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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 6, 2010 10:40:38 GMT -6
amazing writing this is so good, I like how they are really trying to help Sue Ellen, this is going to have one heck of a payoff. wonderful!
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Post by Sanda on Sept 6, 2010 14:24:29 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I LOVE how Pam and Lucy trying to help Sue Ellen overcome her addiction to alcohol. You are an amazing writer Jessie. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Sept 6, 2010 23:36:11 GMT -6
Chapter5
Sue Ellen was curled up holding a pillow, she fell asleep. She was dreaming, and she saw JR, and he smiled at her . Sue Ellen cried out his name, and she was dreaming he was coming toward her. Then she saw Marilee, and she walked over kissing JR, and Sue Ellen screamed out his name. She was moving and thrashing around in the bed. She screamed, and Pam and Lucy ran into the room, going over to the bed. Pam put her hand on Sue Ellen, she was so hot, she was boiling up. Pam yelled, "get a cool cloth, she is in trouble Lucy".
Lucy ran into the bathroom, grabbing a face cloth getting it wet . She handed it to Pam, who put it on her forehead. Sue Ellen opened her eyes. She cried out," he is with her, what does he see in her"?
"Who Sweetie"?
"JR is with Marilee, he kissed her when he knew, I saw him"
"Sue Ellen your dreaming JR isn't here, either is Marilee"
Sue Ellen looked around the room, and shut her eyes. "Pam please one drink, it hurts so bad".
"No we are going to go outside for a small walk. It is beautiful outside, the walk will do you good. You are shaking, maybe the warm sun will help you".
"I can't Pam, it hurts to stand up".
"Try we have to get you moving, and maybe by tomorrow the worst will be over".
Sue Ellen sat up, and Pam helped her dress. She got up, and the three of them went outside. Sue Ellen smiled, "It is pretty outside today", as she walked down the stairs.
They were walking, and Lucy smiled, " I know this spot, it is beautiful, you can see the lake. We can sit there for awhile, and rest". Sue Ellen walked, and they got there, and Lucy was right it was beautiful. Sue Ellen sat down, holding her knee's, she whispered, "Go swimming you two, I will watch from here".
"No, we shouldn't leave you alone".
"I'm fine, I can't get any alcohol here, and I can't run. I will need help getting up". Pam and Lucy ran to the water, and jumped in. Sue Ellen watched, she was feeling sick, but she got this sharp pain in her stomach. She cried out, and Lucy and Pam ran back to her. She was crying, "OMG the pain, please I can't do this". Pam sat down, "yes you can, and you will, your going through withdrawal".
"I know, it is killing me Pam don't you care"?
"Yes, I do, that is why we are both here".
"I admire you for trying please take me home".
" No, not now, another day or two, and it will be out of your system".
"Kill me, I would rather die". Sue Ellen screamed
Pam shook her, "Don't you dare talk like that again".
"What do I have to live for , a husband who loves me"?
"John Ross who needs his Ma Ma" Lucy screams
"Don't yell at me, help me, I can't stand this" Sue Ellen was shaking, and Lucy sat beside her to. Pam and Lucy kept talking to Sue Ellen, until she calmed down. She laid her head on Pam's shoulder, and she held her tight. Lucy held her hand and the three of them, sat looking at the lake.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Sept 8, 2010 3:01:36 GMT -6
Great updates Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Sept 8, 2010 5:00:56 GMT -6
great update you are really writing this beatifully
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Post by Sanda on Sept 8, 2010 19:31:04 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by jessie on Oct 25, 2010 0:16:33 GMT -6
Chapter 6
Sue Ellen, Pam and Lucy started to walk back to the cottage. They could see Sue Ellen was really going through withdrawal now. Her hands were shaking so badly, but Pam and Lucy tried to pretend they didn't notice. She got to the house she sat on the couch, and started to cry. "I can't take this, I need something please". Pam sat beside her," try to relax", Lucy brought a blanket, and put it over her. Sue Ellen tried to shut her eyes, but she cried, "I'm going to be sick". Lucy ran and got a bucket, and Sue Ellen was so sick. Lucy looked at Pam, they both were scared, maybe they were wrong doing this alone. Pam ran and got a cool cloth putting it on Sue Ellen's forehead. She was shaking but burning up at the same time. She got sick again, and Lucy was getting scared. Sue Ellen laid back, "Oh I not going to survive this"
"Yes, you are, and your going to get healthy and stay healthy"
"Why are you doing this Pam, you don't even like me"?
"Lucy suggested this, and I thought it was a perfect idea. You didn't want to go into a rehab center so this was the only choice. We both care about you Sue Ellen, we wouldn't do this if we didn't"
"JR doesn't care, does he even know I'm missing"? Lucy smiled, "Yes, Grandma told him, don't worry about JR".
"Don't leave me alone, I'm scared".
"No, one of us will be here beside you the whole time promise". Sue Ellen finally shut her eyes, and drifted off asleep. Pam got up, and touched Lucy's face, "go have a sleep, I will stay with her. This is hard on you, but what you are doing Lucy, shows your really do care about her".
"We will get her healthy , and JR will hurt her again".
"No, this time, we won't stand by and watch this happen. She is hurting bad, I'm more scared she might get worse, and we are alone up here".
"Why is she getting so sick, she hasn't eaten"?
"It is the alcohol coming out of her system, she might get worse Lucy, be prepared".
"I hate seeing her like this Pam, I really do".
"Me too, go have a sleep, than we will have supper". Lucy ran upstairs, to have a nap, and Pam sat in the chair, watching Sue Ellen. It was 1/2hour later, Sue Ellen sat up, screaming scaring Pam half to death.
"Shh Sue Ellen, your going to be ok, calm down".
"Get them off me, Pam they are on my legs".
"Nothing is on your legs, Sue Ellen your dreaming".
Sue Ellen screamed , "OMG get them off me", Pam laid her back, trying to hold her still. Lucy came running downstairs, actually falling on the bottom step. "OMG what is wrong, why is she yelling"?
"She thinks there is something crawling on her, there is nothing there lucy".
"She is having hallucinations, what are we going to do"?
"Hold her, until she calms down". Pam was holding her, she was struggling, finally she collapsed in Pam's arms. She held her close, and tears fall down Pam's cheek. She hated seeing her suffer, what was going to happen next?
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Post by jennifer1983 on Oct 25, 2010 2:18:08 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 25, 2010 12:51:23 GMT -6
poor Sue Ellen, Lucy and Pam are doing the right thing, I hope JR will be supportive
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Post by Sanda on Oct 28, 2010 19:40:27 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. Poor Sue Ellen. Pam and Lucy are doing the right thing. I hope that JR will be supportive.
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Post by jessie on Oct 31, 2010 0:46:37 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Sue Ellen laid back, but it only lasted a few moments, she jumped up again. Screaming making Lucy and Pam scared, they both tried to talk to her. She was frantic, she was shaking, Pam laid her back. "Sue Ellen calm down, there is nothing on you".
"Yes, there is"
Lucy ran over getting a cool cloth, and put it on Sue Ellen's forehead. She seemed to calm down a bit. Lucy and Pam both waited for her to wake up again, but she seemed to be resting. Lucy heard a car drive up, and she looked at Pam, "who would that be"?
"I don't know check, but if you don't know them, don't open the door". Lucy walked to the door, and looked, "OMG it is JR and Bobby".
"Thank God, open the door". Lucy opened the door, and they walked up.
"Lucy where is Sue Ellen"?
"JR she is bad, she is having a really rough time". JR ran in, and Pam stood up, "JR maybe she needs professional help, she is having hallucinations it is really bad". JR walked over, Sue Ellen was so pale, she looked so fragile, he sat beside her touching her chin. Sue Ellen moaned and opened her eyes, and she started to cry, "JR help me please".
"What have you done to yourself Sue Ellen"?
"I need something please , just one drink. I can't take this anymore".
"No, you can't and your not putting anymore alcohol in your body".
"I hate you JR, I'm like this because of you". Sue Ellen stood up, but fell, her legs gave out. JR went to help her but she screamed "don't touch me, I can get up myself". Sue Ellen was shaking but she grabbed the couch, and tried to pull herself up. Everyone was watching it was killing them, she couldn't do it, but she refused help. Bobby walked over, "let me help you Sue Ellen".
"Bobby I need one drink, just one please". He lifted her up, and took her upstairs. Pam ran up behind him, and JR sat on the couch. He was shocked, at how bad Sue Ellen was. Lucy walked over, "are you going to help her, or run and be with one of your lovers, and forget about her"?
"Lucy not right now, I feel sick".
"You should , you did this to her, she put the drink into her body. You drove her to drink, so you just as much to blame as her".
"I know Lucy, I know".
"Go to her, hold her, help her get through this night".
"She doesn't want me Lucy, you just saw that"
"She is hurting, get up, and go to her now". JR looked at Lucy, and he did get up, walking to the stairs. "Lucy how am I suppose to help her, she is hurting so bad"?
"Talk to her, hold her, that is all you can do right now JR".
JR walked upstairs, and went to Sue Ellen's room. Bobby and Pam were talking to her. JR walked in, "Can I have a moment alone with my wife"? Bobby and Pam walked to the door, and shut it. JR walked over, and Sue Ellen turned away from him. He sat down, "I know I have done so many rotten things to you Sugar, but I promise you, I will help you get through this". He laid beside her, he touched her shoulder, and she pulled away at first. She turned, and JR looked into her eyes, and he could see she was scared, and so alone. He pulled her into his arms, and held her, she struggled to get away, but eventually she fell asleep in his arms.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Oct 31, 2010 1:33:46 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Oct 31, 2010 15:53:37 GMT -6
I'm glad JR went to her, hopefully he can help her, you are doing a beautiful job with this
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Post by Sanda on Nov 2, 2010 0:14:36 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that JR will be able to help Sue Ellen.
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Post by jessie on Jan 20, 2011 1:46:42 GMT -6
Chapter 8
Sue Ellen woke up shaking her whole body ached. She had to go to the bathroom, she tried to stand up, but she couldn't her legs were so shaky. She saw JR, he was sleeping she couldn't ask for help. She sat on the bed, she just wanted to die. JR woke up, and moved over to her.
"Sue Ellen what is wrong"?
"What have I done to myself, I can't walk to the bathroom JR"? He got up putting his arm around her, and she walked slowly. He helped her over, he had to help her on the toilet, she was so ashamed of herself. She finished, she washed her hands, with him standing behind her, practically holding her up. She was crying, he whispered, "Sugar you have to eat something, your so weak"
"I can't everything I eat comes right back up. JR one drink, it will stop my shaking , I know it"
"Sue Ellen no, you are going to get clean , one drink will ruin everything that you accomplished this week"
"What have I accomplished, nothing JR, look at me, I'm sick"
"Your a alcoholic say it Sue Ellen".
"Your a cheat , a lousy husband, and I hate you"
"Well to bad, I'm staying here with you, until you are better. If you want to leave me after so be it"
"Go to Hell JR". She walked away from him falling on the ground. She screamed, "This is all your fault"
"I cheated, I treated you awful, but you did this to yourself Sue Ellen".
"I hate you, go away".
"Come on lets get you in bed".
"No, I will do it myself, leave me alone". She tried to get up, he was dying watching her, but she wouldn't let him help. She crawled to the doorway, trying to pull herself up by using the door frame. She was way to weak, she fell again. JR ran over, "Let me help you stop being stubborn"
"No"
JR lifted her up, and she screamed, but he helped her to the bed. She laid down, and yelled, "Just kill me, I would rather die than live like this".
"Well your not dying Sue Ellen, you stop being selfish".
"I'm not selfish, I'm tired of this"
"Than sleep, you might feel better in the morning". She cried, he sat beside her, and she yelled, "Go sleep somewhere else"
"No, I'm staying here, I don't trust you"
"Oh God you are something JR, I can't move, I obviously can't go out , and find a bottle can I"?
"No, but you might hurt yourself, your talking like a idiot". Sue Ellen tried to smack JR, he grabbed her hand. "You go to sleep, I don't want to lock you up, but if you give me no choice."
"Do it, I don't care, divorce me, just leave me alone".
"Go to sleep, your going to make yourself sick". Sue Ellen stared at JR , she had no energy to fight, she cried, "I'm thirsty, can you get me water"?
"You admit you need me than"?
"No"
"Well than forget the water"
"You are a idiot, I'm thirsty"
"Say you need me Sue Ellen".
"I need you, please, I need something, I feel like I'm going to choke to death". He ran and got water, she grabbed it drinking so fast. She started coughing, JR pulled the water away. "Slow down Sue Ellen, you can't drink that fast".
"I'm go hot, I'm burning up, I can't take this". JR leaned over feeling her head, she was burning up, he got scared. He ran to the bathroom running the shower, making it cool. He ran back, lifting her into his arms, and walked to the bathroom. He got in, she screamed, but he held her in his arms. She eventually laid her head on his shoulder, and he kept her in for awhile, trying to break the fever she had. He finally got out, he laid her on the bed, and took her night gown off, running over to get a new one. She opened her eyes, and whispered, "what are you doing JR"?
"Nothing just changing you, don't fight me". She put the nightgown on, and laid back. He felt her head, she was still warm, but better. She shut her eyes, he sat just looking at her, she was so peaceful looking when she slept. He hoped, she would sleep through the night, he hated seeing her suffering.
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