cliff , OMG Bobby find him", Pam yells
"We are trying to find him, but we had to look for you both first".
They hear banging coming from downstairs. JR looked at Bobby , "what is going on, that sounds like someone chopping wood or a body up"? Afton screamed , "JR you are a jerk, what if someone is hurting Cliff"? Pam went running down the stairs, and Bobby chased after her. JR turned, "Afton , Sue Ellen go to our room, I will follow them". JR ran downstairs, and Sue Ellen and Afton stood in shock, but they both scream when someone walked up behind them.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 11, 2010 22:37:11 GMT -6
that had better be cliff behind them. I really hope nothing happens to Cliff. lol update soon great writing
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Post by jessie on Oct 13, 2010 20:08:03 GMT -6
Chapter 9
Sue Ellen and Afton see Cliff, and Sue Ellen hugged him. "OMG we were so worried about you, where were you"?
Afton smiles, " Where were you Cliff, you better not say with Marilee"?
"Oh you are nasty Afton, I just went walking, this house is creepy"
" Cliff we have to get out of here, something really strange is going on".
"I know, but we can get off the island, the phones are all dead"
"Well we can use our cell phones".
"I can't use mine , I can't get a signal".
"Where is JR Sue Ellen, he isn't with Marilee is he"? Sue Ellen smacked the back of his head, and he yelled, "Nice first her, now you, I will be dead from a brain hemorrhage with all the slaps to the head". Sue Ellen smiled, "I'm sorry, I had no right, but don't bring up Marilee right now, I'm freaking out right now" They hear someone coming it was Vaughn, and Sue Ellen laughed hearing Afton moan. "Hi guys, I can't find Marilee or Jordan they are not in their rooms".
"Oh maybe they are playing somewhere"? Cliff laughs , and Vaughn gave him a dirty look. Sue Ellen whispered, "Should we go to our rooms, or should we go find JR and Bobby"?
Vaughn smiled, "Afton you and Cliff go to your room, I will take Sue Ellen to her room, and wait for JR"
Sue Ellen grabbed Afton, "No, your not leaving me alone, your keeping me company". Cliff smiled, "Oh Vaughn is cool Sue Ellen, you can smack him in the back of the head if he gets out of line".
"Cliff Barnes, don't cross me", Cliff saw Sue Ellen's face, and he backed off. JR , Bobby and Pam ran upstairs, and yelled, "Where were you Cliff you idiot, here we are running around looking for you"
"I was going for a walk, is it any of your business"?
"Vaughn, do you remember anything bad that happened that night"?
Vaughn looks at Bobby, and he turned away, "No, I don't know who is doing this, but I'm getting scared. Marilee and Jordan are missing, and no they are not making out".
JR smiled, "Oh Marilee would cuddle up with him, if she can't get someone else she wants".
They all decide to go downstairs for a drink. Sue Ellen turned around, Vaughn was so close, she whispered, "don't Vaughn, I swear".
"What sorry"? JR glared at him, they walk into the living room. JR walked over , "who wants a bourbon"?
"Me", Sue Ellen says, and JR smiled, "Right ginger ale for you Sugar". They all jump when Valene come storming into the room. She ran at JR yelling, "what did you do JR, this whole weekend, has to be because you did something bad"?
"I had fun that weekend, and I slept with Marilee, but nothing bad".
"Really JR this was left on our bed, Gary is beside himself. You want to know what it says"?
"I guess your going to tell me Valene"?
Valene opened the letter and started to read.
Do you remember what you did that night, because I do every single day since?. I have hated you all , that night was fun for you all. You think you all can forget that night, and go on with your lives, while I'm telling you it isn't going to happen. I'm going to make you all pay, you will know how I felt that night, none of you cared about me, you used me, and threw me away like a piece of garbage. Do you remember me now, I'm sure you do Ewing"? You sleep well, tomorrow the real fun begins".
"JR your Ewing you hurt or used some girl, now we all are paying for it, what did you do you sick animal"?
"I didn't do anything, I didn't sleep with any young girl. I slept with Marilee, and she didn't write that letter. There is 2 other Ewing's here, Gary probably did something , the note was left in his room". Valene smacked JR, and ran upstairs. Gary stared at JR, and ran upstairs after Valene. Bobby was shaking, JR turned, "what happened that night Bobby, I didn't do anything"?
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Post by Sanda on Oct 14, 2010 0:00:59 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 14, 2010 10:54:14 GMT -6
very creepy, I would smack Cliff too, that was funny, I cant wait to see how this unfolds.
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Post by jessie on Oct 16, 2010 17:42:49 GMT -6
Chapter 10
Everyone was staring at Bobby and JR, they were glaring at each other. Sue Ellen walked over, "Bobby what happened, I can see it in your eyes, your hiding something"?
Pam grabbed Sue Ellen's arm hard, "Don't you dare blame him, we know JR is the pig in the family".
"Enough Pam, he said he didn't do anything other than fool around with Marilee. JR isn't a angel but obviously, the others invited here are not all innocent".
Cliff walked over, "Let me make something clear, I only slept with Marilee, no one else".
JR laughs, "Yes, after I did nice Barnes". Sue Ellen grabbed JR, "Stop this is not a joke, can you be serious ".
"Sugar I'm sorry, but I have had enough". JR yelled, "will you show your face, for God sake. OK someone hurt you, I'm sorry about that, why was I invited?. I was there, I honestly can say, I don't know what your so angry about? I'm guilty of a lot of crap, but I'm not guilty of anything. Why are you hiding, you obviously want some kind of revenge, show your face"?
Everyone waited no one came out or no voices came over a speaker. JR grabbed Sue Ellen's hand, "come on, lets go to our room, I 'm not staying with her tonight". JR glares at Pam, and Pam yells, " I wouldn't want to stay with you either, you make me sick". Pam screamed "I still think it is you JR, you are so going to pay for this". They all jump when Nina came into the room. She walked over to Pam, "My Boss said get off your high horse , and start looking in your own backyard. She said stop throwing blame everywhere but at you own precious Bobby". Pam turned, "OMG Bobby what did you do, did you hurt someone"?
"No, leave me alone". Bobby stormed out, running upstairs. JR knew Bobby was lying so did Ray. Donna turned to Ray, "what happened, Bobby confides in you all the time? Ray if you know tell us please, we deserve to know what happened"?
Ray looked at JR, "stop blaming JR he wasn't involved, he was with Marilee all night. We didn't see him much, he passed out in his room. He didn't know what happened, it was a game that turned bad." Sue Ellen hugged JR, and Pam screamed, "Bobby wouldn't hurt anyone, he isn't like that Ray"
" Pam , I'm sorry but that night, we all had a hand in destroying a young girls life. I know who it is, I remember her name, but I never saw her again. Marilee is the real blame, she was the one who brought her that night. She brought her for the guys who had no one, I was with Cindy, I didn't touch her".
Cindy sat down, "Oh God, it is her that wants revenge. We all laughed at her , we were so cruel".
JR walked over, "What did you do to her Ray"?
"I didn't do anything, I should have stopped it. She was so drunk, she was young, and she didn't realize what she was getting herself into. Marilee keep giving the girl drinks, we all saw she was out of it. We all knew she was just trying to fit in, but what happened next was wrong".
Vaughn sat down he couldn't catch his breath. JR walked over knelling down, "Vaughn, what is wrong"?
"I have to get out of here, I can't breath".
Sue Ellen whispered "Vaughn did you do something to her"?
"God forgive me, yes". Everyone stood shocked, and Pam yelled, "Why is Bobby feeling so bad than, you were the animal"?
JR yelled at her, "Shut up Pam, will you stop blaming everyone but Bob".
Pam ran out of the room, and upstairs.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 16, 2010 19:13:58 GMT -6
this is getting good, wonder what happened?
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