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Post by Sanda on Sept 6, 2008 11:35:00 GMT -6
Here is a preview of my new Bobby and Pam fanfiction, I can't come up with a title for my new fanfiction.
Chapter 1
Pam's house
Pam is sitting out in the backyard watching Christopher playing with his puzzle.. Pam is thinking back to the conversation she had with Jenna outside the hospital and about how rude Jenna was to her. Pam is wondering how Bobby is doing at the hospital and that he is probably very upset that she didn't come back to the hospital. Pam's thoughts are interrupted when Christopher asks Pam to look at the puzzle he finished.
Bobby's hospital room
Bobby is laying down in his hospital bed after he came back from his lastest tests. He is thinking about his visit he had earlier with Pam and Christopher. He also remembers Pam telling him that she didn't write the letter that lead to their divorce. Bobby wonders how in the world he got himself so deeply involved with Jenna and Charlie when he doesn't love Jenna the way he loves Pam. Suddenly Jenna enters his hospital room and interrupts his thoughts.
Bobby asks Jenna why Pam didn't come back to visit him. Jenna informs Bobby that she told Pam to go home becuase she didn't have any right to visit him in the hospital because she walked out of him, they are divorced and she agreed to marry Mark Graison. Bobby tells Jenna that she had no right to tell Pam that she couldn't see him in the hospital. Bobby also tells Jenna that Pam's sister Katherine Wenworth wrote a letter saying that Pam wanted a divorce. Bobby informs Jenna that he and Pam would never have gotten a divorce if hadn't of been for the letter that Katherine wrote. Jenna tells Bobby that she doesn't believe a word that Bobby is saying. Bobby tells Jenna that the wedding is off and that he loves Pam will all of his heart. Bobby tells Jenna to give him the telephone dial Pam's telephone number and to get the hell out of his hospital room.
To be continued...................
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Post by tammie on Sept 7, 2008 17:26:31 GMT -6
Hi Sanda,
YaHOOOO! Another story from the very talented writer that you are! As always this is Awesome! Love reading your writing of our favorite couple. Smiling! Thank you for writing.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 8, 2008 10:42:26 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, YaHOOOO! Another story from the very talented writer that you are! As always this is Awesome! Love reading your writing of our favorite couple. Smiling! Thank you for writing. Tammie, thank you for the wonderful comments about my new story.  I'll try to have an update to my story later today. I am currently busy working on my season 7 Bobby and Pam DVD on my laptop computer with Windows DVD maker right now. I hope the DVD works after I make my project. |
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Post by Sanda on Sept 12, 2008 21:08:13 GMT -6
FYI Chapter 2 is going to be in several parts becuase of Hurricane Ike.  I don't want want the internet to go out while I am giving an update to my story. Chapter 2 Part 1 Pam's HousePam and Christopher are sitting out in the backyard. Pam is trying to read a book but her mind is on Bobby. Christopher is coloring a picture for his daddy. Louise comes out with the telephone and tells Pam that Bobby is on the phone. Pam: "Hi Bobby, How are you feeling?" Bobby: " I am feeling a lot better now that I can hear your voice." Pam: "What is the matter Bobby?" Bobby: "Pam nothing is the matter. Can you please come back to the hospital and bring Christopher with you?" Pam; "I will come back to the hopital and bring Christopher with me. Bobby, I know that something is bothering you. Will you please tell me what is going on." Bobby:"Pam I will tell you everything when you and Christopher get to the hospital." "Please put Christopher on the telephone." Pam hands the phone to Christopher. Bobby: "Hi Pal. I Love you very much." Christopher: "I Love You to Daddy." Bobby, " Your momma is going to bring you to the hospital to see me." "When you come to the hospital, I don't want you to be afraid of my sunglasses. I have to have to wear those glasses becuase of eye injuries. Christopher: "I won't be afraid of your sunglasses Daddy. See You soon Daddy." Bobby: "See You Soon," "Please give the phone back to your momma. Christopher hands the phone back to his mother. Pam: "Bobby, Thank you for the way you explained the reason why you have to wear the sunglasses." "I haven't told Christopher that you are blind because of the shooting." Bobby: "Sure Pam, no problem." "Can you please bring me some food to eat because I am sick and tired of the crummy hospital food." Pam: "Sure, no problem. See you soon Bobby." "Good bye Bobby" Bobby: "Good Bye Pam" After Pam gets off the phone with Bobby, Christopher tells his mom that he is going to up to his room and get one of his teddy bears and take it to him at the hospital so he scared in the hospital when they aren't with him. Pam and Christopher walk inside the house and go up stairs to Christopher's room to pack a bag of Christopher's toys and his teddy bear to take to Bobby at the hospital. Pam walks across the hall to her bedroom and takes out a picture of her, Bobby, Christopher from the drawer. She looks at the picture very loving and then puts it on the nightstand by her bed. To be continued......... I hope to have another update later this weekend if Hurricane Ike's cooperates.  |
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Post by tammie on Sept 12, 2008 21:46:09 GMT -6
Hi Sanda,
I'm so Happy to be reading your version of Bobby and Pam. This is sooooo much Better than we received from the writers of Dallas. Please, continue to write. I for one LOVE your stories. Its like Lays Potato Chips. (you cant eat just one) Well, I cant read this (and your other stories) Just once! I Hope that You and Your Family stay Safe. Thank you again for writing this.
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Post by Sanda on Sept 12, 2008 22:37:22 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, I'm so Happy to be reading your version of Bobby and Pam. This is sooooo much Better than we received from the writers of Dallas. Please, continue to write. I for one LOVE your stories. Its like Lays Potato Chips. (you cant eat just one) Well, I cant read this (and your other stories) Just once! I Hope that You and Your Family stay Safe. Thank you again for writing this. Tammie, Thank you very much for the wonderful comments about my story. Tammie, don't get me wrong, season 7 is still my favorite season of Dallas. I just wanted to write a different version of what I would like to have seen happen with Bobby and Pam after Bobby got shot. ;D The writers in my opinion kept Bobby and Pam apart waay tooo long. |
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Post by Sanda on Sept 13, 2008 16:33:33 GMT -6
I have a very short update for today. Thankfully we didn't get any rain or damage where I live from Hurricane Ike. Chapter 2 Part 2 Jenna's CondoJenna is sitting on the couch crying her eyes when Charlie comes in from school. Charlie asks her mother she is crying and why she isn't at the hospital with Bobby. Jenna tells her daughter Bobby dumped them because he is still in love with Pam. Jenna also tells Charlie that Katherine Wentworth wrote a letter that ended Bobby and Pam's marriage and that neither one of them wanted the divorce. Jenna also tells Charlie that she treated Pam horribly at the hospital when Pam came back to visit Bobby after she took Christopher home. Charlie tells her mom that she hates Bobby for dumping them. Jenna tells her that they are better off knowing this now than after they were a family with Bobby and Christopher and Bobby asks them for a divorce so he can go back to Pam and Christopher. Charle tells her mom that she HATES Bobby and that she doesn't want to ever see her horse that Bobby gave to her and that she HATES her mom for ruining their lives and storms up to her room and slams the door. Dallas Memorial HospitalBobby's hospital Room Bobby is sitting up in his hospital room visiting with Phyliss when the nurse walks in with his dinner of burnt hamburger patty, running mash pototoes with gravy, peas, coffee and dessert. Bobby tells Phyliss that the food tastes gross in the hospital and that Pam and Christopher are coming in a few minutes with real food for him to eat. Suddenly Pam and Christopher walk in with some food from The Bistro and they the both say Hi to Bobby and Phyliss. Bobby faces lights up when Pam and Christopher come in the room. To be continued.................... |
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Post by tammie on Sept 14, 2008 20:45:04 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, Smiling! Jenna gets the boot for what she did to Pam! Awesome! Kinda of feel bad for Charlie. But I'm sure she will get over it. I Love how you added Bistro. Love how you had Jenna explain things to Charlie. You (IMO) made the story seem more Realistic. I can't wait to read the next part. I know it is going to be one of the Best Yet! Then, again. I LOVE all of your stories. I Love the photo of Bobby you added to go along with this story and I LOVE your Background. Btw......I also, LOVE Season 7! As always, Thank you for writing. |
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Post by Sanda on Sept 14, 2008 21:04:41 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, Smiling! Jenna gets the boot for what she did to Pam! Awesome! Kinda of feel bad for Charlie. But I'm sure she will get over it. I Love how you added Bistro. Love how you had Jenna explain things to Charlie. You (IMO) made the story seem more Realistic. I can't wait to read the next part. I know it is going to be one of the Best Yet! Then, again. I LOVE all of your stories. I Love the photo of Bobby you added to go along with this story and I LOVE your Background. Btw......I also, LOVE Season 7! As always, Thank you for writing. Tammie, thank you for the wonderful comments about my story. I really enjoy writing all of these wonderful stories. |
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Post by Sanda on Sept 16, 2008 21:02:38 GMT -6
Chapter 2 Part 3
Southfork Ranch
JR and Sue Ellen are eating dinner when Teresa comes to the table to tell JR that he has a phone call. JR asks Teresa who is on the phone and Teresa tells him that it is Miss Jenna.
Jenna tells JR that Bobby has broken off their engagement at that he is still in love with Pam. JR tells Jenna that Bobby is a blind fool to dump her for that Barnes Woman. JR tells Jenna that he is going to have a talk with Bobby in the morning and straighten him out.
Dallas Memorial Hospital
Bobby's room
Phyliss tells Bobby and Pam that she and Donna will keep JR in line so JR won't run Ewing Oil into the ground while Bobby is in hospital. Bobby tells Phyliss thank you for coming to the hospital. Phyliss tells Bobby, Pam and Christopher good bye and leaves the three of them alone.
After Phyliss leaves Bobby asks Pam to bring Christopher to him and to put him into the bed next to him. Pam takes off Christopher's shoes and puts him and his teddy bear into the bed with Bobby. Pam tells Christopher not to hug his Daddy to hard becuase he is still sore from his injuries. Bobby tells Pam that she and Christopher are the best medicene for him while he is in the hospital.
While Bobby and Christopher are lying on the bed, Bobby feels the teddy bear in Christopher's hands. Bobby asks Chrisotpher which stuff animal he brought to the hospital? Christopher tells his daddy that he brought him his teddy bear so he wouldn't be scared when he is in the hospital. Bobby tells Christopher thank you for bringing he the teddy bear and that he will sleep with it tonight.
Pam fixes their dinner from The Bistro while Bobby and Christopher are talking on the bed. Pam takes Bobby's tray of food out to the nurse in the hall and they her that she brought Bobby some food.
After Pam fixes their dinner she asks Bobby what happened between him and Jenna earlier today. Bobby tells Pam that he wants to have a nice dinner with her and Chritopher and that they will talk about it after dinner.
Southfork Ranch
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JR and Sue Ellen are sitting out by the swimming pool. Sue Ellen asks JR about his conversation with Jenna. JR tells Sue Ellen that Bobby dumped Jenna because he is still in love with Pam. JR tells Sue Ellen that Bobby is a blind fool to dump Jenna and go back with That Barnes Woman. Sue Ellen tells JR that Bobby is already blind so he is just a fool. JR says I forget that Bobby is blind from his shooting. JR also tells Sue Ellen that he is going to go to the hospital and striaten out Bobby and then he is going to Pam's house and straighten her out as well.
Donna and Ray's House
Donna and Ray have just finished eating dinner. They move from the dinner table to the living room where they talk about Donna's first day at Ewing Oil. Donna tells Ray that she has a new found respect for Bobby and that she doesn't know how Bobby puts up with JR's crap all of the time. Ray tells Donna that he is proud of her taking Bobby's place at Ewing Oil while Bobby is in the hospital
Dallas Memorial Hospital
Bobby's Hospital Room
Bobby and Christopher are lying down on the bed and both of them have fallen asleep. Pam watches Bobby and Christopher sleeping peacefully togther on the bed. Suddenly both of them wake up and Pam tells Christopher that it is time for them to go home and that his Daddy needs to get some sleep. Christopher tells his mom that he doesn't want to go home and that he wants to stay at the hospital with his Daddy. Bobby asks Pam to buzz the nurse to ask if it is Ok for them to spend the night. Pam buzzs the nurse asks if it is Ok for them to spend the night and the nurse says it is OK. Pam goes out the hall to tell the body guard that she and Christopher are spending the nigt with Bobby. Pam comes back into the room and covers up both Bobby and Christopher on the bed.
Then the nurse comes in to give Bobby his bedtime medicene and sleep pill. After the the nurse leaves, Bobby asks Pam to move her chair closer to him so that he can hold her hand while he falls asleep. Bobby, Pam and Christopher peacefully fall asleep after Bobby kisses Christopher and Pam good night and he tells them that he loves them very much.
To be continued.............
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Post by tammie on Sept 18, 2008 20:36:27 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, Hum... This story was AWESOME!! It made me smile. The line with J.R. and Sue Ellen. I had to chuckle. J.R. is upset and Sue Ellen makes a joke. Love how you added in Ray and Donna . Love the Christopher giving Bobby the teddy bear, Love that they stay the night with Bobby. Sanda, this is Truly a Beautiful, Wonderful, Sweet and it is just Perfect! LOVE IT! You should write more! I can't wait to read it! Thank you as always! |
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Post by Sanda on Sept 20, 2008 23:51:15 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, Hum... This story was AWESOME!! It made me smile. The line with J.R. and Sue Ellen. I had to chuckle. J.R. is upset and Sue Ellen makes a joke. Love how you added in Ray and Donna . Love the Christopher giving Bobby the teddy bear, Love that they stay the night with Bobby. Sanda, this is Truly a Beautiful, Wonderful, Sweet and it is just Perfect! LOVE IT! You should write more! I can't wait to read it! Thank you as always! Tammie, thank you sooo much for the wonderful comments about my story. I'll try to have an update to my story tomarrow. I am sooo happy that I put a smile on your face with my stories. |
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Post by Sanda on Sept 30, 2008 23:15:39 GMT -6
Chapter 3 Part 1
The Next Morning
Jenna's condo
Jenna and Charlie are sitting at the table having breakfast. They still aren't speaking to one another. Jenna tells Charlie that it is time for her to go to school. Charlie tells her mother that she still hates her and Bobby. Charlie also tells her mom that she will see her afterschool. Charlie walks out the door without giving her mother a kiss and she slams the door hehind her. Jenna says, "Dam you Bobby Ewing for breaking mine and Charlie's Hearts." "You are going to pay for ruining our lives."
Dallas Memorial Hospital
Bobby's Hospital Room
Bobby and Christopher are awake and talking on the bed while Pam is asleep in the chair. Bobby still can't see anything. Bobby and Pam are holding hands.
Pam wakes up and smiles at Bobby and Christopher talking on the bed. Bobby tells Pam "Good Morning" and gives her a kiss. Bobby asks her how she slept last night. Pam tells Bobby that she slept great but her kneck and shoulders hurt alittle bit from sleeping in the chair. Bobby tells her to sit on the edge of the bed so he can rub her shoulders and kiss her neck to make her feel better. Pam moves to the edge of Bobby's hospital bed. Bobby rubs Pam's shoulders and kisses her neck to make her feel better. Pam tells Bobby that he is soo sweet to make her neck and shoulders feel better when he is the one sick in the hospital. Bobby tells Pam that he knows that he is sweet.
Southfork Ranch
JR and Sue Ellen are eating breakfast with John Ross. JR tells Sue Ellen that he is going to go to the hospital and see Bobby on his way to Ewing Oil. JR also tells Sue Ellen that he is dreading going into the office and having to look at Donna's face all day.
Too be continued..............
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Post by tammie on Oct 1, 2008 20:21:10 GMT -6
Hi Sanda,
This had a touch of heat, sweet and regret(J.R. not wanting to see Donna's face). I Love it. Thank you for writing it.
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Post by Sanda on Mar 21, 2010 22:00:02 GMT -6
Hi Sanda, This had a touch of heat, sweet and regret(J.R. not wanting to see Donna's face). I Love it. Thank you for writing it. Tammie, thank you for the wonderful comments about my story Love Is Never Blind. I am sorry that I haven't updated this story in over a year. |
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I'll try to have an update to my story later today. 
I don't want want the internet to go out while I am giving an update to my story.