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Post by jessie on Jul 22, 2013 22:37:39 GMT -6
A story for you Melinda one you asked me to write, I hope you like it. I will make this into a short story. Is this a Dream Sue Ellen couldn't sleep it was one of the hottest nights she could ever remember. She got up, and went out to the balcony, and was hoping a breeze would cool her off but there was no breeze. She looked over the land she could see lights in the distance it was Ray's and Donna's place. She wondered what they were doing she knew they probably were up making love or just talking. She wished JR was the husband she longed to have but there was no use he was never going to change. She felt tears roll down her cheeks, but she was tired of crying over a lost cause. She didn't hear the bedroom door open , and she didn't hear JR come up behind her, and touch her shoulder making her jump out of her skin. "God JR you scared me to death" "What are you doing out here at this time"? "I couldn't sleep what brings you home at 1am one of your lovers kick you out of their place" "Sue Ellen I told you I was working late at the Office" "I don't care anymore JR" "Have you been crying"? "No it is the heat my eyes are bothering me" "I know when you have been crying what is wrong"? "Oh what could be wrong JR maybe that I have not made love to my husband in over 3 months. I watch Bobby, and Pam, Ray, and Donna being all happy, and it makes me ill with jealousy. I have to tuck our son into bed every night, and listen to him ask me why Daddy isn't home. Lucy is right I'm a fool, and I deserve to feel like this because I stay here, and take it. I have tried to be faithful JR, and I don't want to get involved with another man but I need to feel like I'm needed even if it is for one night" "Sue Ellen I have told you over, and over I have not been with anyone in months. I thought you didn't want me so I have left you alone. You have been cold, and angry , and you don't trust me but I'm trying even though you don't believe it" "You really have not been with anyone in months is that the truth"? "I'm so sorry I hurt you all these years I truly was a fool, and I can admit it now, I don't deserve to have you, and John Ross. I have loved you since the first moment we met but after we married I don't know what went wrong Sue Ellen. I thought I could change but the power, and my past was such a big part of me that I couldn't stop being who I was. I tried Sue Ellen everything that went wrong was all my fault. I am to blame for all the hurt, and heartache, and I want to try, and make this marriage work" Sue Ellen was staring at him a tear rolled down her cheek as JR reached his hand out to caress her cheek as she moved toward his touch. She shut her eyes she felt like she was dreaming was JR really here in front of her. He was saying everything she has wanted him to say for so long , and she longed to feel his hand touching her face. She opened her eyes, and he was still there she moved close as he wrapped his arms around her, and they kiss. To be Continued.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 22, 2013 23:53:29 GMT -6
Great start to your new JR and Sue Ellen story. I love your new JR and Sue Ellen story. JR and Sue Ellen are so cute and adorable together in your new story. I hope and pray that things work out for JR and Sue Ellen in your New story. I love that Bobby and Pam and Donna and Ray are together in your story. I also hope that Melinda likes your new JR and Sue Ellen story that you started for you.
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Post by melinda on Jul 23, 2013 7:52:47 GMT -6
I love this story so much. i'm so happy that JR has decided to step up to the plate and work out their differences. I also love that he admitted the fault was his, so maybe there is hope for them. Please update soon, i'm anxious to see where this one goes
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Post by jessie on Jul 23, 2013 21:07:59 GMT -6
Chapter 2
JR and Sue Ellen held each other for the longest time. JR finally took her hands, and guided her back into the bedroom.
"JR do you really mean it when you say you want to make things right in our marriage"
"I know why you are asking because I have lied to you so many times during our marriage but I don't know what has changed but tonight when I came in, and saw your eyes, I knew if I don't change I will lose you forever"
"I'm just tired of the games, and us hurting each other. I have so many regrets in my life JR. I know you are not totally to blame but I honestly can say I never would have cheated on you if you didn't hurt me time, and time again"
"I know but can we put that in the past, and only focus on the future"
"I would love that but I know we are fooling ourselves if we think it will be easy."
"Nothing worth fighting for should be easy but maybe we can start all over again, and start fresh"
"Does that mean you will ask me to marry you all over again"?
JR smiled, "If you want to remarry I will do it in a minute. I was talking about us getting to know each other, and making up for lost time"
"Oh my Mr. Ewing are you saying you want to fool around"?
JR smiled, "Well yeah you know me".
Sue Ellen touched JR's chest, and started to unbutton his shirt making JR whisper.
"Sue Ellen how can you forgive me for all the hurt"?
Sue pulled his shirt off his shoulders as she brought her lips to his chest making him shut his eyes. She sure knew what he liked he was such a fool he had what he wanted at home all this time. He would admit he enjoyed the brief moment of satisfaction he got from all his lovers but none of them ever truly took Sue Ellen's spot in his heart. He had times where he hated himself for what he did to her but he was to selfish to care but right this moment he wanted to make it right, and he wanted to show her just how special she truly was. They both made mistakes, but right this moment he didn't care all he cared about was making this right. He smiled as Sue Ellen stopped asking him if something was wrong. He lifted her in his arms, and carried her around the bed, and laid her in the middle. He pulled his pants off putting them on the end of the bed. He got in bed beside her bringing his lips over hers as they kiss. She longed to have JR in her arms after months of wondering, and thinking about what he was doing while she longed for him. She knew she should hate JR for the years of emotional abuse but she couldn't. He was the only man she truly loved, and she knew she would love him until the day she died.
He smiled as he slowly moved over her as he parted her as they came together as one. He didn't want to rush this moment but they both lost all sense of control, and they were bringing each other over the edge. He brought her to her release as he was brought to his as they both clung to each other like they were afraid they would lose what they hoped would be a new life together if they let go.
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Post by Sanda on Jul 23, 2013 21:18:11 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. JR and Sue Ellen are so cute and adorable together in this chapter. I am so happy that JR and Sue Ellen made love to each in this chapter. Personally if I would have been Sue Ellen I would have waited awhile before I would have made love to JR after everything he has done to her in the past. I think Sue Ellen forgave him too quickly in your story but I am so happy that she forgave him and that they are back together in your story. I just hope and pray that JR doesn't hurt Sue Ellen again in your story and that he stay faithful to her. I hope you update this awesome story again soon.
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Post by melinda on Jul 26, 2013 19:03:45 GMT -6
I hope you update this awesome story soon, it is a favorite of mine. thanks again for writing this. I might like to add a chapter here and there if you don't care. I've only co-written a story once and it was a lot of fun. thanks again
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Post by jessie on Jul 26, 2013 19:14:13 GMT -6
Please feel free to add to this story anytime I would love it. I miss my Sue Ellen and JR stories. I was hoping for a happy ending on the New Dallas, and they wasted the first year where they could have reunited them it would have been amazing. Thanks Sanda and Melinda for reading, and commenting on my stories.
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Post by melinda on Jul 27, 2013 14:37:23 GMT -6
ch 3
When Sue Ellen awoke, she found, to her dismay, that he was gone. No goodbye, no note, no message anywhere to be seen. For him to have just taken off like this, well, that was too much, even for her. She'd had enough. She was going to go to his work and if it meant making a scene, well, so be it.
Angrily she stormed by Sly, not even bothering to have the receptionist announce her presence to JR. She flung the door open, and was shocked to see Bobby and JR apparently talking over drinks.
“Who the hell do you think you are?” She demanded, her eyes icily glaring at him.
“What's gotten into you? Sue Ellen, have you been hitting the booze again?” he laughed before sipping another drink of his bourbon.
“What's gotten into me? It is I who should be asking what's gotten into you. You're half drunk and it isn't even noon yet. More importantly, you left me high and dry last night, or have you forgotten?”
“Oh, I remember, Sugar. I remember.”
“Maybe I should leave you two alone,” Bobby spoke up.
“No. You stay. I want you to know what a two timing scoundrel your brother is.”
“Sugar...”
“Don't Sugar me! Don't you dare! How dare you walk out on the first time we've been intimate in months. We all know sex is a priority for you; just not with me.”
“Sue Ellen, calm down before you make a total fool out of yourself. I'll have you know I brought bobby in here to tell him the good news, and to show you this...” With that, JR pulled out a box, containing the biggest diamond ring Sue Ellen had ever seen.
“Is that for me?”
“Yes,” he grinned. “Only the best for the love of my life.”
“Oh, JR! Do you mean it? Do you really love me?”
“Do I love money and oil and my mama and daddy?”
She wrapped her arms around him, not knowing what prompted the change in JR; all she knew was that she hoped he would stay this way, forever.
TBC
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Post by Sanda on Jul 27, 2013 14:52:10 GMT -6
Melinda, I LOVE the update you wrote to Jessie's JR and Sue Ellen story that she started for you. I just hope and pray for Sue Ellen's sake that JR stays faithful to her this time. I don't want Sue Ellen to go back to drinking again in this awesome story. I hope you and Jessie both update this awesome story again really soon.
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Post by jessie on Jul 27, 2013 21:40:42 GMT -6
Wow I loved your update Melinda I was scared for a minute thinking JR went back to his old ways. This was sweet, and romantic, and I loved it. Thanks for taking part in my story, feel free to update anytime your chapter was awesome.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Jul 27, 2013 23:13:04 GMT -6
Great update Melinda.
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Post by jessie on Aug 19, 2013 0:46:32 GMT -6
Chapter 4
Bobby got up he felt like he was intruding he left the office, and shut the door. He walked to his office, and sat down, and he started to flip through one of his files but all he could think about was he hoped JR could be faithful to Sue Ellen this time. He truly believed his Brother loved Sue Ellen but he hoped he could stay true to her.
JR sat in his chair, Sue Ellen was smiling, and looking at her ring. It was the most beautiful ring she ever saw. JR has always bought her lovely jewellery, and beautiful things but this meant the world to her. They were going to start a new life together, and this time they both were going to do this right. She couldn't think otherwise she didn't think she could survive any more heartache from JR. She made a lot of mistakes in her life, and she knew she was to blame for a lot of their problems but that was in the past this was her future. She walked over , and JR pulled her into his lap as she leaned her head on his shoulder.
"You came in here like a Tiger Bobby was a little afraid of you did you see his face"?
"Yeah I was angry I was going to lose it if you had another lady in here"
"I told you that part of my life is over you are all I need, and want"
"That is the truth JR because if you can't keep that promise you have to tell me. I can't take anymore of your affairs, and I know I have had my share of affairs, and I'm so sorry I hurt you too. I just want this to work out, and for us to be the family I have dreamed about from the first moment we met"
"Sue Ellen did you really like me or was it my Money that attracted you"?
"God again JR it was my Mom that wanted me to marry for Money the riches man was all she could think about. She worked so hard to the perfect trophy wife. "
"We were happy in the beginning but I could see you knew I was seeing other women but I didn't care. You were my wife, and you were someone I would know I could depend on when I needed you. I don't know why I cheated maybe because I could, and I will not lie I enjoyed it. I never thought you would cheat on me but when you did everything changed. I hate what we became but I have always loved you Sugar. You were the only one I ever wanted as my wife"
"Lets forget about the past, and focus on John Ross, and our future together"
"We will marry soon but the door is locked, and we are alone how about you show me just how much you love your man"
"In your office with Bobby next door really JR"
"Since when are you shy Sugar"
Sue Ellen smiled, "I'm not shy" She pulled him into a kiss as JR lifted her up , and pushed the papers, and other stuff to the side of his desk as he sat her down.
She was helping JR unbutton his shirt as he was kissing her passionately. The contact with her lips zapped him static electricity. She sighed into his mouth as her breasts nudged against his bare chest as he was losing all sense of control. He has never needed or wanted another woman like he desired Sue Ellen this moment.
She planted her palms on his chest than moved to his waist as she was pulling off his belt. She could see by his movements, and his breathing he was losing it. She smiled knowing she was driving JR Ewing crazy it felt so amazing. He came over her as they became one as he moved driving her to cry out his name as she pulled him close begging him not to stop. He continued until they both came to their release, and he held her as she shook in his arms as she whispered in his ear.
"You still have it JR"
He smiled, "I will until the day I die Sugar" They both laugh but held each other knowing they would love this moment to last forever but they knew they would have many more moments just like this. They wasted so much time, but that was over now they would spend the rest of their lives making up for lost time.
To Be Continued.
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Post by Sanda on Aug 19, 2013 9:18:19 GMT -6
Great update Jessie. JR and Sue Ellen are so cute adorable together in this chapter. I don't blame Bobby for being worried about Sue Ellen possibly getting hurt by JR again. Bobby is good friend to Sue Ellen. I loved the talk between JR and Sue Ellen in this chapter. I lobe that JR and Sue Ellen are going to be making in JR 's office with Bobby right next door in his office. I hope that you and Melinda both update this awesome story again really soon. This is one of my favorite stories that the both are writing on my awesome message board.
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Post by jennifer1983 on Aug 19, 2013 23:15:39 GMT -6
Great update Jessie.
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Post by melinda on Aug 20, 2013 17:19:27 GMT -6
this is so great, I hope you update soon. I hope that JR doesn't fall back to his old ways. Maybe they are both a little smarter, hopefully anyhow. keep going, this is awesome
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