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Post by jessie on Jun 5, 2010 13:43:25 GMT -6
Chapter 13
Ray couldn't sleep all night, he couldn't believe Mindy burnt down his home. He couldn't be there for Donna, and he hated himself for sleeping with Mindy. The next morning the therapist came in to take Ray to therapy. He was upset but he went down, and got angry, and they brought him back early . They got him settled, and the nurse touched his arm. " Ray your upset, but don't take it out on people who are trying to help you."
" I'm sorry, I hate being here thats all".
2 Police Officers walk in, and ask him if he would have any clues where Mindy might be"?
" No, she was a one night stand, I told you where she lives. I don't know much else about her. She is crazy, and if she hurts my wife and child, I will kill her myself"
" Sir, stop talking like that, let the law deal with her"
" Find her than, she burnt down my home"
" We understand that but we are doing our best"
" You people let her walk out of the hospital, do your jobs"
" Sir, you got involved with this woman, while you were married, lose the tone"
" I don't know where she is"? The 2 Officer said they would come back if they had any news.
Ray was waiting for Donna to come or at least call. Bobby walked in, and Ray smiled, " where is Donna Bobby"?
" She won't come Ray, she is really upset"
" I need to talk to her, I'm so sorry".
"Let her calm down, you don't know what she went through last night"?
" I do, the house can be rebuilt, but have I lost my marriage too"?
" I don't know Ray, she is saying she can't forgive you for this"
" What about our baby, can't she give me another chance"?
"Enough Ray this is about what you did to her. You had an affair, with a young woman that was unstable to say the least you hurt her Ray"
" Sue Ellen stands by JR, how many affairs does he have on her"?
" That is wrong, and Sue Ellen should have left JR years ago. Donna and Sue Ellen are two different people, one is not better than the other. I can see the reasons for both. Donna didn't deserve what you did, and Sue Ellen never deserved what JR dished out to her. Donna is having trouble forgiving, give her time, maybe she will come around. You getting angry, might push her further away."
Ray just stared, " you can go Bobby , I want to be alone".
" So your going to push your brother away now too"?
" Yeah, I don't need you or anyone else, making me feel worse than I already do".
" I'm not trying to make you feel worst Ray. I'm not judging you, ok".
" Whatever, leave, don't visit anymore"
" Fine, Bobby was walking to the door, "Ray keep acting this way and Donna will never forgive you" Bobby walked out, and Ray sat thinking. He decided he was leaving and going to see Donna on his own. He got off the bed, but the pain was unbearable. He fell, and went unconscious.
The nurse walked in yelling , calling for help. A couple of nurses, and a doctor came in, helping Ray to the bed. He was coming too, " what happened"?
" You collapsed, ,why were you out of bed"?
" I'm leaving here, my family needs me"
" Your not going anywhere, why do you think you fell. Your not ready to leave, it might be in a couple of days"
Ray laid back, and shut his eyes.
Bobby went home, and walked to the guest room and knocked.
"Come in".
Bobby walked in shutting the door, " I went to see Ray"
"Is he ok"?
" No he is so upset, Donna please go see him"
"I'm so angry with him right now, we lost all our photos everything"
" I know it hurts, but you will make new photos and memories"
" I have photos of my Parents who are gone, can I bring them back. Photos of Sam, and so much more personal items they are gone. I could deal if it was due to a fire, but someone burnt the house down, out of revenge. My child could be in danger because of this woman. I did nothing wrong, to make him go to another woman. I don't know if I can forgive like Sue Ellen and other women do"
" I understand but talk to him about it"
"Not right now Bobby please understand"
"Ok Donna you rest, do you need anything before I go"?
"Yeah my life back".
" I know" he kissed her forehead and left, and Donna held the pillow , and started crying , because she wanted to forgive Ray, but didn't know if she could.?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 5, 2010 14:06:59 GMT -6
I hope Donna forgives Ray even though she didnt deserve what he did. he really needs her right now
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Post by Sanda on Jun 5, 2010 15:23:43 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I hope that Donna can forgive Ray becuase he really needs her right now. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Jun 24, 2010 13:15:20 GMT -6
Chapter 14
Ray was laying in bed thinking about everything he did wrong. He started to drift off asleep, and was awoken , he someone kissing his cheek. He smiled, " Donna you came back , I knew you would". He opened his eyes, and was horrified to see Mindy standing there. She touched his chin, " I'm not Donna, but are you happy to see me too"?
" I should kill you for what you have done"
"Me, what did you do, you hurt me"
" You are sick, you stalked me, I never should have touched you".
"You did touch me in so many ways remember"?
" Where are the police"?
" They think I'm Donna, isn't that hilarious, she must not visit much".
Ray went to yell, and she held up a needle, " I will kill you if you scream".
"What do you want Mindy"?
" You silly, you know that already"
"You can't have me, I don't want you , I never did"
" What are you saying that special time in the truck, was nothing"?
"That was sex, and you know it"
Mindy stared she was angry, " how dare you make me feel cheap, and sleazy"
" You met me in a bar, we did it in a truck, think about it"
" I'm just like Donna, all I want is your love, what does she have that I don't"?
"Class, and she isn't crazy"
" I'm not either, you want her because she is pregnant right"?
"She is my wife Mindy, I'm sorry I used you, but it is over"
"It is over when I say it is ok"
"You need help Mindy, I will help you get it".
" All I need is you , and our baby".
"The baby is mine and Donna's not yours Mindy"
"Not that baby this one, inside of me"
Ray is horrify staring at her as she smiled, " I took one of those tests, it came up pink, your going to be a Daddy twice".
" You are lying Mindy".
" No, and you are the Daddy, I haven't been with anyone else in 6 months".
"OMG this can't be happening to me"
" You silly man , you shouldn't get drunk, and get a girl pregnant".
Ray felt sick, she leaned over, " I will be back soon, next time, be nice ok"
" Wait lets get you checked out, I will help you , Mindy your sick"
" I'm sick and tired of men using me, I want someone to love me for a change"
" Where are you going Mindy, tell me"?
" I will be around, but you do care, how sweet".
" Mindy don't hurt Donna, please she didn't do anything wrong"
" No she didn't but she is standing in the way of mine and my baby's happiness. Bye Ray see you soon, love you ". She walked out of the room, and Ray buzzed for the nurse. She ran in and he said "where are the police"?
" They went down for a coffee, what is wrong"?
" That lady that just left, she is the one who tried to kill me"
"OMG, she ran out paging the police who ran back to Ray's room. Ray told him what happening, they checked the grounds, and couldn't find her. They came back saying she wasn't anyone in the hospital.
" OMG she said she is pregnant, I don't know if she is lying or not"?
Clayton walked in, " What is going on Ray, the Police are frantic out there".
"Mindy was here, Clayton, and she said she is pregnant".
" Pregnant, OMG Ray that will be the end of you and Donna"
" She is lying, I just know it, I'm sure I used protection".
"Your sure or you did Ray, for GOD sake you better have"
" That night is a blur, I don't remember everything".
" What if she is pregnant Ray, what are you going to do"?
" I don't know right now, I have to figure out how I'm going to tell Donna"?
Clayton and Ray are shocked when Donna and Bobby walk into the room. Donna smiled, "what do you have to tell me Ray"?.
Ray stares at Clayton, and is speechless.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jun 24, 2010 15:39:30 GMT -6
oh no it is over for him and donna for sure. I hope Mindy is lying. Glad you updated
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Post by Sanda on Jun 24, 2010 22:31:09 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG I hope that Mindy isn't pregnant with Ray's baby. Please update soon.
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Post by jessie on Aug 29, 2010 13:33:50 GMT -6
Chapter 15
Donna walked over to Ray holding his hand, "What do you have to tell me Ray".
"Nothing, I might get out in a few days"
'Really, I thought the Doctor wanted to keep you longer"?
"No, it is so great seeing you here Donna, last night I was so worried".
"I was so angry at you Ray, that one night has destroyed everything"
"No, don't say that we are having a baby, I will rebuild our home".
"What about all the all the stuff we lost"?
"I know Donna , I'm sorry I can't take back that night"
"Why did you do that to me Ray"?
"I was a fool, and made the worst mistake of my life"
Clayton yells "enough Ray tell her the whole truth"
"Clayton no just leave us alone"
"I can't Ray, this is worse than we thought Donna"
"Worse how can it be worse"?
"Tell her Ray she deserves to know"
"What Clayton, I don't know if it is even true or not"?
"Will one of you just tell me now"? Donna yells
"Mindy was here Donna, she said she is pregnant, and I'm the Father".
"OMG Ray you got that sick woman pregnant, you didn't use protection"?
"I don't know the whole night is a blur".
"Really you didn't find it to hard, to make out with a stranger in your Truck. That was sick, you are sick Ray". Donna ran out of the room. Ray screamed at Clayton to leave, "Get out of here Clayton, I will never speak to you again". Bobby walked over, "Clayton is right, she deserved to know the truth Ray".
'Yeah now my marriage is over, and I have nothing".
Bobby touched his arm, "I will take Donna to Southfork, she needs time".
"Time Bobby you heard her, I lost her for good". Bobby left, and Clayton walked over. "I'm sorry Ray, you can't keep that from her".
'Yes I could she was finally coming around, she is carrying my baby".
"Yes, and that young girl might be too. I sure would be worried if she is pregnant, your child could be in danger".
" I only care about Donna and our baby".
"OMG you selfish man, you don't care about the other child"?
"Of course I do what do you want from me Clayton"?
"Grow up , and think about what you did Ray. You are jealous because your wife works hard. She doesn't give Ray all her time so he runs out, and beds the first girl that came on to him".
"She said she had her sights on me for months. I went to that bar, and never saw her before. She came over when I was so drunk, I knew it was wrong, but she followed me to the truck. I don't know what happened Clayton, I regret what I did, but I can't take it back"?
"I know that Ray, but if you got Donna back would you do it again"?
"Never, I learned my lesson now".
'That is what I wanted to here, we will get you two back together".
"She won't forgive me Clayton, she is so stubborn".
'Yes she is but she loves you like crazy Ray".
"She did, but not anymore"
"She does, but she is really angry right now. You just sleep, I will come back tomorrow. You will always be family Ray, I'm sorry, I had to make you tell her".
"I know Clayton, sorry for yelling at you". Clayton left and Ray fell asleep". Clayton was walking to his car, when he heard someone come up behind him. Clayton turned and saw Mindy with a knife, she was pointing it at him.
"Mindy what are you doing"?
"You are trying to keep Ray away from me. We could be happy but you and that stuck up wife of his are in the way".
Clayton was staring, and he was never so afraid of anyone in his life, as he was of Mindy at the moment.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 29, 2010 16:20:35 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. OMG I hope that crazy Mindy doesn't hurt Clayton. Please update soon.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Aug 29, 2010 19:09:08 GMT -6
I hope Mindy just leaves them alone and that she isnt pregnant. great update
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Post by jessie on Dec 1, 2010 23:36:48 GMT -6
Chapter 16
Mindy told Clayton to get in his car, and she got in the passenger side door. She was still pointing the knife , she told Clayton to drive.
"Mindy stop this, we can get you help. You told Ray your pregnant, he doesn't love you Mindy. He will never be yours, but he will take care of his child. You get help, and maybe you can be the Mother, this baby needs"
"Shut up Old man, Ray is mine, he isn't going to leave me now".
"Leave you, Mindy you were a one night stand". Mindy screamed , and stabbed Clayton in the arm. He yelled out in pain, as Mindy screamed, "Shut up , or I will kill you right here".
"Ok I will be quiet, just let me get help Mindy"
"No we are leaving here, you asked for this, you should have left us alone".
Clayton shut his eyes, he knew if he left with Mindy he was a dead man. He was losing to much blood, he needed help. He turned the keys, but at the same time he saw some Doctors walking toward the hospital. He grabbed the door handle, pulling the door open. He yelled, the Doctors turned, as Mindy tried to grab him. Clayton ran toward the Doctors, Mindy shut the door, and drove off in Clayton's car. Clayton collapsed, the Doctors yelled for others to help. They got Clayton inside, he was run into the emergency room. Clayton told them what happened, and the Police were called.
Bobby got Donna back to Southfork, she got out of the car, and was walking toward the house.
"Donna wait, please talk to me, you were silent all the way home"
"Bobby there is nothing to talk about, my marriage is over".
"What about the baby Donna"?
"May couples divorce Bobby, the baby will be fine. I don't think , I can stay in Dallas, I might make plans to leave".
"Ray would be devastated if he lost you , and the baby".
"Really Bobby he should have thought of that when he slept with that girl". Donna walked away, going into the house, and going to the guest room.
Bobby walked into the house, Miss Ellie walked up to him. "Hey Bobby how is Ray"?
"Not great everything keeps getting worse and worse. That woman Mindy is pregnant , but that might be a lie. Donna is so upset she is planning on divorcing Ray, and leaving town"
"OMG no what was Ray thinking"?
"I don't know Ma Ma, but I feel for him too".
"I feel for Donna more, she didn't deserve that Bobby".
'No she didn't, but Ray made a mistake".
"No sleeping with someone else while you are married is betrayal Bobby, I don't blame Donna for lashing out at Ray. Where is Clayton he hasn't come home yet"?
"I think he was still with Ray, he should be home soon". Bobby smiled, "I'm going to bed Ma Ma, do you need anything, before I do"?
"No go ahead, goodnight Bobby". Just as Bobby was walking upstairs, the phone rang. Miss Ellie answered, saying "hello".
"Hello can I speak to Mrs, Farlow".
"Speaking, who is this"?
"Oh this is Dallas Memorial Hospital, I'm Dr. Davis. I have just competed surgery on your husband Clayton Farlow. He was stabbed tonight, he is lucky the woman nicked a major artery. He lost a lot of blood, but he will be fine, but we will be keeping him for a few days. He was asking for you, I told him, I would call you".
"I will be there Dr. Davis, are you sure he is ok"?
"Yes, he is tired, and sore but he will be fine, once he recovers". Miss Ellie thanked him, and she started to cry.
"Ma Ma what is wrong"?
"Clayton was stabbed Bobby, he just came out of surgery"
"OMG stabbed, I just saw him".
"Can you take me to the hospital Bobby"?
"Yes, Ma Ma, get your coat, we will leave now". Miss Ellie went up to get a few things, Bobby went to speak to Raoul.
"Raoul I'm taking Miss Ellie to the hospital, Clayton was stabbed tonight".
"Oh no Sir".
"He will be fine, but I need you to make sure Mrs. Krebbs is fine. If anyone shows up here, call 911 right away. Don't let a woman in this house for any reason".
"I won't Sir". Bobby turned as his Mother came in the room.
"Ma Ma are you ready"?
"Yes Bobby lets go". Bobby thanked Raoul, and walked out with Miss Ellie, to take her to the hospital.
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Post by melindajo2000 on Dec 2, 2010 20:48:45 GMT -6
I'm glad that Clayton is fine but its scary that that woman is on the loose. I hope she leaves Ray and the Ewings alone and that Donna can forgive Ray. I'm glad you updated this Jessie
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Post by Sanda on Dec 7, 2010 13:01:51 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. I am glad that Clayton is Ok. Mindy needs to be stop. I hope that Donna and Ray will make up soon.
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Post by jessie on Jan 30, 2011 18:04:28 GMT -6
CHAPTER 17
Donna was sitting on the bed, holding the pillow to her stomach. She dreamed of the day her and Ray would have a baby. She hated that Ray ruined everything for them. She jumped when the phone rang, but she picked it up.
"Hello"
"Donna don't hang up on me please, I love you"
'Ray I know you do, but I can't forgive you for this"
"Why, I made a mistake, I swear it would never happen again. I thought I was losing you to your job. We never talked or did anything really in months"
"Don't you blame me for this Ray Krebbs, it was your jealousy of a job that ruined this marriage. I was there for you, but you pushed me away. You would rather run out drinking with your Buddies, than talk to me. I did nothing to deserve this , I won't allow you to put this on me"
"I didn't I said it was all me, I was dying inside thinking , I lost you".
"You did now because of that girl, was it fun Ray, did you enjoy yourself at least"?
"It was a one night stand, that meant nothing to me"
"That is the problems, it means something to me, and that tormented girl, you had sex with in your truck"
"I know she is sick, but I don't believe she is pregnant"
"God I hope not she is out of control"
"Yes, she stabbed Clayton, they say he is out of surgery, and he should be ok"
'Mindy stabbed him, OMG Ray look what you have caused, now Clayton and Ellie are hurt. Who is next me, Bobby or Sue Ellen"?
"Donna please just say you won't leave Southfork, until we talk"
"Ok Ray, goodnight, I will come by tomorrow but for Clayton".
'Ok I love you Donna"
"Bye", Donna hung up, she felt horrible, she loved Ray but she was so angry she couldn't admit it". She needed a warm glass of milk, she knew she couldn't sleep without it. She walked downstairs, and she couldn't believe how quiet the house was. She knew Miss Ellie and Bobby were probably in their rooms. She was surprised, they didn't come and tell her about Clayton. She walked into the kitchen, and saw the side door open, the wind was pretty strong the curtains were blowing. She walked over shutting the door, and locked it. She turned, and screamed seeing Raoul on the floor, he was unconscious. She knelt down, "Raoul wake up, what happened"? She jumped up running to the phone, wanting to dial 911. She stood for a minute, when the phone was dead. She knew the weather was bad, but to knock out power lines, no. She froze all of a sudden she realized what was going on, and she turned suddenly. She saw Mindy by the doorway with Teresa gagged. Donna knew if she ran to the door to escape she wouldn't get far, without keys. She wanted to scream, but she was holding a knife to Teresa, she couldn't take that chance. Mindy smiled, "There is just us three here right now, plus 2 kids, and another couple upstairs.
Donna was crying, "Mindy stop please, it has to end you have hurt so many people already"
"I'm thinking of myself, I have been hurt because of Ray. He made love to me, for the first time in years someone wanted me, and than he threw me away like garbage"
"It was a one night stand don't you get that? Why would you let a man use you that way"?
"I didn't he wanted me, but you had to ruin everything". Teresa was crying, Donna whispered, "Please your hurting her, let her go she didn't do anything to you". Mindy laughed, "No she didn't the poor thing". She hit Teresa so hard, it knocked her out instantly. Mindy pointed the knife at Donna and laughed, "Now it is me and you, who do you think is going to come out the winner Donna"?
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Post by melindajo2000 on Jan 30, 2011 21:20:23 GMT -6
not Raoul and Teresa I hope Raoul is okay. I can't wait to see how Donna gets out of this and I hope Mindy doesn't hurt her or anyone else
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Post by margaretkrebbs on Feb 1, 2011 8:25:20 GMT -6
My bets on Donna and her mean left hook.
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